[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Ushiro]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Resubmitting:

(Fuuton: Saigai Nokogiri)- Wind Release: Disaster Saws

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Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40 (+10 each turn active)
Damage: 80 (+10 with each element combined with)
Description: The user creates two large wind gusts that are compressed into the form of two spinning saw blades that the user manipulates. The wind they are made up of can break up and pull in surrounding elements into themselves to increase their power. With a handseal, they can expand into violent cyclones. While in use, the user can perform only 2 other jutsu per turn.
-Usable 2 times per battle
-Cannot be used again until 2 turns after the last usage.
-Can only be taught by Katonpwnz

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(Doton: Gurando Hebi)- Earth Release: Ground Serpents

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Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: After a series of handseals the user condenses nearby earth or mud into the form of spiked snakes that vary in number from a large snake to numerous small snakes. They travel along and through the ground by fusing with it and can reform after being hit by an attack if part of them are inside the ground. They can be used to attack and restrict an opponent and can also be used as a suprise attack if created underground.
-Usable 2 times per battle
-No S-rank or higher earth jutsu as long as they are active.
-The user must wait 2 turns before using it again
-Can only be taught by Katonpwnz

(Tōi Kage Mane)- Distant Shadow Imitation

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user attaches a wire to a shuriken infused with shadow chakra. Like Shadow Imitation Shuriken, if it hits the opponent's shadow it will stop them from moving. While the user is holding the wire, if the shuriken pierces the ground or another object, he can instantly extend a shadow from it like his own to combine with the opponent's with the same effect as Shadow Imitation.
-Usable 4 times per battle
-Must be a member of the Nara clan to use.
-Can only be taught by Katonpwnz

(Arashi no Gijutsu: Seiteki Barāju)- Storm Tech: Static Barrage

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Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user swings his Twin Storm Blades and fires 10 small shuriken of lightning at the opponent with each swing that, on cue, head strait at the target(s) and impale them before exploding. This will work for a maximum of 18 swings.
-Usable 2 times per battle
-Must have Twin Storm Blades
-Can only be taught by Katonpwnz

(Doton/Fuuton: Hari Hōdai)- Earth/Wind Release: Needle Turret

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Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user slams his hands on the ground and raises a 15x15 ft block of earth from the ground with many small holes in it that shoots countless needles of earth in any direction that are cloaked in wind to greatly increase their speed and piercing ability. As long as the user's hands stay on the ground, the turret can continue to fire. The user can use the same turret again later but it will count as another move.
-Can be created 3 times per battle
-Can only be taught by Katonpwnz

Summoning Animal: Locusts
Scroll Owner: Katonpwnz
Other Users who have signed contract: none
Summoning Boss if existing: none
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: none

Over the limit select only 5 and then resubmit

(Fuuton: Saigai Nokogiri)- Wind Release: Disaster Saws
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40 (+10 each turn active)
Damage: 80 (+10 with each element combined with)
Description: The user creates two large wind gusts that are compressed into the form of two spinning saw blades that the user manipulates. The wind they are made up of can break up and pull in surrounding elements into themselves to increase their power. With a handseal, they can expand into violent cyclones.
-Usable 2 times per battle
-No A-rank wind or above while this is active.
-Can only be taught by Katonpwnz

Declined, oped and restrict what it can suck in and a fire elemental technique can beat it so make sure its properly restricted.

(Akumu wa Chēnsō)- Nightmare Chainsaw
Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user runs his palm across the side of his sword's blade and covers it with black chakra that resembles a spinning chainsaw that is double the actual size of the blade. It is capable of cutting through one S-rank jutsu without losing any power. This can also be used with other edged weapons.
-Usable 2 times per battle
-Can only be taught by Katonpwnz

Declined, do not resubmit
(Doton/Fuuton: Nīdorutaretto)- Earth/Wind Release: Needle Turret
Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user slams his hands on the ground and raises a 15x15 ft block of earth from the ground with many small holes in it that shoots countless needles of earth in any direction that are cloaked in wind to greatly increase their speed and piercing ability. As long as the user's hands stay on the ground, the turret can continue to fire. The user can use the same turret again later but it will count as another move.
-Can be created 3 times per battle
-Can only be taught by Katonpwnz

declined, make it that no A rank earth or wind and above the following turn after use because its quite a large scale technique
(Katon: Suisei Dengeki)- Fire Release: Comet Blitz
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user forms 3 handseals and exhales a meteor-sized fireball at the opponent trailed by several smaller fireballs that can be used to attack multiple targets. They can all be manipulated freely.
-Usable 2 times per battle
-No S-rank or higher fire jutsu next turn
-Can only be taught by Katonpwnz

