The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter TWELVE

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The Amazing Adventures of Kotetsu & Izumo

Chapter 12: Return

[Review on last chapter]
Izumo sulks about his failed attempt

The pair discover they lost their map and search out someone who may be able to offer directions

They run into Kurostuchi who mistakes them for enemies and attacks to which they’re able to counter

After a brief discussion she leads them to her father’s location for answers

Kitsuchi confirms their story and the pair discusses what had occurred since arriving in his land and he orders his daughter to guide them to the border

Once they arrive at the border Kurotsuchi leaves and they embark the next territory

They begin passing through Kusagakure and enter a confrontation

Note: The following chapter is the finale and I wanted to inform my readers know therefore I am not targeted for an ambush due to releasing it without notice xd


Ao: We’re the squad sent by Mizukage-sama and you’re the ones who encountered Houzuki Ame?-

Izumo: (In thought) So that's her name-

Izumo: Yes

Kotetsu: (In thought) Wow-my love really set up well with this squadron-they look like savages..

Ao: There is no time!-Did you have any more leads as to-

Choujuurou: (In thought) Now of all times?!-

Choujuurou: Watch out!

Narrator: The introverted young male racks up enough courage and abruptly responds with an attack using his Hiramekarei as its bandages quickly begin to unwrap.

[Weapon Insight]
Name: Hiramekarei
Description: This is a double-handled sword of the Seven Ninja Swordsmen of the Mist.

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Hiramekarei Kaihou (Hiramekarei Unleashing)
Classification: Ninjutsu, Kenjutsu, Chakra Flow
Class: Supplementary
Range: Short to Mid range
Description: The user unleashes the sword Hiramekarei by emitting a large quantity of chakra on either side of the blade, from the two holes located near its tip, before shaping this chakra around it in the form of any weapon the user chooses. This results in the bandages that are typically wrapped around the sword to swiftly unravel due to the rapid discharge.

Narrator: Suddenly, a rapid fire of bullet-like objects proceed in the two parties direction. A large amount of chakra is then released from the holes near the tip of the blade and shapes into the form of a shield as Choujuurou attempts to safeguard his group.

Ao: (In thought) That’s odd-Choujuurou took charge..

Narrator: Each bullet splatted from the impact which then began to burn through his chakra shield as extensive steam exhaled from the shield-like form.

Choujuurou: (In thought) This jutsu seems like-

Ao: Good job Choujuurou-I’ll take it from here!-Byakugan!

Narrator: Two fingers are held up close to his face as he activates Byakugan. Veins begin protruding around his eye patch and he quickly and accurately locates the foe who was hidden behind a building about less than half a mile away.

Ao: (In thought) So you were this close all along!-

Ao: (Shouting) Oniitomakiei no Sakebi!

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Oniitomakiei Sakebi (Manta ray Scream)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Class: Offensive
Range: Long-range
Hand seals: Tiger
Description: The user expels chakra from the fingertips of the hand as it changes into the form of a large manta ray with many existing explosive tags within its body. It can then flaps its triangular wings for flight and increased speed as it hastily travels in the direction of the intended target(s). Upon impact, if the user wishes; the ray will instantly explode on contact.

Narrator: Ao then raises his arm mid way as he releases chakra through the fingertips and an enormous manta ray is quickly formed. It begins to flap its wings and swiftly takes flight towards the figure’s direction with an accelerated rate.

Izumo: (In thought) This looks like-

Figure: (In thought) No time-I’ll have to go defensive..

Izumo: (Shouting) Stop attacking!

Ao: Why!

Izumo: Because its someone we know!

Narrator: Ao then quickly commands the ray to cease in its course through his will.

Ao: Why would an acquaintance be attacking?

Izumo: I’m not sure but I want to find out before something irreversible occurs-

Izumo: (Shouting) Kurotsuchi!!!

Kurotsuchi: (In thought) Shit..

Narrator: The boisterous kunoichi previously attacked the group with Youton: Maguma Kikanjuu and had no choice but to defend herself with Tsuchi Maruyane.

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Youton: Maguma Kikanjuu (Lava Release: Magma Machine Gun)
Classification: Kekkei Genkai, Ninjutsu
Type:
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Class: Offensive
Range: All ranges
Hand Seal: Dog
Description: The user launches continuous small magma bullet-like projectiles from their mouth through their hand.

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Doton: Tsuchi Maruyane (Earth Release: Earth Dome)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type:
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Class: Defensive
Range: Short-range
Description: The user creates a dome constructed from the earth that can protect them from external attacks.

Narrator: At her will, the Earth barricade began to retract revealing an opening. She then quickly leaped onto the building aside her and made her way towards the parties.

Izumo: Why would you attack us?!

Kurotsuchi: ..I thought they were attacking you!

Kotetsu: (In thought) What got into her..

Izumo: They were only questioning us..

Narrator: She then crossed her arms sharply turned her head with an inflated cheek. Ao clutched his fist as the ray then began to quickly dissipate.

Ao: Your interruption could cost us Tsuchi woman!-I’ll ask again-did you have any more leads as to-

Kurotsuchi: Hmm...

Izumo: No!

Kotetsu: (In thought) Izumo...

Ao: If anything occurs to you-

Izumo: I understand!

Choujuurou: (In thought) He seems devastated-huh...like I’ve felt from time to time

Kurotsuchi: (In thought) Izumo’s persona seems to have changed dramatically..

Ao: Choujuurou-squad lets-

Izumo: We may have injured her!

Ao: I see-lets move out!

Narrator: As they went their separate ways; Izumo remained silent with a stern expression.

Kurostuchi: Hmm...oto-sama is angered and I was bored so I decided to follow you guys...I suppose I apologize for interfering with their investigation-I thought you two were being attacked..and...I enjoy fighting so I-

Izumo: Understood..

Kurotsuchi: (In thought) Under these circumstances I am unable to fulfill my purpose..not yet-

Kurotsuchi: I’ve caused enough trouble so we’ll part ways here-continue up this path north and you should eventually reach the border..

Izumo: Thank you..

Kurotsuchi: *Blush* ..Your welcome!

Kurotsuchi: (In thought) Even though he’s acting with courtesy-I can tell its a facade and that it has do with that case for some reason..

Narrator: Her rosy cheeks inflated as she sharply turned around facing the direction that led to her land and began to pace through the streets with a sorrowed expression mainly due to suppressing what she intended to confess to Izumo.

Kotetsu: That had to be the oddest occurrence ever..

Narrator: He then glanced over at his partner’s visage and murmured a few words.

Kotetsu: Are you okay?-

Izumo: I don’t want to talk about it!-

Kotetsu: I-

Izumo: Can you juts drop it!-

Kotetsu: Kotetsu: No!

Narrator: Izumo sharply starred at Kotetsu as if to pierce through him.

Kotetsu: -Because when we arrive to Konoha you would want to be you calm usual self in front of the Hokage..

Izumo: *Great sigh* ...That’s just it-I fail-

Kotetsu: It wasn’t our duty in the first place-it just happened and I think we did pretty good for that level of nukenin and Tsuande will agree..

Izumo: …

Narrator: Lowering his head slightly and closing his eyes, Izumo then began to regain his composure.

Izumo: Thank you..

Kotetsu: Your welcome..

Narrator: The pair then continued through the village, out the border and onto Hi no Kuni. Having stepped foot onto their land, they continued pacing through the wetlands.

Izumo: Wait!-Do you see that?

Kotetsu: I think so..

Izumo: Most likely intruders..

Kotetsu: Lets see!

Narrator: What is viewed in the far distance are several figures.

Figure 1: Check that out!

Figure 2: Invaders!

Figure 3: Maybe we should investigate first?

Figure 1: And give them the upper hand?

Figure 2: I suppose you’re right this time..

Figure 1: Then lets not give them the chance to get any nearer!-

Figure 2: This means we can only use our long range type techniques!

Figure 3: (In thought) Oh shit!

Kotetsu: They seem to be shrouded-

Izumo: All the more reason to act carefully..

Narrator: The three cloaked figures leaped into the air and released a technique as the Konoha pair began to quickly back away.

Figure 1: (Shouting) Fuuton: Tsubame no Mure!

Figure 2: (Shouting) Suiton: Hanabira Shizuku no Jutsu!

Figure 3: (Shouting) Raiton: Denki Harigane no Jutsu!

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Fuuton: Tsubame no Mure (Wind Release: Flock of Swallow)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type:
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Class: Offensive
Range: Short to Long range
Hand seals: Bird → Dog → Tiger
Description: Chakra infused wind is released and changes into the form of numerous swallows. The swallows spread out in different directions to gain more ground and all eventually head for the direction of the target(s). The user at any time may invoke each swallow to explode creating a burst of wind.

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Suiton: Kashou Shio no Jutsu (Water Release: Scald Tide Technique)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type:
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Class: Offensive
Range: Long-range
Hand seals: Ram → Hare → Tiger
Description: Water infused chakra is ejected through the mouth in the form of a current containing a boiling temperature as it quickly directed towards the intended target(s).

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Raiton: Denki Harigane no Jutsu (Lightning Release: Electric Wire Technique)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type:
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Class: Offensive
Range: All ranges
Hand seals: Hare → Rat → Horse → Boar → Ram
Description: A wire tool infused with chakra is directed towards the target as chakra becomes electricity and if the jutsu is successful, the shocks to the body will cause paralysis.

Kotetsu: (In thought) Dame it!

Izumo: (In thought) We haven't even fully recovered from our nearly drained chakra reserves..

Narrator: A tri assault is released by the three cloaked figures onto the Konoha shinobi pair.

Kotetsu: (In thought) Fast!

Izumo: (In thought) These are skilled techniques!-

Izumo: (Shouting) Fuuton: Yasei Reppuu no Jutsu!

Kotetsu: (Shouting) Doton: Koutai Puretou!

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Fuuton: Yasei Reppuu no Jutsu (Wind Release: Wild Gale Technique)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type:
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Class: Defensive, Offensive
Range: All ranges
Hand Seal: Ram → Serpent → Boar
Description: This technique creates continuous swirls of gale winds that can act as a defense or an attack. Depending on the users chakra will determine how much wind is created.

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Doton: Koutai Puretou (Earth Release: Plate Shift)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type:
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Rank: C-rank
Class: Defensive
Range: Short-range
Hand seals: Snake → Dog
Description: This technique shapes Earth into several plate-like structures which acts as a powerful defense. The user can use surrounding Earth.

Narrator: Izumo chooses to go completely defensive as gales begin to develop all around him and Kotetsu decides with defense and offense.

Izumo: (In thought) That idiot!

Narrator: A portion of the ground around Kotetsu rises and quickly forms into several plates that float in a panel-like formation. He then uses the opportunity to invoke a few more hand seals.

Izumo: Kotetsu-you’re acting too reckless!

Kotetsu: (In thought) I have this!

Narrator: As his partner suspected, the plates begin to break apart due to several sparrows bursting and some more make their way past the broken plates onto Kotetsu; causing an instant explosion at the demand of figure 1.

Izumo: (Shouting) Kotetsu!

Kotetsu: Gya!

Narrator: His body is thrown various feet away as he lands with his back exposed. An injured Kotetsu then turns his body and views more swallows on course which provokes him to use the more defensive alternative he initially rejected.

Kotetsu: *Panting* Doton: Doryuuheki!

