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Seeing as the other thread...failed, I'd like to give it another go.

Suzuha biography, in my signature.

No chakra; freeform only.

Terrain: Night-time, in the center of a very large courtyard that in the middle of a Japanese castle, which is illuminated by a single large brazier in the center.

My opponent can decide who makes the first move. ^_^
 

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Bio in Sig (needs updates). You make the first move.
 

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Bio in Sig (needs updates). You make the first move.

*Suzuha cracks her knuckles as she prepares for battle.*

"Hope you can keep up!"

*Quickly bolting towards her opponent, Suzuha lowers her body closer to the ground to lower her center of gravity and to help streamline herself; once within striking distance of her opponent, she quickly leans to her left, extending her left arm so that she places it on the ground as she goes into a very quick rotation, sweeping both her legs at her opponent in a very low kick, aimed at the opponents knees, thus preforming a type of elevated leg-sweep.*
 

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Fumio Suzuki: "I hope the same."

*Standing in a defensive stance, my right foot out so it is just past my right shoulder, my posture is adjusted so my back is straight, both of my hands into fists, Both arms bent and cross in front of me, the right hand closer to my body and the left hand further, and my lower arms should look like a letter X, with my fists pointing upward, I quickly acknowlege your manuver and tried to anticipate your attack.*

Fumio Suzuki: "Ahhhhh!"

*As soon as you perform you leg-sweep, I jumped into the air of my position, to counter it with a "Strong Kick Drop" by simultaneously raising the knee and rotating my body 90 degrees, while extending my leg with the outside edge of my left foot, using the heel providing more force as it crashs down towards you.*
 

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Fumio Suzuki: "I hope the same."

*Standing in a defensive stance, my right foot out so it is just past my right shoulder, my posture is adjusted so my back is straight, both of my hands into fists, Both arms bent and cross in front of me, the right hand closer to my body and the left hand further, and my lower arms should look like a letter X, with my fists pointing upward, I quickly acknowlege your manuver and tried to anticipate your attack.*

Fumio Suzuki: "Ahhhhh!"

*As soon as you perform you leg-sweep, I jumped into the air of my position, to counter it with a "Strong Kick Drop" by simultaneously raising the knee and rotating my body 90 degrees, while extending my leg with the outside edge of my left foot, using the heel providing more force as it crashs down towards you.*

*As Suzuha's leg sweep was aimed at her opponents knees to begin with, when he jumps, he rises too high - this allows Suzu's legs to continue on their rotation, and with that movement, Suzuha swings her right arm over.

This causes a movement that allows her to quickly roll to her left in a quick combat roll, so that the heel kick misses, and instead slams onto the ground, causing a shock and slight pain as the massive force of impact reverberates up your leg from your heel, as you make contact with the cobble.

Planting her feet during her roll, Suzuha quickly pops up and backwards, allowing her to regain stability and assume another offensive - she again rushes at her opponent.

She simply feints a jab with her left hand, to see how her opponent will react.*
 

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Fumio Suzuki: "*Gazing.....*"

*After balancing my feet and body on to the ground from the kick attack, In apace, I then react by going back into my defensive stance while analyzing your movements once again trying to anticipate your attack.*

*As you jab with your left hand, I counter by side-stepping left of the strike with my right forearm, pushing the punch outward, leaving you slightly to the side of the strike causing it to miss. This movement also leaving you off-axis, off-balance, and facing at an approximate angle of 45 degrees to the either side, left or right, of where you intend to be when the punch was thrown. Gazing as you are off guard, during your strike, I use the opening to strike with a casting punch with my left arm with a forward motion of the shoulders, which causes the bent arm to whip forward to the opponent, striking you in the face.*
 
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Fumio Suzuki: "*Gazing.....*"

*After balancing my feet and body on to the ground from the kick attack, In apace, I then react by going back into my defensive stance while analyzing your movements once again trying to anticipate your attack.*

*As you jab with your left hand, I counter by side-stepping left of the strike with my right forearm, pushing the punch outward, leaving you slightly to the side of the strike causing it to miss. This movement also leaving you off-axis, off-balance, and facing at an approximate angle of 45 degrees to the either side, left or right, of where you intend to be when the punch was thrown. Gazing as you are off guard, during your strike, I use the opening to strike with a casting punch with my left arm with a forward motion of the shoulders, which causes the bent arm to whip forward to the opponent, striking you in the face.*

*Suzu smirks as she realizes her opponent played right into her hands; as a feint is a false attack - that is, one that's not actually preformed; not carried out past the first action to fake out the opponent - as Suzuha's arm never fully extended, her opponents attempt at deflecting it, and thus off-balancing her, fails beautifully, as he never makes contact.