Declined make it that its no A rank or higher the following turn
(Kage Baitai)- Shadow Medium
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20 (+5 for each smoke bomb)
Damage: 40 (+5 with each smoke bomb if all are combined)
Description: The user infuses up to four smoke bombs with shadow chakra to make the smoke they release thick with shadows and pitch black. The user manipulates the smoke while holding the rat handseal (or in contact with it) to expand and condense it to constrict or stab the enemy. Unlike other shadow jutsu, the smoke removes its weakness to light. An opponent who breathes the smoke movements become slower.
-Usable 3 times per battle and once per turn
-Must be a member of the Nara clan to use.
-Can only be taught by Katonpwnz

Declined, do not resubmit

 

[Serpent]

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(Nenshou Manako) Burning Eye:
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: 70
Description: After the user makes eye contact the opponent falls into an Genjutsu, this Genjutsu makes the opponent fall under major pain, as if the flesh was burning off of there bones. This leaves the Opponent unable to move for one turn.
Notes:
-This Jutsu can only be taught by Frederick Uchiha.

(Fenikkusu Bakudan) Phoenix Bomb:
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: the user shoots three large phoenix shaped fire balls in the air, the fire balls then dive down at there opponent, these's fire balls explode on impacted.
Notes:
-This Jutsu can only be taught by Frederick Uchiha.

(Tsuchi Kabe-Tama) Earth Wall-Bullets:
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description:a large wall raises from the ground in front of the user, the wall then shoots hundreds of little bullets at there opponent.
Notes:
-This Jutsu can only be taught by Frederick Uchiha.

(Zetsumei Sentou) Death Punch:
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: the user gather's a lot of Chakra in there fist, on impacted the chakra is realest into the opponent spreads like a virus and instantly Immobilizes the targeted area.
Notes:
-This Jutsu can only be taught by Frederick Uchiha.

(Seiteki Gen'ya) Static Field:
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: the user infuses there Raiton Chakra in the ground around them, shocking anyone who steps on them in close Range.
Notes:
-This Jutsu can only be taught by Frederick Uchiha.

(Daichi Taihou) Earth Cannon:
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user infuses there Doton Chakra in the Ground, a large round cutout of the earth then shoots from under them throwing the user on a rock high in the sky, the rock then splits into multiple fragments that rain down on the opponent at high speeds, like bullets.
Notes:
-This Jutsu can only be taught by Frederick Uchiha.

(Kaki Bunshin no Jutsu) Fire Clone Technique:
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user infuses there Katon Chakra into your basic shadow clone, these clones do not puff like regular clones, instead they Bust out in a blaze catching anything in a three meter radius on Fire.
Notes:
-This Jutsu can only be taught by Frederick Uchiha.

~All auto-declined, maximum 5 jutsu's at a time~

(Nenshou Manako) Burning Eye:
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: 70
Description: After the user makes eye contact the opponent falls into an Genjutsu, this Genjutsu makes the opponent fall under major pain, as if the flesh was burning off of there bones. This leaves the Opponent unable to move for one turn.
Notes:
-This Jutsu can only be taught by Frederick Uchiha.

Declined, limits

(Fenikkusu Bakudan) Phoenix Bomb:
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: the user shoots three large phoenix shaped fire balls in the air, the fire balls then dive down at there opponent, these's fire balls explode on impacted.
Notes:
-This Jutsu can only be taught by Frederick Uchiha.

Declined, to many pheonix techniques of similar fashion exists
(Tsuchi Kabe-Tama) Earth Wall-Bullets:
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description:a large wall raises from the ground in front of the user, the wall then shoots hundreds of little bullets at there opponent.
Notes:
-This Jutsu can only be taught by Frederick Uchiha.

made b rank as it hardly deserves A rank

(Daichi Taihou) Earth Cannon:
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user infuses there Doton Chakra in the Ground, a large round cutout of the earth then shoots from under them throwing the user on a rock high in the sky, the rock then splits into multiple fragments that rain down on the opponent at high speeds, like bullets.
Notes:
-This Jutsu can only be taught by Frederick Uchiha.

