Typhon learns the way of the Gentle Fist

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There it is. Yes, very nice. :p

Oh wait, you mean this one?



There's a total of eight. If I remember correctly from my Gates test there's one in the brain, one at the heart and then six that go along the mid-line of the body. But to be more specific....

*takes out cheat sheet*

1st Gate - Left hemisphere of the brain
2nd Gate - Right hemisphere of the brain
3rd Gate - Center of the chest
4th Gate - Center line below the 3rd gate
5th Gate - Center line below the 4th gate (top of solar plexus area)
6th Gate - Center line below the 5th gate (bottom of solar plexus area)
7th Gate - Center line below the 6th gate (near the waist)
8th Gate - Left side of the chest (located in the heart)

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Memory was a little off I guess, that gates test was a long time ago. So two in the brain, one in the heart, then five down the center line.

Excellent ^^

Now, Second Gentle Fist Form: Needle Strike/Razor Chakra.

Now you will focus chakra on your hands, but instead of releasing it all at once through the palm, I want you to keep releasing it steadily through your ring and index fingertips. I want you to create a tiny but sharp chakra knife from your fingers. With this form, your chakra will be more localized, and thus will have more physical power. It will be able to cut through the skin, though harmlessly, and affect the Chakra Points inside which you can see with your Byakugan. With this technique, you will not be able to affect organs, but you will be able to aim for thin nerves and veins, especially in weak parts of the body such as the inside of the elbow, the wrists, the armpits, etc.

I want you to imagine that an opponent is throwing all his weight into a right hook. I want you to lean to the left, to dodge his fist, and hit his wrist with your chakra knife. Then step forward and hit his arm pit as you place yourself behind his right shoulder, and then I want you to slam your palm on the back of your head.

You know the drill, I want to know the exact nerves you're aiming for (and area on the brain), and the consequences of such hits. You can compliment this move with a couple of knife fingers to the chakra points around his arm and shoulder, to close the chakra system of his right arm.
 

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I take my battle stance and close my eyes to imagine the situation. I see myself following the series of movements you described in slow motion and visualize the specific points I'm going to target. In my mind I see myself step to my left as he throws a right hook, and as the arm passes in front of my I drive my left hand finger tips into his right wrist focusing the chakra knife directly on the ulnar nerve, severing it and causing a sever lack of mobility in his right hand. As his body continues to move forward from the momentum of the hook, his right armpit comes into focus. I bring my right hand up from a slightly lowered position giving me an angle on his armpit, driving my fingers into it. I use the chakra to cut into the basilic vein of the armpit which is one of the main veins of the arm causing further damage. The momemntum continues to carry his body forward as I slip behind him and I drive my right palm into the back of his head releasing a burst of chakra causing blunt damage damage to the brain (mainly occipital lobe) that disrupts his vision at the least, and possibly knocks him unconscious.
 

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I take my battle stance and close my eyes to imagine the situation. I see myself following the series of movements you described in slow motion and visualize the specific points I'm going to target. In my mind I see myself step to my left as he throws a right hook, and as the arm passes in front of my I drive my left hand finger tips into his right wrist focusing the chakra knife directly on the ulnar nerve, severing it and causing a sever lack of mobility in his right hand. As his body continues to move forward from the momentum of the hook, his right armpit comes into focus. I bring my right hand up from a slightly lowered position giving me an angle on his armpit, driving my fingers into it. I use the chakra to cut into the basilic vein of the armpit which is one of the main veins of the arm causing further damage. The momemntum continues to carry his body forward as I slip behind him and I drive my right palm into the back of his head releasing a burst of chakra causing blunt damage damage to the brain (mainly occipital lobe) that disrupts his vision at the least, and possibly knocks him unconscious.

Excellent. Now i wanted to explain something about the different between this "blade" you create and the Chakra Scappel technique. In essence its similar but severely toned down in both power and in size. Instead of severing the nerves and tendons, it rather injures them, achieving the same or similar results, but without being permanent, whereas chakra scapel would allow you to severe the tendons/nerves and even muscles completely, if aimed properly. This is so because the nerves and tendons are protected by muscles flesh and skin, so the tiny blade isn't enough to severe through them completely.

