[ARCHIVE] Custom Fighting Styles Submission

[Jokey]

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Wind Dragon Slayer Arts​

Type; Nin-tai.​

Background; When The Dragons moved freely on Earth, before Hellsbadass signed a contract with them, they decided to teach their to only a few, and there where only Five of those legendary Dragons, a Wind one, Lightning one, Fire one, Water one, and Earth one, the Wind one got interested in teaching it to a man called Makarov, They taught him a variety of techniques that relied on having the power of the Dragon to work. A Fighting Style which allows the user to incorporate the element of Wind into their body, gaining exclusive characteristics which are commonly associated with the Great Wind Dragon. Users are capable of producing Wind from their body and of manipulating it to attack their enemy's. This style's techniques seem to possess an incredibly high power, being particularly destructive, and the power of the wind of which they’re composed of seems capable of momentarily blowing away foes, making it easier for the user to take them out while they are unbalanced. Makarov trained all his life with the Great Wind Dragon perfecting this to resemble them in the greatest possible way. His proficiency with Wind was inhumane at that point. He was able to use techniques that would easily kill a human with destructive powers. After a while all his techniques resembled those of a Dragon. This was considered a form of the Great Dragon Fighting Techniques called Dragon Slayer Style. Where a user would adopt an Element and a Dragon would teach him to the point where they gained near immunity to that element. This is what Makarov learned from his Dragon, after Makarov getting trained in the Dragon arts.​

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style; Wind Dragon Slayer Arts is a lost style which only few remember. The working of this Art is that the Wind Dragon Slayer is capable of absorbing Wind Techniques of a really low amount of wind and use it to boost his techniques temporarily. He can also consume lightning to send it back at his opponent with a stronger amount of force by adding in his own chakra. (CJ will get created) They however, cannot eat wind produced from their own body to enhance their attacks. And each wind has a different taste depending on its rank and quality.

Not only that but the Dragon Slayer can also manipulate Wind around his body fluently and easily with simple hand movements. The user can also manipulate the Wind to change the amount of power delivered to make them less deadly or even more deadly (CJs to be created)

The Taijutsu working in this lies in Wind, the user will coat different limbs in Wind to enhance their movement speed and when they hit the opponent his opponent will get pushed backwards easily due to the destructive power delivered. When doing this the user spends a considerable amount of chakra to keep it going therefore usually once attacking with the Taijutsu working they are exhausted. (CJ to be created)

Those with Mastery over this style gain properties of a Dragon, a far greater sense of smell. Greater strength due to incredible training. Greater speed since it is associated with Wind Training. In return the user some times loses it to a killing sensation and begins killing friend or foe when they overuse their techniques or absorb too much Wind.​

Additional effects and Restrictions; ​

The user has great control over Wind in Close Combat
The user gains a resistance to lowered leveled Wind (D rank with CJs to be created)
The user gains a sense of smell equivalent to a Dragon (Still far worse then the Iznuzuka's one's)
The user become's physically stronger due to the Dragon Training (1.5 a normal ninja)
The user become's faster due to that training as well (1.3X)

Must be Kage rank or above to learn
Must have mastered Wind
Must have a Natural affinity to Wind
Must undergo a great deal of training​

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Got permission from Zoro to submit this​

±± Declined ±± do not resubmit. This isn't a CFS. I don't get why people are trying to make abilities and KG i this thread.

 

[Illyasviel]

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(Chakra Myaku Kaihou Sensu)-Chakra Pulse Release Style
Type:Nintaijutsu
Background:There was a youg shinobi who altough had normal chakra reserves and very good chakra control was for some reason never able to perform any advanced ninjutsu nor genjutsu techniques.He then decided to get further training in taijutsu and soon he became one o fthe best taijutsu users in the area.But even though he was a great taijutsu user he was still being constantly defeated by profaund ninjutsu users.He soon left the village and went into the mountains in search of a great temple where he could even further his taijutsu skils.After a few years of searching he found the temple and started his training.After some time he meet an old monk who offered himself to help the boy develop his own fighting style in wich he would use his chakra combined with his taijutsu skills.The two set of into the even higher mountains.Where they worked hard and after two years they have finaly finished and developed a new style-the Chakra Pulse Release Style.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:This style relies on precise chakra control and the abillaty of the user to release the chakra quickly and precisly into one point of the oponents body.The user will gather his chakra into his palms and then strike the oponent into any part of his body.Upon striking the oponent the user will release the chakra from his palms into the oponent in the form of a pulse.The chakra pulse will cause damage to the inner organs of the oponent.The efect of the punches is based on how much stikes the oponent has endured.After one or two strikes the damage on the oponents body won't be severe but the oponent will just feel piercing pain in the striked area of his body.After more than three strikes the struk organs will start failing and after five strikes the damaged organ will stop working.The problem is that the user will put a huge strain on his chakra system after four constant strikes and he would have to wait 2 turns untill his chakra system is replenished.If he doesn't wait not only the tecnique would fail but the charka pulse would strike inside his own hands wich would cause that the user wouldn't be able to touch anything with his hands nor perform hand seals.
Additional effects and Restrictions:
~After 1 hit the oponent will feel piercing pain in the striked area and the user will not sufer any efects.
~After 2 hits in the same area the oponent will feel even more pain and the user won't suffer any efects.
~After 3 hits in the same area the opoents organs in the striked area will begin to fail and he will feel more pain and the user will feel minor pain in his palms and minor exhaustion.
~After 4 hits in the same area the opnents organs in that area will almost completely stop working and he will feel enourmoss pain in the striked are while the user will feel some more pain in his palms and he will feel exhausted if the strikes were performed in the same turn he will not be able to perform this technique for two turns if there was an one turn brake between th strikes the user will not be able to perform this technique for one turn.
~After 5 strikes in the same area the oponents organs in the area will stop working and he will feel unberable pain and if those were vital organs he would pass away.And the user will feel medium pain in his palms if he waited between the strikes and if he had not waited his hands will be very damaged and he will not be able to perform hand seals.
~After 6 or more strikes in the same area the oponent will pass out due to the pain while the user will feel major pain in his palms and medium exhaustion if he hadn't waited between strikes his hands will be badly damaged and he will not be able to perform hand seals.

~No mather if he waited the user will not be able to perform more than seven strikes like this per battle.
~This style can be taught only to S-Class and above.
~This style can only be taught by Hayate Gekko
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±± Declined ±± To similar to Gentle Fist. Don't resubmit.