Declined, Do not resubmit

(Kaen Kanadzuchi) Blaze War-Hammer:
Type: Weapon
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Description: This is an War-Hammer created from an unbreakable alloy Infused with Katon Chakra. when wielded the User's Katon attacks do more damage and only require one hand seal. Any fire attack directed to the wielder of this hammer, power is cut in half. This is because the hammer sucks up most the chakra. the holder of this weapon is able to Ignite this hammer at will.
Abilities:
-All Fire Jutsu's require 1 Hand seal.
-All Fire Jutsu's are 1 rank higher.
-All Fire Jutsu's get's a +10 damage.
-All of the opponents Fire Jutsu's are cut in half.
-This hammer can be ignited at will.
-This hammer burns anyone else that try's to wield it.
Disability:
-All water Jutsu's get -10 Damage.
-All water Jutsu's require 1 extra handseal.
Note:
-This Weapon can only be wielded by Frederick Uchiha.

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How can you have a forbidden class weapon? forbidden rank are forbidden for a reason as they hold great risk to the user

Sorry I didn't know about the 5 Jutsu limitation. So i Pick these four and the weapon.

 

[ZK]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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Name: Ninja Arts: Chakra Blast = Ninpou: Chakurabura
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Supplementary/Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user focuses a great amount of uncontrolled chakra into every inch of his body, then the user releases it all in a single moment, this blast of chakra will shoot out from every inch of the users body, and push almost everything away from the users body, even the users own shields and techniques, this technique is extremely quick since it only requires a burst of chakra.

#Declined, do not resubmit~

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Name: Totemic Art – Totems = Tōtemuāto - Tōtemu
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user focuses chakra into any material and uses chakra manipulation to shape it like a totem, the totem can be of almost any size and/or shape, it has various effects depending on what kind of chakra infused into it and what shape it is, these totems can be pre-prepared before the fight.

~Declined, elaborate on this "any material"

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Name: Fire release: Totemic Art – Flame Wave Totem = Katon: Tōtemuāto - Honoo-ha no tōtemu
Rank: C-S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra cost: 10-40 (if not pre-preprared)
Damage points: 20-80
Description: The user throws a special flame totem, that will, when the user activates it, radiate a great flame wall 360 degrees around it, the wall will appear in waves with a 2 second interval, the size of the wall depends on how much chakra the user has stored inside the totem, the flame wall will slowly turn the terrain around it into scorched ground, the totem lasts for 2 turns, but only after it's been activated.

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Name: Fire release: Totemic Art – Fireball Totem = Katon: Tōtemuāto - Hinotama tōtemu
Rank: C-S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 10-40 (If not pre-prepared)
Damage points: 20-80
Description: The user throws a special flame totem, that will, when the user activates it, continuously fire bolts of flame towards the target(s), the size of the fire bolts depends on the amount of chakra stored inside the totem, the fireballs are fired with a 10 second interval, the totem lasts for 3 turns, but only after it's been activated.

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Name: Earth release: Totemic Art – Binding Totem = Doton: Tōtemuāto - Baindingu no tōtemu
Rank: C-S
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 10-40 (If not pre-prepared)
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user throws a special earth totem, that will, when the user activates it, emit chakra waves into the earth, that will create an invisible field in short range around it, when a target enters the area, the totem will make the earth beneath them rise up around their legs and bind them, thereby making them unable to move their legs, the size and hardness of the binding earth, is determined by how much chakra that has been stored inside it, the totem lasts for 2 turns, but only after it's been activated.

If you think the amount of time the totems lasts are unapproveable, please edit it, and then i'll make all my Totemic Art accordingly .

~Get the first one approved first~

 

[Passion]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Kuchiyose: Suterusue Wani ) - Summoning technique: Stealth Crocodile

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Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30 ( - 10 per turn )
Damage points: N/A
Description: User bites his/her thumb to draw out blood and summons regular Adult size crocodile. The Crocodile looks regular but it can be used for infiltrating missions just like the toad Jiraiya used to get to Amegakure. User can climb inside of it along with one companion and control the crocodile from inside as it progresses towards the target/place user wants it to. After climbing out of it the Crocodile will disappear. The same jutsu can also be used for by climbing into the crocodile as it returns back to the realm of summoning animals ( like how Sasuke did with Manda, escaping from the battle ).
Note:
- Can be summoned twice per battle
- Can only stay 5 turns on the field max
- Disappears after there's no use of it.

so basically the technique is to escape from the battle?