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Doton: Doryuuheki (Earth Release: Earth Flow Wall)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type:
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Rank: B-rank
Class: Defensive
Range: Short-range
Hand seals: Tiger → Hare → Boar → Dog
Description: The user creates a solid wall of Earth as a form of defense. Chakra is either converted to Earth within the body and then spat out to form the wall or the user can manipulate pre-existing earth to form the wall. The earth then instantly rises up and takes form. The barrier itself is also coated with chakra, making its strength incomparable to that of a normal mud wall. Because of the earth's special characteristics, the wall is highly resistant against, for instance, fire and water.

Izumo: Gya!

Narrator: The gales of wind soon evaporate due to the force of the oncoming attacks and Izumo is hit.

Kotetsu: (Shouting) Izumo!

Figure 1: We got one-increase your chakra!

Figure 3: (In thought) When will this end!

Figure 2: Right!

Narrator: Due to the addition of chakra; their assault is empowered and quickly renders Kotetsu’s Earth wall useless as it too explodes. Debris and thick smoke is all that remains.

To be continued in the FINAL CHAPTER entitled "Treasure"

Note: Please don't hesitate to rate, comment and or rep as it is always welcomed ^.^

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Woot New chapter my friend^^

Kurotsuchi: I’ve caused enough trouble so we’ll part ways here-continue up this path north and you should eventually reach the border..

Izumo: Thank you..

Kurotsuchi: *Blush* ..Your welcome!

that was a good one ^^

But it seems to me , that Izumo is having a hard time with these 3 unknown Shinobis , could they be from Sound Village? Oros subordinates?.

also thanks for the release ^^ + rep.​
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Woot New chapter my friend^^

Kurotsuchi: I’ve caused enough trouble so we’ll part ways here-continue up this path north and you should eventually reach the border..

Izumo: Thank you..

Kurotsuchi: *Blush* ..Your welcome!

that was a good one ^^

But it seems to me , that Izumo is having a hard time with these 3 unknown Shinobis , could they be from Sound Village? Oros subordinates?.

also thanks for the release ^^ + rep.​
:scorps:
I like that you like the Izumo/Kurotsuchi interaction :) Well, its funny that you mention Orochimaru as my FanFic takes place before the 4th Ninja war but definitely after Orochimaru was permanently sealed away. I suppose its my fault for not providing a more accurate timeline in the prologue -_- I apologize for this.

nice chapter man..good..^^
Thank you for reading/commenting ;)

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So it really is ending and Kurotsuchi really does have a crush, hope she comes back to save their asses. +rep.
Yes it is lol Yes she does xd That is an interesting wishful thought and we'll see if it actually occurs ^.^ Thanks for reading! ;)
 
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Ah, so Ao and Chojuro make a return - great work expanding on their personality traits, as I've now come to expect from you, my friend. I can't believe it's almost over, and I honestly don't want it to be, lol. But it's always best to end on a high note, so I applaud you for setting such a great stage for the finale. Really looking forward to the last release.
 

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AWSOME as usuall i really enjoyed it :) plus rep i dont want it to end either :T_T: but i do applaued you for the good work and i am looking for to ur final chapter
 
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Hmm, I get the impression the three unknown people are Leaf shinobi too. If they are then they are automatically not good enough since, as Naruto's written test at the chuunin exam was supposed to make sure people with good reconnaissance skills were the ones to pass. Since they used long-range attacks they were surely not close enough to recognise the headbands but if they are some border patrol they can't afford to attack everybody like this.

I'm glad i called Ao's team being the one that met Izumo and Kotetsu :p

Poor Kurotsuchi :( Her returning again to help them would probably be too much so I doubt that'll happen in the next chapter.

Thanks for yet another enjoyable chaper :)
 

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wow an awsome chapter as usual there is just one problem...
I don't want it to end :T_T:
Thanks and yes I know what you mean xd I myself am sad that it is coming to an end.