As you whip your arm forward, though, Suzuha swings her right hand to her right after thrusting forward, her open palm hitting her opponents elbow and throwing his arm out wide, leaving him wide open.

Because his arm was deflected our wide, Suzu keeps her left hand ready to deal with the opponents right, but uses her own right hand (immediately after deflecting her opponent's arm) four a four-finger jab into the shoulder; with his arm out to his right, this causes intense pain to her opponent, as the muscles are stretched.*
 

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Fumio Suzuki: "*What?! So, it was just a fake out?*" Thinking to myself.

*As you sway to thrust your arm with an open palm hitting my elbow, throwing my arm out wide to leave me open for an attack, and using a four-finger jab into my shoulder, I unintentionally allowing it to happen, was shock. However, twiching from the pain, I use the attack as an advantage. Keeping my composure, I retracted just a noch to less the impact of the attack only to cause minor damage towards my shoulder.*

Fumio Suzuki: "*Ahhhhh!*"

*After jolting back a few inches, still in position and/or distance, from your "Four-Finger Jab" and body, I extend my left hand and clutch your wrist. Standing ground while clutching your wrist, I lunge toward you pushing off the ground with my back left foot of my left leg, channeling a huge amount of foce towards the right side of my body, while extending my right arm and balling my right hand into a fist; I then strike you in the left side of your face.*

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PS: Feel free to acknowlege and corret my wording when I have wrongly misunderstand your actions or unfairly strench the Human physical properties such as impossible manuvering of ones body from when attacking and/or defending, ect. ect.
 

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Fumio Suzuki: "*What?! So, it was just a fake out?*" Thinking to myself.

*As you sway to thrust your arm with an open palm hitting my elbow, throwing my arm out wide to leave me open for an attack, and using a four-finger jab into my shoulder, I unintentionally allowing it to happen, was shock. However, twiching from the pain, I use the attack as an advantage. Keeping my composure, I retracted just a noch to less the impact of the attack only to cause minor damage towards my shoulder.*

Fumio Suzuki: "*Ahhhhh!*"

*After jolting back a few inches, still in position and/or distance, from your "Four-Finger Jab" and body, I extend my left hand and clutch your wrist. Standing ground while clutching your wrist, I lunge toward you pushing off the ground with my back left foot of my left leg, channeling a huge amount of foce towards the right side of my body, while extending my right arm and balling my right hand into a fist; I then strike you in the left side of your face.*

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PS: Feel free to acknowlege and corret my wording when I have wrongly misunderstand your actions or unfairly strench the Human physical properties such as impossible manuvering of ones body from when attacking and/or defending, ect. ect.

Stretching reality a bit is alright. ^_^ I mean, this is Naruto Rp. You're a Shinobi and I'm a Samurai, and we're a bit "superhuman" in this universe.

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*As expected, there was a retaliation with your right side and - having prepared herself earlier, Suzuha simply grabs her opponent's fist when he throws the punch, stopping it cold.

Pulling back with her left hand, and downward, she pulls the right side of your body towards her, and she quickly uses her own right hand to do another quick four-finger jab into your stomach, just below your rib-cage; however, she also curles her fingers up, pushing the muscles upwards and causing pressure to the lungs and diaphragm, making the attack infinitely more painful.

With that jab, though, she breaks contact and leaps backwards, giving her opponent a moment to collect himself.*
 

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Fumio Suzuki: "I could be taking it easy because your a woman..."

*After recieving a hold blow towards the ribs, as I was gasping for air while kneeling down to recover my composure, I try to force myself to stand.*

Fumio Suzuki: "..... Even so,....I think it's time for a change in battle styles!"

*Finding my focus while trying to stand, I retracted my katana from its sheath upon my back with my right hand. Wielding the katana, I then grabed for two kunia knives in my pouch with my left hand and thrown them towards your frontal. I then begin to darted, in 180 degrees, towards your left side while weilding the kantana in both my right and left hands.

