[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Eddy-kun..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

` Zen, I hope you don't have a problem with the jutsu format I'm using. (which I don't see any reason I can't use this format, since it doesn't cause any harm) I'm just making things more understandably. Which this way, I see would make it. Maybe the old jutsu formate, should have an update itself, into this one.

Name: Katon Ninpou: Totsuzen no futtō | Fire Release Ninja Art: Sudden Boiling
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Damage Point: 25 ( due to the hot steam )
Chakra: 30
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Supplementary, Offensive
Elemental Affinity: Fire Release
Notation: Secret Technique, Requires water
Handsigns: Tiger
Description: A fire-based ninja art, using the Tiger seal, or none at all, the user will channel Fire Release into his feet while using the water-walking technique. Chakra will accumulate, then release through his feet, creating a scalding explosion of steam that will hide his presence, and create a painful, tactical diversion. Because the user is controlling the Katon technique, the user will not be burned.
Drawbacks: The amount of steam is large, and of course hot. Because of the amount of heat in the air, Water Release is also impeded, for approximately three turns, until the air is sufficiently cooled to allow condensation. Paper-based techniques (including fuuinjutsu scrolls) are also nullified.
Likewise, those using Boil Release can take advantage of the steam cloud immediately.
* Can only be used 2 times per battle.

Name: Katon Ninpou: Nenshō budō | Fire Release Ninja Art: One Thousand Cherry Blossoms ("Scatter!")
Rank: A
Range: (Short), (Mid), (Far)
Damage Point: 60
Chakra: 30
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Offensive
Elemental Affinity: Fire Release
Handsigns: Tiger, Bird, Dog,
Description: Utilizing Fire Release. The user will focuses Fire Release into a specific point, and then releases it as a concentrated narrow shaft of fire and heat. When it reaches terminal velocity, the projectile splinters into numerous individual pellets of explosive chakra, unleashing a fiery carpet-bombing of the targeted region; scouring the ground with blast craters and igniting flammable material.
* Can only be used 3 times per battle.

Name: Hyouton: Hōgohi Engai – Ice Release: Demonic Ice Crystal Prison
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Damage Point: 60
Chakra: 30
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Supplementary
Elemental Affinity: Ice Release
Handsigns: Half Rat
Parent Technique: Demonic Ice Crystal Mirror
Description: A simple technique. Once the Demonic Ice Crystal Mirror technique is active this technique can be activated. The gaps between the mirrors freeze along with the ground below them and join together creating a sealed ice cage. The prison is special if the opponent attacks the walls of the dome they will instantly shatter and ice needles will shoot out of the wall's of the prison spewing the opponent all over. The gaps can be opened and closed at the will of the user and by using the technique again gaps in the ice will close. By applying B ranked chakra to the technique the layer of ice will double in thickness.
* Can only be use 3 times per battle.
* The prison forms quickly

Name: Hyouton: Seihyou Kyuutai no Kogoeshinu (Ice Release: Ice Creation Orb's Death Freezing).
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Damage Point: 60
Range: Long
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Offensive, Defensive
Elemental Affinity: Ice Release
Handsigns: Tiger, Ox, Rat, Dragon, Horse, Tiger, Dog
Description: The user releases a tremendous amount of Ice Release chakra, blue chakra bursts forth from their body in the form of a huge aura and is released into the area, the temperature within mid range of the user will drop by around twenty Celsius and a noticeable icy mist will form. The user then raises their hand into the air and released chakra will gather from the atmosphere in streaks of light to form five volleyball sized of pure Ice Release chakra taking around two seconds each which will orbit around the user's head as a neutral state and are moved through willpower, the ground will feel small tremors during this period.. These orbs can move a distance of one hundred metres from the user. These orbs move at around 16 Agility. Upon touching a target they will completely, permanently change that target to ice rendering it useless to them and manipulatable by the user. E.g. Touches an arm, the arm will change to ice. These ice orbs freeze B ranked and below fire techniques that come within a metre of them without dispelling. The same goes for small projectiles such as shuriken and kunai. Water within one metre of the orbs will freeze as well.
Drawbacks: The technique uses up a massive amount of chakra. Additionally if the technique touches an ally they are not exempt to the effects.
* Can only be used once in battle
* Orbs last three turns or until all destroyed
* No Fire jutsu can be used while this jutsu is active
* The user will feel exhausted when ending the jutsu and will only be able to use 2 jutsu that turn.

Name: Suno- Fure-ku Sankaku [Snow Flake Sensation]
Rank: C
Range: Short - Long (All)
Damage Point:
Chakra: 20
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Supplementary,
Elemental Affinity: Ice Release
Notation: Secret Technique
Handsigns: Tiger
Description:After forming the Tiger handseals and concentrating chakra, inducing the water vapor in the atmosphere to freeze and turn into snow flakes. As a result, the user gets an aura of continuously regenerating snow that puzzles the opponent, and even allow the user to disappear out of sight if fast movement is performed to the naked eye.
* Can only be used 3 times per battle

-You are not the one deciding which format we will use. You will use the pattern we have posted on the first page else you won't get any jutsus approved. Ever. -

Katon Ninpou: Totsuzen no futtō | Fire Release Ninja Art: Sudden Boiling
Type:Supplementary, Offensive
Rank:A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: 25 ( due to the hot steam )
Description:A fire-based ninja art, using the Tiger seal, or none at all, the user will channel Fire Release into his feet while using the water-walking technique. Chakra will accumulate, then release through his feet, creating a scalding explosion of steam that will hide his presence, and create a painful, tactical diversion. Because the user is controlling the Katon technique, the user will not be burned.
Drawbacks: The amount of steam is large, and of course hot. Because of the amount of heat in the air, Water Release is also impeded, for approximately three turns, until the air is sufficiently cooled to allow condensation. Paper-based techniques (including fuuinjutsu scrolls) are also nullified.
Likewise, those using Boil Release can take advantage of the steam cloud immediately.
* Can only be used 2 times per battle.
Declined, do not resubmit

Katon Ninpou: Nenshō budō | Fire Release Ninja Art: One Thousand Cherry Blossoms ("Scatter!")
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: (Short), (Mid), (Far)
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:Utilizing Fire Release. The user will focuses Fire Release into a specific point, and then releases it as a concentrated narrow shaft of fire and heat. When it reaches terminal velocity, the projectile splinters into numerous individual pellets of explosive chakra, unleashing a fiery carpet-bombing of the targeted region; scouring the ground with blast craters and igniting flammable material.
* Can only be used 3 times per battle.
Declined, do not resubmit

Hyouton: Hōgohi Engai – Ice Release: Demonic Ice Crystal Prison
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Damage Point: 60
Chakra: 30
Description: A simple technique. Once the Demonic Ice Crystal Mirror technique is active this technique can be activated. The gaps between the mirrors freeze along with the ground below them and join together creating a sealed ice cage. The prison is special if the opponent attacks the walls of the dome they will instantly shatter and ice needles will shoot out of the wall's of the prison spewing the opponent all over. The gaps can be opened and closed at the will of the user and by using the technique again gaps in the ice will close. By applying B ranked chakra to the technique the layer of ice will double in thickness.
* Can only be use 3 times per battle.
* The prison forms quickly
* Parent Technique: Demonic Ice Crystal Mirror
Declined, do not resubmit

