Wolfe Chapter 1: Here, Kitty Kitty

[kinghadouken]

I'd give you CC, but first I have to know if you can take it. I asked TOC to do this, and reassured her that I could handle it...not everyone can.

Oh I can xd It's for my own good. What I can't stand would be shitty comments and degrading criticism that have no actual use whatsoever. U_U

 

[Seffy]

Everybody has their own style; I personally don't have the ability to flow like you do, Fi. I take my time; trust me, it becomes an absolute disaster if I don't go slow. One moment people are using swords in a medieval time setting...the next they have modern guns and can suddenly fly planes... :facepalm:

That's true everyone does have their own style of writing. Mine just seems to me to be really easy. >.> Writing is a second nature skill to me and I never really had any problems with it. I wish others felt the same, but Reborn is probably the closest person that can do that.

Oh I can xd It's for my own good. What I can't stand would be shitty comments and degrading criticism that have no actual use whatsoever. U_U

U_U Indeed or the "great job!" But they post like 2 seconds after you put it up so you know they didn't read it. -_- I think that annoys me more than anything.

 

[Shinobi Train]

Oh I can xd It's for my own good. What I can't stand would be shitty comments and degrading criticism that have no actual use whatsoever. U_U

Well, nobody likes that. It's just that not everyone likes constructive crits either...for example, Fiona doesn't want anyone to do to her work what she did to mine. I'm not as good at doing it as she is, but I'll give it a try, maybe when you release your next one.

 

[Seffy]

Well, nobody likes that. It's just that not everyone likes constructive crits either...for example, Fiona doesn't want anyone to do to her work what she did to mine. I'm not as good at doing it as she is, but I'll give it a try, maybe when you release your next one.

Well that's not true. I can take CC but I want facts to back it up. When I was in creative writing, we edited other peoples papers before and it was fun. I don't mind other people catching the mistakes that I've missed. Let's face it, I'm no editor, so naturally I've made mistakes.

I just hate it when people go through and depict my story because they just don't like it. Not having anything to do with it actually being wrong or right. :flaw: I hate that! Then it turns into a big debate because they have no clue what they are talking about and they just want to sit there and fight with me.

 

[Shinobi Train]

Well that's not true. I can take CC but I want facts to back it up. When I was in creative writing, we edited other peoples papers before and it was fun. I don't mind other people catching the mistakes that I've missed. Let's face it, I'm no editor, so naturally I've made mistakes.

I just hate it when people go through and depict my story because they just don't like it. Not having anything to do with it actually being wrong or right. :flaw: I hate that! Then it turns into a big debate because they have no clue what they are talking about and they just want to sit there and fight with me.

Okay, okay, everything's cool, I didn't mean it. *cringe in fear* I'm just teasin' 'cause you said something about it. Also, there's no way all crits can be helpful, someone who doesn't understand what you're trying to do can't be any help in certain areas. To some extent I take people's advice and just store it away for something to think on.

When someone gives me advice I don't really like, well, I just ignore it; no sense arguing. When they're being a pain I still just ignore it; it's my new philosophy in life actually, and so far it works perfectly.

 

[Seffy]

Okay, okay, everything's cool, I didn't mean it. *cringe in fear* I'm just teasin' 'cause you said something about it. Also, there's no way all crits can be helpful, someone who doesn't understand what you're trying to do can't be any help in certain areas. To some extent I take people's advice and just store it away for something to think on.

When someone gives me advice I don't really like, well, I just ignore it; no sense arguing. When they're being a pain I still just ignore it; it's my new philosophy in life actually, and so far it works perfectly.

