Bonds of Family - Art (Wolves)

[ll FREESTYLE ll]

A small drawing of wolves. It took me about two classes in Art to finish it

That's aprox. 2 hours and 5 mins ! xd

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Any feedback ?

...(BE BRUTAL!) xd

 

[Scooby Doo]

It was worth the 2 hours +rep

 

[HiddenSound]

A small drawing of wolves. It took me about two classes in Art to finish it

That's aprox. 2 hours and 5 mins ! xd

Spoiler

You must be registered for see images

Any feedback ?

...(BE BRUTAL!) xd

It fu*kin sucks




It's actually very good. nice job

 

[ll FREESTYLE ll]

It was worth the 2 hours +rep

Thanks, heaps ! ^^

It fu*kin sucks




It's actually very good. nice job

Brutal comments !? xd

Thanks bro ! ^^

 

[RoguePatriot]

omg that is amazingly sexy

 

[ll FREESTYLE ll]

omg that is amazingly sexy

You mean it ? :T_T:

Gee, thanks... I guess.. ^^

How do I fix the landscape problem ?

 

[OhReary]

The wolf above definitely looks like one, as for the one below, it reminds me more
of a coyote.
Still a great drawing though.

 

[ll FREESTYLE ll]

The wolf above definitely looks like one, as for the one below, it reminds me more
of a coyote.
Still a great drawing though.

Thanks for the feedback ! ^^

Do you think its the snout that makes it look like a coyote ? Is it too long ?

:shrug:

 

[RoguePatriot]

You mean it ? :T_T:

Gee, thanks... I guess.. ^^

How do I fix the landscape problem ?

yea man its really good
i love wolves that's why i love it so much xd
and idk bout landscape problem lol :shrug:

 

[OhReary]

Thanks for the feedback ! ^^

Do you think its the snout that makes it look like a coyote ? Is it too long ?

:shrug:

You have a good eye
Yes the snout

 

[ll FREESTYLE ll]

You have a good eye
Yes the snout

Thanks ! ^^

I aim to please xd


Although I still haven't fixed the landscape/portrait problem ...

 

[saaaaaadpanda]

A brutal review:
1. The Sclera on the eyes are to big. You're anthropomorphizing them.
2. The wolf in back's chin is resting on the wolf in front's face in such a way that the front wolf's face looks distorted.
3. The front wolf's snout is too pointed
4. The front wolf appears to have only one ear
5. You need to practice your shading rather than going with such heavy outlining.

Overall, it's not bad, but you asked for brutal, so brutal you got.

 

[ll FREESTYLE ll]

A brutal review:
1. The Sclera on the eyes are to big. You're anthropomorphizing them.
2. The wolf in back's chin is resting on the wolf in front's face in such a way that the front wolf's face looks distorted.
3. The front wolf's snout is too pointed
4. The front wolf appears to have only one ear
5. You need to practice your shading rather than going with such heavy outlining.

Overall, it's not bad, but you asked for brutal, so brutal you got.

tbh I had to look up some of these words - anthropomorphizing (That's one hell of a word ! )

Thanks for the feedback ! ^^

Notes taken... xd

 

[saaaaaadpanda]

tbh I had to look up some of these words - anthropomorphizing (That's one hell of a word ! )

Thanks for the feedback ! ^^

Notes taken... xd

That's ok, I had to look up "tbh". I've got a decent grasp of English, but internet abbreviations are beyond me.

 

[+Kyon+]

Not bad,keep it up.

 

[ll FREESTYLE ll]

Not bad,keep it up.

Ty...! ^^

 

[SashaUchiha]

The top one looks like Korra's Polar Bear Dog!

Good work mate!!! I liked it!

 

[Supermacaquecool]

They look like bears to me.

 

[Legendary Broly]

I like the wolves actually some of saaadpanda's coments stand, but really they arent that noticeable until he pointed it out, like the one ear thing doesnt seem that bad or out of place as we are viewing it from the side so it is a slight exception if you ask me, maybe draw in a little bit of the other ear ? and also i would shade aswell/more to give the drawing more life about it, make it more attractive e.g but other then that its a good drawing well worth 2 hours

 

[ll FREESTYLE ll]

I like the wolves actually some of saaadpanda's coments stand, but really they arent that noticeable until he pointed it out, like the one ear thing doesnt seem that bad or out of place as we are viewing it from the side so it is a slight exception if you ask me, maybe draw in a little bit of the other ear ? and also i would shade aswell/more to give the drawing more life about it, make it more attractive e.g but other then that its a good drawing well worth 2 hours

Thanks man ! I would +rep you again if I could

:worshippy: