Parody ~Idea~

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Reborn

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Hey People, I'm making this thread to expose an idea that I have for a fanfiction idea, and I just want some opinions from FF writters and readers. So feel free to post criticisms, suggestions, and your overall view on the subject. I can take it, I'm not stranger to these things lol

It's another parody of the Naruto series, however it's not focusing on a shinobi aspect but rather positions of the characters, specifically the character of Hinata Hyuuga. Now I'm not sure if I'm going to use the actual characters (Hinata, Shikamaru, Naruto, etc) or create my own names and simply have the aspects of those characters within my own or not. There are advantages to either. With the use of the actual characters and their names I give the readers familiarity with them. With the creation of my own characters it gives the readers that level of mental work to do on their own in regards to figuring out which characters represent the cannon characters.

My story plot is a struggle for Hinata(or character protrayed as Hinata) between her feelings for two individuals. One being a person she has admired and loved for practically her entire life (Naruto) and another character (of my own creation). This being said there are several trials that she herself goes through to discover her feelings, as well as trials and realizations of the other two characters feelings towards her and also each other, essencially acting as rivals (not neccessarily for their own affection or level of care towards Hinata, but for Hinata's affection towards them and how they react to her feelings and as a result, act towards each other). In the end obviously there are some twists and turns and whatever that I intend to make a great experience for you all as readers (Or at least tryxd) and you make your conclusions based on that.

This is a new challenge for me, as it forces me to use accurate representation of all the characters (and some characters I add into the mix) from the series I use, and it forces an unfamilure atmosphere to me overall.

I've never done romance//drama based writting as this, I'm more war, fighting, and political in my writting.

I generally have my own guidlines when refering to character creation. I've never gone beyond the point of actual character study. This requires character study and accurate articulation to represent them as best I can to their true characters in the manga.

I'm going to attempt novel-style instead of script just to see if I can.

Basically this is a new experience for me (which is the main reason I'm doing it) and I want to see how I fair and if I can pull it off. Also this will give me experience away from my usual style (which is always good regardless if I succeed or fail miserably lol). Anyway leave your thoughts please; suggestions, criticims, etc...I'll listen

One last thing, I have sort of a bias (as I'm NaruHina) to the way Naruto actually sees Hinata (he cares more for Hinata then he does any other character outside the main cast i.e Sakura, Sasuke, Jiraiya. Out of all the supporting characters, he has a care for her above the rest of them, and is to be compared closly to Sakura). I want to let you all know that to give you a general sense of how I will/may write this story and to give my conclusions based on my study of the characters. This doesn't mean I will neccessarily pair the two together.
 

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as long as its funny, you should be fine
 

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A really good idea and i believe u should go all out.bt one thng i must say the amount of corniness the romantic dramas possess i dont thnk u have that much.so first use it to give urself growth
 

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It'll be great, I'm sure! Especially if you make the mystery character interesting... will he clash with Naruto and cause a dramatic fight over her? Or will he be a close confidant, and cause hurt between Hinata AND Naruto while in the love triangle?

Muahahahah~
 

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Yes, NB definitely needs less "script" style fan fictions.
 

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A really good idea and i believe u should go all out.bt one thng i must say the amount of corniness the romantic dramas possess i dont thnk u have that much.so first use it to give urself growth

It's more dynamic then a simple romantic drama (at least in my mind at the momentxdxd). What I'm saying is, it's dealing with a lot of psycology, mind games, and you can even say wrong of me to describe such damage to a character's mind and their emotions. The main layout is a romance that utilizes theses characteristics, that can boarder line be refered to as psycological torture. This is only stuff you'd see in such romantic drama based manga and stories in general. Real life, situations like these would be rather rare and scarce. It's an extreme case in actual reality but not so much in manga and things like this. It's hard to explain without actually giving you the text to read, but you'll see as it gets started.

It'll be great, I'm sure! Especially if you make the mystery character interesting... will he clash with Naruto and cause a dramatic fight over her? Or will he be a close confidant, and cause hurt between Hinata AND Naruto while in the love triangle?

Muahahahah~

There will be a clash, whether it syncs in a good or bad way has yet to be determined.

Yes, NB definitely needs less "script" style fan fictions.

It's an easier format (script style anyway) which is why most people do it I guess. I get what you're saying though. This writting style (novel) is new for me, which is why I'm trying it.
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I think, since it will be hard for me to focus on just the feelings and mental/emotional beings of the three characters, that I'm going to spur off tangents in some chapters, about some other characters (probably Neji's character, Sakura, and Sasuke seeing as they'd be closer to the main three, or at least Naruto and Hinata)
 

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I love the idea... Hinata deserves some share in the spotlight.
Also, it seems that there is going to be a lot of humor into it. Surely, you will do a gret job writing it Reborn. You are a very good writer.
 

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I love the idea... Hinata deserves some share in the spotlight.
Also, it seems that there is going to be a lot of humor into it. Surely, you will do a gret job writing it Reborn. You are a very good writer.

Gracias senorita :D
 

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Romance stories aren't my style, but I encourage you to write what you want to write. I'm sure someone here will enjoy it. I think there are enough girls and narutoxhinata fanboys on this site to warrant it's creation
 

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Reborn u particularly excel in the dark psychological aspects so i am sure u wil do great.bt keep light also i hope u get my point
 

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Reborn u particularly excel in the dark psychological aspects so i am sure u wil do great.bt keep light also i hope u get my point

I wouldn't say I excell...you're making me sound like a little bit of a sociopath lol. I get what you're saying thanks.
 

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I like the idea. Sounds like a warm, light romance.
I like to read romantic FFs (you don't see much here), I myself have been wanting to write one, but it's hard (romance seems generally difficult for me T.T) since the main story-line really lacks...a romantic foundation (IMO, in comparison to other stories).
Usually, whenever I've read an FF, I don't really like when characters are made-up, but that doesn't mean it'll be bad.
So good luck, and can't wait.
What's the timeline for this story? Like, does this take place after the main story?

It's a hopeless case, but I still wish the story would end with Naruhina. T.T
But the last manga chapter really doused whatever little hope I had. It portrayed the two as just friends.
 
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