 

[Akuma]

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(hourou-kon ryoudo)- Wandering Souls Possession

Type: Nin-Konjiutsu
Background:
In the acient times in a unkown land, a unique combat style was developed named Soul possession. It took 29 years for them to discover the way to succesfully perform this, They found that by compresion a soul into an object with use of ninjutsu and Konjiutsu, and manipulate such objects. This was stoped being used do to being scared in the nights by the souls used for this, though years later a Shinobi named Gildarts found a scroll explaining the process and mastered it.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
The style allows one to focus there chakra and and there konjiutsu abilities to supress wandering souls into a small object, and with use of elemental chakra the soul object can perform green colored flame attacks, the green of the flames is yet unkown but it has something to do with the soul in the object being pressured, The user only has 5 "dolls" which are produced by this union can serve a variety of purposes, such as offense, defense and even transportation. They are capable of freely floating and maneuvering in the air. They can threaten and confuse foes by flying around them, as well as physically assault them by throwing themselves against targets using the momentum gained from their flight, being capable of triggering melee barrages of attacks from every direction. The user can always create diferent dolls and put the souls into them. If a doll gets destroyed the soul escapes.

Additional effects and Restrictions:
~ One must have Mastery over the Fire Element.
~ One must have a set of dolls of there own to use this Style.
~ Must be atleast S-Class Ninja to start training this Style.


±± Declined ±± do not resubmit. Souls inside objects?

 

[Hellsbadass]

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Dragon Kata

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Type: nin tai
Background:Dragons, once a powerfully creature that roamed the earth and battling against the Juubi and the Sage Of the Six Paths was feared by everybody except for the sage. After countless fights against the Sage of the Six Paths, The Dragons decided to take on a student. The Dragons took a female human as their apprentice, later called the Dragon Mage. They taught her the Ways of the Dragon and the Katas that followed, so that she could fight in their stead, protecting them, and keeping them safe from the Sage of the Six Paths. As they were to clash the Dragon Mage was able to perform moves and feets that almost parred with the Sage himself, however, only to keep him at bay. Soon after the great Sage was at his death bed, and the dragons and the mage aswell, dissappeared from the surface of earth. Realizing that there wouldn't be anybody close enough to the Sage, they went into Solitude in the Kingdom of Dragons which only appears under a red moon. While in Solitude, a small portion of power of the dragon was passed down to its relatives, the snake, but unfortunatly the snake was not able to fully master the way of the dragon which only left them with a small sample of the power.. During the final years of the Dragon Mage, she made a contract for the Dragons so that one day when a true heir of the Mage stumbles upon the Kingdom of Dragons he or she will be able to carry on her duty. The contracts made the heir able summon dragons and would allow him or her to teach this contract to whom they pleases. At Her final breath she gave the contract and her final wish to Shenron, so that when her heir find this place, he would test and see he/she is worthy of being a Dragon Sage.
After Thousands of years, the heir of the Mage appeared... Grimmjow Jeagerjaquez was his name. He and his friends stumbled upon this Kingdom during a red moon. After being tested by Shenron, He was giving the Title of Mage and allowed his friends to sign contract of the Elemental Dragons.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
Dragon head blast-
the dragons taught the mage how to manupilate and summon elements to create blasts of dragon heads which the mage will use during hand to hand combat.
The dragon heads are about the size of an average human torso and the utlitmate head is about the size of "afternoon tiger" which can absorb lower ranked jutsu and use it against the opponent

the dragon's will - as a part of the contract, the dragon will share of its blood with mage which will allow her to live longer than an average person and also give her the strengh, speed and agility of a dragon.

Additional effects and Restrictions:

once the user is in the mode, he/she wont be able to perform any jutsus other than for dragon kata..

the ultimate dragon head will kick the user out this fightning style and leave him week (like gai when he did his move)

only people with the dragon king summon can perform this fightning style....



i am making this because people are using modes and styles that i have a contract for.... its like making a frog kata with out having the the contract and sage mode

note, i am not done with the style... i will add more technquies in the future and try to make it less oped​

sample of how this fighting style looks

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but the elements take shape of a dragon's head
the size of dragon will vary on users desire.
for earth element, the user will turn the ground under him to mud like state which will flow up the user and shoot out towards the opponent, turning it back to solid


±± Declined ±± Much better than your first attempt but still you are trying to make this into a mode, not a CFS. Also, the dragons would have taught you an unique way to use the normal skills of a ninja (nin, gen, tai, elemental nin, etc) that no other person had. This said, that unique way should be a close combat way of using these skills. You are describing a mix between a mode and a KG/CC ability. It has potential though to be an excellent NinTaijutsu. Keep working on it.

 

[Green Hood]

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I like this post It's giving me great ideals for fighting styles. I'll be sure to post here again with a style that may peek the interest of any taijutsu user.

 

[Scorps]

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I'll need to close this thread for a few days to get it up to date. As you know, we've been suffering staff changes and since we've been needing to pitch in here and there, some things have been left behind a bit, namely in my case, my duties in this thread and the CJ thread.

I'm sorry for any inconvenient and i'll try my best to do this as fast as possible. I hope everyone understands and i promise this will be brief

Thank you,
Scorps ​

 

[Scorps]

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±± Thread Open ±±

I must remind members of the following:

-You need to be S-Class Ninja to submit a CFS

-CFS aren't ways to submit KG, Abilities or even Custom Elements

-Trying to get ridiculous bonus such as a bonus in damage to an element or skill, reduction of hand seals or no hand seals for ninjutsu (elemental or not), speed or strength multiplication, etc will lead to declining

-Keep your CFS submissions simple and clear

-Avoid the cliches and the copies off of existing cannon or custom abilities/styles.

-You need to wait 15 days from the date your CFS was checked to resubmit

-Remember that the CFS itself isn't a technique and doesn't count towards your 35 cjs limit, but the techniques you'll submit from it, do.

-Your bio can use 2 CFS, but it can only specialize (with the inherent bonus) in one

-I added a rule that you need to submit each CFS in different posts. It makes it easier to check and when approved, makes the linking much cleaner

Thank you, Scorps​

 

[XZA]

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Kokoro hijutsu | Mind Secret Arts

Type: NinGenjutsu

Background: The mind is the abstract notion of cognitive processes, such as rational thought, memory, perception and intellect. Rational thought is often considered the reason why Homo sapiens succeeded, proliferating and inhabiting most areas of the planet, developing technology and culture, changing the environment to meet their liking. Physically speaking, all those mental processes are electrical impulses in the nervous system, focused mainly on the central nervous system, in particular the brain. The lightning release is used because of electrical impulses in the nervous system, focused mainly on the central nervous system, in particular the brain, to effect cognitive functions, such as memory and thought. Yin, being spiritual, is often associated with Genjutsu, while the Yang principle is used to breathe life into the illusions formed by the Yin Release, making them quite potent. The Mind Arts is used predominately for infiltration and subtle mind control, as well as suggestive thought, making it ideal for those wishing to direct events unseen.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The user utilizes both lightning- based chakra and yin energy to create Genjutsu Based techniques that control ones mental process similar to Yamanaka hiden, but more versatile and with fewer requirements for use.

