Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 6-

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Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 6-
~Love and Hate: The Sealing Begins~
Links to previous chapters:
Chapter 1:
Chapter 2:
Chapter 3:
Chapter 4:
Chapter 5:


~Chapter Start~​

The outline of 9 Shinobi are visible, the room they are standing in is dark and cold, the only light is provided by a few candles scattered around the room. Madara's EMS is clearly visible, it shines through the darkness.

Madara: The preparations have been made, it is time.

*Madara claps his hands, many more candles light up*

The room is now a lot lighter, revealing the other Shinobi, Tobi and Yokichi stand either side of Madara. The other 6 stand in front of him. The walls and floors are covered in strange markings, in the center of the room stands 7 tables, 6 in the ring, the other in the middle. surrounding the tables is a ring of candles. At the far end of the room lies the Gedo Mazo statue, towering above everything else.

Tobi: We will start the sealing tonight, it will take 3 days and 3 nights, the pain will be intense, but I can assure you, it will be worth it.

*Madara turns to Yokichi.*

Madara: You will be the 7 tailed Jinchuriki

*Yokichi nods*

*Tobi stares at Karin*

Tobi: Karin, you will take control of the 1 tails.

Karin: Whatever, as long as I get my revenge.

Madara: Watch that tongue of your's, girl.

*Tobi ignores Karin ungrateful comment he turns to the rest of the shinobi.*

Tobi: Ishi, you will take the 2 tails, Ryuu, the 3 tails will be yours, Samuru, 4 tails, Shou, 5 tails and finally kimiko, you will be in possession of the 6 tails.

In unison the other 5 Shinobi chant " Yes Tobi - Sama"

Madara: make your way to the sealing table, Karin you take the first one, the other will make your way round clockwise in order of tails and Yokichi will take the middle table.

All the Shinobis follow there instructions, Kimiko approaches timidly, she thinks of her clan, the way they were brutally annihilated, she proceeds to lay down.

Kimiko: *thinking*: I will avenge you, all of you.

Tobi and Madara make their way to the raised platforms, towering above the soon to be Jinchuriki. They begin to form seals in unison. There hands move at equal pace, performing seal after seal in a long sequence.

Tobi: Fuuinjutsu: Reverse Phantom Dragon Seal

Madara: Fuuinjutsu: Reverse Phantom Dragon Seal

A small gust of wind blows out the candles, there is silence. 7 Chakra dragons then form around the circle, the candles relight, A loud roar is heard and they dragons disappear into the Gedo Mazo statue.

Tobi: It has begun.

*The two of the clap there hands together, focusing their chakras*

The dragons roar again, they come racing out of the statue, they have changed from a charka blue to a dark purple, they are carrying the souls of the Bijuu.

Karin *thinking*: What sinister chakra, this is darker than Madara's himself.

The dragons dive into the stomach of the shinobi, ripping a large hole in their clothing, their stomachs begin to burn and sizzle. All of the Shinobi let out a cry of pain, all but Yokichi. He lays there, still, appearing unfazed by the pain

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The scene changes, it is night time in Konoha, Naruto and Hinata are just returning from dinner and a midnight walk through Konoha. The last few lights in the surrounding houses turn off.

Naruto: *Yawn* I think I am going to go to bed, I have a long day tomorrow, preparing for the Chunin exams.

Hinata: N..Naruto, I feel as though I never get a chance to be with you.

Naruto: What do you mean, we had a wonderful tonight didn't we?

*Naruto chuckles, scratching his head*

Hinata walks over and kisses Naruto on the lips, she takes him in to the bedroom. They fall down on the bed, still kissing, the lights fade and the candles flicker.

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The next morning Naruto wakes up early next to Hinata, he kisses her head, she begins to stir. He walks over the the window and opens it, a breeze fills the room, leaves are blowing outside of his window.

*Hinata sits up on the bed*

Hinata: What is wrong Naruto?

*Naruto is deep in thought*

Naruto: Its nothing.... I just have a really bad feeling, as though something big is about to happen

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Deep inside the mountain ranges, Bee is meditating on top of a rock, on the outskirts of Kumogakure. In his subconscious he sits on top of the Hachibi, talking.

Bee: Naruto is finaly Hokage huh?

Hachibi: Yes, it seems that way, was you not listening when your brother told yo....

*The Hachibi pauses mid sentence, he looks disturbed*

Bee: What is it, Hachibi?

Hachibi: Something just doesn't seem right, as though the other Bijuu are in distress, it is probably nothing, but I can't shake the feeling

~Chapter End~

Hope you enjoyed this chapter, I am looking for a tiny bit of help in the upcoming chapters, and you can tell, Bee is alive and will be playing a bit more of a role, and as you can probably tell, I avoided the raps :p I will be useless at it, so if anybody wants to help writing some dialogue for Bee, send me a sample through private message, I will credit you of course on the chapters you help me with :D

But yeah, let me know what you think in a comment! Today was a long chapter as it has dawned on me how much revision I have to do -_- Hopefully this will make up for it if I have to take a few days off! Who knows though, if I get a chance, I might put another out tonight :)

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izinagi54

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get some naruto get some xd
good chapter mate
 
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i just read all 6, and they are really good. I hope kishi does something like this in the end.
 

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i just read all 6, and they are really good. I hope kishi does something like this in the end.

Thanks, glad you liked them :) I think he said the war arc will be the last, not sure if there will be a part 3
 

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Wow thats ma' boy m proud that people Like you put so much of effort for our entertainment purpose thnx a Lot' and yeah' ur fanfic are the besttttttttt :)
 

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i have now read all six chapters AWSOME work keep up the good work i really like what you have done so far PM me when you have releasd your next chapter :)
 

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ohh yeah naruto and hinata lets get it on
 
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