[Approved] bijuu dama bio (custom bio) my first time

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Basic Information
Name: bijuu dama
Nickname: bijuu
Gender: male
Age: 15
Clan:none

Looks: black,tall(6 ft), 180 pounds,hair(short curly hair),black eyes,and nice smile and beard

Personality: bijuu is a nice guy who is calm and does not get easily angered.He is always cheerful and supportive to his friends.

Village Info.
Village of Birth: konoha
Village of Alliance: konoha

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: s-jounin
Specialty: none
Elements: fire(need training)
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Your ninjutsu:
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
Background Info.
History: bijuu dama was born in december 10.Bijuu dama parents were taken away by konoha's anbu for unknown reasons that he wishes to unravel.The only thing his parents left him with was his name and little brother peace.bijuu and his brother live in a konoha apartment near the hidden leaf academy which he graduated at age 8.

after graduating the academy bijuu learns the true meaning of his name and his brother and wants to investigate why he was named after a name reffering to tailed beast and why they called his brother peace and he feels that they left him a message to decode.

bijuu now at the age of 15 wants to be a powerful ninja who wants to learn the fire element because of konoha's nine tailed beast and looks foward to knowing what truely made him get seperated by his parents to even this day and wants to become hokage.


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Theme Song and Background Music: viva la vida

Battles

Won: n/a
Lost: n/a

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Nice bio considering it was your first^^ Good luck with your training.
 
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Not bad You seem to have put all the info there. Just lacks appearance. I would say just add some color, and put your jutsu in a spoiler instead of quoting it. Maybe add a more to your looks.

Oh and your S-Joinin not Jounin so change your rank.
 

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idk wanted it to be a nice story, yea i guess the character future will relate to the sage.
also i don't know how to put spoilers i tried but it quoted.

thanks hawaiian mike i changed the rank to s-jounin
 
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idk wanted it to be a nice story, yea i guess the character future will relate to the sage.
also i don't know how to put spoilers i tried but it quoted
If you go into advance edit you can press the
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these [spoiler.] [/spoiler.] and you can type in the middle of the two to make it a spoiler.
 
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