Additional effects and Restrictions:
Restrictions

• Mind Release techniques, if not countered, last a maximum of two turns
• Cannot preform genjutsu based techniques in the same turn
• The user must have visual contact with the opponent before using this art
• Must have a high chakra reserve
• Must be sannin to learn
• Must have full mastery over lightning
• These are all "hidden jutsu" meaning they can only be taught. The information regarding the art is not known or is it written
• Can only be taught by a Kokoro Hijutsu master

Effects

• Once mastered, The user is able to calm his mind nearly instantly and with great ease
• Masters of mind arts can tell you if they are under genjutsu as the impulses in their head will be disturbed
• One can predict the opponents movements by reading their electrical impulses

±± Declined ±± This is not a CFS...its basically a "polished" way to describe what Genjutsu is

 

[Blizzàrd1]

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Blind Illusion Art | Buraindo Meimu Gijutsu
Type: Genjutsu
Background: Blind Illusion Art originates from old mythical magic of Greece and the now commonly practiced Self-Hypnosis. The magicians from past used science, that they had control over to do something unexpected for the people around them, naming it as Magic. Greek studies and math have shown extensive focus on this idea, but the idea itself was implemented on the object or people around them just like the famous Ninja's illusion(Genjutsu), but this simple idea gave birth to more complex studies and people actually started research on them. Some ninjas researched and actually found a way to use it positively. This new style became common in Amegakure, the village hidden in rain, when after war people were on the verge of death, and some people found a way to make it easy for them.. They could not get the courage to slaughter their own people with their bare hands to ease the death so they used Genjutsu on them. Creating a fake reality to manipulate their brains to slowly descend to the last stages of their life painlessly. The same idea was then examined again by some highly trained ninjas, they started using the style in battles against their opponents, and in one of these fights they discovered something new and interesting about this. When one of the ninja applied the Genjutsu on himself to ease him from the pain he was going through in order to give his life away while protecting his fellow ninja. The practice was highly studied and developed by practicing Self-Genjutsu (Self-Hypnosis). Using Genjutsu on your own chakra networks to implement the same fake reality and enhance the capabilities of a normal ninja to fight against crucial circumstances. This practice gave birth to Blind Illusion Art, Blind because the person is cut off by the reality he was going through or was about to witness, instead he makes his own reality, a mere dream that allows himself to believe something that doesn't exist and strive for it until he or she slowly descends towards his/her death. Blindness from reality but the sound of dreams still echoing in the ears and the roar of battle still alive. Demon Hunter from WarCraft "I am Blind not Deaf".

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
The fighting style depends upon Genjutsu, The user of this fighting styles casts a Genjutsu on him/herself to fight the circumstances. The style relies on Chakra Disruption in specific patterns connecting Specific Chakra points with the flow. Chakra patterns means the user is channeling chakra through only specific networks creating a pattern that is used to enhance his/her working while lessening the others characteristics. To initiate the style a user must cast a Genjutsu, disrupting the pattern in a diamond form; known as The Illusion Diamond. And to cancel the effect of the Fighting style or its working, a Genjutsu with cross pattern must overlap other chakra network patterns; known as The Reality Cross. The Patterns are considered the main pillars of the fighting style giving the user an enhance ability to focus on one thing by loosing the rest. The style can be very helpful in locating the enemy and then using Taijutsu to attack. By creating fake realities the user can increase his/her will power, decrease the pain of an attack or defend himself from various things while staying in a Genjutsu.

The Illusion Diamond:
This is necessary, and is the initial step of the Fighting Style; its a disruption of Chakra flow in a diamond pattern connecting only four of the parts to abundant chakra;
1. Brain point, the first and foremost chakra point, where the diamond completes, keeping a high flow to the brain will allow the user to think perfectly well even being in a genjutsu, it opens strategical points of the battle.
2. Heart Point, a simple control system of all the chakra networks and regulating the flow and patterns.
3. Sound point(s), the two important chakra connections, the ears. When in genjutsu (Blind to reality) the user channels his/her chakra towards his/her ears allowing him/her to perceive sound extremely well. Using this ability the user can track the opponent's movements with sound. Being in a genjutsu will limit user's normal senses, so increasing one to its maximum capacity allows him/her to makeup for the others.

The Reality Cross:
The Fighting style can only be canceled by disrupting the pattern by overlapping another specific pattern onto it; one "already" in affect and one The "X" pattern. The chakra is connected to five points:
1. Heart Point, a simple control system of all the chakra networks and regulating the flow and patterns.
2. Leg Point(s), normal chakra flow to legs for an ordinary chakra pattern.
3. Arm Point(s), normal chakra flow to arm for an ordinary chakra pattern.
this divides the chakra uniformly bringing the body back to normal but exhausted.

Techniques related to this Fighting Style will follow the same idea of patterns, and the use of different factors in battle field. For example; the initial pattern, "The Illusion Diamond" boots hearing decreasing sight, touch, smell and taste to lower than normal. This is the only pattern that has senses in it, all other will focus on actual way of incorporating the Genjutsu in battle field; By use of Will Power, Fake Reality to comfort human mind, Relaxed strategic thinking, Pleasure, Anger, Madness etc.

Additional effects and Restrictions:
• Drastic loss in senses (Except Hearing).
• Must have Genjutsu or be a Sharingan User.
• Is unable to cast Genjutsu on opponents while in the patterns.
• Chakra flow can still be altered to do Jutsus.
• Exhaustion (and Pain if wounded) after releasing the style.
• All senses and affects will be normal when released.
• Main Theme; Self-Hypnotism.


±± Declined ±± Not a CFS. Just a weird way to use Genjutsu...even if some little details don't even make sense.

