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Just remember that they're not as great as regular Shadow Clones.



Charge lightning in to a sword. *Tosses you one.*



Do the ram hand seal, manipulate your chakra and raise your hand into the sky. Then, an electrical discharge is triggered shocking the opponent.
*I grab the sword in mid air, but gives it back*
-Don't worry sempai, I have my own sword! ^^
*I pull out my black-bladed katana, and then I charge raiton chakra into my right hand... I then let the raiton run on the katana, and focus on the blue energy with shaping manipulation, to suround the blade as an aura... I make the edge as thin as I can, and make the raiton chakra move constantly in great speed, vibrating the blade, and aucaumenting it's lethality... I then simply swing the katana (with puting no efort into it) on a boulder, and I cut it in half...*
-Yeah, this jutsu is awsome to combine with kenjutsu! ^^

*I then start focusing in a simular maneer with the Flying thundr god jutsu, perform the ram seal, and raise my hands to the sky, sending an invisible bolt of energy. This starts an electric disscharge of blue lighting, that hits the kage bushin almost instantly!...*
-Wow, this jutsu is very fast as well! ^^

-I think the next thing on the list is the chidori? ^^
 

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*I grab the sword in mid air, but gives it back*
-Don't worry sempai, I have my own sword! ^^
*I pull out my black-bladed katana, and then I charge raiton chakra into my right hand... I then let the raiton run on the katana, and focus on the blue energy with shaping manipulation, to suround the blade as an aura... I make the edge as thin as I can, and make the raiton chakra move constantly in great speed, vibrating the blade, and aucaumenting it's lethality... I then simply swing the katana (with puting no efort into it) on a boulder, and I cut it in half...*
-Yeah, this jutsu is awsome to combine with kenjutsu! ^^

*I then start focusing in a simular maneer with the Flying thundr god jutsu, perform the ram seal, and raise my hands to the sky, sending an invisible bolt of energy. This starts an electric disscharge of blue lighting, that hits the kage bushin almost instantly!...*
-Wow, this jutsu is very fast as well! ^^

-I think the next thing on the list is the chidori? ^^
Not yet!

(Raiton: Dai Denki hōden no Jutsu ) - Lightning Release: Large Electrical Discharge Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: By Performing the ram hand seal the user will manipulate their chakra and they then raise their hand to the sky and an electrical discharge is triggered shocking the target.
Do the ram hand seal, manipulate your chakra and raise your hand into the sky. Then, an electrical discharge is triggered shocking the opponent.
 

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Not yet!



Do the ram hand seal, manipulate your chakra and raise your hand into the sky. Then, an electrical discharge is triggered shocking the opponent.
*I perform the ram seal, gathring raiton chakra. The chakra starts to make the static sound... Some sparks show up around my hands, still performing the ram hand seal... I then raise my hands towards the sky, triggering an electrical discharge that shocks the shadow clone in front of me... *
-Is that better sempei? ^^
 

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*I perform the ram seal, gathring raiton chakra. The chakra starts to make the static sound... Some sparks show up around my hands, still performing the ram hand seal... I then raise my hands towards the sky, triggering an electrical discharge that shocks the shadow clone in front of me... *
-Is that better sempei? ^^
Yes. Make sure to focus on the little things in the technique, that's where you'll get the details.

This time, a little quiz. I want you to go through every technique, and tell me how you would use it personally, and how you would counter it:

(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Lightning Fang
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user sends an electrical essence into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location.

(Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After the user performs the Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare hand seals they then summon Four Giant Pillars surrounding the enemy target and then the user shoots out bolts of lightning, binding the target in place and possibly doing damage to them.

(Raiton: Kangekiha) – Lightning Release: Wave of Inspiration
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 25
Damage point: 30 (normally) 50 (when used in conjunction with water technique)
Description: After using a Water Style technique, the user releases a wave of electricity that can electrocute any water within range, electrocuting and knocking back an opponent in contact with the water. When used without a water technique, its power is moderate. The technique can be used extremely quickly, so that it finishes almost in conjunction with the previous jutsu.

(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Utage) - Lightning Release: Lightning Burial ~ Banquet of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.

(Raiton: Hiraishin) – Lightning Release: Flying Thunder God
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user raises their hands to the air to draw in lightning chakra from the sky and then shoot the lightning energy at the enemy target.