This technique is most suitable to hit the chakra points, injecting a little bit of chakra there to open them or close them. You do not require profound knowledge over this, nor has it been revealed in the manga, so you are allowed a certain freedom and creativity over the effects this technique does to the chakra and chakra pathway. So you can say you open a few select chakra points, without specifying much, forcing the body of your enemy to surge a blast of chakra through the arm of your opponent, which would make him loose control over a jutsu he could be holding at the moment, numbing or actually injuring his hand as the chakra bursts through the opened chakra points and damages the tissues on its way out ( Failed Chidori or Rasengan, for example). Likewise, you can close the chakra points, making such jutsus vanish and preventing or limitating your opponent from releasing chakra through that arm for a couple of turns (max 2 without a technique), and thus preventing handseals. No chakra should mean a bit of exhaustion whereas a burst of chakra would leave an uncomfortable tingling sensation, I'd say.

These can be allying to injures to the tendons and nerves, limiting movement and causing physical exhaustion, turning the arm useless.

Whoever says arm, says any other limb, it's up to your creativity.

Also, when we limit the chakra to half for example (in something techniques you'll see that) it means your opponent is limited to B-Rank, if limited to 75% it disables use of S-Rank and above, meaning that your enemy can only use up to A-Rank. Etc etc. When we speak about draining or limiting chakra on your enemy the effect is regarding to the power of Ninjutsu or Genjutsu that your enemy can use (elemental or not).

If you do not have questions, I want you to give me 2 combos with the second form only and a 3rd combo with a mixture of both forms.
 

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Its scary how many active training threads there are. O_O

I was going to ask about the difference between this and chakra scalpels, and how the 25%/50%/75% chakra blocking actually affected stuff, but you explained both very well. :p


*stretches out a little before doing the combos*

Lets do this.....KAGE BUNSHIN!

*three clones poof into existence*


(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.


I extend my hand towards one of the clones and tell him to attack. The clone charges at me with a right jab to which I duck below. As I lower my body I unleash a flurry of jabs with my fingers towards the clone's legs. I start at the upper thigh and drive my left hand into the left thigh and right hand into the right thigh cutting off the femoral nerve. As I do this the clone begins to bring up its left leg in an attempted kick to the side of my head. I duck underneath the kick getting very low to the ground and let the clone's momentum turn it around. With its back now facing me I again attack the legs, this time hitting the sciatic nerve along several points. Having taken out the main nerves of the front and back of the legs, the clone collapses. With it kneeling before me I deliver a quick succession of strikes towards the base of its head hitting the area of the brainstem, causing enough damage to destroy the clone.

Without much of a delay the second clone comes at me with a left hook. I duck under the hook while also stepping to my right. As I move under his arm and to the side of his body I deliver a series of strikes aimed at the tenketsu points of his left side, hitting and sealing a number of them. The clone attempts to use his momentum to deliver a swinging back elbow with his right arm, which I block using my left forearm. Now at the clone's back I deliver another fast and numerous combo sealing the tenketsu points of its back. The clone then turns to face my while taking a step back, I follow with a step forward and continue my combo striking it in the chest and stomach dozens of times, sealing a majority of its remaining tenketsu points causing it to poof away.

I then turn my attention to the third clone, who has elected to take the defensive position. I charge towards the clone, but before coming within hand to hand combat distance I thrust my right palm forward releasing a burst of chakra. The chakra hits the clone causing some external damage, but more importantly it opens up the clone's defense. With his defenses now open I shape my hands like daggers and bring them down on the clone's shoulders just behind the clavicle and near the base of the neck striking the brachial plexus causing immediate pain and numbness down both of its arms. I then rear back with both of my arms and drive them forward with open palms aimed at the clone's solar plexus releasing a burst of chakra on contact. The solar plexus pushes air out of the clone's lungs and becomes damage, causing the clone to have the wind knocked out of it. With the clone all but dispersed I unleash one final combo on its vital areas (heart, lungs, liver, etc.) that cause chakra to build into a ray from its back into a massive wave of destruction.


(Hakke Kuushou) - 8 Trigrams Air Palm
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Close-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30(+5 if they hit an object)
Description: The user pushes chakra out of there palm that blows away there opponent.