 

[Better]

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Buraindo Shuhou: The Blind arts
Type: Taijutsu
Background Since the beginning of their rivalary so to say, the Uchiha clan were feared for the visual abilities by everyone. When the Uchiha and the Senju decided to make a treaty and create a village together some senju members feared that the uchiha would use their visual abilites aka their skilled abilities in genjutsu with their sharingan to control the senju and make them do their bidding. Hashirama also feared this, so he ordered his brother Tobirama to take several senju ninja and develop a fighting style that can be use to combat the uchiha clans sharingan abilities. This is how the Buraindo Shuhou started and has been passed down from shinobi to shinobi that live in konoha.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: In order to master Buraindo Shuhou one must stand still in the forest for 20 days and 20 nights, then take a break and keep it going for more nights. With their eyes closed meditating and doing yoga, and by the use of chakra the need to amplify their abilties in each of their 5 senses other then their sight.The reason to do Yoga is to increase their durablity and flexibility, this is done with extreme forms of yoga that only a skilled ninja can do, making them able to twist and turn their body immediately when they sense danger approaching. After they have stayed and meditated the senju shinobi went against tobirama in a taijutsu spar while they had their eyes closed. This kept continuing until the senju shinobi all could handle the future hokage in taijutsu with their eyes closed. The techniques of Buraindo Shuhou were then taught to Hashirama by Tobirama and it help them combat the Uchiha in any future altercations.

The abilites of a shinobi who has mastered the Buraindo shuhou are simple. A shinobi who has mastered Buraindo Shuhou has his all their senses strengthened except his sight. Meaning their sense of smell is as strong but not stronger then that of the Inuzuka Clan, the sense of feeling and touch is strengthed, so is their sense of taste, and their sense of hearing is so strong, they can hear almost anything in a fight.

Also Masters of Buraindo Shuhou have extreme flexibility and durability thanks to the extreme workouts in Yoga. Making them more resistent to regular kicks and punchs, and for example taijutsu kick to the arm, it would normally leave a person with a broken arm but a shinobi who has mastered Buraindo Shuhou it wouldn't break their arm, but they'd still feel the pain of the direct attack. Their Flexibilty is shown of how they can twist and turn their body as they see fit, but nothing too extreme. This helps with scouting and dodging taijutsu by for example bending your whole back till the top of your head is hovering over the ground.

The real trick of these arts is that when they don't face an Uchiha their senses are still heightned plus they have their sight which makes them a tougher opponent.


Additional effects and Restrictions:

This fighting style would essentially renders all visual genjutsu useless.

This fighting style once mastered can be used with eyes open and closed

This fighting style's durability only works with taijutsu attacks, or hand to hand combat attacks. Does Not work that way with Ninjutsu and other attacks.

Must of have a bio that has been to konoha at some point in the characters history.

Can only be taught by Better

±± Declined ±± although it does have potential, you went to far with it. a smell like the inuzuka just because of this style? Ridiculous. I wouldn't mind a type of movement and combat envolving not using your eyes and relying on hearing and such but never to this extent. If i approved this, what would be the point of making an Inuzuka bio?

 

[Priest]

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(kumo kankaku): Spider sense
Type: Nin Taijutsu
Background: The spider sense style was created and mastered by the spider clan which is useful for move prediction in close combat. This has been the trick to the invincibility of the spider clan during close combat.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: To perform the technique..the user releases an invisible clot of chakra round his body which he uses to sense incoming kicks, punches or weapons which he would be able to dodge easily even if it was on his blindspot. Using the chakra clot to sense the movement and vibration of the wind, it enables the user to quickly respond to incoming attacks at a very close range and mastering this technique makes the user fast enough to dodge any close range attack no matter haw fast it is when the technique is been used.
Additional effects and Restrictions:
This is ineffective against ninjutsu that covers a wide range such as explosions.
this style can only be used by mist01
Mastery of fuuton is needed


±± Declined ±±Don't Resubmit. Fairy clear why

 

[System001]

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Genkoutsu Kamakiri | The Mantis Fist

Type: Nin-Taijutsu
Background: The Mantis fist was developed long ago by a man who constantly found that in fights his movements were to easy to read, and became predictable and easy to dodge since he often swung too wide or in a pattern, also he found that upon dodging he would often lose his footing or simply leave himself open for a quick follow up due to the fact that his movements were not controlled enough, they were to bodaucious, too outgoing, they were overeactions. After learning this and trying to learn from several great teachers whom he all failed, the man turned to nature, hoping that it would provide the answers he needed. Indeed it did, the man soon came across a Mantis, and upon seeing its rigid jerky movements, movements that were precise and were always in for the kill, seeing how controlled and meaningfull each of the Mantis's movements were, the man started to study the Mantis, mimicking its movements. This birthed a new Taijutsu, the Mantis fist, however it still was not complete, although it granted the user the means of great physical control being able to dodge attacks taking the easiest least time consuming route possible, and only making the movements that were absolutely needed leaving very little room for openings and allowing quick controlled yet rigd and inhumane like conterstrikes that were so bizzare that it usually forced for the opponent to block through the use of reactions or dodge through the use of instinct rather than dodging by predicting the path of trajectory and also the fact that its prowess was equal to that of a punch if not greater, but due to the force being applied to a smaller area than a punch its effects where more devastating. Eventually after several years of wandering, passing down this way of fighting to many students, he came across a certain teenager, after learning the Mantis Fist, the man was able to identify with it, and soon added the use of chakra to the Mantis Fist, completing the art, or so he thought...

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
The Mantis Fist is a taijustu style that invovles the user striking the enemy with one or more of their fingers in rapid succesion in specific places alternating between hands for each strike the speed of hand movements rivaling that of the gentle fist . While striking the enemy, the user focus's a large amount of Raiton or Katon chakra on the tops of their fingers and when they strike the enemy, they allow the chakra to penetrate into the enemies body, however even though it is a very pinpoint strike done with the finger tips, its effects are devestating as when the user makes contact with the opponent, they insert their chakra into the opponents body, the chakra ripples outwards and in the direction of the original strike, much like when a pebble is dropped into a shallow pond and the water around it is disturbed and ripples outwards. The effects of the Mantis Fist can be increased further by striking certain spots on the body, such as pressure points or nerve endings.
When this is done with raiton chakra, the chakra will ripple outwards on impact, which may affect motor and sensory neurons with its static charges, this can cause various effects.
By using fire chakra the user can heat water present in bodies or the atmosphere causing the water to evapourate, this can be very effective as the body is made up of large sums of water and many organs rely on water present in the body
-Paralysation in the surronding area due to muscle contraction, similar to that of chidori Nagashi.
-Loss of feeling and pain in that area. The users raiton chakra's static charges are used to counter the static charges of the opponents sensory neurons, making the opponent have a loss of feeling and pain in that area, this proves disadvantageous, as damage can be done to the opponents body via a strongfist follow up without the opponent ever being aware of the effects caused(Broken ribs pierced lungs ect.)
-Heating and evapouration of water sources.
-Burning of Skin.