( Fuuton/Doton: Torunedan ) - Earth/Wind release: Tornado Steps

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Rank: S
Type: Offensive - Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A ( + 80 when hit by mines )
Description: User must first concentrate both Earth and Wind based chakra while weaving Snake → Rabbit → Rat → Ox → Dog handseals. Then, as the handseals are completed the earth will rumble for few seconds and thirty pockets filled with compressed tornadoes appear on the field. Any tremors done within earth will cause the pockets to break and release the tornado/es. Stepping on the pockets will cause the same thing and each tornado's size is about 1/10 of Atsugai's size. Large tremors will also cause chain reaction of multiple tornadoes being released.
Note:
- Can be used only once per battle
- User can control the spots that the pockets are being made in but the tornadoes cannot be controlled
- No Wind jutsus at the same turn after this one
- No Forbidden Wind or Earth is allowed on next turn

Declined, do not resubmit

@Summoning: Yes. As I said it's used for infiltrating and escaping quickly. Mainly used in village system.

( Dōjutsu/Genjutsu: Shin’ya Ame ) - Eye/Illusion technique: Midnight Rain

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Rank: A/S
Range: Short - Long
Type: Offensive - Supplementary
Chakra cost: 30 ( + 10 when using higher sharingan )
Damage points: 60 ( + 20 and - 10 when using higher Sharingan )
Description: A person that possesses Uchiha-clan's sharingan can perform this illusion on their opponents. This jutsu requires at least 3rd tomoe sharingan and an eye contact at some point. Upon reaching eye contact at some point of the fight, user can activate this eye technique without opponent noticing anything. Then, once as user wishes, he/she can trigger an effect of this jutsu where the target's world slows down a bit and multiple needles rain on top of hm/her, causing a paralysis and pain.
Note:
- Can be used only once
- The special effect must be triggered within 4 turns from this jutsu being used and using higher Sharingan than the 3rd tomoed will result a stronger effects of this jutsu.
- Sharingans on the same level or higher as user's can see through this genjutsu and any other doujutsu cannot.

~Declined, Do not resubmit Doujutsu are not allowed anymore~

( Fuuton/Taijutsu: Kazetsu rendan ) - Wind release/Taijutsu: Wind Hit barrage

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Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Close
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80 ( - 10 to user )
Description: User concentrates wind chakra into their fist and compresses it. Then, once enough Wind chakra is gathered, the user must make a punching motion. Once the user punches, wind chakra is being released in form of many blunt gusts of wind that feel as if the user would have multiple hands punching the target and it can quickly deliver fatal damage to opponent. This isn't really effective against hardenings and the wind hits can be delivered from one hand only.
Note:
- No taijutsu at the next turn
- No offensive Wind at the same turn
- User's hand muscles will be strained from this technique.

~edit the No offensive wind techniques to no A rank wind or above next turn~

 

[Vergil..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

well its been a long time

(Fuuinjutsu: Gogyou Fuuin) - Sealing Technique: 5 Element Seal Gourd
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A(the same as the jutsu it absorbs + 10 due to the compression)
Description:A technique used to seal away either of the 5 basic elements created with a jutsu, within a small gourd. This is done by opening the gourd and doing the necessary hand seals, focusing chakra of the same element as the one the user wants to seal, so absorbing said element within the recipient closing it with a secondary automatic seal already written on the gourds cork. After the technique is sealed the user can open the gourd to release the jutsu back on his enemy or he can even shatter the gourd with one hand seal provoking an explosion.
(note:this can only be used twice)
(note: can only seal up to A-rank and one element at a time )

~make it that the element you seal in you cant use up to the same rank the following turn ~

 

[itachiuchia]

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(Oni Mo-do) Demon Mode
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: None
Chakra cost: 25
Damage points: None
Description:When used The user's hoal body goes dark and they gain huge dark chakra wings and long dark claws. This move is used to split the light and dark side of a person Demon mode brining out the Dark side. Angel mode mode brininging out the light side. This moad gives the user plus 5 in Lightning and Fire and genjutsu.
can onley be used by itachiuchia
Only once per battle
when used user can only use Fire, Lightning, Genjutsu
canot be used in the same battle as Angel Form