(Hakke Hazan Hogeki) – Eight Trigrams Crumbling Mountain Crusher
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user strikes the enemies vital area whiles discharging chakra within the enemies body until it bursts from his back into the form of a small thin beam that rapidly enlarges into a massive mountain-destroying wave of chakra.
 

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Its scary how many active training threads there are. O_O

I was going to ask about the difference between this and chakra scalpels, and how the 25%/50%/75% chakra blocking actually affected stuff, but you explained both very well. :p


*stretches out a little before doing the combos*

Lets do this.....KAGE BUNSHIN!

*three clones poof into existence*


(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.


I extend my hand towards one of the clones and tell him to attack. The clone charges at me with a right jab to which I duck below. As I lower my body I unleash a flurry of jabs with my fingers towards the clone's legs. I start at the upper thigh and drive my left hand into the left thigh and right hand into the right thigh cutting off the femoral nerve. As I do this the clone begins to bring up its left leg in an attempted kick to the side of my head. I duck underneath the kick getting very low to the ground and let the clone's momentum turn it around. With its back now facing me I again attack the legs, this time hitting the sciatic nerve along several points. Having taken out the main nerves of the front and back of the legs, the clone collapses. With it kneeling before me I deliver a quick succession of strikes towards the base of its head hitting the area of the brainstem, causing enough damage to destroy the clone.

Without much of a delay the second clone comes at me with a left hook. I duck under the hook while also stepping to my right. As I move under his arm and to the side of his body I deliver a series of strikes aimed at the tenketsu points of his left side, hitting and sealing a number of them. The clone attempts to use his momentum to deliver a swinging back elbow with his right arm, which I block using my left forearm. Now at the clone's back I deliver another fast and numerous combo sealing the tenketsu points of its back. The clone then turns to face my while taking a step back, I follow with a step forward and continue my combo striking it in the chest and stomach dozens of times, sealing a majority of its remaining tenketsu points causing it to poof away.

I then turn my attention to the third clone, who has elected to take the defensive position. I charge towards the clone, but before coming within hand to hand combat distance I thrust my right palm forward releasing a burst of chakra. The chakra hits the clone causing some external damage, but more importantly it opens up the clone's defense. With his defenses now open I shape my hands like daggers and bring them down on the clone's shoulders just behind the clavicle and near the base of the neck striking the brachial plexus causing immediate pain and numbness down both of its arms. I then rear back with both of my arms and drive them forward with open palms aimed at the clone's solar plexus releasing a burst of chakra on contact. The solar plexus pushes air out of the clone's lungs and becomes damage, causing the clone to have the wind knocked out of it. With the clone all but dispersed I unleash one final combo on its vital areas (heart, lungs, liver, etc.) that cause chakra to build into a ray from its back into a massive wave of destruction.


(Hakke Kuushou) - 8 Trigrams Air Palm
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Close-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30(+5 if they hit an object)
Description: The user pushes chakra out of there palm that blows away there opponent.


(Hakke Hazan Hogeki) – Eight Trigrams Crumbling Mountain Crusher
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user strikes the enemies vital area whiles discharging chakra within the enemies body until it bursts from his back into the form of a small thin beam that rapidly enlarges into a massive mountain-destroying wave of chakra.

Perfection!

These are the techniques that can be used if you understand the second form (you will notice that I'll repeat some of the jutsus I gave you on the first form. This means that you can describe the way you preform said techniques every way you want, choosing to use the techniques as a palm strike or a finger blade):

(Hyuuga Ryuu Taijutsu) - Hyuuga Style Taijutsu
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: A mini barrage of gentle fist that equal 16 strikes.

Instead of doing 16 palm strikes, use 16 finger thrusts. Likewise, you can mix palm strikes and finger thrusts, like the combo I made you preform.

(Shugo Hakke Rokujuuyonshou) - Protective 8 Trigrams 64 Strikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack/defense
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A defense that can block off attacks and an attack that closes 64 tenketsu and limits chakra flow for one turn after the opponent is hit by it.

Randomly thrust your fingers on 64 chakra points.

(Hakke Rokujuuyonshou) - 8 Trigrams 64 Strikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: Attack that closes 64 tenketsu and limits chakra to half for one turn after the opponent is hit by it.

same.

