i have body of naruto

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one thing clear i dont mean you can use rasengas walk on water anything that require chakra control but your buddy kurama sure can help you out.. i sometimes daydreaming first time actually writing about it

- ur body heals extremely fast remember when naruto hit himself with kunai kakashi actually watched wound healing before he's eyes

- long livety it his bloodline when u and your eternal mate kurama die youl'l be 100 years old and clear mind

-even without start glowing orange u can travel long distance by foot come's helpfull when u travel around

-ur never bored your body mental strenght partner inside u how much is to learn maybe someday u make kagebunshin

-kurama iv had so many friends and truly funny childhood but i can't even comprehend what its like have your "bff" inside you smart funny and big as hell old too,

- if behind the bar guys gang up on you trying to take ur wallet well let's say when dude start to glow i start to run so fast..! no matter how drunk i am.

- limit of your physical strenght well if u really want do damage cops don't stop u they bring army that will probably slow u down atleast before u change to complete kyubi end up taking berlin down with u they probably nuke u that's end of that

what would you do? how would u live up your days? ohh forgot this make u slim kind of a package deal sure u can fatten yourself up if want that sure is fun i maybe drop own story later
 

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incredible short, needs to be longer, more fond, color, headline, this you need to work on and if you read other ff and look how they do and work on your own ff, you will become good.

Hope this helped you out.
 

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incredible short, needs to be longer, more fond, color, headline, this you need to work on and if you read other ff and look how they do and work on your own ff, you will become good.

Hope this helped you out.
thx man i actually made this between tv-breaks while i watched silence of the lambs.. i eexpetcted more wievers. this is short, etc but what is amazing u didn't bring up my english skills seems like i finally get the grasp in that =) sure there is errors but it not that hard to understand thanks again.
 
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