Closed Spar: Kamitzo Mitarashi vs New Guy

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(Okay, this is a CLOSED spar between Kamitzo Mitarashi and Friendly Demonic Figure, who does not yet have a bio, but is playing as a generic Genin, just so that he can learn the basics of RP.

Medium range, in the middle of a forest, with a small lake nearby.
Normal Rei's R&R
No death
No stealing
Fair play ;)

I will make the first move to get us started)

Also here is a list of all the jutsu's that we can use during the fight, you can use up to 3 in a turn, and dont worry about health or chakra because it is a spar, so we consider them irrelevent. The fight ends when someone gives in, or if someone become trapped, or unable to make any further moves. Also dont get stuck into thinking that the jutsus need to be used individually, their real power comes out when you use them in combination even at higher levels.

All basic E Rank Ninjutsu:
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong). Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

*As Kamitzo walks through the forest, he hears a noise behind him. Quickly turning to face the threat*

"Who goes there, this is Nara territory, state your business!"
 
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*stops walking*

"my business is my own..."

*turns to face Kamitzo and glares*

*Kamitzo makes a handsign and summons 4 clones beside him, who all scatter around Bob with Kamitzo, surrounding him.*

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)



(note that although the clones are indistinguishable, they dissipate when they are attack or attack, and cannot do anything but act as an illusion. At the moment they are to distract you, and make it harder for you to tell which one is the real me.)
 

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*looks around and prepares to take out his kunai*
*stops and lowers guard*

"if its really that much interest to u, i am looking for a certain person, perhaps u kno him, Kamitzo... mita... mita.. mitazaki?"

"I had some business i wanted to settle with him"
 

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*looks around and prepares to take out his kunai*
*stops and lowers guard*

"if its really that much interest to u, i am looking for a certain person, perhaps u kno him, Kamitzo... mita... mita.. mitazaki?"

"I had some business i wanted to settle with him"

"FU its Mitarashi!"

*As each of the clones shout at Bob, Kamitzo appears from behind him, and raps a rope around him, and hangs him by the branch of a tree.*

"Get the name right next time!"

(I want you to attempt to escape the ropes using one of the jutsu that i showed you. Remember that the replacement justsu or "substitution jutsu" is only allowed to be used once per match by each player, so using it now could be a waste.

:hint:I will give you a hint and say that there is a jutsu that you have that is perfect for this, when you find it you should copy the text, and paste it into your next move within a Jutsu tag. The jutsu tag button is in the top left of the toolbar when in advanced editing mode, so make sure you dont simply use quick reply.

So go ahead and make your next move :))
 

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you do understand that you are pretty much breaking the rules O_O
 

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you do understand that you are pretty much breaking the rules O_O

(I am trying to teach my friend how to RP on the base before he makes his bio)

(I will be back in a few hours Ollie, i have to have dinner with some family friends, you can make your move and wait for me later)
 
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*moves his hands to his front and forms hand signs*





*escapes from the rope and reappears to kamitzo's right with kunai at the ready*

"you're a bit eager, but if that's the way u want it, fine"

*jumps forward to land behind kamitzo and throws four kunai out of his right hand at kamitzo before throwing three shuriken out of his left curving into kamitzo's direction*

*the three shuriken fly past kamitzo and are redirected by string, wrapping the string around kamitzo, until the three shuriken cross over and around kamitzo to bind him*

*begins to pull out another kunai*

(tell me if my jutsu implant worked on the message)
 

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(I am trying to teach my friend how to RP on the base before he makes his bio)

(I will be back in a few hours Ollie, i have to have dinner with some family friends, you can make your move and wait for me later)

He meant that you just appear and disappear without any regard to the rules. That's not how you teach him to RP. If he wants to do it, let a Sensei handle it. This is pretty much spam, since he isn't even at the post count level to submit a biography and start training.
 