(Byākugan Sandageki) – Byakugan Three Strikes
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user grabs the opponents extended arm, flipping them around and then strikes them thrice on the back, sending them flying.

Though more efficient with palm strikes, you can also try to preform 3 finger thrusts on the shoulder or neck area, for more localized damage which would still be quite usefull. Though with palms strikes the fatality is easier and you don't have to think as hard (Back of the lungs, back of the heart, back of the head etc).

(Hakke Hyakunijuuhachishou) - 8 Trigrams 128 Strikes
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: Attack that closes 128 tenketsu and limits chakra to half for three turns after the opponent is hit by it.

(Hakke Sanbyakurokujyuuisshisa) - 8 Trigrams 361 Strikes
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Attack that closes 361 tenketsu and seals chakra completely for two turns after the opponent is hit by it.

(Hakke Kasui Hirate Nami) – Eight Trigrams Stream Palm Wave
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user attacks the enemy target with a two handed Gentle Fist several times from all angles before dashing in front of them and charging chakra within their palms and striking the enemy, draining their chakra.

You can preform finger thrusts for the initial barrage. Or combos, of course.


(Hakuro Tenbu) – Heavens Dance of Hazy White
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Offensive
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60 (- 15 to user from explosion)
Description: The users hand turn white, with chakra coating and flowing through them. Then they take several swipes at the opponent, and finishes by bringing together both their hands. This creates a large explosion that damages and knocks back the opponent.

Same, initial barrage can be preformed anyway you like. As in the previous technique, only the final blow must be done with the palms.



Questions? Afterwards we move to the 3rd and final form.
 

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Nope, I got it. ^_^

On to form #3!
 

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Nope, I got it. ^_^

On to form #3!

Right, so one more thing to add:

in our RP its not defined exactly the significance of reducing the chakra of your enemy since in our RP chakra is pretty much not counted.

However, in my opinion and lili's its more about making the enemy feel Weakness, slow handseal and jutsu making speed, it should remove the "speciality" bonus of less handseals for a certain element, etc etc. Basically any bonus the user may have in terms of chakra control and specialty. In my opinion, it should also reduce the rank one can use, such as no Forbidden and maybe S rank, but that part is a stretch, for it should prevent the opponent from using complex jutsus. Go with your reasoning.

The third form is the complete control over every chakra point of your body: if you gain enough chakra mastery, you'll be able to release chakra from all chakra points of your body. With this knowledge you'll be able to release chakra burst not only from your palms, but from every part of your body (being so that extremities will always be easier to be controlled).

Once you've gained control over your chakra points, you can release chakra from all of them at once. If you spin, you will be able to create a chakra barrier that will protect you from physical invasions. Applying chakra control you can make it more sharp or more thick, etc.

The techniques are:

(Hakkeshou Kaiten) - 8 Trigrams Heavenly Spin/Rotation

Rank: D
Typeefence
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:N/A(+20 if used to block an attack)
Description:The user pushes chakra out of all there tenketsu and spin createing a dome shield that can fend off most attacks.

(Chou Hakkeshou Kaiten) - 8 Trigrams Giant Rotation

Rank: C
Typeefence/Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: A rotation on a bigger scale that leaves behind a huge crater.

(Hakke Irounaku Kaiten) – Eight Trigrams Absolute Heavenly Spin
Rank: S
Type: Offensive, Defense
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: This jutsu is a larger more powerful version of the Eight Trigrams Palm Heavenly Spin.

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(Hakkeshou Kuuten) - 8 Trigrams Heavenly Sky

Rank: C
Type:Attack/Defence
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description:A rotation were the user makes his/her chakra into razor sharp lines and spins to attack and defend all in one move.

Once you've mastered those techniques, you'll be able to create more localized burst of chakra, like you did in the First Form, but releasing the chakra from other parts of your body, besides your hands.

So you can punch someone and release a burst of chakra, and then retract your arm and strike with your elbow backwards, releasing another chakra burst. The same with your ankles and knees. Eventually all parts of your body will be able to repel someone physically. If someone touches your back, you can send a chakra burst to repel the hand. The stronger you are, the stronger the bursts are.
 

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*scribbles down notes*

Got it......am I supposed to be doing something now? o.o
 

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Got it......am I supposed to be doing something now? o.o

Lol i was thinking you would ask two things: These bursts of blunt chakra are strong as what? a direct full strength Strong Fist Punch? Meaning that this form does external damage instead of internal one right?

To that the answer would be:

And nope, they're exactly the same as the ones we did for the first Form, remember the first part of the training, right? They are as strong as a punch, as strong of a punch as your character can punch, but they are inflicted directly to the internal organs. It produces little to no damage externally, unless the technique states otherwise, but usually, even the techniques that burst through walls are more like collapsing the wall from within.

Of course, if you punch someone, and in addition to that you use gentle fist, you will cause damage both internal and external.

Let's put this to march. I want you to create 3 different and long combos, using whatever you wan (1st Form (Palm Strikes), 2nd Form (Finger Razor Blade) and 3rd Form (Heavenly Rotation, Elbow Strikes, Knee Strikes, Fist Strikes, Headbutts, Etc).
 

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When you say they're the same as the first form, you're referring to the elbows/knees/headbutts right? Or do the rotations fall in that category too? I always thought they just did the normal physical damage.

*makes three clones again*

Combo #1

One of the clones comes at me with a right palm thrust aimed at my upper left shoulder. As he does this I use my left forearm to force his thrust wide while turn my body to face his extended arm. Using my left hand I catch his arm at the elbow while its extended and then use my right hand in the second form to hit several locations along his right side starting at the arm pit and moving down to the hip. The first target I hit is the ulnar nerve just under the arm causing numbness in his right arm. I then hit several spots between the ribs causing damage to several subcostal/intercostal nerves, causing slight difficulty in breathing, as well as several chakra points, shutting them off. I finish at the hip hitting the lateral femoral cutaneous nerve, weakening his right leg. I twist the arm and duck under it causing him to bend over slightly and with my left hand around the elbow and right hand hooked on the arm pit I pull his body towards me while driving my knee into the clone's solar plexus, releasing a burst of chakra into its body to cause immediate internal damage. This causes the clone to keel over after which I focus chakra to my right elbow and bring it down on the back of his head, directly hitting its brain with chakra and knocking it unconscious, causing it to poof.


Combo #2

The second clone come at me but I begin to attack before he can, swinging my right leg at his left side I connect and release of burst of chakra that damages the descending portion of his large intestine (possible causing the feeling of the runs). He staggers to his right a bit and recovers, launching a combo consisting of a right hook followed by a left uppercut. As the right hook comes at me I step back getting slightly out of its reach. Then with the left uppercut coming towards my chin I lean back and reach my hands down to the ground (backwards) going into a backwards cartwheel motion. At the same time I channel chakra to my right foot which comes up under the tricep of the clone's left arm. The toes of the foot connect with the arm and damage the radial nerve, weakening the left arm. I land in a crouched position and burst forward with lion shaped gloves of chakra over my two arms, smashing them into the clone and poofing him away.

(Jūho Sōshiken) – Gentle Step Twin Lion Fists
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user forms two large lion-shaped shrouds of chakra around their hands, then thrusts them forwards at the opponent in a spinning motion to confuse and throw off the opponents aim before striking them.

Combo #3

As I finish that move, the third clone, in cowardly fashion, tries to throw thee kunai at me from my back right side. Using my byakugan's 360 degree vision I see the sneak attack. I release chakra from each of my tenketsu points and spin my body around, releasing the chakra into a protective dome that throws the kunai away.


(Hakkeshou Kaiten) - 8 Trigrams Heavenly Spin/Rotation
Rank: D
Type: Defence
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A(+20 if used to block an attack)
Description:The user pushes chakra out of all there tenketsu and spin creating a dome shield that can fend off most attacks.


He then charges at me with a composed strike of second form attacks aiming for chakra points of my shoulders and chest. I use small and concise movements of my hands to smack away the attacks each time, and with each parry I strike a different tenketsu point, stopping the flow of chakra to his forearms and hands. I then counter attack and chop the sides of his neck with both of my hands, releasing a burst of chakra into his thyroid gland. The gland's activity is slightly disrupted causing a drop in his metabolism and an overall feeling of sluggishness. As he stumbles back a step as my hands become coated in white chakra. I make numerous swipes at the clone's torso closing a tenketsu point with each strike, culminating in me bringing my hands together causing a minor shockwave that forces the clone back.

