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Alright...here goes!

*I close my eyes for a second and breath in deeply. I Heat the chakra in my stomach changing it to the fire nature. i force the chakra into my mouth and open my eyes and exhale the chakra through my mouth aiming for the lightning clone*
 

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Alright...here goes!

*I close my eyes for a second and breath in deeply. I Heat the chakra in my stomach changing it to the fire nature. i force the chakra into my mouth and open my eyes and exhale the chakra through my mouth aiming for the lightning clone*

*As you exhale the fire, as it has no defining shape it comes out uncontroled and wide spread and disperses before reaching my clone, the only thing reaching him is the heat*

You didn't shape the fire. Remember how mine came out? The flames were compressed in the shape of a ball/sphere. When you compact the fire into a shape, you give it more speed, power, and most importantly control. Try it again.
 

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one more time

*I focus for a second and breath in deeply. I heat the chakra in my stomach changing it to the fire nature. i force the chakra into my mouth, shaping it into the form of a ball and exhale the chakra through my mouth aiming for the lightning clone*
 

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one more time

*I focus for a second and breath in deeply. I heat the chakra in my stomach changing it to the fire nature. i force the chakra into my mouth, shaping it into the form of a ball and exhale the chakra through my mouth aiming for the lightning clone*

*As you exhale the fire, the flames come out in the shape of a moderately large ball of fire and it heads towards my clone. As the ball of flames travels towards my clone he leaps to the left avoiding the ball*

Very good...don't mind him, he's just being an ass. Now, do the same thing just do it more times in a rapid succession. Spew out several fire balls (5) as fast as you can, one after the other. Lets see him try to avoid that.
 

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Alright!!!

*I inhale deeply and focus. I heat the chakra in my stomach changing it to the fire nature. i force the chakra into my mouth, shaping it into the form of many spheres and exhale the chakra through my mouth in multiple blows*
 

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Alright!!!

*I inhale deeply and focus. I heat the chakra in my stomach changing it to the fire nature. i force the chakra into my mouth, shaping it into the form of many spheres and exhale the chakra through my mouth in multiple blows*

*As you exhale the fireballs, my clone attempts to evade each one of them. Though he successfully avoide thre of the flames, he's hit by the fourth one and he disperses as the flames hit and burn him*

Very good. Now, lets up the stakes with a little more advanced shape manipulation.

*I make the tiger seal and focus on my katon chakra in my core. As I channel my chakra up into my mouth, I begin to exhale the chakra from my mouth. The large flames manifest from my chakra and simultaniously I use shape manipulation to shape the flames into the shape of a dragon's head.*

Now you see how that ball of fire took the shape of a Dragon when I spit it out? I want you to do the same thing. Follow the same process as before but this time, impute more chakra in order to create larger and more powerful flames and use shape manipulation on a much higher scale in order to generate the shape of a Dragon's head...

:hint:
Use more description, expand your vocabulary and write a little more. Make your sentences different ;)
 

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ALRIGHT!!

*I concentrate and do the tiger hand seal. I focus my chakra into my stomach. I then pour more into my stomach and begin to heat it. I Force to chakra into my mouth and manipulate it into the form of a dragon Head. Then i exhale blow out the chakra forward*
 

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ALRIGHT!!

*I concentrate and do the tiger hand seal. I focus my chakra into my stomach. I then pour more into my stomach and begin to heat it. I Force to chakra into my mouth and manipulate it into the form of a dragon Head. Then i exhale blow out the chakra forward*

*Watches the two dragon headed flames head up into the sky, causing the clouds to darken. The ominous roar of thunder begins to echo throughout the now, shaded area*

Hmmm...very good. That will come in use later in your studies...although it may not necessarily be with me. Anywho, onto the next step. You did well with the shape manipulation now, I'm going to show you how to create more destructive fire power with just basic chakra compression.

