Kushina Desdemona
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The day that changed her
It's a rainy day in Konoha, the sun is hiding in the clouds, and the graveyard is filled by people with black umbrellas. Some are quietly whispering, and a few of them is looking in the coffin and crying, or even praying for a miracle to happen. It was the funeral of one of Konoha's legendary Sannins. A little girl was blankly starring on the covered face of her passed away grand mother. She wasn't crying. She was hating herself for not listening to her about all she said, about her having the ability to become a great ninja but not without effort. She always tried to force her to train more, and she learned her all the basics that she wasn't able to learn in school, as she had a lack of attention. She was so wise, and Kushina was able to appreciate it just by the day of her death.
It was today that she decided to prove the world what she is capable of. It wasn't only for Konoha, but also for her grand mother. Kushina wanted to prove that she is her descendent. She was ready to change.
I'm not really sure if this is the beginning of my character's biography or just some random piece of fanfiction, but I'd like to continue in Kushina's lifestory and I felt like sharing the beginning as I'm completely new to fanfiction :shrug:
Even though this is very short I'd still be happy for any feedback..
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It's a rainy day in Konoha, the sun is hiding in the clouds, and the graveyard is filled by people with black umbrellas. Some are quietly whispering, and a few of them is looking in the coffin and crying, or even praying for a miracle to happen. It was the funeral of one of Konoha's legendary Sannins. A little girl was blankly starring on the covered face of her passed away grand mother. She wasn't crying. She was hating herself for not listening to her about all she said, about her having the ability to become a great ninja but not without effort. She always tried to force her to train more, and she learned her all the basics that she wasn't able to learn in school, as she had a lack of attention. She was so wise, and Kushina was able to appreciate it just by the day of her death.
It was today that she decided to prove the world what she is capable of. It wasn't only for Konoha, but also for her grand mother. Kushina wanted to prove that she is her descendent. She was ready to change.
I'm not really sure if this is the beginning of my character's biography or just some random piece of fanfiction, but I'd like to continue in Kushina's lifestory and I felt like sharing the beginning as I'm completely new to fanfiction :shrug:
Even though this is very short I'd still be happy for any feedback..
wease:
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