New FanFiction: Minato Dragon

[NarutoLuffy313]

Hello Everybody,

I came up with an orginal story that is really epic. Naruto and One Piece mangas inspired me to write this story. I don't plan on writing the first chapter until two-three days from now since our spring starts in a few days.
But here is the plot overview and characters.

Characters:
Main Characters(as of now): Minato Dragon, Yusuke Tenteki, and Hanaka
Support Characters: The Samurai Rookies, and etc.

Plot(I was going to do a story of dragon slayers but fairy tail ruined that idea. So I'm going to do one about Samurais.

Plot Summary: Minato Dragon is a young boy who has the power to control Dragons but he doesn't know it. He hates this power because it isn't his power. He wants to get stronger himself. Mianto's goal is to become the strongest Samurai ever and surpass "that samurai". But one thing is standing in his way Yusuke Tenteki. Yusuke wants to be the strongest samurai too. The thing they don't know is that the way of a samurai is dangerous and ruthless.

End

I doesn't look good right now because i can't spoil all the details and also this is only a summary of the introduction of the chracters.

 

[Yuka]

it looked fine to me.

 

[Necron]

Not bad, but I don't like the main character... U_U

 

[NarutoLuffy313]

it looked fine to me.

Thanks

Not bad, but I don't like the main character... U_U

Thanks, but don't you like the main character xd.

 

[Reborn]

It's pretty sound, the lil information was vauge and it seems you have a fair amount of this in the back of your head as to where you want to take this. I like the idea and am sort of wondering if this is going to inhibit some powers besidses the ability for this one character and/or other characters controlling dragons. It sounds interesting and I'm curious as to how you plan on writing it and I want to see a chapter >_<

To what Necron is saying, I think he's refering to the name of the protagonist you've chosen xd of which I kinda of sympethize with his feelings on the choice of the name U_U

although this is your fiction so you feel free to do whatever with it, I look forward to reading it.

A word of adivice, before you premier the first chapter or pologue, take your time in writing it. Make sure to be really detailed and draw the readers into the chapter (if you begin to feel like you're in the chapter odds are you've got it ). Try to keep it clean meaning correct spelling and grammar, good format, fairly easy to read text. Don't make it too long but then again don't make it short enough you leave several things out.

If you're not the best with grammar (god knows I'm not) then have somebody proof read your chapter for you to give you some help. That's another thing, always re-read the chapter before you post it, helps minimize mistakes.

With that I say good luck and looking forward to the FF ^_^

 

[NarutoLuffy313]

It's pretty sound, the lil information was vauge and it seems you have a fair amount of this in the back of your head as to where you want to take this. I like the idea and am sort of wondering if this is going to inhibit some powers besidses the ability for this one character and/or other characters controlling dragons. It sounds interesting and I'm curious as to how you plan on writing it and I want to see a chapter >_<

To what Necron is saying, I think he's refering to the name of the protagonist you've chosen xd of which I kinda of sympethize with his feelings on the choice of the name U_U

although this is your fiction so you feel free to do whatever with it, I look forward to reading it.

A word of adivice, before you premier the first chapter or pologue, take your time in writing it. Make sure to be really detailed and draw the readers into the chapter (if you begin to feel like you're in the chapter odds are you've got it ). Try to keep it clean meaning correct spelling and grammar, good format, fairly easy to read text. Don't make it too long but then again don't make it short enough you leave several things out.

If you're not the best with grammar (god knows I'm not) then have somebody proof read your chapter for you to give you some help. That's another thing, always re-read the chapter before you post it, helps minimize mistakes.

With that I say good luck and looking forward to the FF ^_^

Don't worry there will be more powers and techniques. I plan on writing the first chapter in about 2 days since i have a whole week from school. Lol about the main chracter, i felt that i needed a name that was really simple and matched the story for the main character. I have the whole story thought out already, i just have to type it lol.

Also thank you for the advice . I look forward to hearing your opinion on the first chapter.

 

[Reborn]

Don't worry there will be more powers and techniques. I plan on writing the first chapter in about 2 days since i have a whole week from school. Lol about the main chracter, i felt that i needed a name that was really simple and matched the story for the main character. I have the whole story thought out already, i just have to type it lol.

Also thank you for the advice . I look forward to hearing your opinion on the first chapter.

Link me your chapter via vm when you release it. Again, as for the name it'll work regardless so long as the story's good. Also, I have something that will be benificial to you as a writer and reader of Fanfiction while you're here on the base.

>>>

You must be registered for see links

<<<

 

[NarutoLuffy313]

Link me your chapter via vm when you release it. Again, as for the name it'll work regardless so long as the story's good. Also, I have something that will be benificial to you as a writer and reader of Fanfiction while you're here on the base.

>>>

You must be registered for see links

<<<

I will send you a vm when it's ready.
Lol i didn't know there was a place like this on narutobase. I'm going to join.
Thanks.

 

[kelevra]

looking foward to a chapter

 

[NarutoLuffy313]

Damn, I'm sorry everyone .

I actually forgot all about this story. I only remember this story when I saw the notebook that had all my drafts for it. I ended changing the other two main characters names and personalities.

There is so many things to do in so little time but I will write this story in a few weeks.

I apologize to everyone.