The Marvelous Misadventures of Dino - Chapter One

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I am in no way, shape or form a writer but this is just something that i randomly wrote down out of randomness and a few friends want me to post it here.

Again im not very good at writing :shy:


The beginning


There once was a spunky dino who was on a quest for the
best tasting ice cream ever. On the dinos quest it meet a
fluffy panda who's two favorite items was a sponge and a
starfish which the panda carried everywhere. And when
the panda meet the dino the immediately formed a sister
like bond. Due to there bond the panda agreed to join the
dino on its quest.

As fortune would have it there quest lead them to the land
of the potato lords land. His obsession with potatoes
bordered on erotic. As they wondered tho the land the
panda and dino were jumped by potato knights that soon
captured the two and took them to the potato lords castle
were they were throw into the dungeon.
As the two were trapped in the dungeon they were
subjected to horrible potato related torture techniques.
But as luck would have it a knight had broke into the castle
to slay the evil potato lord.

As cloud entered the castle he was attacked by two potato
knights. He dispatched them before they even had time to
react to his superior speed. As the two knights lay on the
floor cloud lick the potato juice of his sword thinking of the
blood that would soon be on it. With renewed vigor cloud
rushed though the castle striking down potatos left and
right. He soon arrived to the enter court yard where the
potato lord was waiting for him. As the two warriors
stared each other down. The lord drew his blade. The two
warriors swords clashed and each knew they were both
evenly matched. With there swords entangled the potato
lord kicked cloud in the stomach knocking him to the
ground. He then then stabbed his sword straight down.
But cloud rolled away at the last moment. As the potatos
lord sword embedded itself into the ground. Cloud kicked
the feet out from under him causing him to fall flat onto
his back. The potato lord quickly rolled backwards out of
clouds reach. Cloud being one of honor couldn't strike
down an unarmed opponent tossed the lords sword back
to him. As both were fatigue was setting in cloud knew he
wouldn't last much longer. As the lord came charging full
speed with his sword raised to perform a downward slash
cloud closed his eyes. He then thrust his sword forward.
As cloud opened his eyes there stood the potato lord
impaled on his sword. The potato lord had a look of
disbelief on his faced he never thought he could be
defeated. With one last loud shout the potato lord died. As
cloud removed his sword from his chest he realized he
wasn't evil just misunderstood and just wanted people to
love him. Cloud then went to free all the people held
captive.

As the two heard the death cry
of the lord they only hoped that the person who killed him
was a friend and not another enemy. As the dungeon door
creaked open the two held there breath. As the door
swung all the way open they saw a golden haired knight.
They knew from various rumors and stories that this was
the legendary Cloud. Cloud then proceeded to free the
two. They then escaped from the evil potato lords land.
They headed towards the next destination.

 
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Finally posted
 

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I'm not going to lie to you and say +rep because I think it was good. I'm going to be honest with you and say I'll +rep you because it made me laugh.
 

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Dyno ;3

Are you going to continue it?
 

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xd nice, but you you better revive that sassy ass potato lord, he's too awesome to die soo soon.
 

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Wow lol I think it's good, hopefully more of these are on the way. Nice job :D
 

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Finally posted

Yes lol

I'm not going to lie to you and say +rep because I think it was good. I'm going to be honest with you and say I'll +rep you because it made me laugh.

Good that's what i aimed for

Dyno ;3

Are you going to continue it?

If you guys want me to

xd nice, but you you better revive that sassy ass potato lord, he's too awesome to die soo soon.

Sssssssshhhhhhh xd
 

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Love it :pwease: my fave character is the Dino =DD<3
 

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The amount of potatoes in this story is dangerous. o.o

Lub it. c:
 

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Too many spelling mistakes ~_~

The potato lord wasn't evil, just hungry and misunderstood U_U

3.5/5

=.=


Just kidding, it was awesome. But the FG version was better.

This seems abridged.
 

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Too many spelling mistakes ~_~

The potato lord wasn't evil, just hungry and misunderstood U_U

3.5/5

=.=


Just kidding, it was awesome. But the FG version was better.

This seems abridged.

If there's spelling mistakes its my autocorrects fault.

Its the same i only added the fight scene ._.
 

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If there's spelling mistakes its my autocorrects fault.

Its the same i only added the fight scene ._.

No it seems quite different to me....maybe it's the
blue centered font
>.>
 

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:lmao: Lovely story, Blue! :pwease: Poor misunderstood potato lord U_U
 

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YES!!!! :overjoy: awesome :pwease:!!!!!
 
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