[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Alternative]

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Vertex - (Chōten)
Type: Weapon/Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: n/a (-20 if regular chakra added to it, -30 if elemental chakra added to it)
Damage Points: n/a
Description:
→ The Vertex is quite a large sword, so large in fact that people are often intimidated by it. The length of the sword is approx. 2.3 metres. It is made of Titanium and is indestructible through means of Ninjutsu and Elemental Jutsu. It has also earnt itself the name of "Projectile Splitter" (Purojekutairusupuritta) because of it's ability. The sword's blade is also unique because it is in the shape of a triangular prism, with the main edge pointing at a 90 degree angle, and the other edges 45 degrees each. By enhancing the sword's blade with one's own chakra, it is able to split in half, any projectile jutsu up to B-Rank (such as a fireball). By enhancing the sword with an elemental chakra instead, it is able to increase the Rank of jutsu being split, depending on which element you decide to enhance the blade with (For example if you were to enhance the blade with suiton chakra, you could split up to A-Rank fire jutsu, but only up to C-Rank earth jutsu). The sword will only split projectile jutsu, so the jutsu will still carry on, but behind them across the angle of the blade's edge.
Notes:
→ Can only be enhanced by one element per battle
→ Must have at least one training session in chosen element to enhance with it
→ A jutsu split counts as a move for the turn
→ Can only use once per turn
→ Once used, it cannot be used for the next two turns
→ Can only be used by Alternative and those whom he allows

~Approved~

 

[BluePhenix]

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(Toriniti-Kaosu) – Chaos Trinity
Type: Weapon
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Varies with Hellraiser Techniques being used
Chakra cost: Varies with Hellraiser Techniques being used
Damage points: Varies with Hellraiser Techniques being used
Description: Cain, a spirit of darkness, and Azael, a spirit of light, belonged to a realm of demons and angels where their ambitions led them to unite in order to overthrow their respective masters and reshape the world under their own rule. However, their opponents prevailed over them and they were condemned to execution. To survive, Cain and Azael fled their realm and reincarnated into a black sword and a white sword respectively. The swords look like twin ones in order to reflect their similar lust for war and power, and their powers can only be used when they are being wielded. The three of them (Cain, Azael and their wielder) are referred to as the Chaos Trinity when they fight together, and are able to perform techniques classified as Hellraiser Techniques.
Note: The wielder of Cain and Azael must be Sannin rank or above.
Note: Hellraiser Techniques can only be used once per turn. They count as a move and must be submitted separately for approval.
Note: Cain and Azael will draw and stock up chakra from their wielder in order to enable him/her to perform techniques without hand seals. As such, the wielder’s other abilities will not be inhibited when performing with the swords.
Note: Cain and Azael can only be wielded by BluePhenix and people he lends them to, provided they meet the requirement.

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~Approved~

Dropping the above weapons since it seems Hellraiser Techniques have no chance of getting approved due to them being over-powered I'll be replacing them with the below.

(Arkana Chain) – Arkana Chain
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40 for activating Arkana
Damage points: Vary with the techniques used (Separate submissions)
Description:

Arkana is a chain which became legendary when it was used ages ago to capture a bijuu. When it was being forged, it was enhanced with highly advanced fuuinjutsu in order to make it able to restrain anything, whether its constitution is tangible like living beings, or intangible like chakra. Its creator also tried to replicate the Yata Mirror’s ability by endowing the chain with all nature transformations, such that it changes its own characteristics and becomes impervious to the characteristics of the attacks it receives. This was successfully achieved and as such, the chain has an aura similar to that of the Yata Mirror which gives it a somewhat spectral form, and prevents it from suffering from elemental weaknesses as well as conducting electricity and/or heat from enemy attacks.

Many fought over the power of Arkana and it was therefore kept hidden for decades, until recently when it has been finally passed down for combat. When in dormant status, Arkana is wrapped around its wielder’s left arm without affecting his/her mobility. The wielder can use it to block attacks from edged weapons, whether or not these are enhanced by wind or lightning chakra.

In active mode, Arkana will adopt its “spectral” form and the wielder will be able to use his chakra to manipulate it around, making it crawl in mid-air in order to reach and pierce through opponents and concrete techniques with its edged end. The wielder can also imbue it with chakra to make it increase in length, similarly to Shun’s Andromeda Chain in Saint Seiya.

Arkana’s hyper mode, which enables it to restrain everything and achieve even more, is not accessible to the wielder unless the latter has mastered fuuinjutsu.

Note: The wielder of Arkana must be Kage rank or above.
Note: Activating Arkana counts as a move and must be done during battle.
Note: Arkana can only be wielded by BluePhenix and those he lends it to.