(Raiton: Horyu Raika no Jutsu) – Lightning Release: Discharge Lightning Calamity Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will create a field of water under the opponent before shocking them with a lightning attack.

(Raiton: Torunedo Raitoningu) - Lightning Release: Tornado Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user generates lightning-based chakra in his/her palms that they can whip around in order to attack their opponent.

(Raiton: Raijū Hashiri no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Beast Running Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user channels his lighting chakra to his dominant hand and then radiates it out making it a hound shaped stream of lighting which stays attached to the users hand through a bolt of lighting.

(Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.

(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself infused with his lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
Note: Can only use lightning based techniques up to B rank.

(Chō Biburāto Raitontō) - Super Vibrating Lightning Release Sword
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (+15 to kenjutsu and standard attacks)
Description: The user channels their lightning chakra into a blade, increasing its vibrating frequency and giving it more cutting power than standard wind techniques.

(Raiton: Dai Denki hōden no Jutsu ) - Lightning Release: Large Electrical Discharge Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: By Performing the ram hand seal the user will manipulate their chakra and they then raise their hand to the sky and an electrical discharge is triggered shocking the target.
 

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(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Lightning Fang
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user sends an electrical essence into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location.
I'd use it if I needed a fast, hard to avoid attack... I'd Counter it with an equally powerfull and fast raiton attack, like the lighting fang itself...

(Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After the user performs the Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare hand seals they then summon Four Giant Pillars surrounding the enemy target and then the user shoots out bolts of lightning, binding the target in place and possibly doing damage to them.
I'd use it in order to trap my enemy in a raiton kage, to stop his movements... I'd counter it with a close range futon jutsu of B-rank or higher, like a whirlwind that would also project me out of the cage...
(Raiton: Kangekiha) – Lightning Release: Wave of Inspiration
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 25
Damage point: 30 (normally) 50 (when used in conjunction with water technique)
Description: After using a Water Style technique, the user releases a wave of electricity that can electrocute any water within range, electrocuting and knocking back an opponent in contact with the water. When used without a water technique, its power is moderate. The technique can be used extremely quickly, so that it finishes almost in conjunction with the previous jutsu.
I'd use it if I or an ally had previusly used a whater jutsu, earlyer this turn, to create greater effects... I would also use it if I needed an attack that hits quickly...I would counter it with a wind technique of B rank or hiher, that would hit the bolt and nullyfy the effects...
(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Utage) - Lightning Release: Lightning Burial ~ Banquet of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.
I would chose this jutsu if I was agaist multiple opponets at the same time, and wanted an accurate jutsu to hit them... I would counter it with a b-rank or higher large futon jutsu, like a whirlwind in the path of the curent...
(Raiton: Hiraishin) – Lightning Release: Flying Thunder God
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user raises their hands to the air to draw in lightning chakra from the sky and then shoot the lightning energy at the enemy target.
Similar to the lighting fang jutsu, I would use it as a fast way to attack an enemy close to me, since Natural lighting is faster than my raiton. I would counter it with an equally strong attack based on Natural lighting, such as lighting fang...

(Raiton: Horyu Raika no Jutsu) – Lightning Release: Discharge Lightning Calamity Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will create a field of water under the opponent before shocking them with a lightning attack.
I would use this jutsu if I wanted to attack my enemy and wet the land bellow him in one move... It would make an exelent combo with the wave of inspiration and the four pillar bind jutsu, so that I would trap my enemy on a wet land, magnifying the power of my Raiton jutsu such as wave of inspiration... A good way to counter it would be to use an earth technique on the ground bellow be, quickly making a pilar of doton bellow me that would nullify the effects of the wet land, and put me out of the range of the lighting bolt...
(Raiton: Torunedo Raitoningu) - Lightning Release: Tornado Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user generates lightning-based chakra in his/her palms that they can whip around in order to attack their opponent.
I would use this jutsu to push my enemy forward, and insure he gets hit by an other jutsu... I would counter it by using a wind jutsu to push me away of the range of this jutsu...
(Raiton: Raijū Hashiri no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Beast Running Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user channels his lighting chakra to his dominant hand and then radiates it out making it a hound shaped stream of lighting which stays attached to the users hand through a bolt of lighting.
I would use it if I needed to have a zutsu that can easyly be directet to the target multiple times... I would counter it by weting it with a suiton jutsu, since it is atached to the user's hands and he would suffer the consequences...
(Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.
I would use this jutsu if I needed a quick and direct hit to one or multiple opponets... I could counter it with a wall of futon to nullyfy the spear...
(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself infused with his lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
Note: Can only use lightning based techniques up to B rank.
A very usefull jutsu, both for offence and deffance... If I previously used it, I can substitue it with me, when hit by an enemy jutsu, while I use an other... It can also use raiton jutsu up to B rank, so it can be a usefull ally... I would fight agaist this jutsu with a jutsu that targets multiple enemies, like the faulse darkness spear...
(Chō Biburāto Raitontō) - Super Vibrating Lightning Release Sword
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (+15 to kenjutsu and standard attacks)
Description: The user channels their lightning chakra into a blade, increasing its vibrating frequency and giving it more cutting power than standard wind techniques.
I would use this jutsu with my sword, adding more power to my attacks, especially combined with kenjutsu... I could also add more power to weapons like my kunai or shuriken...
(Raiton: Dai Denki hōden no Jutsu ) - Lightning Release: Large Electrical Discharge Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: By Performing the ram hand seal the user will manipulate their chakra and they then raise their hand to the sky and an electrical discharge is triggered shocking the target.
Simular to the lighting fang technique, I would use it for a quick attack of raiton, based on real lighting... I would counter it with a simular raiton jutsu, like the lighting fang, wich is one of the few jutsu fast enough to counter...

-I hope I did a good job, sempei! ^^
 

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(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Lightning Fang
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user sends an electrical essence into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location.
I'd use it if I needed a fast, hard to avoid attack... I'd Counter it with an equally powerfull and fast raiton attack, like the lighting fang itself...

(Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After the user performs the Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare hand seals they then summon Four Giant Pillars surrounding the enemy target and then the user shoots out bolts of lightning, binding the target in place and possibly doing damage to them.
I'd use it in order to trap my enemy in a raiton kage, to stop his movements... I'd counter it with a close range futon jutsu of B-rank or higher, like a whirlwind that would also project me out of the cage...
(Raiton: Kangekiha) – Lightning Release: Wave of Inspiration
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 25
Damage point: 30 (normally) 50 (when used in conjunction with water technique)
Description: After using a Water Style technique, the user releases a wave of electricity that can electrocute any water within range, electrocuting and knocking back an opponent in contact with the water. When used without a water technique, its power is moderate. The technique can be used extremely quickly, so that it finishes almost in conjunction with the previous jutsu.
I'd use it if I or an ally had previusly used a whater jutsu, earlyer this turn, to create greater effects... I would also use it if I needed an attack that hits quickly...I would counter it with a wind technique of B rank or hiher, that would hit the bolt and nullyfy the effects...
(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Utage) - Lightning Release: Lightning Burial ~ Banquet of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.
I would chose this jutsu if I was agaist multiple opponets at the same time, and wanted an accurate jutsu to hit them... I would counter it with a b-rank or higher large futon jutsu, like a whirlwind in the path of the curent...
(Raiton: Hiraishin) – Lightning Release: Flying Thunder God
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user raises their hands to the air to draw in lightning chakra from the sky and then shoot the lightning energy at the enemy target.
Similar to the lighting fang jutsu, I would use it as a fast way to attack an enemy close to me, since Natural lighting is faster than my raiton. I would counter it with an equally strong attack based on Natural lighting, such as lighting fang...

(Raiton: Horyu Raika no Jutsu) – Lightning Release: Discharge Lightning Calamity Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will create a field of water under the opponent before shocking them with a lightning attack.
I would use this jutsu if I wanted to attack my enemy and wet the land bellow him in one move... It would make an exelent combo with the wave of inspiration and the four pillar bind jutsu, so that I would trap my enemy on a wet land, magnifying the power of my Raiton jutsu such as wave of inspiration... A good way to counter it would be to use an earth technique on the ground bellow be, quickly making a pilar of doton bellow me that would nullify the effects of the wet land, and put me out of the range of the lighting bolt...
(Raiton: Torunedo Raitoningu) - Lightning Release: Tornado Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user generates lightning-based chakra in his/her palms that they can whip around in order to attack their opponent.
I would use this jutsu to push my enemy forward, and insure he gets hit by an other jutsu... I would counter it by using a wind jutsu to push me away of the range of this jutsu...
(Raiton: Raijū Hashiri no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Beast Running Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user channels his lighting chakra to his dominant hand and then radiates it out making it a hound shaped stream of lighting which stays attached to the users hand through a bolt of lighting.
I would use it if I needed to have a zutsu that can easyly be directet to the target multiple times... I would counter it by weting it with a suiton jutsu, since it is atached to the user's hands and he would suffer the consequences...
(Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.
I would use this jutsu if I needed a quick and direct hit to one or multiple opponets... I could counter it with a wall of futon to nullyfy the spear...
(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself infused with his lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
Note: Can only use lightning based techniques up to B rank.
A very usefull jutsu, both for offence and deffance... If I previously used it, I can substitue it with me, when hit by an enemy jutsu, while I use an other... It can also use raiton jutsu up to B rank, so it can be a usefull ally... I would fight agaist this jutsu with a jutsu that targets multiple enemies, like the faulse darkness spear...
(Chō Biburāto Raitontō) - Super Vibrating Lightning Release Sword
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (+15 to kenjutsu and standard attacks)
Description: The user channels their lightning chakra into a blade, increasing its vibrating frequency and giving it more cutting power than standard wind techniques.
I would use this jutsu with my sword, adding more power to my attacks, especially combined with kenjutsu... I could also add more power to weapons like my kunai or shuriken...
(Raiton: Dai Denki hōden no Jutsu ) - Lightning Release: Large Electrical Discharge Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: By Performing the ram hand seal the user will manipulate their chakra and they then raise their hand to the sky and an electrical discharge is triggered shocking the target.
Simular to the lighting fang technique, I would use it for a quick attack of raiton, based on real lighting... I would counter it with a simular raiton jutsu, like the lighting fang, wich is one of the few jutsu fast enough to counter...

-I hope I did a good job, sempei! ^^
You did wonderful! Now, for the A-ranks, give me a beefy description, then give me the advantages and disadvantages of the technique!

(Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user must first perform the following sequence of hand seals Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey and they create a lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name.
Note: Someone who mastered lightning release can perform chidori with just the Ox hand seal.
Preform the eleven hand seals (xd) and gather your raiton chakra to your hand. Pump as much chakra as you can in, causing it to run wild and cover your hand. Then try stabbing a clone!
 

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You did wonderful! Now, for the A-ranks, give me a beefy description, then give me the advantages and disadvantages of the technique!



Preform the eleven hand seals (xd) and gather your raiton chakra to your hand. Pump as much chakra as you can in, causing it to run wild and cover your hand. Then try stabbing a clone!
-youpiii, the chidori! ^^
*I first perform the following hand seals:
"ox -> rabit -> monkey -> dragon -> rat -> bird -> ox -> snake -> dog -> tiger -> monkey" and then focus a great amound of raiton chakra in my hand, focusing more and more on the devastative power of the bolts in my hand! I add more and more raiton chakra and let the sparks manifest themselves randomly... I focus even more raiton chakra in my right hand, and the raiton chakra now has a blue-white colour... I focus my shaping manipulation to shape the spark into a single spot, and that spot starts emiting a thousan sparks... I advance forward towards the clone with incontrolable speed, and the hand wielding the chidori stabs and passes through the clone's thorax, who vanishes instantly!!!*
-What an ingenious technique!!! ^^
 

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-youpiii, the chidori! ^^
*I first perform the following hand seals:
"ox -> rabit -> monkey -> dragon -> rat -> bird -> ox -> snake -> dog -> tiger -> monkey" and then focus a great amound of raiton chakra in my hand, focusing more and more on the devastative power of the bolts in my hand! I add more and more raiton chakra and let the sparks manifest themselves randomly... I focus even more raiton chakra in my right hand, and the raiton chakra now has a blue-white colour... I focus my shaping manipulation to shape the spark into a single spot, and that spot starts emiting a thousan sparks... I advance forward towards the clone with incontrolable speed, and the hand wielding the chidori stabs and passes through the clone's thorax, who vanishes instantly!!!*
-What an ingenious technique!!! ^^
Great job.

(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.
This time, use that same principle, but form the chakra all around your body in an electrical current!
 

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Great job.



This time, use that same principle, but form the chakra all around your body in an electrical current!
*I first make a regular chidori, and then I focus on the ration chakra of my body... I then release the shaping transformation of the chidori, and chanel it towards a nearby clone... I can feel all the raiton chakra damaging, and I hear the sound of a thunderbolt as I release the jutsu! A great bolt is then discharged towards the clone, paralyzing it on contact, before it disappears... *
-hmmm, that will be useful in battle! ^^
 
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*I first make a regular chidori, and then I focus on the ration chakra of my body... I then release the shaping transformation of the chidori, and chanel it towards a nearby clone... I can feel all the raiton chakra damaging, and I hear the sound of a thunderbolt as I release the jutsu! A great bolt is then discharged towards the clone, paralyzing it on contact, before it disappears... *
-hmmm, that will be useful in battle! ^^
You won't be shooting any bolts of lightning with this, it's more of an aura around yourself. Try it again.
 

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*I start over, first makeing a regular chidori, and then I let the raiton chakra of my chidori run through my body... I then let loose the raiton of the chidori, which manifests itself as random bolts all over my body, and as a shinning blue aura. I then punsh a nearby clone... I can feel all the raiton chakra raging, and I hear the sound of a thunderbolt as I touch the clone with my punsh...! The clone then is sent flying, paralyzed on contact, before it disappears... *
-hmmm, that's even better than I initially imagined!!! ^^
 

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*I start over, first makeing a regular chidori, and then I let the raiton chakra of my chidori run through my body... I then let loose the raiton of the chidori, which manifests itself as random bolts all over my body, and as a shinning blue aura. I then punsh a nearby clone... I can feel all the raiton chakra raging, and I hear the sound of a thunderbolt as I touch the clone with my punsh...! The clone then is sent flying, paralyzed on contact, before it disappears... *
-hmmm, that's even better than I initially imagined!!! ^^
"Ah. Much better. But this time, preform the technique, but spread the raiton chakra through the ground, and watch as it stuns people around you.*
 

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"Ah. Much better. But this time, preform the technique, but spread the raiton chakra through the ground, and watch as it stuns people around you.*
*I start over, pass through all the previous steps, and when I have the aura suround me, I make a huge impact by dessisevly steping my foot one step in front of me... The chakra stored on my body as an aura is sudently discharge through the ground, making small quakes filled with raiton chakra in it... When the Raiton attains some clones around me (thet were trying to attack me), they get immobilised for some seconds, and then vanish in white smoke...*
-I think I finally got it? ^^
 

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*I start over, pass through all the previous steps, and when I have the aura suround me, I make a huge impact by dessisevly steping my foot one step in front of me... The chakra stored on my body as an aura is sudently discharge through the ground, making small quakes filled with raiton chakra in it... When the Raiton attains some clones around me (thet were trying to attack me), they get immobilised for some seconds, and then vanish in white smoke...*
-I think I finally got it? ^^
Great job!

(Raiton: Ikazuchi Hakai) – Lightning Release: Lightning Destruction
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing a small sequence of hand seals the user will place their hand on the ground converting their chakra in to lightning. The user then sends an enormous bolt of electricity that cuts through the ground in the direction of the enemy. The shape of the bolt is a triangular with the base in the direction of the user and the tip headed towards the target. It causes devastating destruction on its way and generates enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with.
Give this one a go!
 

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Great job!



Give this one a go!
*I first quickly perform the following hand seals: Tiget->Dragon->Bird->Ox . I then release a curent of raiton chakra from my hand, as I touch the ground with it... I then use shaping transformation, to shape the curent I just released into a triangle, who's pointing upwards... I feel my chakra running through the ground, cutting it in the process... The Raiton I just released goes straight towards the clone I initially targeted, cutting it in the midle. The Clone then Explodes in white smoke... A moment afterwards, some sparks are still rampaging, as I end the Jutsu...*

-Ah, nice jutsu, it looks like the fin of a shark ^^
 

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*I first quickly perform the following hand seals: Tiget->Dragon->Bird->Ox . I then release a curent of raiton chakra from my hand, as I touch the ground with it... I then use shaping transformation, to shape the curent I just released into a triangle, who's pointing upwards... I feel my chakra running through the ground, cutting it in the process... The Raiton I just released goes straight towards the clone I initially targeted, cutting it in the midle. The Clone then Explodes in white smoke... A moment afterwards, some sparks are still rampaging, as I end the Jutsu...*

-Ah, nice jutsu, it looks like the fin of a shark ^^
It is very powerful and fast, but requires you slamming your hands on the ground.

(Raiton: Chidori Senbon) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Needle
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user reshapes the Chidori in their hand into the form of countless senbon. It has more specialized speed than the normal Chidori and can cause damage throughout multiple places on the body. Although it’s not stated, this technique probably takes on Chidori's characteristics such as its ability to cut through almost anything and numb parts of the body.
Form a Chidori in your hands, and shoot it forward, add shape manipulation to form it in to thousands of tiny needles.
 

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It is very powerful and fast, but requires you slamming your hands on the ground.



Form a Chidori in your hands, and shoot it forward, add shape manipulation to form it in to thousands of tiny needles.
*I first form a regular chidori in my hand. Then, I focus on shaping the chidori into small portions of it, in the form of streight, almost solid needles... My first atempt, fails, and almost pierces my thorax... I start over, this time focusing more on the density of the reaiton, and it's devastation power... The Raiton in my hand is rampaging, and I can feel it's fearsome power. I carefully shape the raiton into a thousand needles of 7mm diameter and 15cm lenght each... As I possition my hand in the direction of a clone and release the raiton, a thousand needles pierce the clone's body in multiple spots, before it explodes in white smoke...*
-Ah, I guess I can use this to multiple targets too, huh? ^^
 

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*I first form a regular chidori in my hand. Then, I focus on shaping the chidori into small portions of it, in the form of streight, almost solid needles... My first atempt, fails, and almost pierces my thorax... I start over, this time focusing more on the density of the reaiton, and it's devastation power... The Raiton in my hand is rampaging, and I can feel it's fearsome power. I carefully shape the raiton into a thousand needles of 7mm diameter and 15cm lenght each... As I possition my hand in the direction of a clone and release the raiton, a thousand needles pierce the clone's body in multiple spots, before it explodes in white smoke...*
-Ah, I guess I can use this to multiple targets too, huh? ^^
It can, as it's just a barrage of needles.

(Raiton: Sanda Appu) – Lightning Release: Thunder Up
Rank: A
Type: Offence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user concentrates a lot of lightning chakra into their hand and compressing it into a ball of energy and then releases it at once, causing a huge explotion.
Let's see what you got.
 

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*I gather a great amound of raiton chakra in my hand, just as with the Chidori. As the raiton is rampaging, I add some shaping manipulation, to form it into an orb of lighting chakra, that resembles a plasma ball. It's Raiton is about to explode, and is only restricted by the shaping manipulation I used. Then, while I hold the orb in my hand, I slam a clone with it, and it produces a huge Raiton explossion, thet sends the clone flying, befor it explodes in white smoke... *

-This would be so much cooler if I could throw the ball... Still, it makes a nice impact, exactly what I'll be needing to defeat a certain someone... :cool:
 

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*I gather a great amound of raiton chakra in my hand, just as with the Chidori. As the raiton is rampaging, I add some shaping manipulation, to form it into an orb of lighting chakra, that resembles a plasma ball. It's Raiton is about to explode, and is only restricted by the shaping manipulation I used. Then, while I hold the orb in my hand, I slam a clone with it, and it produces a huge Raiton explossion, thet sends the clone flying, befor it explodes in white smoke... *

-This would be so much cooler if I could throw the ball... Still, it makes a nice impact, exactly what I'll be needing to defeat a certain someone... :cool:
It would be SOOOO much cooler if you could throw the ball, yes. Since this post will be my 4000th POST!!!! I've give you several to work on!

(Raiton: Jūrokuchū Shibari) – Lightning Release: Sixteen-Pillar Bind
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing the needed hand seals Rat → Monkey → Horse → Tiger the user will create a even more powerful version of lightning release: four pillar bind, the user creates sixteen giant pillars, which then form a giant oven to trap the enemy. It is often used after Earth Release: Mud Fall to cover the enemy target in mud and then follow up with using Fire release: Firing Biscuit, creating flames in the oven to roast and harden the mud, immobilizing the enemy.

(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact.

(Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of wind and electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.
 
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