[Photoshop] Yet another try...

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Ok, yet another try. CnC as always, appreciated.

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Followed the tutorial I posted at the previous thread and added some things that I considered that would make the sig look more ok. :)
 

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Looks darn good imo xd :D
Keep it up x)

PS. Maybe on the back of her head you could have left some hair visible as now its like ear popping out of nowhere :p since the face kinda ends before the ear starts so the ear overall is kinda.. well xd
 
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it's nice... Urahara approved :uruhara:
 

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Looks darn good imo xd :D
Keep it up x)

PS. Maybe on the back of her head you could have left some hair visible as now its like ear popping out of nowhere :p since the face kinda ends before the ear starts so the ear overall is kinda.. well xd

Hmm, didn't thought about that detail, to be honest.
Good to keep in mind. xd
Thanks for the advice!


:) Thanks!


Thank you!

it's nice... Urahara approved :uruhara:

Haha, lol, thank you!
 

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Hmm, didn't thought about that detail, to be honest.
Good to keep in mind. xd
Thanks for the advice!



:) Thanks!



Thank you!



Haha, lol, thank you!

Your welcome xd I just tend to notice small things :shy:
 

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Your welcome xd I just tend to notice small things :shy:
It's good, it's good because you make others be more self *insert word here cause I'm really having a lapse*

hey chatte nice work
i didnt know you are a gfxer as well xd
keep it up

Hey! Thanks.
Hmm, dunno, thought I told you that. But seems I've missed it, hehe.

It looks great

Thank you! :)


I have high hopes for you
love it :) lightning <3

Aww, that's so sweet! :blush:
Thank yooou! :hug:
 

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Here I am again >D
I like the colours on this one too lolol xD You did a good job :D For this one I will say that I think it would be better if the render was facing a little up as if staring far off into distance or gazing at the sky or the ceiling but that is just my opinion probably it won't look good that way :) Try sharpening a few parts here and there on the canvas to give it a nice detail. And for the text I think its positioning is good but i would like for you to mess with the options in ps that allow you to increase/decrease the space between lines and letters x3 The left side of the render needs a teeny tiny bit more blending but even with that I like your blending skills ... I have none ;____; I have taken an interest in your works lolol *evil grin* Keep it up hope to see more :3
 

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You did a Great Job :)
 

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Lightning R.I.P. ,you chopped of her head chatte :T_T: its eiher that or the neck has been overblended xd besided that it looks amazing.
 

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Here I am again >D
I like the colours on this one too lolol xD You did a good job :D For this one I will say that I think it would be better if the render was facing a little up as if staring far off into distance or gazing at the sky or the ceiling but that is just my opinion probably it won't look good that way :) Try sharpening a few parts here and there on the canvas to give it a nice detail. And for the text I think its positioning is good but i would like for you to mess with the options in ps that allow you to increase/decrease the space between lines and letters x3 The left side of the render needs a teeny tiny bit more blending but even with that I like your blending skills ... I have none ;____; I have taken an interest in your works lolol *evil grin* Keep it up hope to see more :3

@bolded part: that so sweet! ♥
Thank you very much for the CnC! ♥
It was very strange with this render because if I would've made the render smaller as I've tried, it would've looked, dunno, strange so I left it that way, thought it looked better, dunno. :shrug:
As for the sharpening, yeah, I remember, I forgot to do it. :| Cuase usually I sharpen the focal, but dunno why now I forgot, lol, blame me.
As for the text hmm, yeah, I am at the beginning and I try to not make it look strange, but maybe in the future I'll try to do so. :D

Thank you very very much once again!

You did a Great Job :)

Thank you! :)

Lightning R.I.P. ,you chopped of her head chatte :T_T: its eiher that or the neck has been overblended xd besided that it looks amazing.

Thanks, sweetie!
Well as I've said up it wa a little strange with this render, hehe...so that was kinda the best I could pull at the moment, but in the future I'll try to make it look good. xd
 

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Its quiet a nice sig it suffers from FHS though.
 

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@bolded part: that so sweet! ♥
Thank you very much for the CnC! ♥
It was very strange with this render because if I would've made the render smaller as I've tried, it would've looked, dunno, strange so I left it that way, thought it looked better, dunno. :shrug:
As for the sharpening, yeah, I remember, I forgot to do it. :| Cuase usually I sharpen the focal, but dunno why now I forgot, lol, blame me.
As for the text hmm, yeah, I am at the beginning and I try to not make it look strange, but maybe in the future I'll try to do so.
Thank you very very much once again!
it is? :D
Lol yea some renders are that way :s tho I am talking about rotating the render here rather than resizing it :)
afsdhaibdonskjnlajnd ikr that happens tho i forget more major things like the text LOL xD
just mentioned that cuz it was my first step towards improving my typography :D
Your are very much welcome x3


Uhm, mind if you explain? xd
I don't know what it means, sorry. :)

FHS stands for floating head syndrome where only the head part of the focal is visible in a tag.
 

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it is? :D
Lol yea some renders are that way :s tho I am talking about rotating the render here rather than resizing it :)
afsdhaibdonskjnlajnd ikr that happens tho i forget more major things like the text LOL xD
just mentioned that cuz it was my first step towards improving my typography :D
Your are very much welcome x3



FHS stands for floating head syndrome where only the head part of the focal is visible in a tag.

Ahaaah, thanks for letting me know!

Ooh, you were talking about rotation. Duh, I'm so dull... forgot I could do that as well. xd
Good to keep in mind for the next time. xd
 

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Uhm, mind if you explain? xd
I don't know what it means, sorry. :)

Sorry I was meant to type what it stood for as well, I was half asleep when I veiwed it, but your question has been answered now anyway again nice job and KIU.
 
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