~Declined~ This is a big no. No Yata mirror's copy cat. Reaching up to long range as you extend your weapon is absolutely out of the question, and I don't even want to know what the hyper mode does lol.

 

[Bad Luck Brian]

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(Raiton:Unmei no inazuma no tori)-Lightning Style:Lightning Birds of Doom
Type: Defence
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will create the hand seals Tiger

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Dragon

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Bird. Once this is done they release and manipulate the shape of their raiton chakra to create a wall of birds that block up to A rank raiton, and A rank Doton attacks

~They can only black Doton attacks if they are not under, or on the ground, they must be hurtling towards the user
~Can only be used by Kyuubisan unless he gives permission

~Declined~ Restrictions?

(Suiton:Mizu no hogo)-Water Style:Water Protection
Type: Defence
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will create the hand seals Tiger

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Dragon

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Horse. Once this is done the user releases a thick orb of water that can protect up to A rank fire jutsu. Once the user is finished on the defense, they do the rat hand seal and call out release. Once this is done the water shoots outwards in every direction in small spikes.

~This jutsu can only be used 3 times per battle
~Can only be used by Kyuubisan unless he gives permission

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

(Raiton: Raitoningu no shuryūdan) - Lightning Release: Lightning Hand Grenade
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user summons a large amount of raiton chakra into their hand and compresses it until it is a small ball. Then the user throws it at the area they choose and it explodes in a 9 meter radius. If this is thrown into water when the enemy is in water [+10 damage]

~ 2 times per battle
~ No Lightning techniques higher than A-rank for 1 turn
~ Can only be taught by Kyuubisan

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

 

[Cutie Pie]

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(Kenjustu: ya )- Kenjustu Style- Ondeko
Type:Attack
Rank: S
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: By swinging the user's sword in an arc overhead, a large wheel composed of lightning appears. From it, 30 thunder arrows fire outward regardless of which direction he is facing.
- Can only be used 2 time
- No more lighting justu for the next turn
- Can only be used by a Ameyuri Ringo Bio

~Approved~ I edited your restrictions.

(Kenjustu: ya )- Kenjustu Style- Lighting Dragon Tornado
Type:Attack
Rank: S
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Ameyuri will raise his Kiba into the air and draw lightning down upon the user body. The current will be contained within and around the user's form. the user will then begin to spin in place forming a whirling vortex of wind and electricity. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon's head and will cover the area in front of him. It will then strike out against his opponent and painfully trap them in the vortex. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.
- Can only be used 2 times per battle
- Only a Ameyuri Ringo Bio can use this justu

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

(Lighting: shikon )- Lighting Style- Fangs Of Lighting
Type:Attack
Rank: S
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: By drawing together his twin swords, Ameyuri can send an electrical essence into the clouds, allowing him to create lightning strikes in any desired location.
-Can only be used 2 times per battle
-Only a Ameyuri Ringo Bio can use this Justu
- No Lighting Justu for the next turn

~Declined do not resubmit~ This is a cannon technique, it is absolutely forbidden to submit cannon techniques. Let this be your first warning, next time you'll be banned from this thread for 1 week.

 

[black uchiha]

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SY gave me permission to resubmit this cj
Resubmits

(Konchu sutairu: Chakura no ezuke) Insect Style: Chakra Feeding
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80 (if feed on directly)
Description: The user has a selection (his choice) of his insects, to feed on/devour any available chakra effective up to A-rank (I.e. his chakra, chakra strings, chakra shields...etc) and also non aggressive S-rank chakra. In doing this, the insects cancel the wanted effect of the devoured chakra (I.e. shielding, puppet connection...etc).
-Non-elemental chakra only
-If used on chakra A-rank and below the bugs can continue to fight
-If used on non aggressive S-rank chakra the bugs survive, but become static & can't move for 1 turn due to over feeding
-Can only use 3 times per battle
-No other S-rank bug techniques in the same move
-Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

~Leaving for SY~


Declined. I told you the only way I'd let you resubmit is if you did a complete overhaul of the jutsu, which you didnt do. You still left the ability to devour any chakra and used non aggressive jutsu as the examples then stated that it could also devour non-agressive jutsu. your examples are misleading because I know you true purpose is to be able to devour fireballs and lightning blasts, like you originally intended, since that would fall under the blanket statement of "any chakra".

