Custom Training [Reborn and Scorps]

[Reborn]

Back at it again with Sensei. Just like when I was a noob

 

[Scorps]

Lol indeed! And now you are afully grown senpai! Good job ^^

So this technique right?

Genjutsu: Magirawashii no Serifu | Illusionary Arts: The Misleading Words


Type: Offensive
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:
A simple but powerful illusion that is used immediately before an elemental technique. The user does one hand seal (Tiger, Ram or Horse) before the ones required for the elemental technique that follows. The result is that the enemy will see the next released technique as that of another element. However, to perfect the illusion, the user must train and have the ability to string the hand seal of the genjutsu with the ones of the elemental technique so that they seem to be only one set of hand seals.

Note: Usable 4 times
Note2: Can only be used before techniques of the 5 basic elements that the user knows
Note3: Can only use up to S-Rank on the same turn its used
Note4: Can only be taught by Scorps

Its pretty simple. You add one handseal of choice between those 3 before a technique of the basic 5 and make your enemy fooled into thinking its of another element. You have some freedom in it in terms of making it so that the tech itself is altered as well like making a wall of lames turn into a stream of lightning but the basis of the tech will still be the same for the most part. Also, a drawback is that as you do this, you are in essence spending 2 moves to perform one move. The speed is such that only MS users can distinguish it as being an extra handseal but tbh, MS users can see through A-rank and below visual illusions so it has no real use in them anyway.

Questions?

 

[Reborn]

still I would say all grown up, I'm still noob-ish in some areas
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I wanted to ask more about the liberties granted. You're chainging how your opponent sees and comprehends (or should comprehend I should say) the technique, so couldn't you really make it appears as if the technique is in an entirely different form than what it is.

For example, say I want to a wides spread Fire Technique, and I turn it into Lightning to try and provoke the wind release response from my opponent, could I not make the technique look like a Tendril of Lightning which is on a small scale of the Fire, or would I still have to make the techique seem as large as it actually is to some extent?
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I also have a question about the Byakugan users, their ability to see chakra with their eyes, their defense to pretty much any genjutsu (from my experience) is that they'll notice the disruption in their chakra, however do they have the means, while inside the technique, to notice the chakra of the technique that you're using? I mean the jutsu is still coming towards them or happening in front of them. Which prompts the question I just asked.

This question you can save for later since it doesn't have much to do with this technique in perticular just some ranking and techical clarrification for me

Spoiler

Finally, One Body Blow: if I remember correctly the ranking on techniques, elemental chakra>Raw chakra however in terms of the Hyuuga their chakra abilities can be counted as the eqivalent to elemental techniques. That being said, when I read the ways to release genjutsu, I saw that if one were able to use a technique of higher rank than the gen, they would be released (never understood why that was U_U). However Raw chakra must be 2ranks+ and elemental only needs be 1rank+

If that technique was used, what ranks of Gen would it be able to release. Last I checked that technique was A-ranked

 

[Scorps]

still I would say all grown up, I'm still noob-ish in some areas
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I wanted to ask more about the liberties granted. You're chainging how your opponent sees and comprehends (or should comprehend I should say) the technique, so couldn't you really make it appears as if the technique is in an entirely different form than what it is.

For example, say I want to a wides spread Fire Technique, and I turn it into Lightning to try and provoke the wind release response from my opponent, could I not make the technique look like a Tendril of Lightning which is on a small scale of the Fire, or would I still have to make the techique seem as large as it actually is to some extent?
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I also have a question about the Byakugan users, their ability to see chakra with their eyes, their defense to pretty much any genjutsu (from my experience) is that they'll notice the disruption in their chakra, however do they have the means, while inside the technique, to notice the chakra of the technique that you're using? I mean the jutsu is still coming towards them or happening in front of them. Which prompts the question I just asked.

This question you can save for later since it doesn't have much to do with this technique in perticular just some ranking and techical clarrification for me

Spoiler

Finally, One Body Blow: if I remember correctly the ranking on techniques, elemental chakra>Raw chakra however in terms of the Hyuuga their chakra abilities can be counted as the eqivalent to elemental techniques. That being said, when I read the ways to release genjutsu, I saw that if one were able to use a technique of higher rank than the gen, they would be released (never understood why that was U_U). However Raw chakra must be 2ranks+ and elemental only needs be 1rank+

If that technique was used, what ranks of Gen would it be able to release. Last I checked that technique was A-ranked

You can't change the size that much. You are focusing more on the nature than making it seem like a totaly different technique. Example, you can use it to make a giant mud wave seem like a big fire wave or make a lightning bolt seem like a fire ball. But you need to keep in mind some reasonable limitations as the gen is pretty simple.

Byakugan users are put in the genjutsu so they see the same as another ninja caught in it as well. The difference is that by having their ubber improved vision field, they can see their own chakra flow and as such notice alterations in it. They will see the same as others but will detect they are in a gen.

