star killer

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Star killer:

Basic Information


Name
Garen Malek

Nickname(s)
Starkiller

Gender
Male

Age
20

Clan
N/A

Looks
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Personality
Starkiller has the look of battle on his face wherever he goes and is extremely competent, aggressive and unsubtle, but having an innocent side to him, meaning there are many parts of the character that are wide-eyed and innocent. for Starkiller "finding a moment of inner peace is the true struggle".

quote

"I've always been stronger than you"

speciality: kenjutsu(needs training)

element: lightning(needs training

Jutsu
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water, Tsuchi/Earth, Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target which releases a cloud of mist upon explosion. This mist spreads around the area soon after. This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it. This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down (only works with non-chakra ropes).
History
born in an unknown village next to the shinobi nations and though he always wanted to be a shinobi and started training in the art of sword wielding and started learning from an unknown master to the shinobi nations. though he is no master he wishes to learn more

Weapons:
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Battles won: N/A
battles lost: N/A
chakra Rank: s-jounin

back ground music

 
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Tsuna...

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you can't have a lightsaber
but the rest is fine :)
 

Tsuki

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You can have a sword/saber... as long as it does not have any specific abilities (I think, not sure)
Else, the bio is ok
 

Jubi-Sama

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You need Scorps' permission for a Galen Marek bio, and cant have lightsabers xD

Nice choice btw. Galen is pretty badass. The original, not the clone.

Also, edit everything out that has to do with star wars. No Kashyyk etc. It has to relate to naruto. Also, use the correct bio template found here:
 
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Caliburn

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Not following the template, thus not approvable. Also you have no specialty, so remove kenjutsu and add more lines of history.
 
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