Resubmit

(Konchu sutairu: Chakura no ezuke) Insect Style: Chakra Feeding
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80 (if feed on directly)
Description: The user has a selection (his choice) of his insects, to feed on/devour any the available (non elemental) chakra, effective up to A-rank (I.e. his chakra, chakra strings, chakra shields...etc) and also non aggressive S-rank chakra(non elemental). In doing this, the insects cancel the wanted effect of the devoured chakra (I.e. shielding, puppet connection...etc).
-Non elemental chakra only
-If used on chakra A-rank and below the bugs can continue to fight
-If used on non aggressive S-rank chakra the bugs survive, but become static & can't move for 1 turn due to over feeding
-Can only use 3 times per battle
-No other S-rank bug techniques in the same move
-Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

Leaving for SY
~Approved~


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(Sesshomaru) Sesshomaru
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80 (from hissing)
Description: User summons Sesshomaru, King Shinobu’s head adviser. Sesshomaru is one of the few beetles of Mt. Gen that stands in a humanoid from. He stands 30ft tall with a horn extending another 10ft from his head. Sesshomaru also has an 8ft spike that rises from each shoulder, and a heavily armored exoskeleton that protects him from normal weapons and A-rank and below techniques of any nature (only 2). Sesshomaru has the nature affinities of lightning and wind them, up to S-rank. He also is among the strongest beetles of Mt. Gen able to lift 850 times his body weight. Sesshomaru has a special ability to release a loud hissing sound

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in a specific direction, that is deafening and debilitating to anyone/anything in its path (up to mid-range). Upon hearing this, the opponent(s) muscles become weak and fall to the ground unable to move for a short time (1 turn).
- Can only be summoned once per battle
- Only last 4 turns
- Hissing can only be used 2 times per battle
- Paralysis only last 1 turn
-The user can be caught in the hissing (if applicable)
- Must sign the Rhinoceros Beetle contract
- Must have signed the Rhinoceros Beetle contract of 1 months

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~Declined~ OP. 1 element only. 850 times his weight would make him several times stronger then someone opening all eight gates, take that out completely. No sound jutsu from a summon. Your restrictions are a mess, you say you can summon him once but he can be used 2 times per battle?

(Sachiko) Sachiko
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user summons Sachiko to the field. Sachiko is one of the few beetles of Mt. Gen that stands in a humanoid from. She stands 30ft tall, and unlike most female rhinoceros beetles that don’t have horns, she has two 10ft horns extending outward 7ft, and upward 3ft, from her head. Sachiko also has 3ft spikes that line her body, and a heavily armored exoskeleton that protects her from normal weapons. Even though her name means child of happiness, she is anything but, she, being the only female with horns, feels she has to be just as tough as the males and she is among the strongest beetles of Mt. Gen able to lift 840 times her body weight, she also wields the horn (15ft) of her fallen father as a sword (pictured below/bottom pic top horn). She has the nature affinity of lightning using it up to S-rank. Sachiko has a special ability to shead her skin/exoskeleton at will and use it as a shield or a decoy.

- Can only be summoned once per battle
- Only last 4 turns
- Sheaded skin can only withstand 2 A-rank attacks
- Shedding only last 2 turn
- Shedding only works in a tall dense area (woods, forest…etc)
- Can only shed once per battle
- Must sign the Rhinoceros Beetle contract
- Must have signed the Rhinoceros Beetle contract of 1 months

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~Declined~ A 10ft horn that stands out 7th and 3 ft? How is that even possible ~__~. Get your math right. Same as above for the raw strength. Mention that every move she does counts toward yours. Make it B-rank for the Skin.

 

[Gitanshu]

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[Nagato..]

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♆ The Prayers of Hades | Hadesu No Inori ♆
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 95
Damage: N/A -60 [Strain To The User]
Descripton: Having mastered earth element the user performs a string of 10 handseals while concentrating a large portion of their chakra into the earth below the target(s) vicinity. Upon finishing, there is a 5 second delay in which it seems nothing has been done but the ground deep underneath the opponent is eroding from within at an alarming rate causing the vicinity in which the chakra was inserted to collapse creating a massive sinkhole to form which is said to be so deep that you can hear the God of the underworld, Hades screaming in prayer to Zeus to be freed from his eternal prison. Although its not a genjutsu the sudden shock of the ground from beneath the opponent(s) feet collapsing at such an alarming rate causes them to be put in a genjutsu like state similar to "Killing intent", where the constant force of the wind from free falling whistles in their ears giving the illusion that someone is screaming from below.

Note: Takes one turn to prepare.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: Must have mastered Earth
Note: Must be of at least Kage Ranked
Note: No other Earth techniques for 4 Turns including this one.
Note: Can also be used to form a blue hole, if the user is touching the ground near a body of water.
Note: Can only be used by Nagato..


The size of the sinkhole formed

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~All Declined~ I will not accept any jutsu that use font, size change, aligned/centered text or spoilers for anything else then pictures. Re-submit in a more readable way.
Thank you.

Note: I've checked it nonetheless so here's my verdict. Take out the genjutsu and add physical damages so it can legitimately be ranked "Forbidden".