Additional effects and Restrictions: The Mantis Fist has one last ability, because of the way that the chakra is released and inserted, the non physical chakra part of the Mantis Fist does not require contact with the opponents body to work. Infact once the ripple effect is released, it can travel through mediums such as earth water and air for up to 5 inches the ripples becoming wider and affecting a larger area but becoming less potent as it reaches further from the source, much like a wave that passess through a small gap into a large area. The area covered having a diameter of 6 inches per 1 inch distance form the source.
This style of fighting is called mantis fist,since it mostly involves striking your opponent with the tip of your finger(s) in rapid succesion,and since mantis have scythe like fingers instead of hands and move in rapid ridigid jerky like motions i thought the name was befitting.
The Mantis fist contains stances that are strange and unusual,and usualy unprecidented to the enemy,making a mantis fist users movements hard to read.
-Due to the Mantis Fist involving mimicking the actual movements of a Mantis, a Mantis Fist User moves unlike any mammal with extreme precision and speed, and unlike that of a average human a mantis fist users reactions are not fueled by fear or instinct leading them to overeact and make unecesary movements but the mantis style involves the slightest movements so as to avoid things and thus avoid unnecessary reflexes making Mantis Fist users extremely effecient at dodging, and giving them room for a swift counterattack.

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Note:Anyone other than -Scaze- must be taught to use the mantis fist justu's
~Precise chakra control is needed to benifit from the full offense of the mantis fist.
~Requires the user to have mastered Taijustu/strong fist and started Raiton and Fire training
~Anyone other than -Scaze- must be Taught the Mantis Fist

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Genkoutsu Kamakiri | The Mantis Fist

Type: Nin-Taijutsu
Background: The Mantis fist was developed long ago by a man who constantly found that in fights his movements were to easy to read, and became predictable and easy to dodge since he often swung too wide or in a pattern, also he found that upon dodging he would often lose his footing or simply leave himself open for a quick follow up due to the fact that his movements were not controlled enough, they were to bodaucious, too outgoing, they were overeactions. After learning this and trying to learn from several great teachers whom he all failed, the man turned to nature, hoping that it would provide the answers he needed. Indeed it did, the man soon came across a Mantis, and upon seeing its rigid jerky movements, movements that were precise and were always in for the kill, seeing how controlled and meaningfull each of the Mantis's movements were, the man started to study the Mantis, mimicking its movements. This birthed a new Taijutsu, the Mantis fist, however it still was not complete, although it granted the user the means of great physical control being able to dodge attacks taking the easiest least time consuming route possible, and only making the movements that were absolutely needed leaving very little room for openings and allowing quick controlled yet rigd and inhumane like conterstrikes that were so bizzare that it usually forced for the opponent to block through the use of reactions or dodge through the use of instinct rather than dodging by predicting the path of trajectory and also the fact that its prowess was equal to that of a punch if not greater, but due to the force being applied to a smaller area than a punch its effects where more devastating. Eventually after several years of wandering, passing down this way of fighting to many students, he came across a certain teenager, after learning the Mantis Fist, the man was able to identify with it, and soon added the use of chakra to the Mantis Fist, completing the art, or so he thought...

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
The Mantis Fist is a taijustu style that invovles the user striking the enemy with one or more of their fingers in rapid succesion in specific places alternating between hands for each strike the speed of hand movements rivaling that of the gentle fist . While striking the enemy, the user focus's a large amount of Raiton or Katon chakra on the tops of their fingers and when they strike the enemy, they allow the chakra to penetrate into the enemies body, however even though it is a very pinpoint strike done with the finger tips, its effects are devestating as when the user makes contact with the opponent, they insert their chakra into the opponents body, the chakra ripples outwards and in the direction of the original strike, much like when a pebble is dropped into a shallow pond and the water around it is disturbed and ripples outwards. The effects of the Mantis Fist can be increased further by striking certain spots on the body, such as pressure points or nerve endings.
When this is done with raiton chakra, the chakra will ripple outwards on impact, which may affect motor and sensory neurons with its static charges, this can cause various effects.
By using fire chakra the user can heat water present in bodies or the atmosphere causing the water to evapourate, this can be very effective as the body is made up of large sums of water and many organs rely on water present in the body
-Paralysation in the surronding area due to muscle contraction, similar to that of chidori Nagashi.
-Loss of feeling and pain in that area. The users raiton chakra's static charges are used to counter the static charges of the opponents sensory neurons, making the opponent have a loss of feeling and pain in that area, this proves disadvantageous, as damage can be done to the opponents body via a strongfist follow up without the opponent ever being aware of the effects caused(Broken ribs pierced lungs ect.)
-Heating and evapouration of water sources.
-Burning of Skin.



Additional effects and Restrictions: The Mantis Fist has one last ability, because of the way that the chakra is released and inserted, the non physical chakra part of the Mantis Fist does not require contact with the opponents body to work. Infact once the ripple effect is released, it can travel through mediums such as earth water and air for up to 5 inches the ripples becoming wider and affecting a larger area but becoming less potent as it reaches further from the source, much like a wave that passess through a small gap into a large area. The area covered having a diameter of 6 inches per 1 inch distance form the source.
This style of fighting is called mantis fist,since it mostly involves striking your opponent with the tip of your finger(s) in rapid succesion,and since mantis have scythe like fingers instead of hands and move in rapid ridigid jerky like motions i thought the name was befitting.
The Mantis fist contains stances that are strange and unusual,and usualy unprecidented to the enemy,making a mantis fist users movements hard to read.
-Due to the Mantis Fist involving mimicking the actual movements of a Mantis, a Mantis Fist User moves unlike any mammal with extreme precision and speed, and unlike that of a average human a mantis fist users reactions are not fueled by fear or instinct leading them to overeact and make unecesary movements but the mantis style involves the slightest movements so as to avoid things and thus avoid unnecessary reflexes making Mantis Fist users extremely effecient at dodging, and giving them room for a swift counterattack.

