Poem

[Reborn]

This is a different style of poetry

I am actually talking to you and not from verse

I'm glad I chose this name on NB

If not for anything else but for this moment right now

I've lost something dear to me today but she's going to be reborn in a place infinitely greater then this world and that makes me glad

Because instead of tragic irony this irony is beautiful

It's still painful but not as much since I can make a pun out of it which isn't funny but is soothing to me in a way and takes away part of the tragidy

Some people don't believe in God, Gods, supernatual beings or such existances, but that's alright

I believe, and I believe that when somebody dies, if they've lived happily, without regret, with ture pureness in their hearts and minds, which they've managed to spread to other people, they will be rewarded by being reborn into a splendid life far greater then this one

I won't be envious because with such an upbringing I believe that I too can achieve that paridise one day

I will be sad and heartbroken becuse how many of you wouldn't be

I will be depressed, but only for a little while because time heals all wounds

But most of all I'll be happy because I at least got to see her before she passed and she loved me and I loved her and I have things in common with the other people who loved her as well, and that is blood, becauase we were all family and I believe we're all family because we love one another.


I love you Grandma <3
Thank you for reading.

 

[Lord Snow]

Very good. It's kind of sad when i read it, I thought of my grandfather that past a week ago. R.I.P

 

[PUU]

nice.... +rep

 

[Seffy]

:T_T: it's so sad, but comforting though with our religion you don't have to be pure, since nobody is to that extent. Mercy is what gets us through and is a very kind thing indeed. <3 I'm glad you are getting this off your chest and I will always be here for you Reborn, because that's what I'm here for She will be happy once she separates from the weight and pain her body is creating now. She will be able to rest in peace, so don't worry about that hun. We will all be like her and hopefully when the time comes, you two will meet again. It's not saying good bye forever, just for now Even though she will always watch over you.

 

[Jazzy..]

Very sad... and lovely <3
Great poem.

 

[Nocturnus]

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[Killeya]

its very nice im sorry for your lost !
sry i have to ask this but isnt a poem supposed to have any rhymes in it ?
very deep words though i dont want to be undkind

 

[Reborn]

Very good. It's kind of sad when i read it, I thought of my grandfather that past a week ago. R.I.P

T

nice.... +rep

H

:T_T: it's so sad, but comforting though with our religion you don't have to be pure, since nobody is to that extent. Mercy is what gets us through and is a very kind thing indeed. <3 I'm glad you are getting this off your chest and I will always be here for you Reborn, because that's what I'm here for She will be happy once she separates from the weight and pain her body is creating now. She will be able to rest in peace, so don't worry about that hun. We will all be like her and hopefully when the time comes, you two will meet again. It's not saying good bye forever, just for now Even though she will always watch over you.

A

Very sad... and lovely <3
Great poem.

N

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K

its very nice im sorry for your lost !
sry i have to ask this but isnt a poem supposed to have any rhymes in it ?
very deep words though i dont want to be undkind

S

And not all poetry has rhyms in it...and you're not being unkind lol

 

[King Volcano]

This was sad, and beautiful. I know your grandma would be so proud.

 

[aradmehr]

*Sniff sniff*
Dad,i miss you.

 

[Train]

RIP - For all our loved ones who are no longer in this world.
I wish I could say something more useful and cheering like in ThatOneChick's post.

But most of all I'll be happy because I at least got to see her before she passed and she loved me

^ That's great.

And as you said, time heals all wounds, so...
Stay Strong.

 

[~Mara~]

nice

 

[Tosen]

My friend great and sad poem at the same time, reminds me of when my dad passed away few years ago

 

[Reborn]

This was sad, and beautiful. I know your grandma would be so proud.

Thank you ^^

*Sniff sniff*
Dad,i miss you.

He misses you as well I'm sure...

RIP - For all our loved ones who are no longer in this world.
I wish I could say something more useful and cheering like in ThatOneChick's post.


^ That's great.

And as you said, time heals all wounds, so...
Stay Strong.

I will, more difficult then it seems though but it'll get bareable.

nice

Thank you...

My friend great and sad poem at the same time, reminds me of when my dad passed away few years ago

Yeah, I had to vent, and sorry for anybody if this opens up your own wounds U_U

 

[Bisma]

Wow! It was really good

 

[Reborn]

Wow! It was really good

Thank you