[Approved] Sytren The Samurai

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Name: Sytren Caliga
Nickname: Sye
Gender: Male
Age: 23
Clan: N/A

Looks: Sytren's hair is a long and hangs down to his chin. It seems to be grey colored at first glance but with a closer one it's more of a silver look. His eyes are a deep green color that seem to lack emotion. His skin is a soft pale complextion.

His torso is rather athletic giving way to very toned muscles that lead people to believe that he seems to workout alot. His arms give about a 32in reach and are well toned not overly muscular.

His legs seem to have been built for running and jumping at fast speeds given their toned look. His long legs added to his torso brings his height to about 6 feet tall.

Sytren is always wearing a black cloak with a grey interior wrapped around thick black leather chest piece. He has thick leather pauldrons that match the design and color of his chest piece. He also wears comfortable black leather gloves that seem to be for protecting his hands with the use of his swords.

His leggings are a matching set to his chest piec and lead down to his boots that seem to have bits of metal on the outside for further protection but underneath that is more black leather.

Personality: Sytren is very hard to get a read on due to nearly always remaining quiet. He does seem to be protective to those that help or depend on him. He has a bad habit of staring at people with an emotionless expression. If a person were to see him smile that it would be a rare sight indeed.

Village Info

Village of Birth:Born in the Land of Whirlpools, Village unknown
Village of Allaince: Land of Iron

Rank/Chakra Info

Ninja Rank: Chunin/samurai
Specialty: Kenjutsu (Needs Training)
Elements: /
Ninjutsu None as being a Samurai can't use hand seals for Ninjutsu.

Background Info:

Sytren was born in the Land of Whirlpools around other ninja. Though just a child when the destruction came to the island. He was only three years old when he washed ashore of the Land of Fire. Once found he was sent to an orphanage. He never spoke about what he saw or said much at all. Only one thing was ever said by him and that was nis name Sytren. He was picked on by the other kids in the orphanage calling him stupid and slow due to him just being quiet. Once he was seven he ran away from the orphanage and eventually found himself in Konoha.

He thought long and hard about joining the village and becoming a ninja. He even practiced with the ninja tools and became very good though he favored the sword. But when it came to ninjutsu he couldn't seem to grasp it. He understood the mechanics but for some reason he could never perform the hand seals for the jutsu's to work. Even when kids younger than him were doing it with ease. Being ashamed and not wanting to be made fun of he once again ran away. He traveled from town to town using the stealthy tricks he learned to steal food. He even met a fellow homeless kid that helped him steal food. His name was Ryoma.

Several years passed by and with the little bit of training Sytren had he was a much better thief and fighter than Ryoma, but Ryoma was like a brother to him. The first person that didn't make fun of him or call him names. He protected Ryoma and followed his plans to the letter. When he was fourteen Ryoma and him traveled to the land of Iron. They thought it'd be easy with Sytren's ninja like stealth skills to steal from there...but they were sorely mistaken.

One day Ryoma was stealing something while Sytren was acting as distraction. Ryoma didn't get far until he was caught by a group of swordsman. They didn't hesitate to hold the boy down and cut his hands off at the wrist. Sytren fell into a deep rage and taking all the anger he had accumulated through his life he attacked the men. He using his hand made shurikens to kill the first and then picked up the man's sword. The other men were angry that this kid had killed one of their friends and now dared to hold a sword at them. As they advanced on him Ryoma tried to stop them and protect Sytren...only to be killed by one of the men.

Sytren watched in horror as his only friend died in front of him trying to protect him. He charged forward attacking the second swordsman leaving the one who kill Ryoma last. After getting hurt and deeply cut himself he finally killed the man. He was in no condition to fight any longer but he willed himself to keep moving. Just then one of the Samurai stepped in and protected Sytren killing the last swordsman. He looked down at Sytren who only cried at Ryoma's body.

The samurai took Sytren into his home and while he wondered about the young boy's past he never asked. Weeks Sytren cried until he finally stopped and he seemed to not care about anything after that. The Samurai eventually started to teach Sytren how to use a sword effectively and even made him his first katana and taught him the process to make his own.

