Poem: Farewell

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ThatOneChick Is A Novelist Goddess :overjoy:

:blush: your words are too kind <3
Ty for the support and hopefully I will make you proud when I do finally get my book published :scorps:
Your words encourage me! :pwease: ty so much :hug:
 

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What she said :D
 

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loved this poem...it made me sad ... so touching
this are my favourite lines from the poem

"Even now as the chilling grasp of death rips my soul from my flesh,
You're all that I can think about.
I hate how much I love you,
As you unknowingly toss my feelings away with no regard."
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I loved it, very deep, and it's everything I expect from in a poem. Although it was sad T_T
lol ty xd
<3 it Keep it up ;)
:cool: I will, hopefully lol
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loved this poem...it made me sad ... so touching
this are my favourite lines from the poem

"Even now as the chilling grasp of death rips my soul from my flesh,
You're all that I can think about.
I hate how much I love you,
As you unknowingly toss my feelings away with no regard."
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:T_T: I know so sad!
ty glad you loved it! <3
 

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nice...this is the first time opening FF forum and this thread be the 1st to further open aswell...
it made my day...i now have the crave of writing a poem myself...
although my friend is a fantastic poet....is it ok if i post one of his poem that i adore the most??
 

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nice...this is the first time opening FF forum and this thread be the 1st to further open aswell...
it made my day...i now have the crave of writing a poem myself...
although my friend is a fantastic poet....is it ok if i post one of his poem that i adore the most??
:overjoy: glad to hear you want to write poetry now!
Of course as long as you give credit to him ^_^
O_O <----- Is speechless!
*_* <----- Is amazed!
T_T <----- Is crying!


THAT






WAS







PHENOMENAL!!!!!! <3

:T_T: I'm glad you loved it! <3 Ty so much for reading it! :glomp:
 

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I like that poem so much u make mine seem like shit and some words kinda rhymed thank you for sharing u have made me aspire to do more be more and write more
 

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I like that poem so much u make mine seem like shit and some words kinda rhymed thank you for sharing u have made me aspire to do more be more and write more

:hug: ty for reading!
We all have different words to express ourselves so I'm sure yours is good as well ^_^
lol if they did, it wasn't intentional xd
Glad my poem encouraged you in those ways!
Your words inspire me to continue writing.
Ty so much for sharing feedback! :overjoy:
 

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wow it was pretty good,i like it:D
:pwease:
 
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