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Note:Anyone other than -Scaze- must be taught to use the mantis fist justu's
~Precise chakra control is needed to benifit from the full offense of the mantis fist.
~Requires the user to have mastered Taijustu/strong fist and started Raiton and Fire training
~Anyone other than -Scaze- must be Taught the Mantis Fist

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±± Declined ±±Very close to approval but i need you to resume this a bit. Its to big and confusing. Keep it simpler please. Also, the lightning part, be sure that its effects have nothing to do with the 3rd Raikage's moves, otherwise you know what happens to this style.

 

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Genkotsu Kibaku | Exploding Fist

Type: NinTaijutsu

Background:

Genkotsu Kibaku was originally created during the ancient times in the land of the wind. As the fighting style itself was to utilize and enhance a shinobi’s affinity to wind while in close combat. While using their affinities with wind and taijutsu, they were able to increase their speed and power in their strikes and movement. However this was easily countered due to constant hand seals that was needed and was not very practical in close combat. Throughout the years, a shinobi came who was able to develop the idea further, by mixing both taijutsu and the wind element through precise chakra control. Thus resulting what it was originally intended to do. Increasing a power of the strike and moving quickly through their natural affinity, wind.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

A exploding fist user will fight like any other taijutsu user. However the difference is in their movements and when they strike. With the natural affinity to wind, their speed will increase as well as their movements. The wind element will circulate in their body constantly allowing this to happen as they make any movement. Their striking ability is where the true art form comes into play. When striking an opponent whether it’s a punch or a kick, at the end of the strike an exploding wind will release from their fists or their feet or any area that they are striking with. As the wind chakra always flows within the user’s tenketsu. This is accomplished by precise chakra control while striking an opponent. With rigorous training in the art of Exploding Fist, the user will able to release the exploding wind at the end of their strikes instantaneously when striking an opponent. Almost as if the impact itself triggers the wind to be released at the point of contact. When hit with the exploding wind, it will leave the opponent damaged more so than a regular taijutsu strike. The wind element would explode at the point where it was contacted thus, any area in the body of that region will have internal damage. Constant strikes to the same area with exploding fist results in internal bleeding, then organ failure. Some cases it could lead to death if not looked into.

Additional effects and Restrictions:

-Masters of exploding fist have increased speed in their movements and striking ability. Striking ability is faster because of the affinity to wind. Power is increased due to the velocity of the speed of the strike. Natural explosion of the wind after contact increases damage to the opponent.

-Masters of exploding fist will cause the opponent to have internal damage. Severity of the damage depends on the times the opponent was hit in that same area. The results of the strike are as follows"

-1 to 4 strikes in the same area will have internal damage as a bruise.
-5-9 strikes in the same area internal damage with internal bleeding.
-10-14 strikes in the same are qull result in organ failure which results in death

Internal Damage: Damage done so by getting hit with exploding fist between 1-4 strikes in the same location. Internal/physical effects are a bruise that are shown outside, and internal bruising of an organ.

Effects of Internal Damage:
-Bareable Pain in the location that was struck.
-Slight Bruising outside and inside of the area that was struck
-Brief Sluggishness and loss of stamina

Internal Bleeding: Damage done by recieving too many hits between 5-9 strikes from exploding fist. Bleeding occures in the area that was previously bruised which caused to swell than bleed internally.

Effects of Internal Bleeding:
-Unbareable pain in the area's effected
-When bleeding, the effects of the pain is the same as if someone is stabing you with a knife
-Decreased mobility 40%
-Stamina decreased to 50%


Organ Failure: Damage done by recieving too many hits between 10-14 from exploding fist. After internal bleeding, organ will fail after too much swelling and bleeding. Once an organ shuts down the opponent will be in extreme pain and unconsciouness.

Effects of Organ Failure:
-Caughing up blood
-Extreme pain in the area's effective and the areas that are close to the effective area
-The opponent's mobility now decreased to 80%
-Stamina decreased to 70%
-Opponent may pass out due to extreme pain

-Masters of exploding fist does not have increased agility.

-In order to learn exploding fist, they need to enhance their bodies to be able to with stand the explosion of the wind that occurs and also to be able to strike at great speed [Sannin Rank]. They will also need to have precise chakra control.

-Must have mastered Wind in order to be able to start training in exploding fist.

-Can only be taught by –Vision-


Personally had bruising of the organ, internal bleeding, and almost organ failure. Effects, I know personally and hope it doesn't get denied because of it. Thanks,


±± Declined ±± The effects are ok...but they should be added to the techniques, not the style itself. The style is a "guide line" on how the style is performed and its abilities. Now, the part about wind element constantly around your body....if that is happening, you know fairy well that you can't mold other elements. Also, be sure that this style doesn't have cutting abilities. Only blunt impact. Other than that, its ok.

 

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Unka Genkotsu | Mist Fist
Type: NinGenTaijutsu
Background:
A small clan within Kirigakure, who's members where not very physically strong found Taijutsu encounters troublesome so in order to become efficient in one of fightings core areas this clan combined the Hidden Mist jutsu and the clans natural affinity for Genjutsu and thus created the Mist Fist
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
This type of unique Taijutsu uses quick agile Capoeira and Drunken fist like movements combined with a scaled down version of the Hidden Mist Jutsu, where the user will sway side to side in Drunken Fist-like movements releasing small amounts of mist each time he sways. A user of the Mist Fist style is never stood still they are always moving and swaying around releasing small amounts of mist as they do. As the Mist Fist user attacks they use a combination of Drunken Fist and Capoeira like movement while releasing small amounts of mist, when attacking the opponent will become confused and dazed by all the fast moving mist patches. The mist released disturbs the opponents chakra and makes them somewhat drowsy/sleepy. That combined with the fast unorthodox movements of the Mist Fist makes causes the opponents reaction times to reduce and the fast movements of the Mist Fist be even more deadly.
Additional effects and Restrictions:
-Masters of the Mist Fist have increased Movement Speed, Agility and Reaction when compared to a Normal Fist user
-Mist Fist users have less physical strength than Normal Fist users when they have only been trained in Mist Fist


±± Declined ±± This is far from approvable. Ningentaijutsu? Why? Also, if the only special thing that is happening is you release mist as you move...then no. ITs not worth a CFS all together just for that. Also, movement speed, agility and reaction just because of this? Nope. And its not Normal Fist. Its Strong Fist.

