black hole

[Hattake Ryuzaki]

A poem i wrote in highschool, titled: black hole

Blood sucking parasites
F***ing leeches
swarming by the hoard
the darkness reaches
creeping toward
the last shred of light
few stand to fight
to cast out this blight
losing sight
going blind
tearing flesh from ryind
ripping memory from mind
going through time
as the universe unwinds.​

what you guys think?

 

[ElementNami92]

They let you say that in school?? Haha It's Really good. I liked it! It's in the wrong Section I think.​

 

[AMIIIT]

Nice
I could see Eminem rapping that

 

[Hipster Madara]

Was your inspiration the sasuke fanboys?

 

[Awkward Linguist]

Nice, its good.

 

[Hattake Ryuzaki]

Was your inspiration the sasuke fanboys?

hahaha :rofl: good one hipster but no

 

[Hipster Madara]

hahaha :rofl: good one hipster but no

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[Hattake Ryuzaki]

They let you say that in school?? Haha It's Really good. I liked it! It's in the wrong Section I think.​

thanks and yah i went to a alternative school when i wrote that my senior year. but i see a guy who post poetry and this is the section he used so i thought this one:shrug:

 

[Yuka]

It was a beautiful poem

 

[Tsuki]

It was a beautiful poem

Yuka's sig expresses my opinion pretty much xd

Nice poem (it's in the right section)

 

[Temporary Account]

I like the philosophical significance portrayed through the literature.