Name: Hyouton: Seihyou Kyuutai no Kogoeshinu (Ice Release: Ice Creation Orb's Death Freezing).
Type: Offensive, Defensive
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Damage Point: 60
Range: Long
Description: The user releases a tremendous amount of Ice Release chakra, blue chakra bursts forth from their body in the form of a huge aura and is released into the area, the temperature within mid range of the user will drop by around twenty Celsius and a noticeable icy mist will form. The user then raises their hand into the air and released chakra will gather from the atmosphere in streaks of light to form five volleyball sized of pure Ice Release chakra taking around two seconds each which will orbit around the user's head as a neutral state and are moved through willpower, the ground will feel small tremors during this period.. These orbs can move a distance of one hundred metres from the user. These orbs move at around 16 Agility. Upon touching a target they will completely, permanently change that target to ice rendering it useless to them and manipulatable by the user. E.g. Touches an arm, the arm will change to ice. These ice orbs freeze B ranked and below fire techniques that come within a metre of them without dispelling. The same goes for small projectiles such as shuriken and kunai. Water within one metre of the orbs will freeze as well.
Drawbacks: The technique uses up a massive amount of chakra. Additionally if the technique touches an ally they are not exempt to the effects.
* Can only be used once in battle
* Orbs last three turns or until all destroyed
* No Fire jutsu can be used while this jutsu is active
* The user will feel exhausted when ending the jutsu and will only be able to use 2 jutsu that turn.
Declined, do not resubmit

Name: Suno- Fure-ku Sankaku [Snow Flake Sensation]
Type:Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short - Long (All)
Damage Point:
Chakra: 20
Description:After forming the Tiger handseals and concentrating chakra, inducing the water vapor in the atmosphere to freeze and turn into snow flakes. As a result, the user gets an aura of continuously regenerating snow that puzzles the opponent, and even allow the user to disappear out of sight if fast movement is performed to the naked eye.
* Can only be used 3 times per battle
Declined, this would fall under snow ce

 

[Serpent]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchibashi Tiku) Beak Shield:
Type: Defense
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 70
Damage points: N/A
Description: The User Slams his hands together. This Brings forth a large beak the comes from the ground. around the User. This Beak is Indestructible but causes the user to feel Drained after usage.
Note:
-Must have Signed the Condor Contract.
-Can only be used once per Battle.
-No S-Rank Jutsu next turn.
-Can only be Taught by Frederick.
Declined, do not resubmit

(Senei Hagetaka Jashu) Hidden Shadow Condor Hands
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user manifests a torrent of Condors, which shoot from the sleeve. The ninja user can shoot these condors to attack a target. Once shot the condors fly at fast speeds and can bite into the target flesh to hold and bind them.
Note:
-Must have Signed the Condor Contract.
-Can only be Taught by ~Frederick~
Declined, do not resubmit rip off of the snakes ability

 

[Akisha]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Wolverine Arts: The wolf’s bite = Kuzuri Biijutsu: Ookami no Hitonomi
Type: Offense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: To use this technique the user must be in Wolverine mode or Wolverine Mode stage 2. Once the transformation is complete, the user will bite the opponent, releasing a small amount of poison through his canine teeth into the enemy’s blood and nervous system. As a result a part of the opponent’s central nervous system temporarily “shuts down”. In a matter of seconds the opponent will start losing the ability to think properly and will very soon forget how to perform some very simple simple tasks, for example - molding chakra, preventing him from using any techniques above B-rank for the first turn, and A-rank for the 2nd turn.
Note: Lasts 2 turns.
Note: The user must bite the opponent to activate the effects of this technique.
Note: Must be in Wolverine mode or Wolverine Mode stage 2
Note: Only once per battle.
Note: No Genjutsu at the same turn.
Note: No S ranks and above for 2 turns after the effect has worn off.
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-Declined-

 

[Gobi Gobletsson]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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Resubmitting;

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(Suiton: Tobikomigouben Gufuu) Water Release: Plungepool Tornado.
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Defence/attack
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage Points: 100
Description: The user will create a votex of water either around themselves or there opponent combining there water chakra and earth chakra. This would would look like a tornado shape of water with rocks and boulders in due to the earth chakra, though due to the high speed rotation of the tornado, it would look like a giant mud vortex.
Note: Can only be used once.
Note: No A-Ranked or above in this turn or next turn.
Note: 20 Damage to the user itself.

Approved

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Name: Wood release: Viking Style – Rise of Asgaard = Mokuton: Baikingusutairu - Asgaard no taitō
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 60
Damage points: N/A (35 damage to the user)
Description: The user performs 8 handseals and slams his hands against the ground, releasing extreme amounts of chakra as he makes contact, doing so, the user makes the entire city of Asgaard rise up from the ground in wooden form, the city is complete, with walls watchtowers and a great hall. The whole city is made of heartwood, (the hardest type of tree) and is infused with the users chakra, the city is about 3x3 kilometers big. The user is able to make the whole city sink down into the ground again, by performing 6 handseals and using 40 chakra, this counts as a seperated S-ranked Mokuton jutsu.
Notes:
• Because of the giant strain on the body, the user cannot use B-ranked and above techniques for three turns, after this turn.
• It takes about 15 seconds for the city to fully appear.
• it's not required for the user to have his hands on the ground, after slamming his hands against the ground.
• Can only be used once.
• The user receives 35 damage because of the strain this jutsu puts on the body.

Approved

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Name: Viking Style – Berserker Rage = Baikingusutairu – bāsākāreiji
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique requires for the user to eat a special mix of mushrooms which act like a drug and, paralyze his Nerves/senses and will enable him to enter a state of mind called the berserker rage. The effect of the mushrooms takes a turn to kick in, but when they do, they completely remove all sense of pain from the user, and allows him to ignore any strain on the body, the effect lasts for a while, but when they wear off, the side effects will be a hard headache, that will make all Genjutsu techniques harder to perform.
Notes:
• The effect lasts for three turns after the effect kicks in.
• The headache lasts for the rest of the battle.

Approved

New:

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Raiton: Wairudo Ikazuchi - Lightning Release: Wild Thunder.
Type: Offensive, Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user quickly release a Great Amount of Rai Chakra throughout his whole body, sending out a lethal Shockwave of Lightning around the user so intense that everything above, underground and around the user in for Short Range get's destroyed by the Intense Thunder which Rushes outwards from the Users body.
~Notes: Can only be used twice.
It takes under a mere second to release it, and the burst is over when the Second is gone, which means this happens extremely fast.
Can only be taught by Gobi Gobletsson.

Declined, needs better restrictions

Mokuton: Bakuhatsuteki - Wood Release: Explosive
Rank: E-Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 05-50
Damage Points: 10-90
Description: After the user have used a Mokuton Jutsus he may use this Jutsu. The user slams his palms together with great force releasing a Great amount of Chakra (Depends on the Rank of the Mokuton Jutsu he used earlier.) into the Mokuton Jutsu, causing the Wood to Explode damaging everything nearby.
The Rank on this jutsu depends on the Rank of the used Mokuton Jutsu, for an example: I use a D-Ranked Mokuton Jutsu this also counts as a D-Ranked Jutsu.
-Notes:
-Can only be used thrice per battle.
-Can only be taught by Gobi Gobletsson.

Declined, needs sorting out how can you have a technique that goes up to Forbidden ranked and have two time usage and explain it more on the applying the explosive chakra into the wood does it require close range contact first ?

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Resubmitting:

Mokuton: Bakuhatsuteki - Wood Release: Explosive
Rank: E-Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 05-50
Damage Points: 10-90
Description: After the user have used a Mokuton Jutsus he may use this Jutsu. The user slams his palms together with great force releasing a Great amount of Chakra (Depends on the Rank of the Mokuton Jutsu he used earlier.) into the Mokuton Jutsu, causing the Wood to Explode damaging everything nearby. The Rank on this jutsu depends on the Rank of the used Mokuton Jutsu, for an example: I use a D-Ranked Mokuton Jutsu this also counts as a D-Ranked Jutsu, and according to Forbidden Rank the user will take the same amount of damage of the jutsu he makes explode.
~To cause the wood to explode the user must be in contact with the wood that they wish to explode or be incontact with the ground
~ if used for exploding S rank wood , the user cannot perform S rank wood ninjutsu or above the following turn
~Can only be used twice per battle.
Approved
New:

(Jihen Arano) - Uprising Wasteland
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 100
Damage cost: 200 (40 damage to the user.)
Description: After equipping The Knud the user will stretch the arm back which wears the The Knud. He will stretch the arm backwards as he points the tip of the sword towards the target, by releasing huge amount of wind chakra into the the sword the user then will do a foward thrust towards the target releasing a huge beam which expands outwards crushing everything within sight, leaving only a wasteland back.
~Can only be used once.
~Last resort jutsu, the user won't be able to transfer any form of chakra through The Knud the rest of the battle.
Declined, do not resubmit
The jutsu above is to my custom weapon which is already approved and is in the spoiler below.