Yes but I'm too hot headed to ignore it. If they have a legit reasoning behind it then I don't mind. However I take it personally when someone that doesn't have a point questions my work in a more trolling way. I put myself into the story (figuratively) so when someone says that they don't like certain parts, it's like they are saying they don't like me. (Again only with trolls) :mugi: I don't care what people think, but that doesn't mean I will go down quietly either. :scorps:

 

[Shinobi Train]

Yes but I'm too hot headed to ignore it. If they have a legit reasoning behind it then I don't mind. However I take it personally when someone that doesn't have a point questions my work in a more trolling way. I put myself into the story (figuratively) so when someone says that they don't like certain parts, it's like they are saying they don't like me. (Again only with trolls) :mugi: I don't care what people think, but that doesn't mean I will go down quietly either. :scorps:

Well, trolls will be trolls; but you still can't stop a troll that way, they feed off that. xd Yeah, sure, I'll let someone have a piece of my mind from time to time, but I'll refrain from fueling a flame war.

 

[Never]

nice the descriptions very good ^^ and yeah a manga of it would be awesome.

 

[Shinobi Train]

nice the descriptions very good ^^ and yeah a manga of it would be awesome.

Thanks ^^ and yeah, a manga would be cool, but I think I'm gonna' stick to books...

...and you changed your ava. xd

 

[Naruto Namikaze 01]

awesome story line glad i read it now i will read chapter two

 

[Shiina..]

I can imagine it as anime/manga! That's was totally awesome!! =DD
+Rep/ Thank

 

[Shinobi Train]

I can imagine it as manga! That's was totally awesome!! =DD
+Rep/ Thank

^_^ Glad you liked it!

 

[Skylar Knight]

I can seriously imagine it as a manga/anime! Keep it up man It was really awesome

 

[~Uzumaki~]

I don't know what to say, it was so awesome. The description was so perfect, I've. hardly ever so perfectly understood something before....btw if I were Zane, who made a beast that beat the grown ups' beasts, I'd feel pretty good about myself xd

 

[Shinobi Train]

I don't know what to say, it was so awesome. The description was so perfect, I've. hardly ever so perfectly understood something before....btw if I were Zane, who made a beast that beat the grown ups' beasts, I'd feel pretty good about myself xd

Thanks! ^_^

Yeah, but you'd also know how much trouble you were in too. xd

 

[~Uzumaki~]

Thanks! ^_^

Yeah, but you'd also know how much trouble you were in too. xd

Lol. If they put me in prison, all I need do is touch a rat and then jailbreak :scorps:

 

[Guardian of the Rain]

WOW! Man, this is absolutely epic! It's original, entertaining, and just badass. This could make an excellent novel that young people will go crazy about. Though you might have to get rid of the profanity. Anyway, I'm a fan, man. I can't wait to read more and experience the development of everything.xd

 

[Shinobi Train]

WOW! Man, this is absolutely epic! It's original, entertaining, and just badass. This could make an excellent novel that young people will go crazy about. Though you might have to get rid of the profanity. Anyway, I'm a fan, man. I can't wait to read more and experience the development of everything.xd

Thanks! ^_^ It took me forever to think up a world that I liked enough to write about, and I'm still trying to work out the main plot. My intention wasn't really for a younger audience though I may decide to go that route. One does not choose to write for children, teens or adults, one simply writes and then people say "This is a great book for _____", then you make slight modifications to help it fit in that catagory if need be.

 

[Guardian of the Rain]

Thanks! ^_^ It took me forever to think up a world that I liked enough to write about, and I'm still trying to work out the main plot. My intention wasn't really for a younger audience though I may decide to go that route. One does not choose to write for children, teens or adults, one simply writes and then people say "This is a great book for _____", then you make slight modifications to help it fit in that catagory if need be.

Yeah, I was wrong when I think about it. Hmm it would be more popualr among teens and young adults I shoud say. Though middle-aged folks and older would enjoy it as well.

 

[Shinobi Train]

Yeah, I was wrong when I think about it. Hmm it would be more popualr among teens and young adults I shoud say. Though middle-aged folks and older would enjoy it as well.

Who knows, I'm not saying what audience it's for at this point, I can quickly change it to be whatever. Also, it can be for adults and not have any adult content, that's actually best too.

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