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[Gèckö]

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[Kurisutina]

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15 (Suiton: Kakusareta Mizun no Hari) - Water Release: Hidden Water Needles
Type:Attack
Rank: C
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user is able to release incredibly stealthy needles of water by from their mouth by utilizing their own saliva as ammunition. The water is incredibly small and difficult to see by normal ninjas but are still visible in most conditions. These needles can be used by a medical ninja to strike vital joints and disrupt the movement of their joints for a mere moment.

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16 (Suiton: Mizu-Yaki-Ire) - Water Release: Water Hardening
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25 (+10 per turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user does 2 hand seals and is able to cause any small amount of water (C-rank and below) to harden temporarily. This only works on the user's water created water or manipulated water. This jutsu follows the same principle as the Water Sword of Draining in which it will harden the water so much so that it can match steel's hardness. However, it will only last a few moments, as chakra needs to be fueled into it to keep it harden.
Note: User can keep it harden for a maximum of 2 turns, as long as he keeps focusing chakra into it and doesn't perform other techniques.

These are the 2 okay?

 

[Gèckö]

yes. So should i perform them or is there a specific way to go about this

 

[Kurisutina]

yes. So should i perform them or is there a specific way to go about this

Try doing the first one on your own and I'll correct you on it if I need to.

 

[Gèckö]

we'll edit tommorrow i am done here for today

 

[Gèckö]

Upon hearing the comand, I begin to focus chakra through out my body. Feeling the build up i channel it towards my mouth, where my chakra and saliva meet. Whilst all this happening in my mouth, i shape the chakra and saliva together to crete alot of needles. After hey have all been form i release them from my mouth in a stream at a nearbye tree

 

[Kurisutina]

Upon hearing the comand, I begin to focus chakra through out my body. Feeling the build up i channel it towards my mouth, where my chakra and saliva meet. Whilst all this happening in my mouth, i shape the chakra and saliva together to crete alot of needles. After hey have all been form i release them from my mouth in a stream at a nearbye tree

Good, doesn't have to be a stream, can be more widespread, as wide as any angle your mouth can open to. You can also adjust the angle at which they strike with head movements. This jutsu is useless for you but w/e. It will only really help you if your bio has knowledge of human joints.

Do the next one.

 

[Gèckö]

*After the needle melted i use the pre-existing water as my water source. I perform 2 handseals and focus my chakra into that water, then concentrate on making it more dense. After applying chakra for a few moments the water becomes as hard as stell. I then release my chakra flow form it and it returns to its natural form

 

[Kurisutina]

*After the needle melted i use the pre-existing water as my water source. I perform 2 handseals and focus my chakra into that water, then concentrate on making it more dense. After applying chakra for a few moments the water becomes as hard as stell. I then release my chakra flow form it and it returns to its natural form

If you had med knowledge, the other one lets you stop join movement and this one lets the joint movement last a while, but you don't.

Cool. That's it.

 

[Gèckö]

Thanks if you need anything you know where I am @