*I inhale through from my stomach, channeling my katon chakra from my core and upwards. I gather an even greater amount of chakra then previously and I bring it up to my mouth. I then exhale the but as I do, I compress all the chakra and flames into a small ball. The small ball of fire travels outwards and onto the ground. The moment it makes impact with the ground, the flames explode into a large storm of fire which continues to travel outwards.*

How did such a small little ball turn into that you ask? Well I'll tell you. It's a simple concept really. Instead of releasing the flames of your technique all at once in a large mass, you forcefully compact and compress the chakra into a small container. Think of how you try to stuff a suitcase with more than it can hold and in the cartoons it always explodes outwards and the laundry is all over the place 0_o well this is just like that, just think of the fire as laundry ><. In short channel as much fire chakra you can and use shape manipulation to compress it into a small ball of flames. Exhale it outwards and upon impact with the ground or another surface, it should explode into a large flame
 

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Alight...Big Fire...Small Container

*I concentrate and inhale deeply. I Gather a huge amount of chakra in my stomach at the same time heating the chakra in Fire nature. I bring the Chakra up to my mouth and compress it as small as i can make it and exhale the chakra.*
 

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Alight...Big Fire...Small Container

*I concentrate and inhale deeply. I Gather a huge amount of chakra in my stomach at the same time heating the chakra in Fire nature. I bring the Chakra up to my mouth and compress it as small as i can make it and exhale the chakra.*

*As you exhale, you release a powerful yet uncontroled fire onto the ground which explodes in a fairly large burst in front of you and knocks you back.*

*coughs from smoke*
What happened to the container? Remember you have to shape it as well as compact it.

Try again and remember to shape it also explain what happens after you exhale it to show you understand what's happening. You exhale the compressed ball of flames, what does it do after? When it impact the ground or a surface what does it do. *hint, look at how I did it*
 

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*I inhale deeply. I gather a huge amount of chakra in my stomach and heat it as the same time changing it to fire nature. I force it into my mouth and shape and compress it. Then i exhale the chakra. A small ball of fire travels forward a bit and then falls to the ground and explodes.*
 

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*I inhale deeply. I gather a huge amount of chakra in my stomach and heat it as the same time changing it to fire nature. I force it into my mouth and shape and compress it. Then i exhale the chakra. A small ball of fire travels forward a bit and then falls to the ground and explodes.*

Good, good. *Summons a fairly large, thick red scroll* Everything you've just done is the general foundation of every technique here *Unravels the scroll* Now as you're only an S-Jounin, you can only use technique up to B-rank. A-S techniques require a higher rank. The techniques you can't use will be marked Red just so you know.

~Scroll~
( Ryu Kaen Bakufuu ) - Dragon Flame Blitz
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user shoots balls of fire at the opponent.

Simplistic enough, you create moderate sized balls of fire at your opponent. This technique is rudimentary so of course it's not going to have too much power and distance in it's travel, but still effective enough to cause burns for your opponent and use as a potential distraction.

( Kaen Shuriken Ranbu ) - Blazing Shuriken Dance
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will throw several shuriken at the enemy and then inflames them with fire to cause extra damage.

Again simple, you launch shuriken (kunai and other small bladed projectiles will work as well) and you enhances their power by channeling your fire chakra into them and enflaming them. Hot, sharp, metal, always something good.

( Katon: Komakai Kaki ) - Fire Release: Small Fire
Rank: D
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user spews a small fireball.

It...it can't get anymore straight forward than that can it? -_-

( Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals Snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger, a ninja inhales air, and utilizing a large amount of fire chakra, spews a large fireball from their mouth after blowing through a ring made by the thumb and index finger of the user, incinerating everything in range. The fireball ignites externally.

Think of the former technique above this one, the make up of this technique is basically the same only this time the ball of fire is on a larger scale. You'll preform the six seals stated in the technique while you inhale. You'll then blow through a hole in your finger and the flames will ignite past it and you use shape manipulation to shape the flames. It's only short distance though keep that in mind.

( Katon: Hōsenka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user first performs six hand seals Rat → Tiger → Dog → Ox → Rabbit → Tiger and they create a volley of small fireballs, which are sent flying in an unpredictable manner assaulting the enemy. In addition, the flames are controlled one by one with chakra, so avoiding them all is extremely difficult. Shuriken can also be concealed within the flames, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack. Like the flames, the shuriken can be controlled with chakra. For the most part, however, this technique is used as a distraction.

This is where the projectile techniques begin to get more unique. With this technique you preform the six seals required for the technique and you spew a volley of fireballs instead of just a single fireball. If you think back to the D-ranked technique above, (Dragon Flame Blitz) this technique is similar to that, although you spew the balls of flame in an unpredictable pattern so it seems like a whild shot. What makes this technique different is that you continue to manipulate the flames with your chakra in order to make it more difficult for your opponent to avoid them.