One body blow can dispel, in my humble opinion up to B-Rank gen. Hyuuga techniques are all weaker than elemental chakra with the exception of all the concentrated ones like the rotations or the more specific ones. If you want, ask me directly about certain techniques and ill try to provide info on each.

Questions?

 

[Reborn]

You can't change the size that much. You are focusing more on the nature than making it seem like a totaly different technique. Example, you can use it to make a giant mud wave seem like a big fire wave or make a lightning bolt seem like a fire ball. But you need to keep in mind some reasonable limitations as the gen is pretty simple.

Byakugan users are put in the genjutsu so they see the same as another ninja caught in it as well. The difference is that by having their ubber improved vision field, they can see their own chakra flow and as such notice alterations in it. They will see the same as others but will detect they are in a gen.

One body blow can dispel, in my humble opinion up to B-Rank gen. Hyuuga techniques are all weaker than elemental chakra with the exception of all the concentrated ones like the rotations or the more specific ones. If you want, ask me directly about certain techniques and ill try to provide info on each.

Questions?

Alright, that makes sense. I'm not the biggest fan of Hyuuga but they are useful bios, especially in cases such as these. Though their chakra techniques are weaker than elemental chakra, the fact of the matter is, they aren't using sed chakra for Ninjutsu rather taijutsu. I would say they have arguablly the best taijutsu fighting style around. Though that may come from my own bias towards the style the Jyuuken and Hyuuga in general were based off of. The Chinese Internal Martial art of Baguazhang (Literally 8 Trigram Palm....wonder where Kishi got it from lol)

But I have no other questions sensei ^^

 

[Scorps]

Then, lets do yours? ^^

 

[Reborn]

Genjutsu: Kyuumin Shobatsu(Illusionary Technique: Dormant Punishment)
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will channel their chakra into their opponent's chakra via the Rat seal. The user's chakra will then remain dormant until the victim uses a technique B-rank or above. The resulting amount of chakra needed will cause the user's chakra to activate like a switch to cause the affects of the illusion. As the victim begins to channel their chakra for the technique they use, they will see several spiked chains shoot up and restrain them, wrapping all around their body and dragging them to the ground. The chains will gradually become tighter and tighter and the victim will feel the spikes of the chains sinking deeper into their bodies and also the lack of air from being restricted. Eventually, after so much tension, the victims will fall unconscious.
~This technique remains dormant for 3 turns only
~The technique (if activated) will render one's opponent unconscious after 2 turns.
~Can be used 3 times per battle
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So sorry for the delay, anyway.

You could probably explain this better than I could ~_~ and use it better <_< But this technique centers around linking resting your chakra dormant inside your opponent until the specific requirements are met. Just like the NB Gen technique you just taught us, Hands of Apollo. The technique is designed to react to a specific feature. In the case of this technique, it reacts whenever the minimum requirement of B-ranked chakra begins to build up in your opponent. The focus of that amount of chakra will cause the user's dormant chakra to spike and react causing the actual affect of the genjutsu, which restricts their movements. This would happen before the opponent uses his technique and wouldn't break the timeframe as the jutsu would be initiated in the frame of time before your opponent's technique. Should they try a technique B-ranked or above, they will be self afflicting themselves with full knowledge of what they're doing. However this all depends on timing

Advantages: If timed right with an appropriate combination, this technique will force your opponent to attempt to use a B-ranked technique or otherwise be killed, which will have the illusion take place and they would fall victim to your other technique regardless (less they release the chakra and have techniques that can fill in the gap). Also this technique is extremely descrite, there is no way of telling (unheightened/additional senses excluded) that you cast a genjutsu. With this techniuqe requireing only one seal, you can use this and then quickly chain together another set of seals which makes it see like this technique may have been a part of the actual ninjutsu you intend to use. With that added level of descrssion it gives you an edge.

Disadvantages: The way the chakra lay dormant is a disadvantage all it's own as well. Dojutsu/sensory shinobi can immediately tell when their chakra is disrupted by this technique, and since it doesn't do anything until the requirements are met, they have ample time to release it without the means of Kai (through pain or an outside chakra surge from a comrade or summon). Also, at the same, though normally people wouldn't know since you need to post this people have the options on to use B-rank techniques until the jutsu timer runs out. That is why you need to force the usage of higher level techniques in order to make sure that doesn't happen.

Any questions or insight you wish to give?

 

[Scorps]

I like it. thanks for the exchange ^^ adding to my thread ^^

 

[Reborn]

Not a problem, any time you want to trade techniques yourself you can ask...please ask <_< I want your stuff >_> your stuff is awsome <_< it's like normal stuff only better. Lol but for real, you can feel free to browse my limited collection of CJ