(Fūton: Kujaku Senpūjin) - Wind Release: Peacock Whirlwind FormationI find your descriptions shallow.Increase the length.
I begin by focusing my raw chakra and thinking about how wind feels in a breeze, how the wind sounds when it's blowing fast, And how the wind smells, by doing this i change my raw chakra into wind nature chakra. I then grab a sword and begin focusing my Futon chakra into it's blade, next i swing the sword it in front of me. As i swing it, i release the wind chakra and shape it into a vortex of wind that surrounds my body blocking/defecting every kunai.
(Fūton: Shinkūjin) - Wind Release: Vacuum Blade
I begin by focusing my raw chakra and thinking about how wind feels in a breeze, how the wind sounds when it's blowing fast, And how the wind smells, by doing this i change my raw chakra into wind nature chakra. I then get out two shuriken and then exhale all my Futon chakra onto it, next i shape the chakra into a flat, circular cutting blade. which i then throw towards your clone slicing through him killing him.