Tento

[Tento]

Basic*Information
Name: Tento
Nickname: NA
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Clan: NA

Looks: A teenager about 5'5 with black hair and black eyes, wears a black Konoha outfit under a black akatsuki like cloak without the clouds.

Personality: Laid back, non caring, I don't-give-crap attitude.But, has near genius level intelligence(not quite up to Shikamaru, just under)keen battle strategist, and cares for his friends.He wants to become strong and be like the Hokage, who he always looked up to,

Village*Info.
Village*of*Birth: NA
Village*of*Alliance:Konoha

Rank//Chakra*Info.
Ninja*Rank: Genin
Specialty: NA
Elements: Lightning (needs training)
Your*ninjutsu:

Spoiler

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

Background*Info.
History: He was found left for dead in a forest my Konoha-Nin and brought to the village and raised at an orphanage.Where he was'nt allowed to join the academy until age 10, he showed himself to be very skilled, but often fell asleep in class and played jokes an other similar things, but he decided to be serious at the graduation and made rookie of the year, albeit almost not because he feel asleep in the written exam, later easily passing the genin test.

Other

Picture:

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Theme*Song*and*Background*Music: NA

Battles NA

Won: 0
Lost:* 0

~Approved~

 

[Disquiet]

not bad, but just put one element since you can only learn one, and put genin as your rank


oops, and more background history

 

[House]

not bad for your first bio

 

[Tento]

Thanks, does that fix the problems?

 

[-Albel-]

Not bad for your first but you should put your jutsus in a spoiler tag, and you should add some more background to the history.

 

[Disquiet]

Thanks, does that fix the problems?

I don't think there's any set rule on how long the history should be, so I guess you're fine, but it still feels like it's missing something, I guess if you add something that would give an idea of what motivates him and what his dreams are :shrug:

 

[Tento]

I'm bored, tired and I can't think of much right now, how is that?

And another thing, I'm not sure I understand...I thought I read that normal characters like this don't need to be posted in the bio test things?

 

[Disquiet]

I'm bored, tired and I can't think of much right now, how is that?

And another thing, I'm not sure I understand...I thought I read that normal characters like this don't need to be posted in the bio test things?

well it's fine I guess, it still might get approved.

and bio test and bio approval is different, every bio must go through approval, but yours shouldn't have too much trouble getting approved.

 

[Tento]

well it's fine I guess, it still might get approved.

and bio test and bio approval is different, every bio must go through approval, but yours shouldn't have too much trouble getting approved.

Alright, will someone just come and see about approving it?

And thanks for all the help.

 

[Disquiet]

Alright, will someone just come and see about approving it?

And thanks for all the help.

yeah, it'll be about 1-3 days I think.

and your welcome

 

[Kryptiic]

Nice, put your jutsu in spoiler tags and add a bit more history

 

[Baldy]

Rather nice

 

[Baba Yaga]

nice bio.maybe 1 day....

 

[Lysander]

For a first one it pritty good