I agree with him but great work !It's awesome, but it would be better without the text.
The text also doesn't fit in with the rest, like it's not the correct font. (i hope that's the right word)
text is bad also tag is lil messy
well dont mess light as much as you can see render is shaded on its right so light must come from the left mostly and from right bottom maybe
you did it from right top and left bottom xd