In further my previous actions (Bold), I leap into the air, at about 1 meter, before reaching your side, positioning my sword in a overhead cut (with the sword perfectly horizontal, cast out, much like casting a fishing rod by pulling with the left hand at the bottom, much like a lever until it makes contact with the head or shoulder of the opponent and then simply drops down to stop horizontally again) prepared to strike.*
 

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Fumio Suzuki: "I could be taking it easy because your a woman..."

*After recieving a hold blow towards the ribs, as I was gasping for air while kneeling down to recover my composure, I try to force myself to stand.*

Fumio Suzuki: "..... Even so,....I think it's time for a change in battle styles!"

*Finding my focus while trying to stand, I retracted my katana from its sheath upon my back with my right hand. Wielding the katana, I then grabed for two kunia knives in my pouch with my left hand and thrown them towards your frontal. I then begin to darted, in 180 degrees, towards your left side while weilding the kantana in both my right and left hands.

In further my previous actions (Bold), I leap into the air, at about 1 meter, before reaching your side, positioning my sword in a overhead cut (with the sword perfectly horizontal, cast out, much like casting a fishing rod by pulling with the left hand at the bottom, much like a lever until it makes contact with the head or shoulder of the opponent and then simply drops down to stop horizontally again) prepared to strike.*

"Oh, continue to take it easy if you want. Or you could stop. Either way, you will find that if you underestimate me you will be in for a world of hurt."

*When her opponent throws the kunai at her, Suzuha quickly pirouettes to her right twice, making the two kunai fly past her harmlessly far to her left.

With her opponent charging at her, though, when she sees him jump, Suzuha quickly leaps forward and to her right, putting herself out of the way of the slash before it can even come close to hitting her, but also behind her opponent; quickly pivoting, she pushes off the ground in a low stance, bolting towards her opponent form behind him and from his left; she quickly grabs her katana and unsheathes it in an Iaido quick draw, cutting her opponent from behind and at an angle, from his left to right.*
 

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Fumio Suzuki: "Damn..... It's wasted movement, but still........."

*While in the air, I quickly release my left hand while wielding the katana with my right hand to grab a kania knive within my pouch with my left hand, trying to react towards your manuver without hesitation because of the pain in my ribs suffered from your previous attack.

As I then landed towards the ground surface, rapidly making a 180 degree turn facing the direction of your left side pointing towards the castle while holding both my katana and kunia knive in each hand, I try to counter your attack.*

Fumio Suzuki: "*Ugh! I have to endure the pain for now!*" Thinking to myself.

*I squat down low enough to parry and stop your horizontal strike with my kunia knive. I then, in a upward stroke, clasp the katana above my head and then drew the blade down to split or slash your torso.*
 
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Fumio Suzuki: "Damn..... It's wasted movement, but still........."

*While in the air, I quickly release my left hand while wielding the katana with my right hand to grab a kania knive within my pouch with my left hand, trying to react towards your manuver without hesitation because of the pain in my ribs suffered from your previous attack.

As I then landed towards the ground surface, rapidly making a 180 degree turn facing the direction of your left side pointing towards the castle while holding both my katana and kunia knive in each hand, I try to counter your attack.*

Fumio Suzuki: "*Ugh! I have to endure the pain for now!*" Thinking to myself.

*I squat down low enough to parry and stop your horizontal strike with my kunia knive. I then, in a upward stroke, clasp the katana above my head and then drew the blade down to split or slash your torso.*

*When her opponent removes the dagger and goes low, in an attempt to block her slash, Suzuha quickly pushes off the ground again with her right foot as she slashes forward; this causes her to do a quick roll in the air while standing up, allowing her to continue to use her momentum, dashing past her opponent, meaning her Iaido strike was more of a glancing blow, stopped by her opponent - Suzuha's own movement to her left allowed her to move on without ever being in the way of the opponent's blade.

Noticing his grimace from pain, she lowers her blade, taking the form of the Gedan-no-kamae.*

Suzuha: "Collect yourself, Shinobi. I'll wait for you to work my last blow out of your system."