(Tenshi Mo-do) Angel Mode
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: None
Chakra cost: 25
Damage points: None
Description:When used The user's hole body becomes compleatly Golden. This move is used to split the light and dark side of a person. Demon mode brining out the Dark side. Angle mode mode brininging out the Light side. This moad gives the user plus 5 in Water,Wind taijutsu and earth.
Only once per battle
when used user can only use Water,Wind taijutsu and earth
canot be used in the same battle as Demon Form
can onley be used by itachiuchia

(Tsubasa of Makai) wings of hell
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 25
Damage points: 40
Description:The user rushes at the oponent and slashes them with its wings that where gaind in demon fourm.
can only be used three times per battle
can onley be used by itachiuchia
Can only be used in demon fourm

~All declined, do not resubmit~

 

[Pervyy]

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(Senaura) - Sage Aura
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: Forbbiden
Range: N/a
Chakra Cost: 80
Damage points: +40 to each attack
Description: When in sage mode the user will focus all there say charka into a golden aura around there body. This aura can only be made when the users emotion is put into it. It increases the users speed and power ten-fold, only by charking all the remaining power of sage mode into this one turn this is used. So if its used at the end of one turn, it ends at the end of the next turn. This is mainly for the maximum power when using taijutsu, or attacks like frog katanas.

Note: Uses up remaining time for sage mode
Note: Can only be used once
Note: +40 damage to each attack (+1/2 ranks)
Note: Cant use S rank techniques in the next turn

~Declined, do not resubmit~

 

[Geezus]

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Kuchiyose| Warui Inu - (Summoning|Bad Dog)
Rank: A
Type: Summon
Range: N/A
Chakra: 30
Description: Warui Inu, or just Inu is one mean ass dog. He is very aggressive, belligerent, mean and disobedient. However for all these negative qualities he is damn powerful. Standing nearly five feet tall and weighing 175 pounds of muscle is can be very intimidating but it is for good reason. Inu fought his whole life against stronger and meaner dogs who were also tossed aside. His appearance is of that warrior who has survived. He has black fur that is very rich, and branded on his body are flames that have formed in his actual fur. So to compliment his black fur is red patches in the shapes on flames around his neck, paws, tail, back and a few places in between. He is grizzled and mean but he is a survivor. He would have it no other way. Because of this he is a natural at fire-based techniques allowing him to use up to A-Rank Fire techniques, he is also able to spew out multiple speedy fireballs (max of three) at one time at the opponent equal to a B-Rank Katon.

~Approved~

Kirinken| Kirin Blade
Rank:S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40 (+20 for each turn it takes to charge chakra)
Damage: 80 (+20 to raiton and attack for each level)
Description: Kirin Blade starts as a simple katana. When the user applies chakra to the weapon though it grown into a Giant Broad Sword that resembles Zabuza's Decaptating Knife, only larger and wider. But, what truly gives this blade it's name is the dragon that appears on the blade itself. This Dragon acts as a gauge to indicate how much power/chakra is currently within the sword. This is represented by 3 levels of power.

Ichirai (1st Lightning)
This level is the basic one after charging chakra to the blade for 1 turn the user, the dragon fills up into a electric yellow coloring and unlocks its most basic powers.

-Ability to absorb B-Rank Lightning and Below
-Minor Sensory of Electric Currents
- B-Rank Lightning Blast (Usable 3 Times)

Nirai (2nd Lightning)
This level is the advanced form completed after 2 full turns of charging chakra into the blade. This is represented by a blue coloring that fills up over the yellow one, while the eyes of the Dragon become yellow. This level unlocks the next set of abilities.

-Ability to absorb A-Rank Lightning & Below
-Sensory of Electrical Currents
- A-Rank Lightning Bolt (usable 2 Times)
- Changes in User Chakra affect its power (e.g supplementary jutsu increase power along with users. )

Sanrai (3rd Lightning)
This level is the ultimate form, The dragon begins turning pitch black, as the eyes on the dragon turn yellow and blue representing the two previous levels having been fully completed. It also takes up to 3 turns to fully get to this level. The set of abilities granted here though far exceeds those of the previous two.... but because of this the user sacrifices all of his other elements to maintain control over the weapon.