 

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buin gigei Staff arts
Type:nin/kenjutsu
Background: Long ago there was an un ending war The jubii had yet to be sealed by the sage of six paths, and the only people not being a part of the war were monks who had followed the sage and learned ninshu from him. Soon they mastered the wind release but were still unable to protect themselves. Any weapon made by them was handmade and they refused to kill making any weapons used not lethal. They soon had invented a metal and wood staff and using their wind release alongside their staff made a great combination but soon after the jubii was sealed most of the monks who used this skill were killed but a few survived and continued to teach the staff arts.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: the user would take a stance with their staff in hand ( the stance will be described in the cj) and would focus wind chakra through the staff. Then the user will go from the stance and begin to hit the enemy with their staff ( jabbing, swiping etc.) while releasing some wind waves from the staff adding onto the range and power of the staff, the movements done while attacking with the staff will be like a dance so the user must be on their toes and ready to spin jump from whatever position. In order to be able to dance like the masters of this art the user will need to have a calm mind which they can achieve through meditating like the monks did. ( I.e. when training in this they will start by meditating)
Additional effects and Restrictions: must have mastered wind
Must have been taught this skill by me
(Must have a clam mind and be ready to change positions while fighting with staff ( i.e. a bio that says personality hot headed wouldn’t be able to use this) master of this art is able to move very well in taijutsu battles.
User can’t use any fire jutsu next turn after using this art.


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in above picture user would be spinning the staff like a fan while focusing wind chakra from it the resulting wind can be used to knock the enemy back leaving them open from there the user can do whatever they want but it leaves the enemy open from a brief moment. Or be used to stay afloat in mid air like the user is falling they could rotate their staff while releasing wind chakra from it to keep them in mid air of course this would leave them open to attack.

It can be used to add on to the moves from the staff like the user will get into a stance ( as said I would describe the stance in the cj) and make a few quick moves like move forward and strike the enemy 3 times once in face, gut and knee and then spin around holding the staff in both hands and release a blast of wind knocking the enemy onto the ground or backwards as well as cut their skin slightly causing bleeding on a small degree
And of course as I said the movements using the staff will be like a dance using the staff in fighting moves from the dance followed up by wind chakra making the range and power of the staff better but giving the user the ability to change position quite fast.

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±± Declined ±± because monks do exist in narutoverse i need you to take them out of this background since it collides with the cannon story line. Also, some restrictions are useless. Its a style, not a technique. The one i bolded needs to go. Other than that, its quite good and nearly approvable.

 

[Korra.]

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Abatā no jōtai- The Avatar State
Type: Nintaijutsu
Background: The most powerful ability that an Avatar can invoke is the Avatar State. This allows an Avatar to channel immense cosmic energies and knowledge of all previous Avatars, enabling them to perform epic bending feats. Avatars may unconsciously enter such a state in response to perception of mortal danger, utilizing the state as a defense mechanism, or emotional distress. During this state, an Avatar has access to bending techniques they themselves may have yet to learn but has no conscious control and likely causes great collateral damage. Avatars with mastery of the Avatar State have full conscious control over the state, and can enter and exit it at will.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: When the user uses this fighting style they will be able to use the basic 5 in combination with their taijutsu. Though the user can only incorporated only 1 element at a time with their tai. An example of this would be the user can make fire come out while they punch their opponent.
Additional effects and Restrictions:
- Only one elemental chakra can be incorporated with their taijutsu at a time.
- Must have at least C rank Taijutsu.
- After repeated uses if this style the user will get tired.
- Have to be taught by ~Johninto~


±± Declined ±± What magical creature is this "Avatar" you are talking about? Lets be honest, you do know this is Narutoverse right? Besides, this is a mode as it stands, not a CFS.

 

[Gutsy]

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Shiroi Tategami Gigei (White Lion Arts)

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Type: Nin-Taijutsu (Chakra Manipulation & Control)
Background: The White Lion Arts, is a new form of hand-to-hand combat, developed by JiraiyaEroSennin, after studying the majestic creature, he developed a new fighting style, using immense amount of chakra and strength of a lion combined into a very powerful and new art. This new form of fighting gave him the ability to increase his strength rapidly and he gained incredible control over his own chakra.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
The Master of White Lion Art, is capable of "transforming" his body, giving the user a more lion like appearance, this means your teeth and nails grow to the size of a lion while your body will slowly be forced into a lion like stance, though your still capable of standing on two legs and doing hand seals. This gives access to immense strength and stamina above human capabilities. A person who has mastered this new style of fighting, uses mere brute strength and agility, giving them an edge over their opponent when it comes to stamina, when they gain the same abilities and senses as a lion, giving them incredible hearing and smell and a strong will to keep fighting even when low on stamina. This fighting style utilizes mostly your arms and upper body for heavy combat, while your legs is merely for fast and rapid movement, and with the transformed body giving a person stronger legs and arms to resist incoming attacks. Even though it is a very strong fighting style, it pulls a great strain on the users body, which reduces their speed and even with the additional stamina gained, the user will fall to the loss of strength because of the immense strain and production of acid in the user’s muscles.

Additional effects and Restrictions:
-A master of this form gains an enormous amount of stamina to keep them from falling to the immense strain on the body.
-This art turns you into a resistant body, which can take powerful blows to the body hardly taking any damage, though a person needs to go through incredibly harsh training and meditation.
-One must have begun earth release training to even begin to master this art.
-One must undergo intense training to master their chakra flow and physical training to strengthen their body.
-A master of this art will create a thin layer of chakra on their body (about 0.5 centimeter thick) which can be used as a protective shield upon your body.
-Can only be taught by JiraiyaEroSennin.​

±± Declined ±± Transforming yourself into a lion is mimicking the inuzuka clan abilities something that can't be approved. DNR

 

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Kame Kumite | Turtle Kata

Type: Advance Taijutsu/ Nin-Taijutsu

Background: Tortoise Fighting Style or usually known as Turtle kata was developed by the great Master "Oogway". It is the most internal of all styles, relying more on inner chakra than on body movements. Turtle Kata has smooth and flowing movements perfect in their balance. Those who choose to master this style must find great inner peace before beginning down this path.
As Oogway was the founder of Kung Fu, he was considered by many to be the greatest Kung Fu master in history, having used his vast lifespan to hone his skill for centuries. Even though he was ancient, his skills in Kung Fu were still considered to be the greatest on the planet. During Tai Lung's raid on the Valley of Peace, Oogway was able to intercept the Snow Lepoard with a swift leap, despite his advanced age and jabbed him in the chest with his staff before performing a well-placed and incredibly fast nerve attack that quickly dispatched him. Not only did he defeat a Kung Fu prodigy who was the first to master the Thousand Scrolls of Kung Fu, but he did so effortlessly with astounding speed and precision; he showed a more expert nerve attack than Tai Lung ever demonstrated.
Oogway also possessed unbelievable physical strength for his stature, seeing how he was able to easily lift up Thundering Rhino by the horn and toss him in a gap between the Bridge of Mists in Secrets of the Masters.
Later on he taught the fighting style to all the turtles living on "Mount Galápagos" and to Enzup.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The Turtle Kata is a fighting style used exclusively by those who have mastered "Turtle Mode". Turtle kata mainly focuses on attacking nerves. When nerves are in fact 'hit' or inflamed. The nerves send intense, fiery signals to the brain constantly, resulting in huge amount of pain in the region where hit, and also the part gets numb for a short period of time.
After entering into Turtle mode, turtle chakra provides user with some additional effects which are essential for the usage of this style. By using the turtle effects, user attacks opponent's nerves smoothly and with flowing movements making it difficult for opponent to predict the moves. While attacking nerves user concentrates turtle chakra in his hands so as to highly damage the nerves.