*With that, she waits until her opponent is read, allowing him to make the next move.*
 

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Fumio Suzuki: "I don't know much in the medical field, but unlike bones of the arms and legs, broken ribs can’t be set in a cast. Treatment aims to relieve pain while the injury heals, which can take up to six weeks (in the case of fracture), and 12 weeks or more if the rib has been torn from the cartilage. Treatment for bruised ribs is the same as for fractured ribs, but with a shorter recovery time."

Fumio Suzuki: "Theirs nothing you or I can do now! I have to keep fighting!"

*I darted towards you while throwing the kunia knive and then begin repeating to slash with my sword, while giving a fix on your movements, for a counter*
 
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Fumio Suzuki: "I don't know much in the medical field, but unlike bones of the arms and legs, broken ribs can’t be set in a cast. Treatment aims to relieve pain while the injury heals, which can take up to six weeks (in the case of fracture), and 12 weeks or more if the rib has been torn from the cartilage. Treatment for bruised ribs is the same as for fractured ribs, but with a shorter recovery time."

Fumio Suzuki: "Theirs nothing you or I can do now! I have to keep fighting!"

*I darted towards you while throwing the kunia knive and then begin repeating to slash with my sword, while giving a fix on your movements, for a counter*

Suzuha: "Hm. I didn't realize I hit you hard enough to bruise the ribs."

*When her opponent throws the kunai at her, Suzuha simply steps backwards and swipes her blade to the side, deflecting the knife.

However, when her opponent charges at her, Suzuha quickly backpedals and begins moving backwards, watching as her opponent flails at her wildly with his sword; she waits a bit, and then - once a slash starts to come from her right side - quickly swings her blade into her opponents, stopping it mid-slash, to the side of both warriors, held out to her right, and her opponent's left.

With the blocking of the blade, she quickly steps in and strikes with a palm strike to her opponent's sternum, pushing him back forcefully as well as stunning him; following the palm strike, she steps forward again whips her sword from right to left, preforming a high horizontal cut across her opponent's chest.*
 

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Fumio Suzuki: "*I didn't relize it either until......Mm, but it was my foolish mistake to take you so lightly!*" Thinking to myself.

Fumio Suzuki: "Now, its time to die!"

*With both blades locked in mid-range, I removed my right hand from my katana, countering your palm strike to the sternum. With my right hand, in a knife-hand strike, I thrust your palm to the side which causes you to leave your frontal open. Benefiting from the counter, I thrust my right leg out in a powerful semi-circular kick, a round kick to forty five degree roundhouse kick, striking low with the front of the leg or foot, outside, towards your face, sending you falling about a meter or so.

While you were onto the ground, I quickly darted towards your position, with my katana in hand, and stopped when I finally meet your body. I then raise my katana above my head and begin to thrust my katana downwards for an execution.*
 

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Fumio Suzuki: "*I didn't relize it either until......Mm, but it was my foolish mistake to take you so lightly!*" Thinking to myself.

Fumio Suzuki: "Now, its time to die!"

*With both blades locked in mid-range, I removed my right hand from my katana, countering your palm strike to the sternum. With my right hand, in a knife-hand strike, I thrust your palm to the side which causes you to leave your frontal open. Benefiting from the counter, I thrust my right leg out in a powerful semi-circular kick, a round kick to forty five degree roundhouse kick, striking low with the front of the leg or foot, outside, towards your face, sending you falling about a meter or so.

While you were onto the ground, I quickly darted towards your position, with my katana in hand, and stopped when I finally meet your body. I then raise my katana above my head and begin to thrust my katana downwards for an execution.*

*When her opponent deflects her palm thrust with her left hand, she continues on with her move; she cuts her blade across from right to left, slashing her opponent across the chest as he kicks her feet out, unbalancing her; the effect is that the horizontal slash becomes a diagonal one that cuts her opponent form his upper left to lower right.

Using her already outstretched hand (due to her opponent deflecting it), Suzuha twists her body in the air, so that she lands on her hand and does a very quick rotation, spinning her own body around and knocking her opponent off his feet as well; with that rotation, she swings her feet across lowly, plants her feet after swinging them to her left side, and then leaps powerfully backwards, creating distance, to prevent herself from being struck by a stray slash as her opponent is dis balanced as she was; to ensure her safety, she's ready to cut her own blade back across, to block an incoming blow.*
 
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