Custom Akatsuki

[ChrisWolf]

Come up with your own ninja character a totally original character who is an S-rank criminal for example I will describe my character. This for a new akatsuki, this could hundreds of years after the events that are going on in Naruto. Describe your character and their jutsu, write a short description or story of their background,explain how they came to be with the akatsuki A.K.A their iffiliation. Explain their agenda A.K.A their goals. All Fan Fic writers just to make it more fun please don't use any characters for your fan fic come up with new unique characters and try to make them very unique in some way here this an idea of what it should look like, this is my character:

Name: Salem bastion
Nickname: Most know him as "Fade"
Age: 29
Village: Sand
History: Salem grew up in the sand village but took very little interest in the sands style of combat. He had loved the legends and stores of the uchiha and always wished her were one. His father was a legendary puppet master but also a very strict desciplinary as a father and as a leader in the military. He forced Salem to learn the puppet master jutsu and he forced him to master at a higher level than anyone in his generation. As Salem grew into his teenage years his obsession with the uchiha overtook him. Eventually he would go missing for days at a time and would occassionally be found by his fathers spies traveling the road from Konoha to his home. When he was 18 his father finally decided to do an in-depth check on him and he discovered something terrible. Salem had been hunting uchiha and killing them taking their eyes. He had used body parts from many ninja from different villages to create perfect puppets and then implanted the sharingan in them. He knew the sacrifice it took to wield the sharingan so instead of implanting it into himself he implanted it into his puppets. His father tried to kill him as a devine punishement but he was killed instead. This inadvertently cause the mangekyo sharingan to awaken in the two puppets he was using at the time. He disappeared from the village and formed his own version of the Akatsuki. "It doesn't have to be called Akatsuki I am open for suggestions on a name for the group". Now he has 20 sharingan puppets and only two with the Mangekyo. He also wields a unique puppet he built known as "Ghost" it is used as a spy and some believe it has some of Zetsu's DNA and therefore similar abilities. As for Salem himself he uses typical sand jutsu but has also mastered several jutsu from other styles that he learned through use of his puppets sharingan.

Abilities: Basic water style, fire style and advanced sand techniques along with his body being implanted with weapons and secret dangers he is almost half puppet, he wields 20 sharingan puppets and two mangekyo although he only use tsukynomi with them for now, his "Ghost" puppet has abilities similar to Zetsu's.

Note: He is also a strategetic genius above all others and this is to be feared more then anything.

Goal: Undecided specifically he simply desires change.

 

[-Kisame-]

Come up with your own ninja character a totally original character who is an S-rank criminal for example I will describe my character. This for a new akatsuki, this could hundreds of years after the events that are going on in Naruto. Describe your character and their jutsu, write a short description or story of their background,explain how they came to be with the akatsuki A.K.A their iffiliation. Explain their agenda A.K.A their goals. All Fan Fic writers just to make it more fun please don't use any characters for your fan fic come up with new unique characters and try to make them very unique in some way here this an idea of what it should look like, this is my character:

Name: Salem bastion
Nickname: Most know him as "Fade"
Age: 29
Village: Sand
History: Salem grew up in the sand village but took very little interest in the sands style of combat. He had loved the legends and stores of the uchiha and always wished her were one. His father was a legendary puppet master but also a very strict desciplinary as a father and as a leader in the military. He forced Salem to learn the puppet master jutsu and he forced him to master at a higher level than anyone in his generation. As Salem grew into his teenage years his obsession with the uchiha overtook him. Eventually he would go missing for days at a time and would occassionally be found by his fathers spies traveling the road from Konoha to his home. When he was 18 his father finally decided to do an in-depth check on him and he discovered something terrible. Salem had been hunting uchiha and killing them taking their eyes. He had used body parts from many ninja from different villages to create perfect puppets and then implanted the sharingan in them. He knew the sacrifice it took to wield the sharingan so instead of implanting it into himself he implanted it into his puppets. His father tried to kill him as a devine punishement but he was killed instead. This inadvertently cause the mangekyo sharingan to awaken in the two puppets he was using at the time. He disappeared from the village and formed his own version of the Akatsuki. "It doesn't have to be called Akatsuki I am open for suggestions on a name for the group". Now he has 20 sharingan puppets and only two with the Mangekyo. He also wields a unique puppet he built known as "Ghost" it is used as a spy and some believe it has some of Zetsu's DNA and therefore similar abilities. As for Salem himself he uses typical sand jutsu but has also mastered several jutsu from other styles that he learned through use of his puppets sharingan.

Abilities: Basic water style, fire style and advanced sand techniques along with his body being implanted with weapons and secret dangers he is almost half puppet, he wields 20 sharingan puppets and two mangekyo although he only use tsukynomi with them for now, his "Ghost" puppet has abilities similar to Zetsu's.