Nerve injury is divided into 3 stages-:

Primary
This is the least severe form of nerve injury, with complete recovery. In this case, the actual structure of the nerve remains intact. Most commonly, this involves compression of the nerve or disruption to the blood supply. There is a temporary loss of function which is reversible within time.
Secondary
This is a more severe nerve injury. This type of nerve damage may cause paralysis of the motor, sensory, and autonomic.
Final
There is a complete loss of motor, sensory and autonomic function.

(Kame Mo-Do) - Turtle Mode

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A (-5 to any ninjutsu used)
Description: User starts concentrating on his turtle chakra. Once concentrated enough, he releases that chakra throughout his body and thus entering into Turtle Mode. After entering into the mode user gains turtle's abilities and properties. User's body becomes very hard just like of turtle's back shell which gives him durability. His color also changes and he himself start looking like a turtle. His speed and reflexes also increases which is equivalent to naruto in sage mode, but comparatively little bit slower.
Note: -Mode lasts 4 turns.
-Can't use any Genjutsu while in this mode.
-Once the Terrapin mode wears off, user can't use it again for his next 1 turn.
-Can only be used if the user has signed "Turtle/Tortoise/Terrapin" contract.
-Can only be taught by Enzup.

Additional effects and Restrictions:
-Masters of this style have increased agility, fast reflexes and fast speed when compared to a strong fist/taijutsu master/specialist.
-Masters of this style possess unbelievable physical strength being able to lift heavy weights like gamakichi by using just one hand but this Additional Effect remains active in Turtle Mode only. And when turtle mode gets deactivated, then this additional effect get deactivated too along with mode.
-Masters of this style gains Calm mind and Great inner peace which is needed for this fighting style.
-User attacks opponent smoothly and with flowing movements, making it difficult for opponent to predict the moves and easy for user to dodge many taijutsu moves.
-Can't use any genjutsu while Turtle mode is active.
-One must be of atleast Kage Rank and a member of NB for atleast 18 months in order to learn this style.
-Must've mastered Taijutsu.
-Must've signed Turtle (or any other specie of turtle) contract.
-This style can only be taught by Enzup.

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±± Declined ±± Its actually pretty good. The only thing that can't work is Turtle mode and turtle chakra and what not. As you know, Sage mode mimicking abilities and modes in general aren't allowed anymore. If you rewrite without that part its practically good to go. Good idea.

 

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Ansatsu Kaiji Assassination Delight
Type: NinTaijutsu
Background:

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Crimson Viper, The woman who developed Ansatsu Kaiji. C.Viper, was an Assassin who worked for an organization similar to Anbu Root. As the years past, Viper started finding weaknesses in her various targets. She started developing this style and then passed it on to her daughter. Her Daughter later Married Patrick Jane. Viper's Daughter then taught Jane the style before her sad murder.

Jane then further developed Ansatsu Kaiji through his determination to avenge his wife and child.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

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Ikazuchi Nakkuru | Thunder Knuckle

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Developed by C.Viper. She channeled her lightning chakra through to her hand as she thrusts herself forward and channeled her lightning chakra in to her target to paralyze them to stop them from shouting out or reacting as the Lightning would shock their nervous system.

Nenshou Handou | Burning Kick

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Developed by C.Viper. This was normally the follow up technique C.Viper used during her assassinations. After Ikazuchi Nakkuru, Viper would turn around immediatly and channel her fire chakra through her foot and do a spinning. As her foot rises, she releases the chakra and burns her target from groin all the way up leaving them burned.

Seismic Kanadzuchi | Seismic Hammer

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Developed by C.Viper. This was normally a technique of Viper where she would target the target's house (Or building of residence) and channel Lightning chakra through the ground and the chakra would gather in an area then burst causing the foundations of the building to crumble (Normally causing the building to collapse). When used on an opponent (Outside of structure) the burst would cause the target to be blasted in the air slightly shocked.

Additional effects and Restrictions:
-User has to master Lightning | Fire | Earth
-User must be Sannin Ranked
-Masters of this style have better Lightning and Fire chakra control
-Masters of this style will have better accuracy with Fire and Lightning techniques
-Can only be taught By ~CoOkie Monster~


±± Declined ±± You failed to explain the basic inner working of this style in a proper manner. Is it simply combining Fire and lightning techniques into your taijutsu? You need to work this out a lot.

 

[Rozzy]

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( Itto no Tsume ) - Way of the fingernails

Type: NinTaijutsu

Background:
During the 2nd shinobi world war, a clan from konohagakure gave rise too a rare fighting style. This clan was known as the Haruno clan. This clan was known for there exceptional chakara control which is how this fighting style was born. A man known as Haruno Shika experimented with his chakara control and discovered a way to manipulate his fingernails with his chakara. He became the master of the fingernail and passed this fighting style down to students who desired to learn this technique. Sadly, this style of fighting was almost forgotten about as not much people learned this art.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
This fighting style allows the user the manipulate their fingernails by infusing their chakara into them for offensive and defensive manuvours. It is a versatile fighting style and has many different techniques. The user can also detach fingernails from his hands and a new set can grow back once chakara is applied properly. Fingernails can be made extremely hard and extremely sharp once infused with chakara correctly.

Additional effects and Restrictions:

-Users hand movements are much faster than an ordinary ninjas movements.
-Master of the Way of the Fingernails is able to extend his fingernails to long range

~User must have at least C rank taijutsu to use this fighting style.
~User must have good chakara control.
~User must be S-class ninja to learn this fighting style.




±± Declined ±± This collides with the Nibi Jinchuriki, Yugito Nii, and also it doesn't actually seem or deserve the title of CFS...