(Hakuro Tenbu) – Heavens Dance of Hazy White
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Close
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60 (- 15 to user from explosion)
Description: The users hand turn white, with chakra coating and flowing through them. Then they take several swipes at the opponent, and finishes by bringing together both their hands. This creates a large explosion that damages and knocks back the opponent.

As the clone is forced back I focus large amounts of chakra to my tenketsu points and release them while spinning, creating a large and more powerful heavenly rotation that decimates the clone.


(Hakke Irounaku Kaiten) – Eight Trigrams Absolute Heavenly Spin
Rank: S
Type: Offensive, Defense
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: This jutsu is a larger more powerful version of the Eight Trigrams Palm Heavenly Spin.


Free form taijutsu against yourself is hard. xd
 

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When you say they're the same as the first form, you're referring to the elbows/knees/headbutts right? Or do the rotations fall in that category too? I always thought they just did the normal physical damage.

*makes three clones again*

Combo #1

One of the clones comes at me with a right palm thrust aimed at my upper left shoulder. As he does this I use my left forearm to force his thrust wide while turn my body to face his extended arm. Using my left hand I catch his arm at the elbow while its extended and then use my right hand in the second form to hit several locations along his right side starting at the arm pit and moving down to the hip. The first target I hit is the ulnar nerve just under the arm causing numbness in his right arm. I then hit several spots between the ribs causing damage to several subcostal/intercostal nerves, causing slight difficulty in breathing, as well as several chakra points, shutting them off. I finish at the hip hitting the lateral femoral cutaneous nerve, weakening his right leg. I twist the arm and duck under it causing him to bend over slightly and with my left hand around the elbow and right hand hooked on the arm pit I pull his body towards me while driving my knee into the clone's solar plexus, releasing a burst of chakra into its body to cause immediate internal damage. This causes the clone to keel over after which I focus chakra to my right elbow and bring it down on the back of his head, directly hitting its brain with chakra and knocking it unconscious, causing it to poof.


Combo #2

The second clone come at me but I begin to attack before he can, swinging my right leg at his left side I connect and release of burst of chakra that damages the descending portion of his large intestine (possible causing the feeling of the runs). He staggers to his right a bit and recovers, launching a combo consisting of a right hook followed by a left uppercut. As the right hook comes at me I step back getting slightly out of its reach. Then with the left uppercut coming towards my chin I lean back and reach my hands down to the ground (backwards) going into a backwards cartwheel motion. At the same time I channel chakra to my right foot which comes up under the tricep of the clone's left arm. The toes of the foot connect with the arm and damage the radial nerve, weakening the left arm. I land in a crouched position and burst forward with lion shaped gloves of chakra over my two arms, smashing them into the clone and poofing him away.

(Jūho Sōshiken) – Gentle Step Twin Lion Fists
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user forms two large lion-shaped shrouds of chakra around their hands, then thrusts them forwards at the opponent in a spinning motion to confuse and throw off the opponents aim before striking them.

Combo #3

As I finish that move, the third clone, in cowardly fashion, tries to throw thee kunai at me from my back right side. Using my byakugan's 360 degree vision I see the sneak attack. I release chakra from each of my tenketsu points and spin my body around, releasing the chakra into a protective dome that throws the kunai away.


(Hakkeshou Kaiten) - 8 Trigrams Heavenly Spin/Rotation
Rank: D
Type: Defence
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A(+20 if used to block an attack)
Description:The user pushes chakra out of all there tenketsu and spin creating a dome shield that can fend off most attacks.


He then charges at me with a composed strike of second form attacks aiming for chakra points of my shoulders and chest. I use small and concise movements of my hands to smack away the attacks each time, and with each parry I strike a different tenketsu point, stopping the flow of chakra to his forearms and hands. I then counter attack and chop the sides of his neck with both of my hands, releasing a burst of chakra into his thyroid gland. The gland's activity is slightly disrupted causing a drop in his metabolism and an overall feeling of sluggishness. As he stumbles back a step as my hands become coated in white chakra. I make numerous swipes at the clone's torso closing a tenketsu point with each strike, culminating in me bringing my hands together causing a minor shockwave that forces the clone back.