- Ability to absorb any lightning in the area (chakra and natural)
- S-Rank Lightning Dragon Blast (Usable Once, Sword Reverts to unawakened state unable to return to any others for rest of battle, user loses all lightning chakra for rest of the battle and his arms are unable to move from having to control the blast, takes 2 turns of absorbing chakra/lightning).
- Sensory of anything that produces a electrical current
- Changes in User's Chakra Affects Power
- Becomes source for lightning jutsu allowing use of techniques without seals.

~Declined, Do not resubmit~

 

[The_Empire]

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-Red Grand Elder (Niiro Yuuen Senpai)
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Point: N/A
Description: The Red Grand Elder is one of the Sixth Grand Elder Snakes. Red is the one who is known as the fire master of all the snakes. He can spit out an A rank Meteor size Fireball (short-mid) and a S rank flamethrower (short-mid) from his mouth. He can with stand a S rank fire jutsu without poofing away. He can with stand 1 any other attack A rank without poofing away. After being hit with one of these moves he can't be summoned agained.
He is weak against water attacks, B rank and higher.
-A rank Fireball used 2 times in battle
- S rank Flamethrower used 1 time in battle

~Declined, edit the highlighted part so that he cant withstand water techniques of A rank and above ~

-Blue Grand Elder (Aoiro Yuuen Senpai)
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Point: N/A
Description: The Blue Grand Elder is one of the Sixth Grand Elder Snakes. Blue is the one known as the water master of all the snakes. He can spit a B rank Water Sphere (short-mid) and A rank Water Stream (short-mid). He can with stand a S water jutsu and can with stand 1 any other attack A rank with out poofing away. After being hit buy one of these attacks and poofs away he can't be summoned agained.
He is weak against lightning attacks, B rank and higher.
-B rank Water Sphere used 3 times in battle
-A rank Water Stream used 2 times in battle

~Declined, same applies for this one except ligtning A rank and above ~

-Summon Technique: Snake Stomach (Kuchiyose: Hebi Hara)
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Point: N/A
Description: The user make six hand seals and slams his hands on the ground. The user summons a snake's stomach just like what Jiriaya summons a Toad's stomach. The stomach can be control by the user to make the stomach expand or tighten in any point in the stomach to crush anything that isn't hard as steel or higher density.
-only used 2 times per battle
-it stays on the field for 4 turns or unless the user releases it
-must have 2 turns in between uses

~Approved ~

Summon Technique: Young Money (Kuchiyose: Toshiwakai Kane)
Rank:A
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Point: N/A
Description: The user summons a pack of 5 ninken. The pack memebers are: Lil Wayne(LW), Drake, Nicki Manaj(NM), Tyga and Gudda Gudda(GG). They can walk and run on water and also they are more dangerous then Kakashi dogs because of their speed(Rock Lee with no weights; only people who can track speeds this fast can track them) but they are around the same size as Kakashi dogs expect not having a big dog like Bull in the pack. These dogs have no real abilities expect for their speed and the leader can talk and also sense of smell and hearing is like a normal dog.
-LW: He is the leader of the pack and the only one who can talk. He wears a red scroph around his neck.
-Drake: He wears a black jacket with white writing on the back.
-NM: She is the only girl in the pack and she has a pink spot on top of her head.
-Tyga: He is the skinniest of the pack but the quickest of the pack(just a little bit faster).
-GG: He has a black mark on his right side of his face under his right eye looks like a small cross.

Note: If you don't like the tracking then you can change it.

~Declined, do not resubmit~

-Death Lightning
-(Sendo Raikou)
Rank: A
Type: Weapon
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This is a special katana that was created by DN after trying to take Liliana 7SM sword. The katana is made of a special metal that allows the user to channel their lightning chakra into it. The user can focus lightning chakra in their hand and the katana will come to their hand if the katana is knocked away. The user can channel lightning chakra into the katana and stab it into the ground and send a lightning current to the opponent shocking and paralyze the opponent(C rank: Short-Mid)
-Current only used 2 times in battle
-Only used by Deidara Nara

~Declined, remove the channel lightning chakra into hand to draw back the katana knocked out ya hand ~


Dropping my Devilish Haramonica for this katana

 

[KeotsuEclipse]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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(Samurai Gijutsu: Amatsu Taiga) Samurai Art: Heavenly River
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will run Raiton chakra through their blade while holding it skyward, to activate this technique. This technique fills the air with energy – so much so, that Doton jutsu fall one rank (due to the charges in the air disrupting the formation as the energy disperses into the earth), and that a lightning bolt continuously streaks from the user’s sword, enveloping it in electricity, to the sky. Though meant as a Support technique, using the lightning to augment physical and water element attacks or by creative means, this technique is not without its own offensive measure. Once per turn, the user can swing their blade, and send a bolt of lightning flying in the direction of their swing – the energy is discharged from the constantly streaking bolt that originates from the blade, though this can only be done twice, and not on consecutive turns, due for the need for the electricity to replenish.