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(Sono Canute) The Knud.
Rank: A
Type: Weapon
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: N/A
Description: The hilt and the blade is skillfully forged of the purest iron.
The design of the blade is a broad guard with wildly flaring ends and a nicely defined D-shaped pommel, the blade also contains a fuller of medium width, making the sword more easier to swing. The sword is capable getting Fuuton Chakra tranfered into it. The Knud is very usefull since when transfered Fuuton Chakra into it's capable of striking through B-Ranked and lower Ranked Doton jutsus, not only that though, fighting against Raiton The Knud is able to Defend ore either attack through S-Ranked and lower Raiton Jutsus.
The sword looks like this:

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-Note: Can only be used by Gobi Gobletsson.
-Note: When drawing The Knud from it's sheath the user cannot use S-Ranked or above jutsus the same turn.
-Note: Sheathing The Knud results in when you draw it again you can't use S-Ranked or above Jutsus the same turn as drawing it.

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Dance of the Suicidal Samurai: Harakiri
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Cost: 80 if the Opponent gets hit by the sword. (The user will die after three Turns.)
Description: As the user is facing the target he in a swift motion turns around so his back is turning towards his target whilist drawing his sword from it's sheath turning the hilt upwards and the pommel of the sword downwards. He then foricbly thrust the Sword it into his own Belly.
~The user cannot use any Elemental Ninjutsu in this Stance.

Dance of the Suicidal Samurai: Double Harakiri, farewell
Rank: Fobidden
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: All of it.
Damage Cost: 100 (Death to the user.)
Description: After using Dance of the Suicidal Samura: Harakiri the user quickly pulls his sword out of his belly, however leaving the pommel of the sword still inside, whereafter he releases all his Chakra into the Pommel of the sword and pulls it back in, as the Pommel sticks out of the users back once again it releases such a powerfull wave of pure Chakra that tears everything behind him apart.
~Must have used Dance of the Suicidal Samurai: Harakiri before using this Technique.
~Only Dojutsu users may be able to react to the Shockwave.
Both declined, do not resubmit
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The Below Jutsu is already approved

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Name: Viking Style – Berserker Rage = Baikingusutairu – Bāsākāreiji
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique requires for the user to eat a special mix of mushrooms which act like a drug and, paralyze his Nerves/senses and will enable him to enter a state of mind called the berserker rage. The effect of the mushrooms takes a turn to kick in, but when they do, they completely remove all sense of pain from the user, and allows him to ignore any strain on the body, the effect lasts for a while, but when they wear off, the side effects will be a hard headache, that will make all Genjutsu techniques harder to perform.
Notes:
• The effect lasts for three turns after the effect kicks in.
• The headache lasts for the rest of the battle.

Upgrades to:
(Baikingusutairu: Bāsākāreiji) - Viking Style – Berserkergang
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique requires for the user to eat a special mix of mushrooms which act like a drug and, paralyze his Nerves/senses and will enable him to enter a state of mind called the berserker rage. The effect of the mushrooms takes a turn to kick in, but when they do, the user will be put under a nearly uncontrollable, trance-like fury, speed up his neutral synapses to react faster to danger and push his physical prowess to it's maximum limits, allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power and completly removes all sense of pain from the body, and allows him to ignore any strain on the body. The effects of the mushrooms lasts for a while, though as they wear off the side effects will be a heavy headache.
~ The effect lasts for three turns after the effect kicks in.
~ Can only be used once and pushes the user's limits to Tsunade's strenght and Raikage's speed in his Lightning armour.

Feel free to edit. ^_^

Approved

 

[Geezus]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Genjutsu| Sunadokei - [Illusion Technique| Hourglass]
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user does a three handseals and spreads his chakra through the air. Anybody in the area will then be affected by a genjutsu that causes them to see things either sped up or slowed down to a extreme. This drastically hampers the user ability to react and target the user or jutsu techniques aimed at them, as techniques will seemed to be launched at them in blinding speed or slowed to a halt so while the user sends techniques at the opponent they are launched slowly, when in actuality the user may have finished his technique and gone onto the next one thus harming the opponent.
(Last 2 turns)
Approved

 

[-Tauburn-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kei Rasshu)- Whiplash

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will take out a whip or chain weapon, and begin to swiftly slash the whip/chain weapon in multiple directions creating a defencive barrier or attacking barrier. It is capable of defending against elemental techniques B rank and below except lightning because it can be conducted.
- User must have whip or chain weapon noted in their bio
- Only -Tauburn- can teach this jutsu

Approved

(Fuuton: Yaiba Te)- Wind: Bladed Hand

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Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will focus their wind chakra into their hands then mold the chakra around their hands creating a blade on the side of the hand, this jutsu can also be used on the fingers seperatly making each finger a different blade.
- Can only be used 4 times per battle
- Can only be taught by -Tauburn-

Declined, do not resubmit

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Koichi & Koji)- Summoning: Koichi & Koji

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Type: Summons
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: n/a
Description: Koichi and Koji are the first two sons of the great Tusk Boar Lord. They both look much alike one another except that Koichi has a tattoo on his right shoulder and left shoulder (勇- Right shoulder, meaning courage & 敬- Left shoulder, meaing respect), Koichi has the ablitiy to use his fur as an attack (like Jiraiya useing his hair againist Pein) extending his hair to stab the opponent with his thick course hair. Koji wears a large scroll on his back because he is the scroll keeper for the contract for the boars, under the rope he uses to carry the scroll Koji wears a shoulder plate on his right shoulder. Koji is able to summon either signers of the contract or other boars, by slapping his hoves againist his belly, where he has a summoning tattoo for the boars.
-Koichi & Koji are able to stay on the feild for aslong as the person who summoned them is still awake.
-Koichi's hair has the same power as a sword that can cut and slice the opponent. (and does not count as a move for the summoner.)
-Koji's summoings will bring forth either a summoner who has signed the boars contract or another boar. (Koji's summoning count as a move for the summoner.)
-Must have signed the Boars contract.

Declined, the hair ability should count as a move of at least C rank

(Hyouton: Some no mai, Tsukishiro)- Ice Release: First Dance, White Moon

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Type: Attack
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user slashes a circle in the air while performing a brief dance-like movement and holds thier sword upside down, When they do this, a large ice circle forms around the intended target which freezes everything that touches it. The circle not only freezes the ground but everything within the circle's influence including anything above it, up in the air, creating an extending pillar of light that then freezes all within the circle. Shortly after being frozen, the victim then shatters along with the ice.
- Can only be used if tuaght by -Tauburn-.
- Can only be used 2 times per battle.

(Hyouton: Tsugi no mai, Hakuren)- Ice Release: Next Dance, White Ripple

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Type: Attack
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will scratch the ground with four slices in the ground the user calls out the name of the dance, and the four scratchs release bursts of ice built in front of the user forming an arc infront of them, from their sword held out infront of the user a, massive, powerful pure white wave of ice bursts from their katana, is fired at the target, in turn encasing the target in a block of ice and shattering it.
- Can only used if taught by -Tauburn-.
- Can only be used 2 times per battle.