Sytren stayed with the Samurai speaking only when needed to but never showing anger or pain nor did he show happiness or joy. Several more years passed by and Sytren finally told the samurai that he needed to leave. He thanked him for taking care of him and teaching him the way of the sword. For the firs time in six years the samurai saw the boy now a man smile.

Sytren left the Land of Iron but not before crafting himself his black leather armor that he always wore. Afterwards he bought himself a black hooded cloak to go over the armor. Using the skills the Samurai taught him he fashioned himself his own set of kunai, shurikens, and wind mill shurikens. Using the skills that he learned in Konoha he made his exploding kunai's as well. He had places and pouches for them hidden under his cloak. But the one thing he did not hide was the katana his master had given him. He wore it proudly sheathed on his hip. He also made his own katana and sheath that he carried with him instead of attaching to his body. The katana was nothing special but the sheath was made of steel nearly as strong as the sword it kept. Lastly he tooke one of the mask that the helmets that he crafted into a smaller version for a simple mask to help with poisons.

Sytren, with his tools and weapons in hand, ventured out into the world he didn't know where he was going but everywhere he went in kept one thing in mind. He wouldn't allow someone that was defenseless like this friend Ryoma to die in front of him again.

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Battles​

Won: A couple
Lost: A few​

~Approved~ removed element, this is a samurai bio, they can't use elements
 
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1. Village birth =Land of Iron like the other guy said.

2. you should add your first element for training. even a samurai can gets trained in the basic 5.

well Good luck.
Ok changed the element but i dont wanna say he's born there...samurai file says he doesn't have to be born there but if he has to stay in the land instead of just wondering around every where then i'll change that in this background. But I dont want him to be from there originally.
 

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Yea they permenantly stay there. And it doesnt matter where ur from u can battle anyone
You're wrong.

I've been a samurai for a little while, and I know for a fact that a samurai does not have to permanently stay in the land of iron. You just have to go there, and live there some period of time, and that's it. BlueDevil's information is not accurate,I am letting you know as a member who has been here longer than he, that if you don't want to , your character doesn't have to stay there.

If you even need proof, here's my old biography; Read it and you'll see that I went there, and left.

 

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You're wrong.

I've been a samurai for a little while, and I know for a fact that a samurai does not have to permanently stay in the land of iron. You just have to go there, and live there some period of time, and that's it. BlueDevil's information is not accurate,I am letting you know as a member who has been here longer than he, that if you don't want to , your character doesn't have to stay there.

If you even need proof, here's my old biography; Read it and you'll see that I went there, and left.

Awesome thanks for the info that makes me much happier to know that i might not have to change my bio after all lol. I just gotta find someone who teaches kenjutsu and taijutsu :p
 

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1. Village birth =Land of Iron like the other guy said.

2. you should add your first element for training. even a samurai can gets trained in the basic 5.

well Good luck.
What are you talking about? A samurai can't use Ninjutsu. What are the basic 5, other than Ninjutsu? Read and learn the rules before you instruct people.



~A Samurai biography may not be permitted to use ninjutsu or genjutsu techniques as they cannot use hand seals, they may only use Kenjutsu and Taijutsu.
 

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What are you talking about? A samurai can't use Ninjutsu. What are the basic 5, other than Ninjutsu? Read and learn the rules before you instruct people.



sorry sir i wasn't aware about it.... won't repeat such recklessness again.
 

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sorry sir i wasn't aware about it.... won't repeat such recklessness again.
Good. U_U

OTT not a bad bio. If you want you can use these images I rendered for my own biography, if you want a touch of my awesomeness ofcourse. :cool:

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Good. U_U

OTT not a bad bio. If you want you can use these images I rendered for my own biography, if you want a touch of my awesomeness ofcourse. :cool:

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Lol thanks if you happen to have one of a katana with the sheath that'd be great. He uses the shield to block hence the reason it's got steel plating. And I have a custom weapon waiting to be decided on. I'm really hoping i get it cause that'd be great.
 