Note: He is also a strategetic genius above all others and this is to be feared more then anything.

Goal: Undecided specifically he simply desires change.

wow thats a really good idea for a character!


lol i doubt i can think of something that creative

 

[ChrisWolf]

wow thats a really good idea for a character!


lol i doubt i can think of something that creative

lol well go for it! their are countless clans and kekai genkai and types of jutsu in the Naruto verse I think we could all come up with original ideas I mean you could make up your own clan and kekkai genkai if you want to. Of course it doesn't have to be a clan thing you know it could be curse mark type of thing or other experiment types of things like that.

 

[Selendrile]

I think ill make one tonight! This looks pretty cool. No look description?

 

[-Kisame-]

lol well go for it! their are countless clans and kekai genkai and types of jutsu in the Naruto verse I think we could all come up with original ideas I mean you could make up your own clan and kekkai genkai if you want to. Of course it doesn't have to be a clan thing you know it could be curse mark type of thing or other experiment types of things like that.

is there ANY restrictions for this post? like you need a certain amount of posts to give your character (insert jutsu here)

 

[ChrisWolf]

I think ill make one tonight! This looks pretty cool. No look description?

I'm still thinking about mine but yeah we gotta do a look description too. My ultimate plan is to get all fan fic writers and people with ideas on this and then also get all of the artis and fan drawers on this site to help draw our characters too! it could be something epic if enough people work on it, and the best part is the more people that contrinute to this then the the less each one of us would have to work so it wouldnt be so time consuming of course if we do get to the point of forming a solid story around this we would have to take votes and polls to decide on conflicting ideas. It may sound messy but I believe we could make it work.

 

[Sharingdork]

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Four is for death. Nine is for tourture.​

Name: Frezari Yotsuki
Nickname: N/A
Age: 23
Previous Village: Cloud
History: The decendant of the Fourth Raikage, Frezari is the first Cloud ninja to defect and join the Akatsuki (or Akatsuki-like organization). He was sent to the leaf village to kill off two ninja who were accused of harboring a jinchuriki. After killing the Senshi ninja, and discovering that they had no jinchuriki, Frezari returned to the hideout, before the Senshi boy, Nin, returned home. After that day, Nin swore to kill Frezari (though not knowing who killed his parents).
Frezari carried out orders and followed the chain of command in the organization, making it to senior member in his partnership during the few years that followed. Later, on a mission to raid a small merchant town for any jinchuriki signs, Frezari finally met Nin Senshi. Nin displayed a mastery of lightning, as was Frezari's affinity. Nin and Frezari devisated the small town with their powerful lightning ninjutsu. At the end of the fight, Frezari stood over a weakened Nin, and told him that four (a number which revolved around Nin very much) was less than nine (Frezari's personal favorite number). Frezari then amost struck down Nin with his dual katana's, both named "Nine", when he was stopped by Nin's sensei. The two sides left in bolts of lightning, and since that day, Frezari's goal has been to finish what he started and kill Nin Senshi.
Abilities: Frezari has a great mastery of lightning and earth style ninjutsu's, as well as a great mastery over the use of his dual katana's and taijutsu. Frezari has developed his own "Kekkei Genkai" (more of a Hidden Jutsu) by combining his lightning and earth elements. His so-dubbed "Energy Style" allowed him to send electrical currents into any earthen or metalic objects, allowing him to draw them to him, push them away from him, or cause them to simply explode.
Note: Frezari specializes in using natural lightning instead of chakra manipulation. He's also better at making earth lower, rather than raise, creating craters with more speed than walls for his earth jutsu.
Goal: None; become as powerful as possible. Kill Nin Senshi.

And "Akatsuki" means "Dawn" or "Daybreak", so we could be "Yūgure", or "Dusk". And if this become's a FF, I expect to write all of Frezari's parts (leaving everything else up to others to decide), and I can provide more information on Nin Senshi (Frezari's counterpart; the Sasuke to Frezari's Itachi, I suppose)

 

[-Yard-]

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And "Akatsuki" means "Dawn" or "Daybreak", so we could be "Yūgure", or "Dusk".

Dusk was created by bisha a whiiiile back when the RP just started and was composed of top rp'ers.

