Rin Okumura - |▬奥村 燐▬|

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"If I could come up with a good opening right now, trust me i'd say something..."



...Basic Info...


Name: Okumura Rin.
Nickname: Demon Child, or The Blue Demon.
Gender:
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Male.
Age: 15, Fifteen.
Clan: None.

Looks: - Rin wears a white shirt, with a perfect necktie -as Mephisto pointed out- and a dark jacket over it, along with dark pants. He is also seen carrying around Koumaken. Though when he was asked why he is always carrying the sword around, he refused to give a proper explanation.

Rin exhibits a number of physical traits that are signs of his demonic nature, such as sharper-looking teeth, slightly pointed ears, and a black, fur-tufted tail (which he keeps hidden in his shirt, he got the tail as a child when an evil ninja was experimenting on him with animal DNA). When he get's very angry, Rin gains two horns as blue chakra that float above his head, long, elf-like ears, and his pupils turn red while his irises remain bright blue. The blue chakra also hang around other places of his body including his tail (mostly at the tip).

Again, he gained these physical look's due to a similar ninja to Orochimaru experimenting on him as a child with various animal's DNA.

His physical appearance is that of black hair, his height is 173 cm (5' 8") and appears to be quite fit. In class, he is sometimes seen with his bangs pinned up so he can read his studies.

Personality: - Rin has a protective and supportive personality. Rin can be very violent and get into fights, but really has a kind heart. He supports his friends and tries to encourage and help them. Unlike his brother, Rin is less mature. He is headstrong (literally as well as figuratively, as he was able to stop a charging ninja by directly headbutting him in the forehead) and is often very open with his friends. He seems to have a small soft-spot for animals.




...Village Info...

Village of Birth: Konohagakure.
Village of Alliance: None.

...Rank//Chakra Info...

Ninja Rank: Kage.
Specialty: Kenjutsu, Chakra Control and Manipulation, and the Rain element.

Weapon:

Koumaken:
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This is no normal Katana. When Rin found it there was a seal broken on the sheathe. He hasn't figured out what it was yet, but everytime he unsheathes it he feel's more powerful and Invigorated. It also causes the earlier explained chakra to form around his body. This sword is very special to him, it has saved his life on more than one occasion. He carries it around everywhere.

Him and the covered sword on his back in public:

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Elements:

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| Katon, mastered.

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| Suiton, mastered.

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| Doton, mastered.

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| Raiton, mastered.

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| Fuuton, mastered.

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- Rain - Affinity.

Your ninjutsu:


...Background Info...

History: I'm gonna make this short and simple, mostly because I don't know you well enough to get into it all right now...

When I was a kid, everyone liked to call me a demon. I hated it, only because I was stronger than those Pricks they felt it was funny. I was Kinda like that kid Naruto, yeah. Due to that, it just pushed me to train harder. Never knew my parent's, grew up with Gramp's. He was my life, he cared for me and my twin brother like we were his own. We all lived in Konoha, didn't get out much though. My brothers a damn Genius, and they call me a knucklehead. How about that... I get into allot of fight's, not my fault >.>. I have a few friend's, but let's not mention them right now, don't have time... Gramp's died on us not too long ago... It was my fault... Just after I found this damn sword.. I go to an uppity Academy now. I'm always wearin a suit and tie, what a drag... Gotta study hard next to my genius bro... Meh... That's about it up till now, if you wanna stalk me go ahead, who's stoppin you...



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Theme Song and Background Music:

minor spoiler.


Battles

Won: Meh.
Lost: Double Meh T_T.


Dropping Cloud which has't been approved yet, and Kakashi is the only bio i had before this.

~Approved~ The horns, tail, and the sword thingy is purely cosmetic, it does not affect your performance in RP in any shape or form. Also the sword is regular sword, with some cool looks.
 
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Hey, your ment to come and ask me since i hold the first bio for Rin.
Then when you have my permission post the bio not the other way round

I'd like to finish all the CJ and CW i have for the bio and do another big update before ill consider allowing other people having it :/
 
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Great Bio ^.^
Thank's :D.

nice bio..
Thank's.........

another one eh ? :p
Oop's, didn't mean to quote this one ^^.

Hey, your ment to come and ask me since i hold the first bio for Rin.
Then when you have my permission post the bio not the other way round

I'd like to finish all the CJ and CW i have for the bio and do another big update before ill consider allowing other people having it :/
mhmm :rolleyes:.

that a great bio;)
Thank's xD i think so to.
Why so short history?
Cause I want it that way.
 

