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[Punk Hazard]

Basic Information
Name:kakuzu
Nickname: none
Gender: Male
Age:91
Clan: none

Looks:

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Kakuzu was a tall, dark skinned, muscular man, second in height in Akatsuki (after Kisame Hoshigaki). He wore a white hood and a black mask on his face with his eyes being the only visible part. Underneath, his mouth was stitched together at the edges, and he had long dark brown hair. His eyes have an unusual colouring: green irides, no pupils and red sclera. His clothing included the traditional Akatsuki cloak and the forehead protector of his home village with a scratch in the middle which symbolized that he was no longer loyal to it. He also had dark green nail polish and his Akatsuki ring with the kanji for North (北, hoku) was placed on his left middle finger. His entire body was covered with stitches and appeared to be sewn together. This was a result of the unique technique that he possessed - Earth Grudge Fear.

Personality:kakuzu is a selfish,greedy miser. He has as short temper and turns into a killing machine when enraged.

Village Info.

Village of Birth:Waterfall
Village of Alliance: Konoha

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: s-jonin
Specialty: none yet
Elements: raiton
Your ninjutsu

Spoiler

Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique


Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Dtamage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though tthey think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Background Info.
History:When he was still a loyal elite ninja to Takigakure, Kakuzu took on a mission to assassinate Hashirama Senju, the First Hokage. This mission, however, ended in failure due to the might of Hashirama's Wood Release techniques. Despite the insurmountable danger faced in the mission, what awaited his return to his village was the stigma and harsh punishment associated with the failure of his objective. In response to this treatment, a wrong levied against a shinobi who had put life and limb on the line for his village, Kakuzu came to hold a violent hatred to his village as he escaped from imprisonment. In his flight from the village, Kakuzu killed the village elders, took their hearts, and fled with knowledge of the village's most prized forbidden techniques. He made a living off bounty hunting and tearing out still-beating hearts out of powerful shinobi to extend his lifespan. Some time after his defection, he joined Akatsuki, and was given a number of partners, most of whom he killed, due to his short temper. This is why he was eventually partnered with Hidan, whom he could not kill.

Sometime in the past, he appeared to have encountered the Gold and Silver Brothers, and witnessed Kinkaku's jinchūriki transformation.

Other

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Battles

Won: 0
Lost: 0

~Approved~

 

[Kurisutina]

Remove specialty.
Add hearts as specialty, you get 2 out of the five.
Spoiler your jutsus and bold the information headings.

 

[Scorps]

formatt this a little better man. put some effort into it. U_U

 

[Punk Hazard]

i fixed it

 

[Kurisutina]

i fixed it

Mark which hearts exactly. Theres five of them so...

 

[Punk Hazard]

Mark which hearts exactly. Theres five of them so...

since i dont know any elements yet, i took them out all together

 

[The Pervy Sage]

You know, you don't need to post "needs approval" into the title...

Its obvious it needs approving if its not in the approved bio section :|

 

[Punk Hazard]

You know, you don't need to post "needs approval" into the title...

Its obvious it needs approving if its not in the approved bio section :|

thanks for that info. did you see anything wrong with it that i need to improve?

 

[The Pervy Sage]

Nope, thought some people like to add colours and pictures to their bios.

For example, click on the word jiraiya in my sig.

 

[Punk Hazard]

okay, i added some pictures

 

[Caliburn]

Add the first element you want to learn. As an S-jounin you can have two hearts, however considering you can only have hearts of the elements you learned you only have one.

When you update your bio and you learned more elements, then you can add the other hearts and state which elements they use.

 

[Punk Hazard]

Add the first element you want to learn. As an S-jounin you can have two hearts, however considering you can only have hearts of the elements you learned you only have one.

When you update your bio and you learned more elements, then you can add the other hearts and state which elements they use.

i dont actually know any elements yet

 

[Caliburn]

Add the first element you want to learn. As an S-jounin you can have two hearts, however considering you can only have hearts of the elements you learned you only have one.

When you update your bio and you learned more elements, then you can add the other hearts and state which elements they use.

i dont actually know any elements yet

I think it's pretty clear what you need to do.

 

[Punk Hazard]

okay, i put the element i want to learn.