I Finish Lightning with Sharingandork O_O

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Ok.

I begin to gather my chakra throughout my whole body. Then I begin to channel y chakra and send it to my palms, while my chakra is gathering in my palms lightning sparks begin to form and crackle. Then lightning forms. I then slam my hands on the ground and send electrical energy through the ground directing them at 3 nearby rocks which once it reaches them rips the apart and pulvarizes the rocks.


That good enough Sempai?
 

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That was good, keep it up. Now, for each jutsu, i want you to give me a pro (or combo) and a con (counter), alright?
(Raiton: Hiraishin) – Lightning Release: Flying Thunder God
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user raises their hands to the air to draw in lightning chakra from the sky and then shoot the lightning energy at the enemy target.
  • Grab my clone *Makes a clone* with your non-dominate hand (if your right handed, your left hand)
  • Raise your free hand to the sky
  • Focus your Raiton chakra into your skyward fingertips until sparks fly
  • Channel your chakra through your body to your other hand, shocking my clone
 

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Allright!

As you make your clone and give me the instructions I grab your clone with my left hand. I then proceed to raise my right hand to the sky while focusing chakra in my finger tips and gathering lightning energy from the sky After a few moments sparks begin to form and fly. Then I channel my chakra to my body and my left hand shocking Sharingdork's clone and then it disperses.

Combo- Well It can be used in conjuction with a water jutsu to increase power and deadliness.

Counter- A counter for this jutsu (in the way that I just performed it) could be the lightning strike armor. With that you surrond yourself with lightning energy and shock the opponent while also lessen the damage from this jutsu. (I think not sure).
 

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Good job. I don't think it would lessen the damage, but it would stop the user before the jutsu was used.
(Raiton: Horyu Raika no Jutsu) – Lightning Release: Discharge Lightning Calamity Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will create a field of water under the opponent before shocking them with a lightning attack.
  • Focus suiton chakra under my clone *makes a clone*
  • Use your chakra to raise some water under his feet
  • Focus raiton chakra through the water, shocking my clone
 

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Ok..

I begin by focusing my water chakra underneath Sempai's clone creating a field of water under him. I then proceed to raise the water under his feet and gather my lightning chakra I then send the lightning chakra and channel it through the water shocking Sharingdorks clone until it disperses.

Combo- I think that if you use this in combination with Lightning Pillar is a good way to really give a shock to your opponent. (not sure)

Counter-If I can make the water forming underneath me disappear he wouldn't be able to shock me I would use a fire technique to evaporate the water.
 

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Alright, good job with that.
(Raiton: Torunedo Raitoningu) - Lightning Release: Tornado Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user generates lightning-based chakra in his/her palms that they can whip around in order to attack their opponent.
  • Focus lightning chakra into your palm
  • Concentrate the chakra into a thick "string" of lightning
  • Use the "string" like a whip (it won't move indepentantly; you just created a lightning meelee weapon)
  • Use your chakra to extend the whip on one movement, making it go out to mid-range
 

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I begin to concentrate my chakra throughout my body. Then I use my lightning affinity and unite it with my chakra and begin to channel it to my palms. Then after I've channeled my chakra I begin to create a think string of lightning I then use the string like a whip and extend it to mid-range hitting a tree with the lightning whip.

Combo: I can use the whip to grab my opponent and finish him off with a different attack

Counter: The user can just use an earth technique and cover himself in earth to avoid any damage.
 

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let's think about this... how will covering yourself with earth defend against lightning? It may work with wind, but not earth (lightning's strong against earth).
Raiton: Raijū Hashiri no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Beast Running Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user channels his lighting chakra to his dominant hand and then radiates it out making it a hound shaped stream of lighting which stays attached to the users hand through a bolt of lighting.
  • Focus lightning chakra into your hand
  • Force your chakra outwards, creating a string of lightning connected to your hand
  • Use shape manipulation on the end of the lightning string, creating a hound of lightning
  • Manipulate the hound (make it run, jump, bite, etc.)
 

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O_O sorry I had my wires confused there for a moment.

I begin to concentrate and gather my chakra through my body. I then begin to channel my chakra to my hands and I create a string of lightning which connects to my hand. I then follow by using shape manipulation to turn my lightning into a hound I then send my hound to attack a nearby tree. As my hound is traveling I make him jump and bite the tree ripping a branch from it.

Combo: If you use it alongside a water technique the power will devastating

Counter: The user can just use a C ranked wind or higher move to cancel the jutsu.
 

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Good job.
(Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.
  • Focus raiton chakra in your mouth
  • Focus chakra at the back of the raiton chakra mass to propel it forwards in a streak of lightning
  • As the lightning nears me, make it split into two different spears to go around me
 

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I begin to concentrate on my lightning chakra while gather large amounts of chakra. I then proceed to channel that chakra to my mouth Then I focus chakra at the back of my lightning chakra and release it makeing it go foward at great speed and strength in a shape of a spear that heads towards SharingDork sempai. As the lightning spear is near Sharingdork I make split and go around sempai.

Combo: I would say that this jutsu is a good finishing move. I would first make use of a distraction and then move on to use this to finish my opponent

Counter: I wind technique could cancel out this jutsu.
 

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Nice, moving one.
Alright, you got a sword? I want you to try and cut through this... *Makes an earth pillar.* Didn't work, did it?
(Chō Biburāto Raitontō) - Super Vibrating Lightning Release Sword
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (+15 to kenjutsu and standard attacks)
Description: The user channels their lightning chakra into a blade, increasing its vibrating frequency and giving it more cutting power than standard wind techniques.
  • Focus raiton chakra through the blade of your sword
  • Use your chakra to vibrate the material quickly, giving it more cutting power
  • Slice through the pillar
For the next jutsu, do you know Shadow Clone?
 

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Yeaa I do.

*Takes out my katana*
and no I don't know shadow clone :(

I focus on my lightning chakra and begin to channel it to my blade after I've done that I quickly use the channeled chakra to increase the cutting power by increasing the vibration of the material I then after feeling its done I slice through the pillar of rock slicing through it like a slice of butter.

O_O cool. This technique is for Kerrah and Tosh xd
 
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