iruka,raikage, and ten tail chronicle: iruka in despair

[New Era]

relation: iruka is the raikage's lost long brother who's power is sealed in the ten tails belly

Iruka Dispear

iruka wakes up in a forest and see's no one there, he screams help waithig for someone to come but no one comes.

iruka wonders why it is so dark and a red moon with the wind moving so rapidly.

iruka see's a zetsu clone attacks with a kunai but the kunai goes right threw zetsu, no matter how hard iruka tries zetsu just walks threw it.

Zetsu clone:become one with all mighty obito, all mighty obito, all mighty obito,all mighty obito, iruka it is your time!

iruka runs away but he see's zetsu rushing towards him from the ground and grabs iruka foot, iruka screams and says leave me alone where is the hidden leaf, where is Naruto.

Zetsuu clone: naruto uzumaki is dead, the nine tails has been extracted the ten tails resurrection is a success and we zetsu must take you into our path to find true peace.

Iruka: your full of crap you kill just to obtain peace but what you really want is power, i am not given in.

iruka takes a scroll from his back and opens it

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iruka taps into awakening a bit of the ten tails chakra and starts to gain the rinnegan with black chakra all around him.

Zetsu clone: how do you have the ten tails chakra?

Iruka:i have been experimenting on the nine tails jinchuriki ever since he was a kid i purposely allowed him to feel opened to me so that i can steal his chakra I have been secretly been taking all of the tailed beast chakra to gain the ten tails demonic chakra.

Zetsu Clone: you are in genjutsu it is too late your powers are just an illusion.

Iruka: when you posses the ten tails chakra you are breaking out of the realm of possible I can do the impossible.

iruka uses the tiger,horse and ram to escape the illusion and the dark the red moon shatters away.

iruka ten tails chakra was so powerful that it broke iruka from the binds of the genjutsu.

iruka sees no one moving but standing still, but he see's gedo mazou coming with madara on the ground.

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Madara: are you prepared to die

iruka unleashes his scroll and says it's your time to die.

A loud roar of lighting comes it is the fourth raikage who takes iruka and leaves with him on his journey to the cloud village.

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A: you would have been killed.
Iruka:no i would've been fine on my own, I even broke the genjutsu.

A: They would have killed you on the spot, the genjutsu you were in was no more than a mere d rank genjutsu.

Iruka: what!

A: you thought you were a jinchuriki too right.

Iruka: but how do you explain my scroll to tap into my abiliities.

A: you have no scroll , you are useless.

their journey to the the cloud vililage is under way.

Credits
madara

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Fourth Raikage

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iruka

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ten tails iruka transformation

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this was only part one, my first time

 

[naruto1246]

............................................................................what?.......................................................................the?....................................hell?..............................................................did?......................................I?......................................................just???.......................................................read?......................................................................................................................................... that felt alittle rushed

 

[New Era]

............................................................................what?.......................................................................the?....................................hell?..............................................................did?......................................I?......................................................just???.......................................................read?......................................................................................................................................... that felt alittle rushed

it was.

 

[naruto1246]

it was.

oh well the explains it thenxd

 

[Urda]

It had less detail, however, you were still gave enough for the readers to understand. Some of it is a bit unrealistic compared to Naruto, however, this is your story. Character development was poor or if you were capturing Kishi's "Naruto," than you should have shown more of their development. It was short and unorganized, however, it was still a decent and understandable read. If you would make another Chapter, I would read it, however, if its like this, than I want (Its as if I' am reading a book so no offense). Overall, Nice Story and Chapter.

 

[naruto1246]

It had less detail, however, you were still gave enough for the readers to understand. Some of it is a bit unrealistic compared to Naruto, however, this is your story. Character development was poor or if you were capturing Kishi's "Naruto," than you should have shown more of their development. It was short and unorganized, however, it was still a decent and understandable read. If you would make another Chapter, I would read it, however, if its like this, than I want (Its as if I' am reading a book so no offense). Overall, Nice Story and Chapter.

damn your good

 

[Anti]

............................................................................what?.......................................................................the?....................................hell?..............................................................did?......................................I?......................................................just???.......................................................read?......................................................................................................................................... that felt alittle rushed

L.....M......A......O

 

[New Era]

It had less detail, however, you were still gave enough for the readers to understand. Some of it is a bit unrealistic compared to Naruto, however, this is your story. Character development was poor or if you were capturing Kishi's "Naruto," than you should have shown more of their development. It was short and unorganized, however, it was still a decent and understandable read. If you would make another Chapter, I would read it, however, if its like this, than I want (Its as if I' am reading a book so no offense). Overall, Nice Story and Chapter.

thanks