Both declined, do not resubmit

 

[Kaziname]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Genjutsu: Guriddo) - Illusion Technique: The Grid
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: All ranges
Chakra: 40 (+10 per turn to keep it active)
Damage: N/A
Description: User casts wide area genjutsu which can influence all humans in that area. Genjutsu itself isn't versatile. It traps user and his targets into world placed in their very own minds where they continue the battle. In that world user has a role of architect and is able to change certain parameters like restricting bloodline limits, certain types of jutsus, changing terrain etc. All these parameters affect user as well and the only thing that this jutsu actually does is evening the odds. Once someone dies in this world he dies in real world too due to death of the brain (like in matrix). Although user gets the chance to even the odds against fighters stronger than he is, being the architect puts a lot of strain on his own brain which can kill him if the genjutsu does not end before certain time.
-User can maintain this jutsu for up to 5 turns after which he has to deactivate it or he will die.
-If the user deactivates jutsu after 5th turn he will fall unconscious.
-User can't change parameters once they have been set and they affect all humans (both user and his targets) under genjutsu equally.
-User isn't able to, for example, trap opponent in a cage while he is free or summon him right on top of vulcano. Jutsu can only be used to even the odds, not to benefit either of affected parties.

If you think that the concept of jutsu is fine, but you don't agree with some effects, feel free to change any effect or restriction.
Declined, do not resubmit

 

[Mathias]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Animal: Slow Loris
Scroll Owner: Mathias
Other Users who have signed contract: None yet
Summoning Boss if existing: King Loris
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:
Elemental Slow Loris: katon/Doton/Raiton/Suiton/Fuuton
(If contract approved I will summit them the week after)
Approved

(Kuchiyose no Justu: Kokuou Loris) - Summoning Technique: King Loris
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user summons King Loris above the target, crushing whatever is beneath him when he falls to the ground.

Note: King Loris is about the same size as Gamahiro.
Note: Can only be summoned 1 time per battle.
Note: Must have signed the Slow Loris contract.
Note: Can only be taught by Mathias.
Approved

(Ninpou: Inku Rasengan) - Ninja Art Ink Spiral Sphere
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user creates a normal Rasengan and pours special ink fusing the two together. They then hit the opponent, causing the ink to spread all over the opponent. Once covered in ink the user can harden the ink with a single handsign restraining the opponent.

Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle
Note: Must know the Ninja Arts of ink techniques
Note: Must be taught by Mathias
Declined, do not resubmit no rasengan variations

(Ninpou/Fuuton: Suteppingu Tairu) - Ninja Art/Wind Combo: Stepping Tiles
Type: Defense/Supplementary
Range: Mid-Long
Rank: A
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: N/A
Description: 5 Large drawn tiles of ink infused with wind chakra raises out of the scroll elevating the user. Can be used to catch the user while plummeting from the sky. Jutsu last for only 1 minute, before the ink disperses.

Note: Must be drawn or Pre-Drawn inside a scroll.
Note: Must know the Ninja Arts of ink techniques.
Note: Can only be used 4x per battle.
Note: Must be taught by Mathias.
Approved

(Ninpou: Gatling Gan) - Ninja Art: Gatling Gun
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user uses special ink to draw up to 10 bullet-like projectiles onto a scroll. Then by using Wind Chakra they can be fired at great speeds.

Note: It can only be used once per battle
Note: It can penetrate up to B-Rank and below barriers/shields/pillars etc..
Note: The user must use all projectiles as the jutsu only lasts one turn
Note: Must know the Ninja Arts of ink techniques.
Note: Must be taught by Mathias.
Approved

 

[Heavens Blade]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kōton: shrapnel) steel release: shrapnel
Type:Attack
Rank: C
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:30
Description: the user touches a steel object and manipulates the steel molecules causing the molecules to expand and make object explode (no fire or anything like that) the steel debree shoots out in every direction and can cause severe damage to anyone near this can be done instantaneous (mean right after you touch the object) or timed for a couple of seconds later up to 20 seconds later (this depends on the amount of chakra used more chakra then quicker less the later)
-must be steel user bio
-can only be taught by foamy

(Kōton: rikiddo hagane) steel release: liquid steel
Type:Attack
Rank: B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points:40
Description: the user spits out a large amount of liquid steel at a opponent that will weigh them down if a large amount of water is used on the steel it will harden quickly and encase the person inside
-can only be used my steel bios
-can only be taught by foamy

(Kōton: Kōhara) steel release: steel field
Type:Supplementry
Rank: A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points:N/A
Description: user claps there hands together then slams them on the ground and makes a 2 inch thick layer of steel over the entire battleground the ground is extremly smooth and people can easily slip if running at high speeds (also note that this will render a lot of earth jutsu usless such as the underworld swamp because you cant turn the steel into a swamp and hiding like a mole tech because you cant trun the steel to sand)
-can only be used by steel bios
-can only be taught by foamy

(Kōton: Kōteien) steel release: steel garden
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: the user slams there foot on the ground steel grass and flowers pop up from the ground the "grass" is steel blades that when your opponent steps on them the cut deep into his feet immobilizes the opponent then with a single handseal you can make the pedals from the "flowers" fall off and attack your opponent
-can only be used with steel release: steel field
-can only be used by steel bios
-can only be taught by foamy

(Kōton: doragon) steel release: dragon
Type: Offensive/defence
Rank: S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: after 5 handseals a giant steel dragon will come out of the ground the dragons claws and teeth are strong enough to rip through bone with ease and its body is sturdy enough to handle most attacks with ease
-requires a large source of metal to make this dragon
-A rank fire or lightning can melt him
-immune to most earth and wind attacks (this is not including forbidden ones of these elements)
-immune to taijutsu
-can only be used by steel bios
-can only be taught by foamy

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Declined, submit when you learn impervious armour from Zaraki Kenpachi

 

[ReXii]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Suiton:kenran yari (water release: Dazzling spear)
Rank:B
Type: Offensive
Range:Mid-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description The user summons water chakra and condenses it into a spear. When used on the surface of water reflects the light making it more difficult to see coming. The spear is thrown towards an opponent piercing them
*Can be used in conjuction with lightning to increase its effect*
*Cannot be used in short range due to time it takes to form and condense chakra*
*can only be taught by ReXii*
Declined, do not resubmit

 

[Kagutsuchi]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Ninjutsu: Banshee's Scream
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user concentrates chakra in his Lugs and Larynx and then Screams on a High Pitch Sound, when Heard my the Opponent makes their Ears Bleed and deafens Them for the entire battle. This Jutsu can even send the Sound Jutsu Back at its user or Cancel the Same ranking Sound jutsus.
Note:
1. Can be used twice
2. This jutsu can be used again after one turn.


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Zenryoku already said "Declined, do not resubmit".

So I'll say it again: ~Declined, do not resubmit~

 

[Lili-Chwan]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ten Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kokuou) Marten Summoning Technique: König

Spoiler

Rank:S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: König, meaning King in german, is a very tall painfully dark Marten, from the size of his queen, Rot Krallen. He is extremely well versed on fightning arts, and it's blood tainted gaze releases a Killing Intend one Rank stronger that the summoner, being that König will always be superior than his summoners. He fights mostly with his bare paws, being so that a strong punch from him will vibrate through the direct vincity, causing severe damage to the internal organs. He wears clawed steel gloves, and holds a large steel machete on his back. His right eye has 3 ripped scars, made by the only opponent who ever wounded him, his wife, of course, Rot Krallen.
He speaks in a very thick german accent, in a very harsh and cold basso tone. It is really hard to have control over König. Female summoners have to be in the good graces of Krallen, while male summoners have to impress him deeply. Lili-Chwan has achieved both.