 

[TheGreyFox]

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Summoning Animal:Black tiger
Scroll Owner:TheGreyFox
Other Users who have signed contract:N/A
Summoning Boss if existing:N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A

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~Declined~ The Tiger contract already exist.

exploding clone(kibaku kuro)
Type:Attack
Rank: C
Range: N/A
Chakra: 30
Damage: 45
Description: the user makes one clone that has a small but powerfull exploding bom with in the clone and when given a good hit to the clone will set the bom off and also the clone can explode if the user wants it to

~Declined~ Do not submit cannon technique's rip off. This is your first and only warning, next time you'll be banned from this thread for one week.

 

[-Sasuke-]

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(Fuinjutsu: Shi Yari Takai) - Sealing Techniques: Four Spears of Lightning
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user uses 4 scrolls to summon four long metal spears, then by trowing all four of the spears on each side of your opponent(North,South,West,East),
the spears start discharging lighting chakra and creates threads of lighting which then link to each spear, the area in the middle of the four spears turns bright blue and raises into mid air, in a shape of a huge cube then starts discarging lighting chakra, and whoever is inside the area get critically damaged and is unable to move for 1 move unless spears are knocked down and
the link between the spears is broken. If not escaped the area shrinks, and after 3 moves the opponent is sealed and the opponent is sealed away and can no longer fight.


Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Can only be used by -Sasuke- unless stated otherwise

~Declined~ This is grossly OP for an A-rank technique. Were you even trained in Fuuinjutsus?

 

[Kurisutina]

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(Meiton: Yoru Hoshin Jotai) - Dark Release: Night Daze
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This user will gather their dark chakra and perform two handseals, as they finish the two handseals, they will release a wave of dark chakra through out the battlefield. The wave is able to break the opponent's ribs with just the force that it travels at. The wave has a special property of being able to affect the target's chakra network and cause their network to be distorted and cause an imbalance in their brain. The imbalance will cause them to be set off balance for a few moments. The effects are short however.
Restrictions:
~Usable twice.
~After using, the user cannot use this jutsu for one turn after use.

~Declined~ Similar techniques already exist.

(Genjutsu: Dakubaido) - Illusion Technique: Dark Void
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary / Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will put their hands together and then make eye contact with the opponent. Once their eyes meet, the opponent will have been put under the genjutsu. The genjutsu causes the ground below the opponent to be enveloped in darkness and the user will begin sinking into the darkness. Once their arms have sunk into the ground, they will lose their ability to move their arms while under the effects of the jutsu. Once fully enveloped in the darkness, they will then fall asleep.
Restrictions:
~Usable once.
~No Genjutsu next turn.

~Declined~ Why would they lose the ability to move their arms? In a genjutsu, the opponent must be under the impression there's something constraining his body. The rest seemed fine.

(Meiton: Dakubaido) - Dark Release: Dark Void
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will slap their hands together and as they do, they will release dark chakra to the ground beneath the opponent. The chakra will then emerge as a dark substance and wrap itself around the opponent. Once wrapped around the opponent, the opponent will not be able to get the chakra off unless they use a jutsu that can neutralize chakra on their body. The dark chakra will then forcibly extract the opponent's chakra causing their attacks to be weakened by 10 damage points while the dark chakra remains on them.
Restrictions:
~Usable once.
~The chakra remains stuck to the opponent for one turn.

~Declined~ I want you to take off the part where the opponent need to use a technique that "neutralize chakra on their body". Dark release isn't invincible to common element and such an ability is completely unrelated to the element. Re-word the description.

 

[Swizzik]

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~Custom Weapon~

Buki: Gilgamesh
Rank: S
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: N/A

Description:A set of black guantlet and greave-like weapons that use the elements of fire and lightning. When equipped they are attatched to the forearms or shins and at their ends channel the elemental claws of Gilgamesh. They are very versatile.When not in use Gilgamesh can be holstered on the users back.
Gilgamesh's most notable unique trait is it's ability to switch between two elemental states: slow but powerful fire claws, and nimbly weak electric claws. These two states also come with slightly different combo chains, effectively making Gilgamesh two weapons in one. Since Gilgamesh can be worn on both the arm and legs it can be worn however the user wants in battle and changed during battle also. Both pairs of Gauntlets can only use one elemental type of energy at a time so when in its fire mode the abilities of its lightning mode cannot be used unless it will cost more chakra to maintain, in this case one Gilgamesh gauntlet is in Fire mode and the other is lightning mode.

Normal mode
-In this mode Gilgamesh has no special abilities and only used to add more effect to taijutsu attacks e.g. clawing an opponent with kicks and slashes


Lightning Mode
-When in its lightning Mode Gilgamesh has the ability to destroy on contact any earth element jutsu A rank or lower due to its elements nature
-It has the ability in lightning mode to numb the opponent on contact
-It can boost the users speed when worn on the legs in this mode causing the user to move so fast that it causes the user to suffer from slight motion sickness after its used.