( Bakuhatsu Enhogan ) – Exploding Flame Shots
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user shoots multiple fire shots from their hands that are able to cause fiery explosions on impact with any object. The shots can't set the opponent on fire, though they can cause damage by exploding on him.

This technique is unique in that it isn't released in the same fashion as most Fire techniques. Instead of exhaling fire, you expell the fire shots from your hand. With this technique you compact the chakra in the flame shots so that when they make contact with the target or surface of something they explode. It doesn't cause fire or burn them the way a normal fire technique would but it damages them through the explosion.

( Katon: Hiendan ) – Fire Release: Soaring Flame Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offense, Deffence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user exhales a stronger yet shorter version of the Fire Release: Great Fireball technique.

Description says it all, same exact technique as Great Fireball, only bigger. In the sense, this technique proves better to use as it's stronger, requires no seals to do.

( Katon: Gōenkyū ) - Fire Release: Great Blaze Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user after performing two hand seals Horse → Tiger exhales a meteor-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact.

This is a great technique, large range of travel, large size, everything. You make the two hand seals and you simply pour an imense amount of chakra and spew out a fireball the size of a meteor that travels towards your taget and carries them away and creates a huge explosion.

( Katon: Gōenka ) - Fire Release: Great Flame Flower
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user jumps in the air and shoots three giant bullets of fire that come down like giant meteors, then erupt into a geyser of flame.

Similar to the above technique in the whole size, range and power thing, only this time you're launching three seprate meteor sized flames down towards the ground. You'll jump and release the flames and when they make impact on the ground, they'll erupt into large geysers of flames.

( Katon: Gōryūka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent after performing one handseal. It is able to alter localized weather conditions to the point of making thunder clouds when shot into the air, enabling the user to perform Kirin.

Remember when we turned our flame balls into dragon heads? Good times xd. This is a powerful and useful technique. It can travel long range and it has great power on it's own. However this technique's main purpose is stated in it's description. You use it to create the weather conditions to set up for Kirin, the Lightning Release technique. With this technique you spew one/several (up to five I believe) Fire balls that are shaped like Dragon heads. They can be used for offensive purposes to attack your opponent or to set up for Kirin, but doing the latter is a little more difficult to pull off then you might think ;)

( Katon: Hōsenka Tsumabeni ) - Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Flower Nail Crimson
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user unleashes a volley of shuriken with one hand, while at the same time exhaling fire-infused chakra onto them in order to increase the weapons' destructive potential by making them capable of inflicting severe burns upon direct contact with either the intended victim or any other object caught within their trajectories. Due to the chakra-based nature of the flames that surround them, the shuriken will continue to burn after impact, regardless of the flammability of the object that they ultimately collide with.

This is essentially a more powerful version of the preavious pheonix Sage technique. This time, you'll release shuriken and exhale fire onto them. The fire will be vastly stronger than the flames of the previous and will burn stronger on the target(s)

(Katon: Zukokku) - Fire Release: Intelligent Hard Work
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user after performing the required hand seals Rat → Dog → Tiger fires a small fireball that erupts into a giant fire-storm after making contact with a surface, causing widespread destruction to the area. Since the flames travel along the ground, and cover such a wide area this is a difficult technique to evade. When combined with Wind Release: Pressure Damage, this technique is amplified to the point of being able to evaporate a large amount of water in an instant.

This is essentially the last thing we just did I would say. With this technique, you focus a large amount of your fire chakra in your body and release it in a compact ball. The ball will travel and upon impact, it'll explode into a large flame storm. If released onto the ground the flame storm will continue to travel. A great frontal attack and greatly powerful. All you need is the three seals for the technique.

(Katon: Gōka no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Hellfire Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra and breath out from their mouth a large fireball that travels at the opponent. As it reaches the opponent it bursts into a maelstrom of fire engulfing them in flames.

Similar to the last one, only this time you create a large fire ball and the technique isn't being compressed so much so that it'll burst into a large flame, the flames will burst on impact with your opponent but the malestorm is essentially as big as the ball of fire itself if I'm not mistaken.

Now Read through this scroll, familurize yourself with the techniques here and from this and everything I've taught you so far, give me the:

Advantage(s) to This Method:
Disadvantage(s) to This Method:
*2-3 Technique Combination Using what you've learned.


*For the last one, if you want me to give you an example of what I'm asking you first then say so and I will.
 

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Advantage: Progetiles are usefull for range, therefor they are useful if there is distance between you and your opponent.