Me NEITHER!!!! :T_T:
:p

Ah, so Ao and Chojuro make a return - great work expanding on their personality traits, as I've now come to expect from you, my friend. I can't believe it's almost over, and I honestly don't want it to be, lol. But it's always best to end on a high note, so I applaud you for setting such a great stage for the finale. Really looking forward to the last release.
Thank you and it's always very enjoyable tapping into other characters besides the main. Yes that time is approaching fast lol Thank you and I’m assure you there are more surprises to come even though its ending ^.^ I just hope that the finale will be a pleasing conclusion rather than a disappointing one as many films, novels, etc. unfortunately have.

AWSOME as usuall i really enjoyed it :) plus rep i dont want it to end either :T_T: but i do applaued you for the good work and i am looking for to ur final chapter
Thank you and I feel the same about the ending lol

Hmm, I get the impression the three unknown people are Leaf shinobi too. If they are then they are automatically not good enough since, as Naruto's written test at the chuunin exam was supposed to make sure people with good reconnaissance skills were the ones to pass. Since they used long-range attacks they were surely not close enough to recognise the headbands but if they are some border patrol they can't afford to attack everybody like this.

I'm glad i called Ao's team being the one that met Izumo and Kotetsu :p

Poor Kurotsuchi :( Her returning again to help them would probably be too much so I doubt that'll happen in the next chapter.

Thanks for yet another enjoyable chaper :)
I like your opinion and it was extremely insightful my friend ^.^ However, are you correct or not? :zonder: xd I'm glad that you were glad about Ao & Co. lol Yes Kurotsuchi left unhappy however she felt justified in her decision as she knew at that point in time was not proper for her unknown confession >.> Another interesting opinion this time about Kurotsuchi and thanks for reading/commenting. By the way, not to sound ruse or anything of the like but did you view the notice ate the beginning of the chapter? It announces that the following chapter will be the finale o_O


@Everyone who repped me: Thank you ;)
 

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Ah, there's no doubt in my mind you'll be able to end off this FanFiction marvellously, I'm not the least bit concerned about it, I know you'll do a great job.
 

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:eek: I dont expect it'll end soon..
well nicely done and look forward for the big finale ;)
but I thought theres more adventures ahead.
 
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I like your opinion and it was extremely insightful my friend ^.^ However, are you correct or not? :zonder: xd I'm glad that you were glad about Ao & Co. lol Yes Kurotsuchi left unhappy however she felt justified in her decision as she knew at that point in time was not proper for her unknown confession >.> Another interesting opinion this time about Kurotsuchi and thanks for reading/commenting. By the way, not to sound ruse or anything of the like but did you view the notice ate the beginning of the chapter? It announces that the following chapter will be the finale o_O
Yes, I saw the notice, I was just too lazy to mention it and others had already done so. In fact I always read your replies but rarely respond out of that same laziness xd. The next chapter being the final one is exactly why I was pondering that much on the question of Kurotsuchi :p

Regarding the fanfiction's finale I'm absolutely positive you will disappoint me like you always have (and I believe I have expressed it every single time you've done so). So, yeah, not much you can do to not disappoint me. :D (I'm kidding as usual, and here is my cliched "you can't disappoint me unless you try really darn hard" :) )
 

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Another good chapter of yours!

By the way: "Your interruption could cost us Tsuchi woman!" XD
Thank you and I really like when my readers like quotes out of the FanFic ^.^

Yes, I saw the notice, I was just too lazy to mention it and others had already done so. In fact I always read your replies but rarely respond out of that same laziness xd. The next chapter being the final one is exactly why I was pondering that much on the question of Kurotsuchi :p

Regarding the fanfiction's finale I'm absolutely positive you will disappoint me like you always have (and I believe I have expressed it every single time you've done so). So, yeah, not much you can do to not disappoint me. :D (I'm kidding as usual, and here is my cliched "you can't disappoint me unless you try really darn hard" :) )
I see...I'll keep that in mind next time I equip a notice lol You are hilarious my friend-you know how to make a well acted out performance xd Thank you for that and for willing yourself through your laziness which I know firsthand is difficult to overcome and read/reply to my posts/FanFics ;)
 

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