Shinusan Tsepatsi

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Name: Shinusan Tsepatsi
Nickname: Shinusan of lightning
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Clan: No Clan

Looks: Tall for his age 5'9" skinny, weighing 115 lbs. Thin, brown hair that is straight on the top of his head and curls at the end, his eyes are a dark brown, but turn black when he gets angry.

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Personality: Shinusan is a quiet child. He is normally alone or with one of his few good friends. He is extremely kind hearted, with a easy temper, but when he gets angry, his eyes darken and he becomes very ominous. He is strives to please, all he wants to do with his life is make people proud, and appreciate his presence.
Village Info.
Village of Birth: Kirigakure
Village of Alliance: At the moment Shinusan is allied with the Hidden Mist Village
Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: As of now Shinusan is a genin
Specialty: No specialties
Elements: Wishes to learn Lightning.
Your Ninjutsu: (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)



Background Info.
History: Shinusan is a 13 year old Gennin who has, so far, had a very terrible life. At the age of 8 his parents were taken by members of an Unknown Organization and brutally slaughtered in front of him and his twin brother, Gatseyu, and sister, Shinatseyu who at this time was 10. The men who killed his parents then cut off their heads and threw them to Shinusan and Gatseyu telling them to look into their eyes, deeply into their eyes. When Shinusan, unlike his brother, did as they said. He looked deep into his mothers eyes. As he was looking at her eyes the color changed, into a very, very dark black. What Shinusan didn't notice is that his eyes had done the same, he tossed it aside, and flew into the air, and with one punch sent the first man into the wall, dead. The other man fled from the scene, after taking back both heads of his parents while yelling "sic semper tyrannis" which is latin for Death to Tyrants.

After this incident, his sibling looked at him for inspiration and hope for the future. Shinatseyu told him at his entrance to the academy, not to talk about what happened. That he should keep it a secret. That what he did was wrong. Shinusan, who had been looked up to by his sister at this point was now told he was a monster. His sister went on to say to him that the men probably knew that he possesed this and were after him. Shinusan never talked to his sister again after this point.
Also at graduation the Mizukage, Mei came up to him and told him about his parents. His parents were Shinobi, and his father was in line to be the next Mizukage, because of his profound knowledge of lightning nature. Shinusan, who was now growing angrier and angrier swore from this day, he would avenge his family, and become the Mizukage in his fathers place.

Him and his brother are currently just graduated from the academy and are still fighting as rivals.

Theme Song and Background Music: Fights to Mumford & Sons

Won: 0
Lost: 0

~Approved~
 
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why did you cut out parts of the biography?
 

Alphonse Elric

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Use the full template even if you put nothing in them and I'm pretty sure you can't put the win\loses like that when you never had a battle. ;)

Basic Information
Him and his brother are currently at the academy, and are rivals, fighting for the top of the class.

You're not in the academy anymore when you hit genin. :)
 

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Just because you don't know what to put there doesn't mean you should cut it out >_>
 

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As pointed out by the other two already, keep the whole Template in the post, if you don't know what to put there, ask someone with experience or just leave it blank until Caliburn comes to tell you what to fix.
Also, re-write your Wins/Loses from what you have to,
Won: 0
Lost: 0

You haven't been in a single fight so far, meaning you haven't lost any, or won any.
And try adding some pictures. This is too plain, I doubt it will get approved. U_U
 

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Add pictures from Deviantart or somewhere like that.

Under elements add Ninjustu and add these 7:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
_____
(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
_____
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
_____
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
_____
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
_____
(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
_____
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
 

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Google is your best friend

If you need an idea of what to do go look at my bio. (The link is in my signature)
 

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MOAR pics please!

rofl

Nice pic but add some more. Use your imagination. ^__^
 

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Lol I hate this bio, I am dropping it as of now :)
 
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