~Approved~

(Genjutsu: Saru no Sobaeru) Illusion Technique: Prankster Monkey

Spoiler

Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user preforms 1 handseal, casting a genjutsu that affects the opponents' brain, making him loose control over his own techniques, by exaggerating on the proportions of said technique. For example, if the person goes to spit a fireball, the stream that is spat is bigger than usual, burning the face and anything near it. Or when the person runs electricity through his the body, loss of control makes it short-circuit and shock the body. Or when the user encases him/herself in earth, the earth constricts around the body, harming and preventing breathing. This does not serve to augment the damage of the technique, if the opponent manages to fulfill the technique, it just makes it backfire. This genjutsu doesn't work on every technique nor on every situation, the user must balance the usage of this technique with situations where increasing the technique would make it backfire. Only one jutsu is affected by the technique, the following ones will not be.
*The genjutsu will only affect people from the same rank and bellow. Sharingan users or other Genjutsu specialists will be able to affect one rank above*

~Approved~

 

[mm7]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(ration katto: lightning hawk slash)
rank:B
range:short/mid
chakra cost:25
damage:40
description: the user builds up chakra at the palms of the hands and sends it to the blade. With every slash made a shot of lightning is created in the form of a hawk. if the target is hit it will temperarly paralize the victims limb.
-can only use one times per battle
-the paralized state lasts only one turn
-not the whole body is effected just the part that is hit
~Declined~ Already exists in multiple forms

 

[Jokey]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Suna Houmen - Ko Suna Hando) Sand Release - Large Sand Hand

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Gaara Begin's to Concentrate Sand Chakra around the Opponent performing a Large Sand hand which is able to grab the user and making the user unable to move the sand will cover the whole Human Body and is unable to breath during in the hand Sand and Slowly giving the Opponent a Slow death because the user will breath very hardly and with pain then when Gaara then Perform's the Boar and Snake Handseal The sand hand then crushes the target completly After performing the Boar handseal the Sand will turn into hard sand within a Swift and when the user then Finishes the snake handseal the Opponent then will be Crushed Completely.

Restrictions:

Note: The Hand sand will cover the Opponent after 5 Second's
Note: After performing the Boar handseal the Sand will turn into hard Sand within a Second
Note: Can only be used/thought by Joker.
Note: The opponent get's crushed faster then the Sand coffin technique
Note: No S-Ranked Sand technique's for 1 turn

(Suna Youshiki: Suna Bakufu o Sono Yoridokoro) Sand Style: Sand Waterfall on the
Ground

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40 (-5 Per turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This jutsu summons a Large amount of Sand covering the whole Ground beneath the Opponent and User From Short to Long range. Gaara Perform's the Snake handseal and then he Summon's the large Sand within 5 Second's on the ground

Restrictions:

Note: The user won't be possible to perform S-Ranked Sand technique's for 3 Turn's
Note: Can only be used/thought by Joker.
Note: Need's a huge amount of Sand control
Note: The user will be exhausted after the battle

(Suna Houmen - Suna no Tate Niban Dankai) Sand Release: The Shield of Sand Second Stage

Rank: S
Type: Defense
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40 (-5 Per turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Sand flows in a circle around the user, and can then move up to block an attack. This is a whole different level of the Shield of sand, this technique require's much harder sand and much more sand control. The sand can be overcome by a speed of the First Gate, or powerful techniques above A rank.

Note: The user won't be possible to perform S-Ranked Sand technique's for 2 Turn's
Note: Can only be used/thought by Joker.
Note: Need's a huge amount of Sand control
Note: Defecting the technique will leave the user after the battle Exhausted

(Suna Youshiki - Suna Manipyure-Shon) Sand Style - Sand Manipulation

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: -
Description: The user concentrate's Sand chakra and releases it against a jutsu to Cancel it, this jutsu doesn't require any Handseals but it require's allot of chakra control, if a opponent attack's the user with a Fire/Earth/Wind/Water/Lightning technique's then the user can release a Sand out his gourd which is strong enough to let every Fire, Earth, Lightning, Water and Wind jutsu be gone because of the extremely high Sand Control, If someone perform's a S-Ranked Earth jutsu and below then the user will release sand out his gourd which will cover the Earth and let it crumble. If someone perform's a Fire technique which is S-Rank and below then the Sand will simply surround it thus making the Fire getting absorbed in the Sand thus making the Sand as hard as Solid and Crumble. If an Opponent perform's a Water technique which is S-Ranked or below then the Sand can absorb the water and turn wet and muddy, hence it falls to the ground and lose control. Using any Wind technique's then there will be a wall created in front of the Wind technique, the Sand will turn into Solid Sand after performing the Boar handseal thus making the Wind technique Clasp on the Sand wall, using any lightning technique's then the lightning will go trough the Sand, but because of the High amount of Sand chakra control the Sand will be strong enough to get protected by B-Ranked Lightning technique's.

Restrictions:

Note: No S-Rank technique's for 2 Turn's
Note: Can only be Used/Taught by Joker. or -Yusuke-
Note: The Sand is fast enough to protect the user against a Wind/Lightning/Earth/Water/Fire technique in a Instant.
Note: If the opponent is a Official Sage then the user will only get protected by A-Rank technique's and below.
Note: -10 Damage every time after using this technique

(Suna Sensu | Suna Tsubasa) Sand Style | Sand Wing's

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 30 (-10 Per turn)
Damage: -
Description: Gaara focuses allot of Sand chakra trough his Sand Gourd and releases from the gourd allot of sand fused chakra, then as soon as the Sand get's out the gourd the sand then makes 2 Sand wing's, One on the left part of the back and the other on the Right part of the Back and the 2 small wings are made to increase the speed of the user while he's flying in the air, these Wings give's Gaara the opportuinity to even fly into Long ranged air and can Carry 2 person's on each Sand wing.

Note: Can only be thought/used by Joker.
Note: Can't carry someone on the Little Sand wing
Note: -10 Chakra/Damage if flying into long range


Edit if needed ^_^

~All Declined~ Do no resubmit any of them

 

[Scorps]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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Summoning Contract
Summoning Animal: Pandas
Scroll Owner: Scorps
Other Users who have signed contract: none so far
Summoning Boss if existing: to be added
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: to be added

Information on the animal:

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Expect the pandas to be able to talk like the toad summonings and have a dense social background to be developed further if the contract is accepted. Must have the panda contract tattoo:

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I obtained permission from goro kaguya through VM to submit this contract as long as its limited to the use of Panda, which i commit myself to obey.

If it gets approved, then i submit this as the first summon (a sister summon named Shiroi (white) is to follow if this gets approved)

(Panda Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kuroi) Panda Summoning Technique: Black
Rank: S-Rank
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 (+10 if Shiroi is in play)
Description:
Kuroi is a Giant Panda that's slightly larger than the normal Giant Panda (about 3 meters high when standing up), but differs in his color: he's mainly black with the exception of two white circles around his eyes, his white tail and paws as well as the Kanji for Equilibrium visible on his forehead fur also in white. He can exhale a hot, dense, concentrated A-Rank short to long range fire stream from his mouth once per turn (counts as one of the users jutsu except if Shiroi is in play) and is immune to fire up to B-Rank. He's a strong taijutsu warrior that can fight and move upright in his hind legs like a human, with strength that rivals a well trained med ninja at his best but has the average speed of a normal ninja. He has quite a shy demeanor for such a big, menacing body. If his sister Shiroi is in play, they both receive a +10 damage bonus and their abilities don't count as a move, but their stay in the battle field is reduced to 3 turns.

