Cover page!!!!

-Frost Knight-

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Here my cover page for a English project(still in progress)so i need your help to improve it

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Ill rep everyone that helps....or trysxd and



CnC welcomed​
 

~Madara Uchiha~

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hmmm i tried to think of a way to make it but i failed... rep? xd lol jk
 

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Awesome. Good luck on your project. I suggest adding another pic.
 

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Its nice. But idk there is something about the Text placement and that big space right in the middle.
Other then that, Great
 

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Its nice. But idk there is something about the Text placement and that big space right in the middle.
Other then that, Great
Thx but i dont see any space0.0 per for u
edit oh that space no idea help plz
Awesome. Good luck on your project. I suggest adding another pic.
yeah i taught of it anyways rep for u too
 
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Feels like something needs to go in the middle...
And are you sure you want to use u instead of you?
 

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nice!! it looks good so far...looks like you're gfx skills are gonna help you get an A+ xd
 

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Haha I love how it looks like the hockey player is gonna hit the soccer ball. Good job.
 

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Im loving the sports theme try adding more sports n the background is a little iffy I mean I like it but would also like to see more color
 

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Take messi out, he shouldn't be in the same photo with michael jordan
 

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too much open space in the middle and use a different title type, i thought it said, Cre and not Are. but over all its good
 

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It lacks blending and there is way too much open space.
 

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Maybe type out "you" instead of "u" and throw in a baseball player

also it looks like the hockey player is playing hockey with a soccer ball lol
 

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You need to fill those open spaces and that text placement looks off. Other than that it looks pretty good.
 

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Like My firend from the same group Erza, allready pointed out, theres too much space, and the renders need a bit more blending.
But I noticed one thing: Wheres Ronaldo?
 
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