Fire Mode
-Able to disperse wind element jutsu A rank or lower on contact due to its elemental nature
-It has the ability to cause second degree burns to an opponent on contact

~Restrictions~
-Switching elemental modes during battle is equivalent to one jutsu used
-Switching between wearing Gilgamesh on arms and legs is equivalent to one jutsu used
-Holstering/drawing Durga in battle is equivalent to one jutsu used
-Speed boost allows the user to evade an attack or get close to the enemy and it can only be used twice in battle
-Destroying either an earth element attack or wind element attack is equivalent to one jutsu used and can only be used thrice in battle
-Jutsu that require hand signs and ninja weapons can't be used while wearing Gilgamesh on the arms
-Cannot stand on water while wearing Gilgamesh on the legs
-Must be a S-Class Ninja or above to wear
-Once worn it drains 2 chakra every turn
-If Durga comes in contact with B rank or above water jutsu while in lightning mode it will shock the user and if it comes in contact while in fire mode with B rank or above water jutsu it will be deactivated for one turn
-When they are using both elements the user loses 40 chakra points each turn
Durga can be worn on one arm and one leg but reduces the effects it has on jutsu only able to counter C rank and below jutsu of either earth or lightning
-Can only be used by Swizzik or any person he gives permission to

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~Declined~ Make it 1 element, and take out the part where you can dispel any element up to A-rank with it. Also, why in the world would you receive a speed boost? Please elaborate on the abilities and the power ups that it gives you (+5, +10...etc).

~Custom Weapon~

Buki: Gilgamesh
Rank: S
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 60

Description:A set of black guantlet and greave-like weapons that use the element of fire.When equipped they are attatched to the forearms or shins and at their ends channel the elemental claws of Gilgamesh. They are very versatile.When not in use Gilgamesh can be holstered on the users back.
Gilgamesh's most notable unique trait is it's ability to enter its fire mode.

Normal mode
-In this mode Gilgamesh has no special abilities and only used to add more effect to taijutsu attacks e.g. clawing an opponent with kicks and slashes

Fire Mode
-When in fire mode the user can smash into the ground with gilgamesh in order to erect a wall of flames in front of them within short-range equivalent to A rank.
-It has the ability to cause second degree burns to an opponent on contact

Note:Adds +5 to taijutsu

~Declined~ When re-submitting/editing jutsus, you need to put the added/altered part in bold. If you only took out part of your jutsu, you need to mention what was taken away.

Raiton:Ame no Raikou(Lightning release: Rain of lightning)
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80

Description: The user will send his lightning chakra into the air which mixes with the clouds and causes the clouds to rain hundreds of lightning senbon at the target which then cause tiny explosions on impact.

Restrictions
-Can't use lightning jutsu three turns after this jutsu is used
-Jutsu can only be used twice

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist (a less OP version).

 

[System001]

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Doragan Justu:Fenikkusu Tsubasa (Dragon Art: Phoenix Wings)
Rank:S
Chakra:30 +5/15 per turn
Type:Supplementuary
Description:The user Builds up a large amount of fire chakra in their shoulder blades and release's it outwards from the back of their shoulderblade they then use chakra manipulation to shape the chakra that they released from their back into the shape of two very large wings comprised of hot white flames and using chakra manipulation to make these wings keep their shape and remain in a solid sort of state
The wings have a wingspan of around 10 feet and can be used like the wings of a normal bird. The wings can be used to envelop the user shielding the user from projictiles such as kunai and A rank and below justu and S rank wind justu.
The user can "flap" these wings allowing him to stay airborn however due to convection currents and the fact that the wings are comprised purely of fire the user cannot fly more than 8 ft in the air otherwise the wings will simply disperse. The user can also use the wings to increase his speed and strength on the ground flapping the wings to gain more momentum and velocity while running or flapping them to overpower a enemy in say a sword clash struggle.

~+5 to all fire justu while in this state
~Can block up to three A rank justu and S rank wind justu
~Can Block up to two A rank water justu
~Can block up to One Lightning Earth and Fire justu
~Can only be used while in the Flame Dragon Slayer state
~Only Last's for Two Turns
~Only One Justu can be avoided per Turn
~Can Be used Twice Per Match
~+20 damage to Secret Art Raging Dragon Uppercut
~User can take flight to avoid attacks in a similar way to
~can only be used and taught by whiteflash

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(Fūton: Kaze Ogawa) - Wind Release: Wind Stream Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to change direction in mid-air at high speeds by simply blowing wind out their mouth.

