Triple Terror of Kirigakure: Charge!

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Triple Terror of Kirigakure: Charge!​

"Shhhhhh, quiet", Zabuza whispered to Raiga, "The Kaguyas are out there, we must not hesitate, sooner or later, we will be forced to fight!", Raiga said troubled, Zabuza gazed upon Raiga for a moment, and then he approved Raiga's thought with an "OK", which poured out from Zabuza's mouth, straight and clear.
Kisame shared the same thought with his fellow-swordsmen, they were hiding in a bush, at the forest, there was silence, anxiety and the enemy could attack at any time!
"Now!", Zabuza shouted, the swordsmen jumped out from the bushes and charged the battlefield.

The Kaguyas, used their barbarous and dangerous Kekkei Genkai, as soon as the battle started, as the swordsmen used their swords, even though they were outnumbered they fought bravely! Soon enough, they were running out of chakra, Kisame's sword, itself, was damaged and unable to suck up chakra.
"Zabuza... We must end this now and leave, if we keep going like this, we will fall!", Kisame shouted, fighting with difficulties, "Okay... Let's do this", Zabuza said.
Then in the blink of an eye, Kisame created a large water prison, imprisoning some Kaguyas inside, Zabuza enlarged his sword and shot it at the water prison, killing a few Kaguyas, then Raiga channeled the lightening through his swords and directed the continuous flow of electricity, at that water jutsu of Kisame, and a massive explosion was seen!

Many Kaguyas died, "Oh, no, reinforcements are arriving.... Let's get away from here", Raiga shouted, "You're right, we're hopeless if we keep going like this... Hidden Mist Jutsu !", Zabuza said as he performed hand-sign, the mist made it impossible for the Kaguyas to see where the swordsmen were. As soon as the mist disappeared, the swordsmen were gone.
"My lord, they escaped... Again!!!", Kagetoshi Kaguya said to Orochimaru, "It's okay... Sooner or later they will fall, and that time I will finally conquer Kiri... Mwaahahaha", Orochimaru smirked, an evil intention hides beneath his evil smile.

Next... Triple Terror of Kirigakure: Kill them all!
 
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This is a very interesting fanfiction. I can't say that I've ever read one involving the Kirigakure swordsman. Phenomenal job on your writing, plot and action scenes. I was surprised that you added Raiga seeing as he was a filler character. Although, Kishimoto-sensei has yet to reveal all of the seven swords possessors therefore it makes sense you'd use this character. Orochimaru seemingly the major antagonist of the story is awesome! My favorite villain is Kisame and because his character is in this story its even better ^.^ Looking forward to the following chapter ;)
 
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This is a very interesting fanfiction. I can't say that I've ever read one involving the Kirigakure swordsman. Phenomenal job on your writing, plot and action scenes. I was surprised that you added Raiga seeing as he was a filler character. Although, Kishimoto-sensei has yet to reveal all of the seven swords possessors therefore it makes sense you'd use this character. Orochimaru seemingly the major antagonist of the story is awesome! My favorite villain is Kisame and because his character is in this story its even better ^.^ Looking forward to the following chapter ;)
Thanks, for commenting man, I knew that no one made a FanFic, about the swordsmen, I like them very much, so I thought I'd make this story!
 
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