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Lol thanks if you happen to have one of a katana with the sheath that'd be great. He uses the shield to block hence the reason it's got steel plating. And I have a custom weapon waiting to be decided on. I'm really hoping i get it cause that'd be great.
Good luck. I'll see if I can find a sheathed katana. :)
 

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Good luck. I'll see if I can find a sheathed katana. :)
Thanks but the hard part isn't getting a bio approved...it's getting training so that i can actually use my bio...*sigh* Is it bad to hate that the trainers are full teaching students who have mastered most stuff and just learning it to have extra stuff? I really think that the sensei and sempai stuff should based on rank. Have some in charge of training only Genin, then chuunin and so on at least til your done with the S rank's. Then the more experienced sensei's and sempai's do all the other stuff. And sensei's with special trainging like sharingan can take those students in addition.

I think that'd help ALOT cause i've seen alot of people who need training and can't effectily do much without it...
 

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Thanks but the hard part isn't getting a bio approved...it's getting training so that i can actually use my bio...*sigh* Is it bad to hate that the trainers are full teaching students who have mastered most stuff and just learning it to have extra stuff? I really think that the sensei and sempai stuff should based on rank. Have some in charge of training only Genin, then chuunin and so on at least til your done with the S rank's. Then the more experienced sensei's and sempai's do all the other stuff. And sensei's with special trainging like sharingan can take those students in addition.

I think that'd help ALOT cause i've seen alot of people who need training and can't effectily do much without it...
That way it would just accumulate "unfinished" people. More and more people that haven't finished their training completely. Also, senseis don't take only people that have mastered most stuff. They usually open application threads. Of course that advantage have people who are closer to finish. I know how it's waiting as I was recently there too, but you have to wait, there's nothing you can do. Just be patient and if you see an open spot make sure to try. Don't bug people as you will create yourself an image of an annoying kid and nobody will want to train you. :)
 

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That way it would just accumulate "unfinished" people. More and more people that haven't finished their training completely. Also, senseis don't take only people that have mastered most stuff. They usually open application threads. Of course that advantage have people who are closer to finish. I know how it's waiting as I was recently there too, but you have to wait, there's nothing you can do. Just be patient and if you see an open spot make sure to try. Don't bug people as you will create yourself an image of an annoying kid and nobody will want to train you. :)
Yea I managed to get some training by Rexii with lightning but he said i need a sensei to teach ninjutsu and taijutsu. And kenjutsu looks even harder to find a teacher for. I just wish it wasn't a first come first serve thing...that it was more of a who needs it more type thing ya know? I mean it literally took one day to do my lightning training for genin...its not like i'm gonna take up a sensei's time for a month or something...i guess i'm just ranting a bit...a little tired of doing taijutsu free form rp's. Which apparantly i'm decent at cause Rexii tested me before deciding to train me. lol
 

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Yea I managed to get some training by Rexii with lightning but he said i need a sensei to teach ninjutsu and taijutsu. And kenjutsu looks even harder to find a teacher for. I just wish it wasn't a first come first serve thing...that it was more of a who needs it more type thing ya know? I mean it literally took one day to do my lightning training for genin...its not like i'm gonna take up a sensei's time for a month or something...i guess i'm just ranting a bit...a little tired of doing taijutsu free form rp's. Which apparantly i'm decent at cause Rexii tested me before deciding to train me. lol
Yeah but with each rank there are more and more jutsus and take in consideration that a Sensei has multiple students + he of course has his personal life, so it might take even more than a month. There are people that do some training for like 6 months. One reply each week, due to limited online time. There is a lack of Senseis but still not anyone can become one because it would just be a mess then. A person must prove worthy to become a Sensei. My suggestion is that you just stick around, getting your post count up and waiting for training opportunities. There's nowhere to rush anyway. You won't have anything if you have a countless number of jutsus but don't know how to use them. If you have and excessive amount of free time I suggest that you go to the Battle Tests section. There you can find very nice battles and that way you can already gather experience and work on some methods and combos for later.
 
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