Note: must have signed Panda Contract (requires contract tattoo) and have permission from Scorps
Note2: can't be summoned with another panda except if its Shiroi
Note3: can only be summoned once per battle
Note4: can only stay in play 4 turns (3 turns if Shiroi is in play)
Note5: to have both Kuroi and Shiroi in play, once must summon them both in the same turn. In this case, the user is limited to A-Rank and below for the following turn and can't use Fire or Earth in that turn.

the part about the med ninja i was unsure if it was accepted to put Sakura/Tsunade as a reference but i also don't know if one can consider that all med ninjas have that kind of strength (as none have shown it so far)

In case the above Panda contract got approved:


(Panda Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Shiroi) Panda Summoning Technique: White
Rank: S-Rank
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 (+10 if Kuroi is in play)
Description: White is a giant panda slightly smaller than the average giant panda (standing she's about 1.8meters tall) but her color is mainly white with the exception of two black circles around her eyes, her black tail and paws and the Kanji for Balance on her forehead. She can produce a shockwave of earth chakra that produces a short to long range A-Rank “Tsunami” of earth 120º in front of her once per turn and she can feel anyone standing on the ground or beneath it around her up to long range. She is a strong taijutsu warrior that can fight while standing upright on her hind legs, with a speed that matches a Sannin Level Taijutsu Master but has a strength equal to a normal ninja. She has a very outspoken and loud personality that highly contrasts her pure angelic looks. If her brother Kuroi is in play, they both receive a +10 damage bonus to all their jutsu, but their stay in the battlefield is reduced to 3 turns.

Note: must have signed Panda Contract (requires contract tattoo) and have permission from Scorps
Note2: can't be summoned with another panda except if its Kuroi
Note3: can only be summoned once per battle
Note4: can only stay in play 4 turns (3 turns if Shiroi is in play)
Note5: to have both Kuroi and Shiroi in play, once must summon them both in the same turn. In this case, the user is limited to A-Rank and below for the following turn and can't use Fire or Earth in that turn.

(Took into account the speed chart Mugiwara posted in the bio rules sections to set a comparison)


(Panda Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Akushuu) Panda Summoning Technique: Stench
Rank:S-Rank
Range:Short-Long
Damage:40
Chakra:80
Description:
Akushuu is a very small panda the size of a pincher dog. Although his looks may be deceiving since he almost looks like a baby-panda, he's a very old being, nearing 500 years. With his old age and his small body he can't attack or cast jutsu. He was born with a birth defect that granted him isolation from the Panda Kingdom throughout almost his whole life: his sweat glands constantly produce a pheromone charged with his chakra that affects the Peripheral Nervous System, rendering humans/animals paralyzed after some time. This means that anyone who inhales/swallows his pheromone instantly becomes affected by an A-Rank genjutsu. This Genjutsu causes progressive numbness leading to ultimate paralysis. He meditated and trained for 2 and a half centuries in complete isolation, until he was able to control it. By controlling it, Akushuu gained the ability to use his own chakra to dispel genjutsu from his allies. This happens because his allies continue to breathe his chakra infused pheromones while he is in play, keeping a constant source of foreign chakra to enter their systems. The time it takes until the enemy suffers full paralysis depends on the amount of pheromone swallowed/inhaled, so it’s related to their rank:

Gennin and Chunnin: Same turn that Akushuu comes into play
S-Jounin: Turn after Akushuu comes into play
Jounin: Second turn after Akushuu comes into play
S-Ninja: Third turn after Akushuu comes into play
Sannin and Kage: Forth turn after Akushuu comes into play
Sage: Fifth turn after Akushuu comes into play (Akushuu is already out of the battle field)

When Akushuu comes into play, a light musk smell spreads on the whole battlefield. To release the Genjutsu, one must either vanish Akushuu, or have a constant supply of allied foreign chakra, constantly repressing the Genjutsu for as long as Akushuu is in play. Momentary repressions of the Genjutsu will lessen the numbness and paralysis but are irrelevant to the end result. After the 4 turns, when Akushuu vanishes, any normal ways to release A ranked Genjutsus are possible, but if the enemy doesn’t dispel it, he still gets affected by it. If the user possesses any type of enhanced smell/taste, the time for total paralysis will be reduced in half.

Note: Can only be summoned once per battle*
Note2: Can only stay for 4 turns*
Note3: Can’t attack
Note4: User and allies are immune to the Genjutsu
Note5: While Akushuu is in play, allies are immune to A-Rank genjutsu and below.
Note6: The pheromone isn’t affected by elemental jutsu such as fire, wind, water, lightning, etc.
Note7: Must hold Panda Contract and can only be summoned by Scorps .
Note8: Akushuu is inspired by Greis, Lili-Chwan's summon, with her special permission.

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(Suiton: Mizu Tenshoku) Water Release: Water Calling
Type:Supplementary/Defense
Rank:B to S
Range: Short to Long
Chakra: 25-40
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user can create a small to moderate amount of water anywhere within range of the technique. The amount of water and the range, as well as the control over the water is relative to the users chakra and ability:
S-Jounin- B-Rank: User can create a small amount of water that materializes slowly, within short range. Needs to perform 3 hand seals and has limited control.
Jounin- A-Rank: User can create a small amount of water that materializes fast within short to mid range. Needs to perform 1 hand seal (dragon) and can fully control the water as long as he maintains the hand seal.
S-Ninja and above- S-Rank: User can create a moderate amount of water with great speed within short to long range. Doesn't require hand seals and the water can be controlled at will and with great precision.

Note: Can only create water within the users visual or sensory field.
Note2: Doesn't require a water source.
Note3: Can only be used 5 times.
Note4: Can only be taught by Scorps.
Note5: User can't perform any other tech while controlling the water.



(Raiton: Ryuudo Seichuu) Lighting Release: Flow Control
Type: Defense
Rank: B to S
Range: Short
Chakra: 25-40
Damage: N/A
Description:
When facing an enemy lightning technique, the user extends his right hand while infusing his body with his own lightning chakra. Upon receiving the enemy lightning in his hand he uses his own lightning chakra to direct the flow of electricity through his body to the ground (effectively grounding the lightning). The user must possess a great amount of chakra control and great experience in both shape and nature manipulation, as he has to make the electrical energy pass through his body without passing trough his heart as he also matches the exact amount of electrical energy received to enable him to control its flow. The amount of electrical energy one can direct is proportionate to ones own chakra, meaning that the users rank defines the rank of the technique. Upon releasing the electrical current through his feet, the energy produces a short range electrical shockwave that travels mostly in the ground in all directions around the user paralyzing both enemies and allies caught in it for 1 turn. The strength of the wave is 1 rank below the rank of the defended jutsu.
S-Jounin=B-Rank
Jounin=A-Rank
S-Ninja and above=S-Rank

Note: Can be used against any form of electricity
Note2: Cannot be used if the user isn't standing on earth/rock/mud/sand as he wouldn't be able to ground the electric current.
Note3: No other lightning technique the same turn
Note4: Must possess Raiton training up to said rank, Rasengan mastery, Ninjutsu mastery and master at least one element to prove that one possess the experience and ability to learn the technique
Note5: Can only be taught by Scorps
Note6: Can only be used 5 times

(Panda Ninpou: Fukai Kokyuu) Panda Arts: Deep Breath
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A (+10 to taijutsu)
Description:
Pandas are the masters of balance and equilibrium. One of their teachings is "when in the mist of a difficult struggle, start with a deep breath before your first blow". Panda Sages have discovered that emotions and some external influences, can create a "noise" in the persons Chakra Circulatory System. This noise, while innate and benign to all beings with chakra, disrupts the maximum output of chakra, limiting the individuals abilities. Mastering this ancient art is the first step in mastery all the Panda Arts. The user closes his eyes for a split second and takes a deep breath, calming his chakra flow. When he opens his eyes again, the kanji for balance will be visible in ones forehead in black like a tattoo and his chakra flow will be calm and perfectly balanced. This is achieved by controlling ones emotions and body, which can only be achieved by years of both meditation and complete comprehension of ones true self. This means that the natural use of chakra is optimized to the maximum, enabling a boost in all vital functions, giving the user more strength and speed as well as more durability. The balanced and optimized chakra flow gives the user a boosted damage in all elemental jutsu and regular jutsu, and strengthens the chakra flow, raising the resistance to Genjutsu:
-User gets +10 damage in Taijutsu.
-User becomes 1 rank quicker.
-User gets +5 damage in Elemental and Regular Ninjutsu.
-By activating this jutsu, the user dispels any A-Rank Genjutsu or lower that could be affecting him and becomes immune to Genjutsu B-Rank and below while it's active.
-Gains the ability to use C-Rank (and below) jutsu without the use of hand seals.
-Lasts for 5 turns.