Spoiler

*The lightning can only be fired once per turn, every other turn.
*This jutsu last for four turns before the electricity dissipates, and all modifiers are returned to normal.
*Only once per battle.

Declined, restrictions

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(Samurai Gijutsu: Amatsu Taiga) Samurai Art: Heavenly River
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will run Raiton chakra through their blade while holding it skyward, to activate this technique. This technique fills the air with energy – so much so, that Doton jutsu fall one rank (due to the charges in the air disrupting the formation as the energy disperses into the earth), and that a lightning bolt continuously streaks from the user’s sword, enveloping it in electricity, to the sky. Though meant as a Support technique, using the lightning to augment physical and water element attacks or by creative means, this technique is not without its own offensive measure. Once per turn, the user can swing their blade, and send a bolt of lightning flying in the direction of their swing – the energy is discharged from the constantly streaking bolt that originates from the blade, though this can only be done twice, and not on consecutive turns, due for the need for the electricity to replenish.

Spoiler

*The lightning can only be fired once per turn, every other turn.
*This jutsu last for four turns before the electricity dissipates, and all modifiers are returned to normal.
*Only once per battle.
*Raiton cannot be used for two turns after this jutsu ends, due to the air being unable to hold a charge after being supersaturated with energy.

~Approved~


Couldn't really think of anything to add to it restriction-wise, thus the last "*" is the new restriction.

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(Zantetsuken) Iron-Cutting Sword
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short- Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80 (-20 to user)
Description: Zantetsuken is a quite powerful Kenjutsu technique, mainly used as a finishing or heavy-damage dealing blow. This technique begins by the user projecting their chakra into the air, and creating a low-level Genjutsu, meant only to distract the opponent (though it also is used to add a touch of personalization to the attack between different users), while the user prepares for the attack – placing their dominant foot in the lead, the user will bring their sword to their non-dominant side with the tip of the blade pointing straight backwards; during this movement, the user focuses chakra throughout their entire body, allowing them to perform the technique. The user will then move in on a linear path towards the opponent, at incredible speeds, momentarily augmented by the chakra in their muscles. As they move towards the opponent, they swing their blade around, striking the opponent, again, their muscles augmented by the chakra. As the name suggests, this has enough force behind the attack to cut even Iron, though the true power of the attack depends on the user’s physical strength.

Spoiler

*This does NOT act as the Eight Inner Gates, and the boost provided by the attack only works DURING the actual attack.
*In the turn this is used, only two justu can be used, this being one of them.
*This jutsu must be the last move used in a turn.
*This jutsu can only be used twice in a battle – but not within 10 turns of its previous use.
*This jutsu cannot be used until the user has had five previous turns.
*This technique puts strain on the user, and causes 20 damage to the user due to minor muscle damage – the second time this technique is used, the user sustains 60 damage due to increased strain on already damaged muscles.
*Only two techniques may be used in the turn following this move.

Spoiler

Mifune’s Zantetsuken can be seen in

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at 2:43-2:57.

~Declined, do not resubmit~

 

[Typhon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Green Lantern Power Ring
(Ao Rantan Iesi Ringu)
Type: Supplementary/Weapon
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: (-15 per turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The Power Rings were created long ago as tools to help shinobi uphold justice throughout the ninja world. They were made using a special type of metal that allowed the user to channel chakra into them and bring shape manipulation to a new level. The ring works by stabilizing the user's chakra as it passes through the metal, making it easier to craft so the user can shape it into various objects such as weapons or shields. The metal's unique properties cause the chakra to become tainted with a green glow as it forms. Even with the added stabilization it is difficult to master shape manipulation making the techniques using this ring quite costly.
~Can only be used by Lord Danzo.
~Drains 15 chakra per turn activated.