(Hakuro Tenbu) – Heavens Dance of Hazy White
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Close
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60 (- 15 to user from explosion)
Description: The users hand turn white, with chakra coating and flowing through them. Then they take several swipes at the opponent, and finishes by bringing together both their hands. This creates a large explosion that damages and knocks back the opponent.

As the clone is forced back I focus large amounts of chakra to my tenketsu points and release them while spinning, creating a large and more powerful heavenly rotation that decimates the clone.


(Hakke Irounaku Kaiten) – Eight Trigrams Absolute Heavenly Spin
Rank: S
Type: Offensive, Defense
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: This jutsu is a larger more powerful version of the Eight Trigrams Palm Heavenly Spin.


Free form taijutsu against yourself is hard. xd

Perfection!!!

And the Kaitens and Hinata's trade mark techniques (both her shield and the twin lion thing) do external damage also. However, the main damage on your enemy will always be internal, even if the blunt force of the chakra causes external damage as it passes through his body/hits his body.

Ok, couple of things to add:

-When you open up tenketsu it makes chakra poor from them in incontrolled manner, damaging the tissue above it. As you close them, it makes damage by restricting the chakra flow and making it impossible to mold chakra. The more tenketsu you close, the less chakra your opponnent can mold. Closing all 361 leaves the opponent inconscient.

-I generally like to open and close enemy tenketsu at random (about 10 or so) and then end with a giant palm blast, inserting my chakra into the enemy network forcefully making chakra burst from the open tenektsu.

-You can make blunt chakra blasts (similar to empty palm) from any part of your body but they'll always be more powerfull from your extremities (elbows, knees, palms, feet, etc).

-Gentle fist can be done in free form but in this manner its only as strong as B-Rank, meaning that sometimes you'll need to post the moves. Also, any blunt chakra blast from your elbow, knees, etc is about the same power/force as a strong direct punch, meaning that if your opponent is coming from behind you with a kunai you can simply burst chakra from your back, knocking the kunai of his hand and sending him a couple of feet back without actually needing to spend a technique.

-Remember that in our RP your tracking ability is the same as a 3t sharingan and that hyuuga bios have both great agility (speed of fine movement of the limbs, coordenation, etc), above average speed and great chakra control.

-You can, with gentle fist, dispel, without pain, most Genjutsu (this is something i figured out myself. If you want to know how, PM me).


Now, all i want you to do is to go to the jutsu list and to the AACT list and read all the gentle fist techniques there. Then, compare with all the ones i posted and post those i didn't post (my list may be a bit outdated) and any question you may have about them.

After that, the training is complete.
 

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I couldn't find any techs on the AACT list, but I read over the ones on the official list and I think you had the majority of them on those lists.

I would definitely like the secrets to dispelling genjutsu, so please PM that to me. :p
 

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I couldn't find any techs on the AACT list, but I read over the ones on the official list and I think you had the majority of them on those lists.

I would definitely like the secrets to dispelling genjutsu, so please PM that to me. :p

Ok^^ Btw, lets not forget something i might have missed. Kaitens and the chakra technique with advanced shape manipulation can compete with equal rank elemental techniques. However, most of these will act as one rank lower than the elemental technique you are facing. The exception for me is mountain crusher (and relating techniques) and wind techniques. Since they have the same effect i'd say that for the most part they are equal. That completes our training. I hope you enjoyed it. Any pointers? did you find this method useful and good?
 

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Ok^^ Btw, lets not forget something i might have missed. Kaitens and the chakra technique with advanced shape manipulation can compete with equal rank elemental techniques. However, most of these will act as one rank lower than the elemental technique you are facing. The exception for me is mountain crusher (and relating techniques) and wind techniques. Since they have the same effect i'd say that for the most part they are equal. That completes our training. I hope you enjoyed it. Any pointers? did you find this method useful and good?


I did enjoy it, very helpful. Its much better than the typical "here is this jutsu, this is how you do it, now do it". Actually had to think in this training. :p

Any chance we can do other stuff while we're here? :pwease:
 
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