Larger scal techniques can disrupted the opponents view leaving them open for an attack

Disadvantage: Obviously, because it's fire it is weak to water techniques.

Most of these techniques will not be very useful at short range

2 or 3 move combo: can I get an example please
 

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Advantage: Progetiles are usefull for range, therefor they are useful if there is distance between you and your opponent.

Larger scal techniques can disrupted the opponents view leaving them open for an attack

Disadvantage: Obviously, because it's fire it is weak to water techniques.

Most of these techniques will not be very useful at short range

2 or 3 move combo: can I get an example please

You definately need more than that for the advantages and disadvantages. Look at the range on the techniques, you have projectiles that are only short range and some that can extend all the way to long ranged so range varries. What else is there, you have to think about this a little more.

We know the entire element is weak against water, that's not the only disadvantage.

What I'm looking for you to do with these advantages and disadvantages is to tell me how the techniques in this specific method is useful in a fight and how it's harmful or weak. Range varries, there are a melody of other advantages to projectile type attacks. We already know water is strong against fire, I can give you other ways to avoid, counter, defend, defeat these types of techniques without using water. These one liners aren't showing me that you understand what I'm saying. You need to be more descriptive and detailed in order to give a vivid and clear explination of what you've learned.

For the time being we'll skip the part where you need to preform techniques. Just try to re-do the Advantages and Disadvantages of the method.

Hint :hint:
Think of what projectiles are, weapons that you launch at your opponent. Think of what happens when you throw/release a projectile. Think direction of travel.
 

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Advantages: Fire is Hot. It can and will cause a great deal of damage to the opponent if the attack is successful. The projectiles can go anywhere from short to long range not limiting the distance you need to be from you opponent.

Disadvantages: Projectiles can only move in the direction you shoot it. You cannot change its path because fire is very hard to control when its not moving so when it is it would be a lot harder. Projectiles are mostly if not all attacks, therefore this method is very bad for defense.
 

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Advantages: Fire is Hot. It can and will cause a great deal of damage to the opponent if the attack is successful. The projectiles can go anywhere from short to long range not limiting the distance you need to be from you opponent.

Disadvantages: Projectiles can only move in the direction you shoot it. You cannot change its path because fire is very hard to control when its not moving so when it is it would be a lot harder. Projectiles are mostly if not all attacks, therefore this method is very bad for defense.

Much better. Now I'll give you my own little input on these.

Advantages: For projectiles like this, generally you're launching a volley of flame based projectiles or one large projectile. Either way, with these types of attacks you serve to cause problems for your opponent with the barrage of flames. They can be used for distractions/to occupy your opponent's time while you attack them on another front or prepare yourself for a more affective attack. Though some are limited in their range, most of the projectiles in this method possess a fair range (up to mid distance) which is usually within people's comfort zones of fighting. Also one of the more important advantages imo is the fact that once the projectile is fired, you can preform another technique. In the RP you cannot do two or more technique simultaniously. That being said there is the timeframe rule where between attacks, where your opponent can exploit them. With projectiles once the jutsu is fired, the moment it's left your body the technique is technically completed and you can preform another technique where as with stream based techniques, you're constantly pouring chakra into that technique so you'd technically be continuing the technique for as long as the stream is active *hint, hint*

Disadvantages: You picked up exactly on my mind set. You cannot change the direction of the projectile once it's been fired. The exception to this rule may be the Pheonix Flower technique where you're chakra is still connected to it and directs it towards your opponent however that's on a smaller scale and you can't completely steer the technique constantly so it would hit your opponent.

Are there any questions so far?
 

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Alright we're going to move onto the second method in the training. For the techniques in this category, instead of moulding your chakra and just exhaling a fixed amount of chakra and fire as a projectile, you'll be constantly releasing chakra and fire in a stream/constant flame. Think of them as somewhat flamethrower-esque techniques.

Understand?
 

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Now, same thing as before, watch me and repeat what I do. Let's start with the basics.

*I inhale deeply from the diaphram channeling my Katon chakra from my core. I channel my chakra upwards into my mouth and I begin exhaling a large stream of fire from my mouth. I continue pouring chakra from my core into the flames thus creating a steady constant flame like a flame thrower.*

Simple enough right? Instead of shooting out a fixed amount of fire just keep pouring chakra into it to fuel the flames. Now you try.
 
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