[Discussion] If I wanted a song recorded...

[NaruAwesome]

okay, if i wrote a song, which i did. and if i wanted to send it to people to see if they like it, people like agencies or song producer how should i do it.

if you guys know people or want to help that'll be nice

here's the song

Spoiler

All I Can See

sing it calmly like plain white t's rhytm of love song

(regular beat to song, comma means breaks)
ta dah, dah, dah, ta da, da da da
ta dah, dah,dah, ta da,da da da
ta da, da da
ta da, da da
ta da, da da
ta da, da da


You know that you're what I want
and you know I'm not trying to front
cause God wants you
to be with me
to show you the world
that we could see.. yeah

Girl, I know that times have been tough
But if we hold on we can go far
cause God told me
that we're meant to be
and that true love is
what we both need

(beat to only this part of song, the “cause girl” to the “heart felt”)
ta da, ta da, ta da,ta da, da da da
(drums- da da dum dum)
ta da, ta da, ta da,ta da, da da da
(drums- da da dum dum)
ta da, ta da, ta da,ta da, da da da
(drums- da da dum dum)
ta da, ta da, ta da,ta da, da da da!!
(drums- da da dum dat!!)

cause girl, we really coulda had been something else
I mean you is what make my- heart- melt
I'll open up to show you my- true-self
Baby whe you left this is what my heart felt!!(gets louder)

Chorus
What's sunshine without the rain
I need something to hide my pain
cause every day
when you're with him
this is what
my heart sing

I'm crying out to you but no return
maybe I should just do usher and let it burn
cause this is all
that I can see
what we were we whatwe use to be,yeah
what we use to be
that's all I can see
what we use to be-eeee

I still don't know what I'm looking for
a way out whn I know theres is no door
I need to find
that one soul
but I know she's the girl
to comfort me

But she was just so divine (mood lightening up, beat rises)
had every curve to the perfect design
but when our lovewas true
she found someone new
and now what am
suppose to do,ooo! (beats gets louder)

cause girl, we really coulda had been something else
I mean you is what make my- heart- melt
I'll open up to show you my- true-self
Baby whe you left this is what my heart felt!!(gets louder)


Chorus
What's sunshine without the rain
I need something to hide my pain
cause every day
when you're with him
this is what
my heart sing

I'm crying out to you but no return
maybe I should just do usher and let it burn
cause this is all
that I can see
what we were we whatwe use to be,yeah
what we use to be
that's all I can see
what we use to be-eeee


(regular voice but groove to the beat)

If you were a song
I'll play u until my ipod's dead
If u were air
I'll hold u in untilmy face turned red
If you were my guitar
I'll tuneu until the perfect pitch
If you were my girl
you wouldn't have to worry 'bout who you're with. Hoo!!


(this part of the song has it's own beat)
ta da, ta da ta, ta da ta, ta ta ta( it repeat for next 8 lines)


What's sunshine without the rain
I need something to hide my pain
cause every day
when you're with him
this is what
my heart sing

I'm crying out to you but no return
maybe I should just do usher and let it burn
cause this is all
that u can see
what we were we what
we use to be,yeah
what we use to be
that's all u can see
what we use to be,yeah

 

[besteawuz]

theres a lot better people then you dont even try lol....seriously

 

[mintoandkushina]

theres a lot better people then you dont even try lol....seriously

I understand you may be trying to help...though he asked for how to accomplish this task, not whether he should do it or not. But you never know, you haven't even heard his voice!! A bit impetuous IMO.


OP: I just wanted to respond to that guy...but if you ever do record this song, VM/PM me a link!

:ice:

 

[Shuuya]

I actually think the song is quite good though Im not sure how you can get your song out to the world. Maybe just post it up on different sites

 

[NaruAwesome]

much love and thanks to everyone beside the first poster

 

[Saru Sennin]

Hi there! I actually just released my first album with my band and it is doing decently. If you have recording software and equipment needed for vocals and any instruments then I'd recommend making a scratch track and then going to a studio and renting some studio time if you truly want to record the song. Studio time is pricey however. I recommend for a first song and recording that you set up a microphone and just run straight through the song to have a rough recording. Studio recording is a long and arduous process. I wish you luck in your musical endeavors!

