Power of Holy Light

[Skyer]

My first Attempt at some Poetry, I will try improve in the Future!​

The Power of the Temple has Shaken
The Hero has just Awakened

Its time for him to rise against the Darkness
By the Power of the Divine
He shall Shine

By bringing Courage
He shall bring whats Right
By burning everything in Sight
With the Power of Holy Light! ​

 

[Kirikoe]

nice pretty good

 

[Hidden in the leaves]

Not bad, but to much rhyming.

 

[SAGE OF ALL ELEMENTS]

Not too bad for a first attempt

 

[Tsuki]

That was OMOSHIREEE

 

[Skyer]

Not bad, but to much rhyming.

Yeah I thought that at the end was abit much, I'll try better next time ​

 

[SmoothBlitz]

nicely bud, keep'm coming

 

[-S-]

This reminds me of Zelda xd

good work! ^_^

 

[Uzumaki Vaan]

Nice job bro keep up the good work!

 

[Skyer]

Nice job bro keep up the good work!

Thanks alot

 

[Skyer]

This reminds me of Zelda xd

good work! ^_^

Thanks, and I love Zelda xd

 

[Styles]

not bad and your first time doing it +rep

 

[Sabuto Hayashi]

That's good!
I can't wait to see more.

 

[Skyer]

not bad and your first time doing it +rep

Thanks for the Rep, heres some in return! ​

 

[Skyer]

That's good!
I can't wait to see more.

Haha thats good news ​

 

[Styles]

Thanks for the Rep, heres some in return! ​

hm well thanks my friend

 

[sasukexx13]

Nice work

 

[Skyer]

Nice work

Thanks

 

[naruto s06p beastmode]

awesome bro

 

[Skyer]

awesome bro

Thanks man