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Deragonu's Biography stay's the Official and the best one, sorry bro.
mhm :rolleyes: this is ridiculous lmao xD. Guy's, listen. I don't care if someone else has the bio...

wanna know why.

He can't beat me in a battle with it.
His birthname isn't Rin like mine.
He's probably selfish like Ryuji, but idc.
so who, the f*ck, cares!

And quite frankly, I worked hard on this damn bio, so i don't wan't people bringing someone elses up in it, ok?

Plus his tail isn't real like mine, nub.

have a nice day :).

nice bio you have
Thank you.
 
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And Deragonu the Original Rin? ha!



Doesn't matter if it's not the name he used... He used Rin, so it's his. I'll dare you claim he doesn't have the same name or history, bleh....

I don't need permission from you, just like you didn't need permission from thor... Pittiful, poser...
 

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mhm :rolleyes: this is ridiculous lmao xD. Guy's, listen. I don't care if someone else has the bio...

wanna know why.

He can't beat me in a battle with it.
His birthname isn't Rin like mine.
He's probably selfish like Ryuji, but idc.
so who, the f*ck, cares!

And quite frankly, I worked hard on this damn bio, so i don't wan't people bringing someone elses up in it, ok?

Plus his tail isn't real like mine, nub.

have a nice day :).



Thank you.
you have my support and btw you shoud remove the tail atleast i had to remove it o.o
 

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mhm :rolleyes: this is ridiculous lmao xD. Guy's, listen. I don't care if someone else has the bio...

wanna know why.

He can't beat me in a battle with it.
His birthname isn't Rin like mine.
He's probably selfish like Ryuji, but idc.
so who, the f*ck, cares!

And quite frankly, I worked hard on this damn bio, so i don't wan't people bringing someone elses up in it, ok?

Plus his tail isn't real like mine, nub.

have a nice day :).
Oh wow, I'm becoming famous for keeping something for myself ._.
That little list of yours, of why you ''don't care'' those aren't reasons those are excuses :| to get something you want, so who's selfish here?

And please if your gonna call me selfish send me a vm, don't post somewhere else, talking behind someone's back is only a coward's job.
 
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Thanks ^^.

Oh wow, I'm becoming famous for keeping something for myself ._.
That little list of yours, of why you ''don't care'' those aren't reasons does are excuses :| to get something you want, so who's selfish here?

And please if your gonna call me selfish send me a vm, don't post somewhere else, talking behind someone's back is only a coward's job.
Actually buddy, I seen you viewing the thread. Nice try though, but you fail. And you dare speak the word COWARD!? IVE ASKED YOU MULTIPLE TIMES TO GO TO THE BATTLE ARENA, NATSU BIO, BUT YOU TRY TO AVOID IT LIKE THE COWARDLY PERSON THAT YOU ARE, I'LL DARE YOU CALL YOURSELF NATSU! PUNK! NO MORE ASKING IM MAKING THE THREAD.

And your selfish, that's something you can't get by... A greedy, bastard.
 
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I feel lIke every time you make a bio of a character from a different anime you think it's blasphemy for the person with the original bio to decline you making it since you "worked" so hard on making a thread. When you could have taken the 10 seconds to search to see if someone has this bio instead of making it seem as though you have the birth right to this bio.

I don't have anything agains you personally, the bio is good. But you should stop acting like such a douche when someone doesn't agree with you.
 

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I feel lIke every time you make a bio of a character from a different anime you think it's blasphemy for the person with the original bio to decline you making it since you "worked" so hard on making a thread. When you could have taken the 10 seconds to search to see if someone has this bio instead of making it seem as though you have the birth right to this bio.

I don't have anything agains you personally, the bio is good. But you should stop acting like such a douche when someone doesn't agree with you.
Well personally, I don't even like you.... so stfu.


10 seconds!? ok here i'll give you a task you failure, someone has a Yomi bio, go find it now and post it here in the next, hmm, 30 minutes.

Thatt'l shut you up...

One bio shouldn't be anyone's right, greediness and selfishness U_U.
 

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Ugh I guess you just love to make fights personal, and I don't know you so I couldnt care less if you like me or not. I'm not the one acting like a little kid because you can't get your own way.

I'm done with this thread, you're not worth my time.
 
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