Note: requires the user to sign Panda Contract
Note2: can only be taught by Scorps
Note3: lasts only for 5 turns
Note4: can only be used twice
Note5: speed boost is based on Mugiwara's table of speed
Note6: requires training in Ninjutsu up to S-Rank
~All Declined~ Your panda summons can't be submitted before your summon is approved. All other jutsu's either OP or unrealistic

 

[-Mugen-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Taijutsu mixu: Taka inta-seputo) - Mixed martial arts: Hawk-eye intercept
Rank: B
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 40
Description: Using the mixed martial arts unpredictability the user will intercept any kick or punch under (c-rank).The user will intercept a kick, by parrying it with his shin,fallowing with the use of the opponents body power against him,the user will deleiver a powerful punch to the throat.If the user is intercepting a punch,than the user will parry the punch with his hand and deliver a knee hit into the rib cage area,causing the ribs to crack.
this is how parrying of a punch will look like:

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*Must be taught by mugen to use

( Taijutsu mixu: hisan) - Mixed martial arts: Flying knee
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 60
Description: Using a bit of muay thai in this move,the user will push off the ground with his right leg,making it look like he is about to strike with his left leg.However deceiving the opponent,the user will quickly switch legs in mid-air, striking with the right knee into the ribs,causing broken ribs.
*Must be taught by mugen to use

( Taijutsu mixu: seishou seishi kougeki ) - Mixed martial arts: energy control attack
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 80
Description: The user will use a special MMA technique that is influenced by a mix of judo,taik-wan-do. Any taijutsu attack that is being used on the users mid or upper body and is A-rank or below, will be inevitably stopped by the use of a special "grab and push" of body energy and result to the opponent taking all of the energy from his or her attack.If however the technique that the opponent uses is S-rank, than the user will receive half the damage of the attack and the opponent will receive the full damage.
*Can only be used twice per battle.
*Must be taught by mugen.

( Fuuton: kakou pushu) - Wind release: Downward push
Rank: B
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: mid-long(not short)
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will look onto a specific area,and than channal chakra into the air above the area in such a way that even a person above ground would not be able to feel any chakra gathering.Than the user will preform the rat seal and immediately on that place the wind will blow downwards.Meaning anything in the air will be pushed into the ground with great force and anything on the ground will be thrown splat on the ground.(the jutsu is strong enough to push the opponent on the ground strong enough to break ribs)
*The user must see or at least just face in the direction of the area this jutsu is being made on
*may only be used once per battle due to this jutsu being very fast.
*No A rank Fuuton next turn
*Must be taught by mugen to use

~All Declined~ Normal taijutsu moves can't be made customs, only original taijutsu moves can't be make customs. Wind jutsu too similar to existing jutsu's

 

[Taiketsu Yagami]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Suiton Kobushi Matsuro) Water Release: Fist of Fate
Rank:A
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user will release his chakra into the air covering a radious of Mid-Range. When attacking the opponent, the user will fuse oxygen and hydrogen forming H2O( simmilar to water shock wave) and pressurizing it intensely. The user will then add shape manipulation to form the water into a giant fist that can punch the opponent with enough force to shatter bones and send them flying.
- Can be used twice
-Can only be taught by Taiketsu Namikaze
~Declined~ Too similar to existing jutsu's
(Katon:kasai hitoya) Fire Release: Fire Prison
Rank:A
Type:Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra:30
Damage:N/A( +10 if they touch the fire)
Description: This jutsu is used to trap a victim inside a virtually inescapable dome of fire.The user will gather his fire chakra in his hands, slamming them into the ground forming a ring around the opponent. The user will then make it rise forming a dome around the opponent. Not only will this trap the victim but it will burn the oxygen inside so if the opponent doesn't escape in three turns, he will run out of breath and die.
-Jutsu can only last for three turns
-Can only be used or taught by Taiketsu Namikaze
-Can be escaped by jutsu like "Hide like a mole" or with a powerful water jutsu
~Approved~
(Raiton: Rasen Raiko Tama) Lightning Release: Spiral Lightning Ball
Rank:S
Type: Attack
Range:Mid-Long
Chakra:40
Damage Points:80
Description: After completing rasengan in prefered hand, the user will channel lightning chakra into it using the other hand. This will make the Rasengan look like a ball of pure energy. Then using chakra and shape manipulation, the user will cause it to expand to the size of a soccer ball. He then will actually kick it at the desired location. Once it makes contact with a physical substance, it release a giant explosion of dense chakra and lightning, completely obliterating the area.
-Can only be used Twice
-Can only be taught by Taiketsu Namikaze
~Declined~ Too similar to existing jutsu's

Custom Weapon: Bakusaiga: "Omni Sword"(No Japanese Translation)

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Rank:S
Type:Attack/Defend
Range: Short(Mid for its special abilities)
Chakra cost:40(+20 for water technique)
Damage Points:80
Description: Bakusaiga is a special sword that has a white sheeth and handle while the blade itself seems like it has dragon scales which are actually the feathers of Lugia. The sword carries the abillity to channel water chakra allowing it to slice through water based jutsu causing a gap in the water so the user isn't hit. It also has the ability that by thrusting the sword into the ground, the user will release his chakra covering a radious of mid range, taking control of the water in the ground making it rise out. The user is then able to take control of that water, pressurizing and forming it into spikes or tentacles that can impale the target or immobolize him.
*This move can be used as long as the sword is in the ground*
*Can cut through A-rank water jutsu*
*Water Spikes/Tentacles are equal to S-rank water jutsu*
*Water Spikes can be used 3x*
*Can only be wielded by Taiketsu Namikaze*
*Doesn't work in a area with no water source*

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~Declined, reduce the cutting through water ability to B rank, and limit the S rank techniques that can be used through it along with giving a rank and limit on the drawing of a water source from underground

Custom Weapon: Bakusaiga: "Omni Sword"(No Japanese Translation)

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Rank:S
Type:Attack/Defend
Range: Short(Mid for its special abilities)
Chakra cost:40(+20 for water technique)
Damage Points:80
Description: Bakusaiga is a special sword that has a white sheeth and handle while the blade itself seems like it has dragon scales which are actually the feathers of Lugia. The sword carries the abillity to channel water chakra allowing it to slice through water based jutsu causing a gap in the water so the user isn't hit. It also has the ability that by thrusting the sword into the ground, the user will release his chakra covering a radious of mid range, taking control of the water in the ground making it rise out. The user is then able to take control of that water, pressurizing and forming it into spikes that can impale the target.
Notes:
-*This move can be used as long as the sword is in the ground*
-*To take control of the water and pressurize, it takes the same amount of time as making 20 hand seals(10 for those adept in water)*
-*Can cut through B-rank water jutsu*
-*Water Spikes are equal to A-rank water jutsu*
-*Water Spikes can be used 3x*
-*Can only be wielded by Taiketsu Namikaze*
-*Doesn't work in a area with no water source*

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~Declined~
Edit anything that will make them better for approval unless their too far fetched or unrealistic^_^

 

[Taiketsu Yagami]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Lightning Release: Internal Lightning Shock (Naibuteki raikou dageki)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descriptions: The user charges a large amount of raiton chakra into their fingers they then stab their fingers into an opponent at close range releasing the raiton chakra violently shocking the opponent's internal organs causing organ failure
~Can only be used once per battle~
~Can only be used by me and who I teach~

