Broken Inside

ikikouchiha9668

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For once, I'm don't feel like mentioning what this poem was inspired about.

The little girl smiles
Smiling through the pain
No one can tell what's really inside

She's letting other people use her shoulder
For tears and troubles
Hoping she can have someone else's shoulder to lean on

No one's there for her when she cries herself to sleep
No one's there to comfort her when the aching pain peaks
Absolutely no one can see what she's going through

The only thing keeping her alive is all the people that lean on her
She looks so strong
But inside she's dieing slowly

She's so young and losing her grip
Losing her grip on life itself
She just wants to give up

Nothing hurts more than an empty heart
Nothing can heal such a fake smile
Or a fake laugh

She has friends but are they true?
She's beginning to doubt if she even has friends at all
She just lets everyone use her shoulder

Everyone needs such a sturdy rock
She knows
But still the scissors intruge her

A fight not worth fighting for
She just wants to get up this ladder
But even she wants to shatter
While her solid core slowly breaks
 

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Itachi will get you through it. :D

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I think its time for that little girl to stop being a victim and emo kid.
 

ikikouchiha9668

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I think its time for that little girl to stop being a victim and emo kid.

tell that to her face. She can't help but be sad inside. It's not her fault that her mom has been sick for three years and that her dad abuses her mom!! It isn't her fault that she has to clean her entire house every day!
 

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Beautiful ^^
 

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:( ... This poem.. It reminds me of myself :shy: ... Well, how I used be :D
 

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tell that to her face. She can't help but be sad inside. It's not her fault that her mom has been sick for three years and that her dad abuses her mom!! It isn't her fault that she has to clean her entire house every day!

Huh?! Are you talking about yourself?! o_O
 

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I think its time for that little girl to stop being a victim and emo kid.

You couldnt understand pain even if you used a dictionary.
 

ikikouchiha9668

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my goal in this poem was
1) to speak my mind
2) to touch people's minds.
I hope I accomplished 2 when you read this poem
 

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tell that to her face. She can't help but be sad inside. It's not her fault that her mom has been sick for three years and that her dad abuses her mom!! It isn't her fault that she has to clean her entire house every day!

stfu Itachi's Dead

Very beautiful poem.

It didn't say that in the poem,so we didn't know she had to go through all that.But nice poem.

This just made me laugh.:rofl:
 

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im crying right now for you
this pain you should not go through
 
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