 

[ChrisWolf]

is there ANY restrictions for this post? like you need a certain amount of posts to give your character (insert jutsu here)

Nope there aren't any restrictions really except you need to try to make your ideas be compatible with other peoples ideas for example: If I wrote my character is the kage of the leaf village but you wanted your character to be kage then we would to have to come to some mutual agreement on it. I have ideas that could be a solution to problems like that but for now lets not worry about it until we get a lot of people adding their characters too. But you shouldn't try to make your character out to be the strongest character for example I could have also said that Salem has Amatarasu and susano and he has mastered sage mode lol but I kept him at a reasonable level so expect others to do the same and also try not to copy too many of others characters abilities I mean obviously their will be more then one person who creates an uchiha character lol but we can keep it civilized and the general idea is too keep all characters more or less equal for now.

 

[ChrisWolf]

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And "Akatsuki" means "Dawn" or "Daybreak", so we could be "Yūgure", or "Dusk".

Yard said that name has been used before but Oh well we can come up with something else but anyway you should make your character first.

 

[-Kisame-]

allllllllright here i go.

Name: Rayn
Nickname: none
Age: 20
Village: Village hidden in the Mist
Appearance: Medium build,short silver hair, typical human look, pitch black eyes
Brief History: Rayne was a shy kid growing up, only living with his father, the local blacksmith. With the new government, the Kage of the village decided to go back to the old ways of doing Chunin exams. This new form would pit student against student in a deathmatch, winner of course becoming a chunin rank ninja. Much to Raynes displeasure, his father demanded he go to the exams. Barely passing the acadamy, Rayne was scared for his life but knew he had to do it. During his battle with a fellow male ninja, Rayne got a newfound power within himself. Dispaching of his enemy in a matter of seconds using only a kunai, his father wanted to test his strength. Pitted against the entire class of newly graduated chunins, Rayne executed them all. So proud of his son, his father created him his very own weapon, based on a sword of one of the seven swordsman of the hidden mist "Zabuza". Not happy with killing his old classmates, Rayne slaughterd his father in the middle of the night for making him do such a cruel act. Vowing never to kill inocent people again, Rayne set out to find peace, only realizing killing is the only way. On his mission, he learned many things, but was taught by a ninja of the land of lightning. He was taught how to do simple lightning through water techninques, and to more advanced chidori techniques. After ongoing training, Rayne knew it was time to kill the ninja, only using him to learn new jutsus. Using his blade to coduct lightning above, he struck the ninja with a powerful electric shock, killing him. Rayne had to escape before villagers saw him so he fled to the sand village. Thus leading to his first encounter with Salem aka "Fade". During this encounter, Rayn used a bloodline technique he never knew he had. While battling Salems's puppets, Rayns eyes turned pitch black, allowing him to determine the opponents next move, a lot like an Uchihas Sharingan. However, the main difference is that if someone stares into his eyes, he can inflict pain on them without using a genjutsu. Salem was impressed with this new found power and encouraged Rayn to join his new organization.

Summon animal: Hammerhead Shark,electric eel.

abilities: Advanced level water jutsus,Advanced lighting jutsus, and average level fire and earth jutsus.

* his sword has an ability to become unbreakable by absorbing the iron out of the blood it sheds.
** Has abnormally large chakra levels
***Has an ability to summon a shark and take some of its genes to make himself faster and stronger beyond belief. Rarely needs to use such a jutsu though.

goal: to ultimatly find peace by using force.

looks kinda like this (without the wolf lol)

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[Hanon]

Name: Reina

Nickname: Rin

Age: 16

Village: Leaf

History: Reina grew up in the Leaf village. She had 2 brothers that are older than her. She had a little interest to battle combat. She had more interest in the medical nin, and how they take of other shinobis who got hurt during combat. As she grew into her late teen years, there was a mass bloodshed spread into her village. After that bloodshed, she lost everything. She lost her siblings, and her parents. After that incident Reina trained herself to become the strongest shinobi in healing, and battlng skills.

Abilities: Cherry Blossom Impact, Chaakra enhanced strength, Delicate illness extraction, mystical palm techinique, Sakura blizzard technique

Note: She cares deeply about her teammates, and she is a vigrious fighter. Once it comes to healing she puts all she has to do her best.

Goal: She is undecisive, but knows that she would have to do some type of revenge.

 

[ChrisWolf]

allllllllright here i go.

Name: Rayne
Nickname: none
Age: 20
Village: Village hidden in the Mist

Brief History: Rayne was a shy kid growing up, only living with his father, the local blacksmith. With the new government, the Kage of the village decided to go back to the old ways of doing Chunin exams. This new form would pit student against student in a deathmatch, winner of course becoming a chunin rank ninja. Much to Raynes displeasure, his father demanded he go to the exams. Barely passing the acadamy, Rayne was scared for his life but knew he had to do it. During his battle with a fellow male ninja, Rayne got a newfound power within himself. Dispaching of his enemy in a matter of seconds using only a kunai, his father wanted to test his strength. Pitted against the entire class of newly graduated chunins, Rayne executed them all. So proud of his son, his father created him his very own weapon, based on a sword of one of the seven swordsman of the hidden mist "Zabuza". Not happy with killing his old classmates, Rayne slaughterd his father in the middle of the night for making him do such a cruel act. Vowing never to kill inocent people again, Rayne set out to find peace, only realizing killing is the only way. Thus leading to his first encounter with Salem aka "Fade".