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Doragon Justu:Hoono Doragon Otakebi (Dragon Justu:Flame Dragons Roar)
Rank:S
Type:Attack
Range:Mid/long
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:The user inhales a large amount of air,The user then Builds a large amount of fire chakra in the pit of their belly they then force this fire chakra up through their neck into theyre mouth Focusing all the built up fire chakra in their mouth they then preform four hand seals
Rat Dog Boar and Dragon and exhales out all the pent up fire chakra releasing a extremely hot spiraling fiery torrent from theyre mouth.
The fire released is white due to its dragon slayer properties and is also extremely hot hot enough to melt through solid rock like a hot knife through butter the intense heat formed by the flames is hot enough to cause lightning to appear due to the flames heating up the lower atmosphere so much and the upper atmosphere being cool causing convection currents to occur which then produces Dry Lightning, however the lightning does not occur on a high strength scale and is more similar to the static that you can get from rubbing your head against a balloon however the crackling sound that can sometimes be heard when static is produced occurs so many times in such a small amount of time that it can sometimes be mistaken for a dragons "roar" henceforth giving it its name Flame Dragons Roar. The flames travel at rather high speeds and can quickly reach their target even when at long range

~Can only be used while in dragon slayer state
~Can only be used once per turn
~excessive use of this technique will result in the user burning their throat severly
~can only be Taught and used by white flash
~+10 damage if Phoenix Wing technique is active

~All Declined~ Not only were you banned from this thread for a week for this post (marker), but you edit it and added your submission -___-, you're now in my little black book lol.

 

[ImLazyGetOverIt]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Feel free to add or edit for approval:

(Kasai/Mizu Kentai: Futtou Kangoku) | Fire/Water Combination: Boiling Prison
Rank:S
Type:Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:40
Damage:80
Description: This jutsu is similar to Water Style: Water Prison. The difference is once the victim is trap within the prison, with his 2nd hand, the user focuses his Katon chakra and places it in the prison. This boils the water, burning and sufficating the victim.
Note: Since this tech uses both hands, the user won't have his hands available while this jutsu is active
Note: Can only be used by ILGOI and the people he teaches

~Declined~ Since you need to keep infusing the water with chakra to keep your opponent trapped, you can't perform another technique unless you've mastered Yin Yang (to mold two different chakra at once). I somewhat doubt you've received that training.

(Katon: Makai O Ato Kanbou) | Fire Release: Hell in a Cell
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost:40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user takes in a deep breath while simultaneously making 3 handseals. Once the user finishes the last hand seal, the Tiger Seal, the user will shoot a fireball in the air. After one more handseal, the fireball will spread, surrounding the user and victim into a dome of fire. The dome is large enough that the max. distance between the user and the victim will be mid-range. It is about 15 ft tall at its peak, giving the user and victim little room to jump.
Note: Only lasts for 4 turns
Note: Can only be used twice during the battle
Note: Once inside, the user can't cancel it
Note: Can only be used by ILGOI and the people he teaches

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

(Katon: Tonsou Kara Makai) | Fire Release: Escape from hell
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Once in the dome of Fire Release: Hell in a Cell, the user jumps back and performs one handseal, making a hole just big enough for him to escape from the dome. As he leaves the dome, the user will perform 3 handseals and fill the dome with a huge fireball, buring everything inside the dome.
Note: Can only be used while Fire Release: Hell in a Cell is active
Note: Can only be used by ILGOI and the people he teaches

~Declined~ Hell in a Cell wasn't approved.

 

[Necron]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Futon: Mahokaze no Sofu) - Wind Release: Magic Wind Blast.
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user creates 2 rings of slashing wind betwin his hands (one ring in the other), with a ball of compressed wind in the middle, at the size of a voley ball and launches it streight forward. It slices on touch, and pushes the enemy backwards (from the wind that decompresses). Can be used many times in consecution.
Restrictions:
~Cannot be used if the enemy is not in sight of the user.
~When used more than twice in consecution, cannot use any other jutsu except "Futon: Kaze Ryuu no Sofu" this turn.
Special characteristics:
~If the user holds a weapon, he gets unarmed for 2 turns.
~If the target uses a short rank attack as his first move the next turn, the attack will miss, 'cause he got pushed backwards.