 

[kakashi owns all]

just a tip based on how much air lungs have

Spoiler

All I Can See

sing it calmly like plain white t's rhytm of love song

(regular beat to song, comma means breaks)
ta dah, dah, dah, ta da, da da da
ta dah, dah,dah, ta da,da da da
ta da, da da
ta da, da da
ta da, da da
ta da, da da


You know that you're what I want
and you know I'm not trying to front
cause God wants you
to be with me
to show you the world
that we could see.. yeah ( add about 5 sec of a solo of some short)

Girl, I know that times have been tough
But if we hold on we can go far
cause God told me
that we're meant to be
and that true love is
what we both need

(beat to only this part of song, the “cause girl” to the “heart felt”)
ta da, ta da, ta da,ta da, da da da
(drums- da da dum dum)
ta da, ta da, ta da,ta da, da da da
(drums- da da dum dum)
( add a one liner hear like thats my baby to brake off the music)
ta da, ta da, ta da,ta da, da da da
(drums- da da dum dum)
ta da, ta da, ta da,ta da, da da da!!
(drums- da da dum dat!!)

cause girl, we really coulda had been something else
I mean you is what make my- heart- melt
I'll open up to show you my- true-self
Baby whe you left this is what my heart felt!!(gets louder)

Chorus
What's sunshine without the rain
I need something to hide my pain
cause every day
when you're with him
this is what
my heart sing

I'm crying out to you but no return
maybe I should just do usher and let it burn
cause this is all
that I can see
what we were we whatwe use to be,yeah
what we use to be
that's all I can see
what we use to be-eeee

I still don't know what I'm looking for
a way out whn I know theres is no door
I need to find
that one soul
but I know she's the girl
to comfort me

But she was just so divine add extra tone to ending (mood lightening up, beat rises)
had every curve to the perfect design
but when our love was true
she found someone new
and now what am
suppose to do,ooo! (beats gets louder)

cause girl, we really coulda had been something else
I mean you is what make my- heart- melt
I'll open up to show you my- true-self
Baby whe you left this is what my heart felt!!(gets louder)


Chorus
What's sunshine without the rain
I need something to hide my pain
cause every day
when you're with him
this is what
my heart sing

I'm crying out to you but no return
maybe I should just do usher and let it burn
cause this is all
that I can see
what we were we whatwe use to be,yeah
what we use to be
that's all I can see
what we use to be-eeee


(regular voice but groove to the beat)

If you were a song
I'll play u until my ipod's dead
If u were air
I'll hold u in untilmy face turned red
If you were my guitar
I'll tuneu until the perfect pitch
If you were my girl
you wouldn't have to worry 'bout who you're with. Hoo!!


(this part of the song has it's own beat)
ta da, ta da ta, ta da ta, ta ta ta( it repeat for next 8 lines)


What's sunshine without the rain
I need something to hide my pain
cause every day
when you're with him
this is what
my heart sing

I'm crying out to you but no return
maybe I should just do usher and let it burn
cause this is all
that u can see
what we were we what
we use to be,yeah
what we use to be
that's all u can see
what we use to be,yeah

also i i think this song is top class and has a similar tone to what you may want

 

[Saru Sennin]

Also, after looking at your lyrics you might want to work on your iambic pantemeter, and your over all rhythm. I see some possible conflicts with syllables and some easily fixed grammar issues. Otherwise you portray a great story and i could see it being a beautiful song.

 

[ShishaMastah420]

Record it ,from your Phone upload to Computer or Record on Computer.

Once you have it on your Computer upload to Youtube.

Share link.

GoodLuck!

 

[ZeeshanAsNaruto]

much love and thanks to everyone beside the first poster

Lol. abt the 1st poster anyways do u sing 2 , i really liked the lyrics i was just wondering whaat type of rhythem or tone have u given 2 the song can u name the key notes of the 1st 4 lines that wud make it more clear for people 2 understand as there r not many musicians or singers on narutobase. so i think u shud upload ur voice recordin' 2 i wud be glad if u upload 1 nd plzz let me know when u upload it jzz msg me the link via' VM i wud appreciate ur talent btw m a singer too but not any lyricist xd