Summon animal: Hammerhead Shark

abilities: Advanced level water jutsus,Advanced lighting jutsus, and average level fire and earth jutsus.

* his sword has an ability to become unbreakable by absorbing the iron out of the blood it sheds.

goal: to ultimatly find peace by using force.

sorry its so long

No I don't think its too long, and I really like how you have that he can summon a hammerhead shark that was very original. I think it's really good my only critic would be that it sounds a lot like Zabuzas story with him killing his classmates but you explained that his kage had just decided to go back to the old ways so thats ok. So a few questions, first does he have a shark like appearance like Kisame? just curious and second you said he has lightning abilities so do you mean like Raikage? because you know what would be cool is if he could combine his lightning style with his water style since lightning travels through water that would make him very lethal also and just an idea because it is your character but what if he could also summon an electric eel? you know like the ones in the ocean that would be a perfect collaberation of water and lightning style, and one more thing it's obvious he learned all of these abilites from his village but what about the lightning style where did he learn that? you can take your time to think about these things if you want but that was a very good job

 

[Sharingdork]

Yard said that name has been used before but Oh well we can come up with something else but anyway you should make your character first.

yeah, I hit "submit" before realizing that I hadn't made my character. I edited, and now my character is up. And the pic above is basically what he looks like (yes, he looks almost identical to the 2nd Mizukage).

 

[Zanji]

custom style Akatsuki with a different name that means "Dusk"

Yeah that was created waaaaaaay back in late 08 early 09 by Bishamon and myself called Higure

 

[ChrisWolf]

yeah, I hit "submit" before realizing that I hadn't made my character. I edited, and now my character is up. And the pic above is basically what he looks like (yes, he looks almost identical to the 2nd Mizukage).

Lol I thought the pic was a pic of the second mizukage when I saw it but anyway that is a very impressive story you got and I really like the character but the only thing I have to say and I'm sure everyone will agree with this...is that now we have two lightning style users in the organization so I don't think we should any more lightning style users and also I mentio before on "Itzsasukes" post that he needed to explain how he learned the lightning style well maybe he learned it from your character maye youre two characters were partners in the organization? and also of course you write all your parts but when you come into contact in the story "if we write one" with other peoples characters you will have to work together with them. So what are your thoughts on everything I just said?

 

[-Kisame-]

custom style Akatsuki with a different name that means "Dusk"

Yeah that was created waaaaaaay back in late 08 early 09 by Bishamon and myself called Higure

then i guess that means we have a legend in our thread then

 

[ChrisWolf]

then i guess that means we have a legend in our thread then

Yeah i didn't join this thread til' 011 we wont use that name for our group then but we are just starting with this akatsuki like group eventually we will have to come up with characters for the different villages and other things too. But everyone can only come up with one character for this group and once we have a reasonable number. "I'm thinking 12 because I don't want it to 10 like the original akatsuki, but I'm open to thoughts) then we would focus on the other characters.

 

[Sharingdork]

Lol I thought the pic was a pic of the second mizukage when I saw it but anyway that is a very impressive story you got and I really like the character but the only thing I have to say and I'm sure everyone will agree with this...is that now we have two lightning style users in the organization so I don't think we should any more lightning style users and also I mentio before on "Itzsasukes" post that he needed to explain how he learned the lightning style well maybe he learned it from your character maye youre two characters were partners in the organization? and also of course you write all your parts but when you come into contact in the story "if we write one" with other peoples characters you will have to work together with them. So what are your thoughts on everything I just said?

I think he learned his lightning style from the Cloud village (which has a VERY high number of lightning shinobi), and also learned his taijutsu there. He learned how to use dual katana's in the Land of Iron on his quest for power, and learned earth style from a hermit in the mountains of the Land of Lightning. and it was a pic of the Second Mizukage, it just also happens to be basically what Frezari looks like (I created this character a while ago in my head, and had everything but a name. Then the second Mizkuage came in, and I thought that he looked like my made up character. xd). And yeah, I can work with others. And the Akatsuki has two fire style users (Itachi and Kakuzu; even Tobi/Madara), two earth style users (Tobi/Madara and Kakuzu), two water style users (Itachi and Kisame), and technically, Pain could use every element, ect.

 

[Selendrile]

Well save a spot for me. I wont have time to do one right now, but Ill will in a few hours.