[Photoshop] My first manga coloring!!

[-Carnage-]

this is my first manga coloring xd
Cnc appreciated, but if ur gonna give cnc, please try to give me tips to improve instead of just telling me the flaws xd

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BTW...it was a request, so its not directly from the manga(i rendered, and combined two different panels)
the manga pages i used were these

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i combined the sasuke in the second manga page with the susano in the first page
then i rendered it, and added text

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['Nāpalm]

I like it bro... great job xd

 

[Ryuzetsu]

Wow, amazing job

 

[Samisa]

Very nice job

 

[the truth]

its nice can be better tho

 

[straightup]

Good job. Looks like alot of effort was put in it.

 

[-Carnage-]

I like it bro... great job xd

thanks bro xd

Wow, amazing job

thnx xd

Good job. Looks like alot of effort was put in it.

thanx
and not really xd...i did started it last night and did the finishing touches after school xd

Very nice job

thnks xd

its nice can be better tho

thank you...but like i said..if ur gonna give cnc please tell me tips on how i can improve instead of just telling me the flaws xd

 

[-Frost Knight-]

awesome work bro...
if u didnt say 1st manga coloring ppl will think ur pro

 

[-Carnage-]

awesome work bro...
if u didnt say 1st manga coloring ppl will think ur pro

...thnx man xd

 

[Codawg]

Good job! ^-^

 

[-Carnage-]

Good job! ^-^

thanks xd

 

[Venom]

you do realize that the two links are the same pictures right?
but you did an awesome job bro, i think your a pro already, am so jealous

 

[YowYan]

pretty neat dude! guhjob

 

[-Shiro-]

impresseive job

 

[~Dream~]

:|...../claps

 

[-Carnage-]

you do realize that the two links are the same pictures right?
but you did an awesome job bro, i think your a pro already, am so jealous

lol thnx i dint notice xd fixed it xd

pretty neat dude! guhjob

thnks

impresseive job

xd i think so to xd

:|...../claps

.../bows

 

[Superior]

Nice job carnage

 

[-Carnage-]

Nice job carnage

thnx xd

 

[Guilty as Sin]

I like it. I have 3 criticisms (the suggestions are implied in the criticism):

Criticism 1: The color of the Susano'o has, for me, too much purple. Or perhaps the purple is too strong. This is more of a subjective criticism.

Criticism 2: It seems like Susano'o and Sasuke have different color styles. Have you ever played pokemoncard game? You'll know that different artists have different styles. That's what I mean: The Susano'o seems more like a manga, whereas Sasuke looks like an anime.

Criticism 3: It looks like Sasuke is outside of the Susano'o. Do you see the first image? Notice how the lines on the body of Susano'o end around Sasuke? This gives the impression that Sasuke is enveloped by it. The lines in your image, however, actually continue and go behind Sasuke, which obviously gives the impression that Sasuke is outside and in front of Susano'o.

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Suggestion 1: I would take the SFX of the Chidori instead of the bubble from the first image. The "letters" look better from the SFX and besides, Sasuke isn't even speaking in your manga coloring image.

Suggestion 2: Personally, I would change the font of the message "The power of the real Uchiha Clan" and the color as well. Actually, the fact that it's purple I think adds to the purpleness that was part of my criticism #1. Have some variety in color.

Suggestion 3: Take out he "real" from the message. "The power of the Uchiha clan" is less verbose and more to the point. I know what you're getting at though: people like Kakashi and Danzo will never amount to the prowess of the Uchiha. I feel like it communicates the same thing without real. With "real" it's just more emphatic. This is just my perspective.

 

[-Carnage-]

I like it. I have 3 criticisms (the suggestions are implied in the criticism):

Criticism 1: The color of the Susano'o has, more me, too much purple. Or perhaps the purple is too strong. This is more of a subjective criticism.

Criticism 2: It seems like Susano'o and Sasuke have different color styles. Have you ever played pokemoncard game? You'll know that different artists have different styles. That's what I mean: The Susano'o seems more like a manga, whereas Sasuke looks like an anime.

Criticism 3:It looks like Sasuke is outside of the Susano'o. Do you see he first image. Notice how the lines on the body of Susano'o end around Sasuke? This gives the impression that Sasuke is enveloped by it. The lines in your image, however, actually continue and go behind Sasuke, which obviously gives the impression that Sasuke is outside and in front of Susano'o.

thanks great advice, u deserve rep xd

ok that makes sense xd...

lol no i never played the card game xd and yep, it was easier to color sasuke so i guess i made it look too much like an anime

it was actually part of the request to put sasuke in front of susano xd

Edit:

Suggestion 1: I would take the SFX of the Chidori instead of the bubble from the first image. The "letters" look better from the SFX and besides, Sasuke isn't even speaking in your manga coloring image.

Suggestion 2: Personally, I would change the font of the message "The power of the real Uchiha Clan" and the color as well. Actually, the fact that it's purple I think adds to the purpleness that was part of my criticism #1. Have some variety in color.

Suggestion 3: Take out he "real" from the message. "The power of the Uchiha clan" is less verbose and more to the point. I know what you're getting at though: people like Kakashi and Danzo will never amount to the prowess of the Uchiha. I feel like it communicates the same thing without real. With "real" it's just more emphatic. This is just my perspective.

suggestion 1:i dont know how to edit the bubble xd

suggestion 2: yeah..now that i look at it more...ur right, its waaay too much purple, what color would u suggest?

suggestion 3:the text is the name of a group on NB its called "the real uchiha clan"