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*moves his hands to his front and forms hand signs*





*escapes from the rope and reappears to kamitzo's right with kunai at the ready*

"you're a bit eager, but if that's the way u want it, fine"

*jumps forward to land behind kamitzo and throws four kunai out of his right hand at kamitzo before throwing three shuriken out of his left curving into kamitzo's direction*

*the three shuriken fly past kamitzo and are redirected by string, wrapping the string around kamitzo, until the three shuriken cross over and around kamitzo to bind him*

*begins to pull out another kunai*

(tell me if my jutsu implant worked on the message)

(Thats pretty cool actually, but to escape from the rope you need to use the justu that i hinted at which is,


(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).



In this RP, you need to be very descriptive of what you do, so that the opponent can react to it as best they can. You have done a good job at this so far, but to escape from something like ropes, or to counter another enmies move, you must use a jutsu. This is so that you dont just do what you did and say you "escaped the ropes", if you are going to do something like that you need to either use a jutsu to justify it, or be very deliberate in saying how you accomplish this task, such as: "I escape the ropes by releasing my arms and then cutting at the ropes" Something like that is much better.

You will notice that this means there is an inherent advantage in being more descriptive than your opponent, to a certain extent. By this i mean that if you describe what you are doing better than the enemy, you can actually protect yourself from being countered. For example i could have said that i tied you up by your arms, rendering my previous example useless.

Anyway, if you use the jutsu above, you will be fine and then you have two more jutsus available to you during that turn. I would recommend 5 senses confusion disorder jutsu, remembering the link to all your jutsu is . Or you could make some clones.

I hope this helps with you making your move, also as a side note, very rarely will throwing kunai or shuriken be a killing or even damaging move, as they are so easy to block, by simply throwing my own kunai back.

Good luck)
 

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(down the bottom of my message i asked if my jutsu implant worked in the message so obviously it didnt)
 

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you do understand that you are pretty much breaking the rules O_O

He meant that you just appear and disappear without any regard to the rules. That's not how you teach him to RP. If he wants to do it, let a Sensei handle it. This is pretty much spam, since he isn't even at the post count level to submit a biography and start training.

(Now i understand what you guys mean. Its my mistake, i dont really mean that he "appeared, i mean that the one behind him was the real Kamitzo, and was the one that attacked. You are both right though, i should have been much more explicit, see what i mean ollie :p)

(down the bottom of my message i asked if my jutsu implant worked in the message so obviously it didnt)

(Sorry man, must have missed it, if you cant get it to work, try using the spoiler tag instead, the button is 3 to the left of the jutsu tag button, you just enter the text between the "[" and "/spoiler]".

In that case, good job!, my turn then)

*Kamitzo quickly uses his escape techniques to free himself from the binds of his opponents rope*

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).



*he then quickly jumps backwards behind a tree, taking cover from the strangers kunai, and throws a 5 senses confusion disorder kunai of his own, at his opponent*

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

 

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*bends backwards (matrix style) balancing himself with his hands, then pushing off with his hands, he leaps back to his feet and jumps forward, away from the kunai, and into a tree infront of him, landing on a branch above. he sits bracing himself from the blast and quickly scouts for kamitzo*

*finds the tree Kamitzo is hiding behind and leaps down into melee combat, throwing two shuriken at Kamitzo before hitting the ground*

*begins to charge with kunai in hand*
 

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*bends backwards (matrix style) balancing himself with his hands, then pushing off with his hands, he leaps back to his feet and jumps forward, away from the kunai, and into a tree infront of him, landing on a branch above. he sits bracing himself from the blast and quickly scouts for kamitzo*

*finds the tree Kamitzo is hiding behind and leaps down into melee combat, throwing two shuriken at Kamitzo before hitting the ground*

*begins to charge with kunai in hand*

(So are you gonna charge at me after being stunned?)
 

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"Kawarimi no Jutsu" (casts jutsu, cos justsu tag doesnt work)

*sits in hiding, recovering from the blast* (happy?...my way was so much less boring)
 

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"Kawarimi no Jutsu" (casts jutsu, cos justsu tag doesnt work)

*sits in hiding, recovering from the blast* (happy?...my way was so much less boring)

(You can always add a little flavour to make it interesting, and the justu tag should work, or at least the spoiler, if you cant get them to work than just copy and paste without them)
 
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