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It´s time i tried this fanfic stuff.

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I felt it´s time to set out on my journey, i´m standing on a grassy plane looking down on this huge village.
It´s been 2 weeks since i left that woman....the woman who saved me, in order to accomplish my dream and to find my sisters whereabouts.

Oh, i´ve forgot to introduce myself...the name is Daichi, blue messy hair, dark eyes, 17 years old, currently C-class magician, from Gaga village.

My dream is to train and become the strongest magician there is!
Nothing can stop me! *raises hands and shouts into the air*

I will also find what happened to my sister, my sister who 5 years ago vanished without a trace, i was young and i don´t know how it happened but i have the feeling it has something to do with this black magic organization known as the Illuminati, seeing how one of their members(some muscle-head with a leash on his neck and a third eye) used to come to our village and had always his eyes set on her.

Why you ask? You see, my sister was a bit special...she usually did crazy things unconciously, she´s the one who killed our despicable father.

I still haven´t recovered from that night, it was the worst ever, when my father......forget it, the past is the past and there is a long road ahead of us.

This city below me is called Powhow, the city of the famous magician Catpaw, i look forward to meeting him.

*At the same time in Powhow, in an open park of people, a young girl who is walking among the people, shows legs and body but not face*

Mysterious girl: I heard rumors of "it" being somewhere around here, i must find it *shows the face, brown eyes and brown hair, she has a ponytail with nice bangs hanging infront of her forehead*

A talking dog: Maria...we´ve been searching for 2 hours now, let´s go to a restaurant to relax for a while, my legs are killing me

Maria:Ahh! You´re so lazy Riley ! Hmph! Fine, let´s go somewhere *looks around and sees a taco restaurant* Owww!!! *Runs there*

Riley: Maria wait!! Oh my legs are so tired....:eek:

*Scene shifts to a shadowy room*

Mystery person nr 1: So...the show is in tomorrow eh?

Mp nr 2: Yeah, more people but how many?*creepy voice*

Mp nr 3: We should take a minimum this time, the plans almost complete, just a little increase in numbers, about 140 more, we can´t take any risks, too many and the detection barrier will get rejected by the people.*calm but ominous voice*

Mp nr 2: Yeah, we should be careful now, the plan has come this far.

*They get a call, mp nr 1 turns on the speaker for mpnr 2 and 3 to hear*

Mpnr1:Hello?

In the phone: How´s things going?

Mpnr1:*in a hippy voice almost like buggy:)* uhmm, yeah sir! Everythings going well.

Itp: This is the last stage of our plan and the most risky, make sure to follow through it, the extraction process has to go well...no slip-ups, are we clear?
I don´t think i have to tell you what happens.:|

mpnr1: :eek:Yes! Yes! I guarandamntee there will be no failures, it will all go according to plan!!! No need to worry sir!:p

Itp:.......I hope it does.:|

mpnr2&3:.......U_U

*call ends*

*Scene switches to Daichi entering the city looking up at the gates with a smile*

The end.

 
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I wanna see what happens next! You MUST write NOW!
This was something i just thought of on top of my head and now i have myself a whole freaking story to write with scenarios, i will do my best to post them but i have to really get my act together and take notes of how this story will be.
 

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"My dream is to train and become the strongest magician there is!
Nothing can stop me! *raises hands and shouts into the air*"

Reminds of Luffy when he always declares that his going to be the pirate king xd

and I lol at the part with the illumanati.

I enjoyed the fanfic man keep up the good work :)
 

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"My dream is to train and become the strongest magician there is!
Nothing can stop me! *raises hands and shouts into the air*"

Reminds of Luffy when he always declares that his going to be the pirate king xd

and I lol at the part with the illumanati.

I enjoyed the fanfic man keep up the good work :)
Every great series is inspired by some other great series, i was inspiried by luffy always shouting his dream so i did that with daichi, not ripping off, there is a difference between being inspired and a ripoff.
 

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Every great series is inspired by some other great series, i was inspiried by luffy always shouting his dream so i did that with daichi, not ripping off, there is a difference between being inspired and a ripoff.
Yea it's def not a rip off

I always get goosebumps when Luffy declares it never gets old lol
 

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I wanna see what happens next! You MUST write NOW!
interesting, especially the part about the illuminati xd good luck bro, keep it interesting!
"My dream is to train and become the strongest magician there is!
Nothing can stop me! *raises hands and shouts into the air*"

Reminds of Luffy when he always declares that his going to be the pirate king xd

and I lol at the part with the illumanati.

I enjoyed the fanfic man keep up the good work :)
Wow, you can write.
very cool man
I'm also going to try and write a fanfic soon! :D
Very good story, keep up the good work.
Nice job :) It's different, which is a good thing! I'm not a fan of script style (play format) but it's still good! Keep it up! ^_^
.........You all have my thanks, i really appreciate your comments.<3
 

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very nice. you are an awesome writer :)
Thanks!:D
I have thought of something.
I´d like to have as many people as possible reading this right now from the start because if more people read later chapters like you did then they´re gonna wonder about the previous ones which will make me forced to basically dig up graves of threads to find it for them.

It´s because of this that i would kindly ask you guys reading this to tell your other nb friends to read this and give it a try, i will be writing for a long time.

Have a happy new year!:D
 
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