Hoping I did a good job on my bio

[MythicChronos]

Basic Information
Name: Kumori Kitsune
Nickname:Virus
Gender:Male
Age: 24
Clan:Ryusaki

Looks: 6 feet tall with an athletic build. Has a scar down his forehead from the blade of a sword.

Personality: Quiet yet cocky with the mindset of a madman. Has a hair trigger attitude. can be angered easily.

Village Info. Hails from the Hidden Rain Village. Rains continuously with no signs of stopping. There could be hidden mysteries behind a village like that.
Village of Birth: Village hidden in the Rain.
Village of Alliance: Village hidden in the Mist.

Rank//Chakra Info. Rank: Gennin Chakra: 300
Ninja Rank: E
Specialty: Genjetsu
Elements: Water
Your ninjutsu: basic ninjutsu


Background Info. Was raised in a war ridden family. Grew up Training everyday of his life since his father died.
History: I was a ninja of the hidden rain village until my father died. My sadness turned to anger and anger turn to revenge. I joined the group formally known as the Akatsuki. They taught me to harness my anger into power. Soon I became a formidable for for any low rank ninja. As I grew I got more powerful and my hatred still grew. I set out to gain more power and that is where my quest led me up until now.

Other

Picture:

Theme Song and Background Music:

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Battles

Won:
Lost:

 

[NeedAnime]

Meh.

 

[Yugure]

look at other bios, to get an idea of bio's are made, I dont't think this will get approved...

 

[Roby]

Looks a little too short and all check other bios to get the idea on how to do them a little better

 

[MythicChronos]

im new at it lol

 

[opticsnm]

a bit late to make a bio when naruto is nearly over wouldn't you say

 

[Arcaneos510X]

1st you need to add the basic ninjutsu 2nd change your speciality i dont think thats right 3rd more info can not hurt you add a theme song some pics and some "other info".
thats about all i can say to help yet not bad for 61 posts.

 

[drxdroopy]

i think its a good one

 

[KyuubiUzumaki]

Its alright - but there is potential to make it really good. Currently, I dont think that it will be accepted. Try looking at ones that have already been made - and find what is lacking in yours and preventing it from reaching the same level.

Good luck. XD

 

[drxdroopy]

a bit late to make a bio when naruto is nearly over wouldn't you say

naruto is not about to end ....naruto:akippuden look it up

 

[MythicChronos]

Its alright - but there is potential to make it really good. Currently, I dont think that it will be accepted. Try looking at ones that have already been made - and find what is lacking in yours and preventing it from reaching the same level.

Good luck. XD

thank you so very much

 

[drxdroopy]

you got the right idea thogh