-Approved-

Lightning Release: Blinding Light (Genwaku ranpu)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Descriptions: The user charges raiton chakra into his palm and releases it all at once blinding anyone who sees the light from the frontal view if a clone sees the jutsu he is blinded as well blinding effect lasts for the rest of the turn
~Can only be used my me and who I teach~

-Declined. Well, if I allow this then every one's raiton chakra would have the blinding ability-

Ninja art: Chakra Cannon (Seishou kyanon)
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descriptions: The user charges a massive amount of chakra into their index finger and aims at the opponent he then release the blast sending a blast of pure chakra at the opponent
~Can not use Ninjutsu techniques the next turn~
~Can only be used by me and who I teach~



-Approved-

Taught Chakra cannon and allowed by Howard


(Gorogoro Seishou Kyanon) Ninja Art: Scatter Chakra Cannon
Rank: S
Type:Attack/Deffend
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra:40
Damage Points:80( Halved each every two shot)
Description: The user channels a high amount of chakra into his two hands. The chakra can be distributed into more than one finger and released, shooting powerful blasts of pure chakra. If channeled into two fingers, the beams will equal B-rank. If channeled into 3, they equal C-rank and 4, D-rank.
-Can be shot in different directions
-No ninjutsu next turn
-Can only be taught by Taiketsu Namikaze
~Declined~

 

[Anduril]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

SUBMISSION FOR THIS WEEK​

(Ninjutsu:Nin no michi)-Way of the shinobi
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
Description:In this techniques (Its not exactly a technique rather a state of mind) the user calms himself down and gets rid of all emotions like rage,fear,sadness or happiness. This helps the shinobi to concentrate on the surroundings and the opponent and the battle with a clear mind no matter what the opponent does the user remains unperturbed making it impossible to loose focus. This technique makes its user a complete fighting machine.
-Whence activated stays on for the rest of the battle.
-even in this state the user feels pain
-After deactivation the user suffers drawbacks of sleepy behaviour and need to take a bed rest for a day at the least!!


(Ninjutsu:Henzai)-Omnipresence
Type: Defense
Rank: A
Range: mid-long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
For this jutsu the user makes three handseals Rat → Bird → snake
and claps his palms together in front of him and then releases chakra from the various chakra points throughout his body creating an orb of chakra surrounding the body of the user that stretches upto 20 to 30 feet just a little more than what is mid distance this orb allows the user to sense any thing present in that radius along with the nature of the chakra the opponent is manipulating also any projectile or opponent intrusion is detected instantly in this jutsu!!
-It is invisible to normal eyes but can be seen with sharingan doujutsu.
-if the user stands on the ground he cannot sense the movement from below the ground ......until the opponent resurfaces
-if the user stands on the water surface then he is able to sense any movement in the concerned radius even from below the water
-since this takes a chakra toll the user is unable to use any forbidden rank jutsu for the next 2 turns.
-Remains active for 7 turns at a time
-Can be used twice in a battle


(Ninjutsu:O no buki)-Tail Weapon
Type: Defense/Attack
Rank: A
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
This jutsu is the trademark of all the ringtail summons and a very interesting property of there long tail. In this jutsu any ringtail summon is able to surround themselves with there tail creating an extraordinary defense for them. Upon surrounding they can also harden it to whatever hardness they want max it can be as hard as diamond when defending (Reference: Monkey king enma formed a staff as hard as admantium). Also the tail can be extended to strike an enemy by hardening the hair on the tail into sharp spikes.
The tail stretches upto Long range (while attacking) for large sized summons and upto mid for medium sized summons.
-All the ringtail summons can use this jutsu.
-This jutsu will protect the user against jutsu of the same rank or below there own rank.
Example: A rank summon - Defense against all A rank jutsu
-No summon except master shifu (summoning boss) can create a S rank defense using this jutsu (will defend against S rank jutsu of any element)
Example: Master Shifu - S rank defense/ A rank attack.
-Only ringtails can use this jutsu.


(Kuchiyose no jutsu: Herankuji san)-Summoning jutsu: Herankuji san
Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
After biting his fingers and drawing blood the user slams the dominant hand on the ground and summons Herankuji the fearsome ringtail....His size is a little more than that of master shifu and he is a menacing fighter..Always has a thin long katana attached to his back which he pulls of in a flash. He channels lightning through this sword enhancing its cutting power to its maximum. He also has a very heightened sense of smell which allows him to smell out his enemies location. Herankuji has mastered all forms of kenjutsu and is able to use suiton and doton upto A rank with his sword sheathed. He is extremely quick and moves with unparalleled agility for some one so huge.
-can be summoned twice in a battle.
-Remains on the battle field for 6 turns in a row.
-can use suiton and doton upto A rank.

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SPIRIT REAPER MODE ​

Background:

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After having signed the ringtail contract han was summoned to the ringtail village of sonaya by master shifu...
Han: whats up with summoning me so suddenly old man!!!
Shifu: It has been decided among us ringtails that u have showed yourself worthy enough (Pff...i was completely against this!!) to use a art we ringtails have given generations of ours to learn and understand.......its an interesting one.
Han: No not the crapy old guy knowledge...!!
Shifu: Shut up u insolent brat!!! Do not interrupt me again!!...
Han: (speaks in an undertone......old fart!!)
Shifu: Listen closely the art that we have been trying to develop is the art of the spirits...more correctly the art of summoning spirits.....Spirits are huge amounts of chakra reserves...since they are not bound by physical limitations it is this power that you shall exploit....with the summoning of the spirits ..but understand this human body is not made to bear such sudden upsurge of chakra from outside....u need to undergo extensive training that u could harness the power of this spirits even for a short amount of time in your battles......There are four such ancient spirits that u could summon....
The first is the heavenly spirit of grega which is the most purest of all spirits and is friendly enough to move into the atmosphere to avoid damage to your body if u are not able to control its power....and this is the spirit i recommend u to use most of the time......whenever u summon a spirit all five senses of your body get sharpened .......to the extremes..
the spirit of grega is what u shall train with atm u will learn about the reamaining scrolls eventually....Whenever u summon a spirit u shall enter the spirit reaper mode

[Shōkan geijutsu: (Ten no seishin: Grega)]Summoning arts: (Heavenly spirit: Grega)
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
Grega is the first spirit that i ever learned to summon and control. The summoning of grega requires the user to make a row of 120 handseals and the speaking of the ancient language of the ringtails . So for this purpose one needs ringtails with the knowledge of the ancient language in my case they were seto and geto who would sit on my shoulders and make the seals and the prerequisites. This takes one complete turn and after that the user removes the scroll of grega and wiping blood on the scroll summons grega the heavenly spirit. Seto and geto can then disappear if they want. Grega is pure spiritual energy after entering the spirit reaper mode the users eye sight becomes extraordinarily sharp his ears are able to pick up slightest of variations. And the user becomes extremely quick since all his moves are augmented by the spiritual energy of grega. The speed of the user in the spirit reaper mode can be said to be in par with the sage mode.......also the speed of making the seals is increased about 3 fold.
-The spirit reaper mode with grega remains active for 10 turns in a row.
-The spirit does not harm the body of the user but still such an upsurge from an external chakra source leaves the body in a vulnerable state making it impossible to use jutsu of S or above rank after the mode wears off for the rest of the battle...
-Needs one turn for it to be ready.
-can be used once in a battle.
-Needs to summon seto and geto first.
-And requires one whole turn to form/get ready to use.
-Necessary to hold the ringtail summoning contract.
-Needs to go extremely difficult training at the ringtail village of sonaya to be able to summon spirits.


Note: These jutsus can only be used and taught by -HAN-

~All Declined~ Do not resubmit

 

[Professor Sarutobi]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Animal: Coyote
Scroll Owner: Professor Sarutobi
Other Users who have signed contract: none
Summoning Boss if existing: not yet
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: none yet
~Declined~ Already exists