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

(Futon: Atsuryoku-shitsu) - Wind Release: Pressure Room.
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Hand Seals: Tiger, Dragon, Bird
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 0/40
Description: The user Creates a 2meter diameter Bubble of compressed air around him, with a 20cm "compression free zone" around him. The bubble moves around the user like an "aura".
Restrictions:
~The air supply of the "compression free zone" lasts for 3 turns, so the user will either terminate the jutsu, or suffer the same consequences as the people trapped in it.
~This Jutsu can only be used 3 times per battle.
~This Jutsu can only be taught by Necron.
Special characteristics:
~ Anyone inside the bubble, including the jutsu caster, will be able to use only 1 move per turn. This applyes after the caster uses the jutsu.
~If anyone inside the bubble tryes to move (either attack or escape), and is not in the "compression free zone", he takes 40 damage. If they just stand still, they take no dammage from this jutsu.
~To escape from the bubble, one can "run away", but will still take 40 damage doing so.
~This justsu cannot be canceled if the target(s) used a close range move last turn.

Feel free to change anything you consider needs changing, in order to get approval! ^^

~Declined~ The whole concept of pressure alteration was taken as a CE.

 

[Izuna Uchiha]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Anyone using "markers" or anything similar to those will receive and infraction and be banned from the CJ thread for 1 week.

This is an insult to the mods checking this thread. It's not because you have the right to submit 3 CJ a week that you must do it and submit unacceptable junk "just in case it gets approved". Submit customs when you have an idea. Do not post in this thread in prevision of future ideas you might have.

I will have absolutely no tolerance for such posts.

I'm closing the thread now to infract all the members who posted markers.

 

[Izuna Uchiha]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

This was added to the first post of this thread:

~"Markers", or empty posts (with no actual custom jutsu being submitted) created for the sole purpose of being edited later on, are strictly forbidden and shall be considered as nothing more than spam.

 

[Caliburn]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Fuuton: Suraisu Kaze Taijutsu) - Wind Style: Slicing Winds Taijtusu -

Spoiler

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80 and -20 for the user (-5 each turn)
Description: The user releases fuuton-based chakra from his arms and legs and uses it to control the air around it, making the air move around the users arms and legs at high speeds in multiple directions. As a result the kicks, punches etc. have increased accuracy and are a lot deadlier. A limb that makes direct contact with these 'slicing winds' is severed instantly. However the users fist/leg doesn't need to make direct contact to hurt the opponent. As the air rushes around the limbs of the user, the air can still slice the opponent if the user just misses the opponent, though then the damage is a lot smaller (cuts an slashes around the opponents limb that was attacked).
The entire proces of forcing chakra out of the body and making slicing winds around the limbs happens almost instantly.

*Lasts for 4 turns*
*The slicing winds make minor cuts in the users arms and legs*
*Can only be used once per battle*
*Can only be taught by Caliburn*

Updating that one (well more like an extreme make over custom jutsu edition) to this:

(Fuuton: Kaze Yuushitessen) - Wind Style: Barbed Wind Wire -

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 30 (+5)
Damage points: 60 (+15)
Description: The user uses shape manipulation to shape their fuuton chakra into several extremely thin wind ropes that then coil around the user, though a certain distance remains between the users body and the ropes. The ropes are continuously in motion, moving at an excessive pace and speed, just like a teeth less buzz saw. As a result when they come into touch with something, they cut right through it cleanly. The accuracy and reach of the users taijutsu has also increased. If an opponent's limb makes direct contact with these ropes, it can be severed instantly. However the user's attack doesn't need to make direct contact to hurt the opponent as the ropes can still cut the opponent even if the user just misses due to the increased range.
This jutsu can also be used in a different way, namely as an ambush. Instead of coiling the ropes around the user, the user places the ropes around the battlefield (he can just manouver the ropes without moving much) as a trap for when the opponent runs into one of these ropes, it means highely likely death. It works best in terrains with obstacles like trees or large rocks where the ropes easily can be coil around and travel from one side to another, however due the wind nature of the ropes they can also just hang in the air. When used this way this jutsu can't attack the opponent directly unless he walks into them himself, however they can placed close to him to restrict his movements. By using exploding tags or katon chakra, the user can blow up the entire rope system, blowing everything within the domain of the ropes.

*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*Can only be active for max 5 turns and for each turn +5 chakra has to be paid*
*When used as an ambush the ropes are practically invisible to the naked eye because they're so thin, with the exception for sensors, Byakugan and Sharingan users. When used for taijutsu the ropes are visible as the user needs to watch out he doesn't cut himself.*



(Fuuton: Tetsufunjin Zansatsu) - Wind Style: Iron Dust Massacre -

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user grabs some iron dust from his pocket, roughly the amount of two hands. He then closes both hands so that it looks like he's praying, however he leaves a round opening between his thumbs. The user then inhales, focusing a large amount of fuuton chakra in his throat. Then when he's going to exhale all the fuuton chakra, he places his mouth against the opening in his hands. Then on the moment the chakra will be shot through his hands, he widens his fingers on the opposite side so that an opening is created. As a result when the user releases all the fuuton chakra, it's forced through the hands and is then blasted out of it alongside the iron dust, which travels towards the target with incredible speed. Everything that stands in the way of the attack is completely massacred, in the case of a human ending up like a cut up bloody and gore pile of meat that looks like a sleve.

*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*This is not an Iron Sand jutsu considering the user doesn't manipulate the iron, he just uses it to increase the damage*
*Due to the iron dust the jutsu is way more resilient towards fire based jutsu's than normal wind jutsu's*
*Does not require any handseals*

 

[Mattobi]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Genjutsu: Sensei no noroi) Illusionary Arts: The Curse of a Sensei
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user sends is chakra into the opponents mind after performing the 3 necessary handseals and manipulates it so that the opponent will be surrounded by people. Not some ordinary people, but people who complain about training, senseis and sempais. The mass will always get closer to the victim and the opponent will get the feeling like he is being choked. This jutsu is extremely effective against new senseis.
Note: Can only be used with Yoshi's permission
Note: Can only be used three times per battle

~Declined~ Be serious in your next submissions.

(Genjutsu: Nai jutsu o hanasanai) Illusionary Arts: Talk No Jutsu
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user sends his chakra into his opponents mind and uses it to disturb the chakra flow of the opponents brains. As this happens, the user performs a handseal and suddenly the opponent starts to hear a voice speaking. The voice uses a long and logical speech, making the opponent become filled with doubt and completely confused. The illusion is so well made that any person will hear a different speech, the voice will point out every weakness and faults that the opponent has made during his life. This will confuse and anger him. The speech is so long and so dense that the enemy will not be able to find a fault and will eventually believe in what was said, leading to mental breakdown and even, in some cases, madness.
Note: Can only be used with Yoshi's permission
Note: Can only be used three times per battle

~Declined~ You can't predict how your opponent will react. So, all the bold part is void.

 

[Ushiro]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Bōei o Bunpō) - Swarming Defence
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: A swarm of around three dozen locusts are summoned from the users sleeves that generate a barrier of chakra maintained from the other side as they fly. The barrier can have various shapes depending on the arrangement of the locusts which makes it convenient for multiple situations. Holes may form in the barrier if the locusts maintaining it are damaged. It can defend against A-rank and lower ninjutsu. Alternatively, this technique can be used by at least 30 locusts that have already been summoned.
-Usable 3 times per battle
-Must have signed the locust contract

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

 

[Luther]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Doton: Yasumichuu Funkei)Earth style: enclosed Decapitation
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This Jutsu can only be done on ground or where there is earth,the user make earth hand seals and focuses his chakra on hands and slamming palm to the ground bringing about 4 large enclosed rock pillars with Multiple sharp edges which quickly pierces the opponent heart and if not avoided other organs thus leading to decapitation and making the victim dead in few minutes. Can only be counter altered by a lIgh ning jutsu of a higher rank.
Note:Can Be used twice in battle
Note:The user must wait 3 turns to use again

~Declined~ Our system work with damage point, you can't say you'll kill your opponent with a technique (even if we understand that it can). Take out anything related to killing your opponent. Also, take out the part where it can ONLY be countered by high lightning, you don't know that for sure.

(Raiton: Dendou Omoi Chisou )Lightning Style: Eletric Heart feast
Rank:A
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: This user draws a massive amount of lightning chakra in his palm similar to that of chidori which takes the shape of a large like chakra mass but allows different rotator movements and is aimed for the opponents chest which when hit paralyzes the opponent from breathing and pumping blood and living the opponent dead in minutes. This jutsu can only be counter-altered by a wind jutsu of such rank or higher.

~Declined~ Same as above, and where are the restrictions?

((Kurisutaru no sutairu: Mirā funsai))Crystal style: Mirror Shatter

Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage points:80
Description; Guren holds and focuses on her chakra and then in one stroke place her focused chakra palm on the ground bring up a huge hue enclosed wall made of crystalline with several mirrors to confuse his opponent and keep him from escaping she then send thousands of needle sharp crystalline into the wall tearing the opponent limb from limb the then she send a huge amount of heat blast through her palms to crush the wall and bring it falling down crushing the opponent to death. Its wall can not be penetrated by any A rank jutsu or lower, it can also be you used as a great defensive shield to protect against s rank jutsu or lower the guren does this simply by trapping herself in the wall which can defend against extreme temperature rain or humidity.
Note: Can only be taught by thunderbolt
Note: Can Be used once a battle

~Declined~ Same as above, also, re-read yourself because the description is a mess. Make it so it can defend from A-rank max, after which it will shatter (since this technique isn't only meant to be a defensive one). Lastly, if you're going to send a heat blast, I'm guessing you need to gather your fire chakra and hence this technique need to counts as 2 technique if you haven't mastered Yin Yang.