~Restrict lengh of usage?~


Lantern Arts: Energy Constructs
(Rantanjitsu: Seishou Konsutorakuto)
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: C-A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15-30
Damage: 30-60
Description: This is the most basic technique used by Power Ring holders. They channel their chakra through the ring and create basic shapes that can be used for offense or defense. The lower ranked version of this technique can only be used in short range and for creating objects such as swords or small shields. The medium ranked version can still only be used in short range, but the object created are larger, capable of being twice the size of the user. The higher ranked version of this technique can be used up to mid range and create fairly large objects such as pillars, hammers, etc.
~All objects must be connected to the ring.
~Loss of connection with the ring will result in the loss of the technique.

first get the weapon approved~

Green Lantern Power Ring
(Ao Rantan Iesi Ringu)
Type: Supplementary/Weapon
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: (-15 per turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The Power Rings were created long ago as tools to help shinobi uphold justice throughout the ninja world. They were made using a special type of metal that allowed the user to channel chakra into them and bring shape manipulation to a new level. The ring works by stabilizing the user's chakra as it passes through the metal, making it easier to craft so the user can shape it into various objects such as weapons or shields. The metal's unique properties cause the chakra to become tainted with a green glow as it forms. Even with the added stabilization it is difficult to master shape manipulation making the techniques using this ring quite costly.
~Can only be used by Lord Danzo.
~Drains 15 chakra per turn activated.
~Can only be used once every other turn.

~Approved~


Lantern Arts: Energy Constructs
(Rantanjitsu: Seishou Konsutorakuto)
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: C-A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15-30
Damage: 30-60
Description: This is the most basic technique used by Power Ring holders. They channel their chakra through the ring and create basic shapes that can be used for offense or defense. The lower ranked version of this technique can only be used in short range and for creating objects such as swords or small shields. The medium ranked version can still only be used in short range, but the object created are larger, capable of being twice the size of the user. The higher ranked version of this technique can be used up to mid range and create fairly large objects such as pillars, hammers, etc.
~All objects must be connected to the ring.
~Rank C usage can only be done twice, and count towards one of the users moves~Rank B and A can only be used once each, and count towards one of the users moves
~Loss of connection with the ring will result in the loss of the technique.

~Approved, added the bold parts~

 

[Hammy120290]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Resubmitting.

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Range: Short
Description: The blade is a gift from the Orangutans and is made of special metals unknown to anyone but them. It is indestructable and has the ability to absorb any Lightning attack up to B rank and a few A rank.
The blade will absorb a lightning attack no matter where the blade is on the battlefield as it attracts the lightning to it like a magnet it negates the use of lightning in the battle by both the wielder and the opponent.
The only way to use Lightning is to holster the sword(As the holster also made by the Orangutans holds the "magnetic" charge) or get the sword out of range of the battlefield.

Restrictions:

• Cannot use Lightning jutsu's unless blade is holstered or away from the battlefield
• Can only absorb 3 A rank. B rank or below can be absorbed again and again.
• Can only be wielded by a user who has signed the Orangutan contract

elaborate on the few A rank techniques

A few just meant the amount the sword can absorb i.e. in the restrictions 3 A rank.

your ment to add that to the an update of the technique no discussions allowed in general in the thread this is a warning so resubmit with the elaboration

 

[Wesobi]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Raiton: Tenoyubi Touken)-Lightning Style: Fingerswords
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user focuses Raiton Chakra on the tip of his/her fingers. By adding Shape Manipulation, the chakra takes on the form of a five small swords, erupting from his fingertips. This sword is able easily pierce through the human body and solid objects, such as rocks or trees.
~ This attack lasts 2 turn
~ When used against a Suiton-based attack, the power increases(+5 Damage Points).~

Declined, Similar jutsu already exists

 

[BlacKing]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Resubmitting

Kaijin (Hyena Mode)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 80
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User is coated in an armor of thick Hyena hide, belonging to Grand Cotta. The User gains a helmet made of Manganin, the same metal used as Grand Cotta's protective headgear. The Transformation into Kaijin (Hyena Mode) takes a 2 seconds to form, the Manganin helmet is the last to form. While this is active, Hyena mode has these effects.
*Decrease all Lightning Jutsu damage by 20.
*Lightning jutsu that hit the user does not cause Paralyzation due to the hide of the Hyena.
*User's Peripheral vision is impaired due to Helmet.
*User cannot use any clone techniques while in this mode.
*Must have signed the Hyena Contract to use.
*Lasts for 5 turns
*Can only be used 2x per battle

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2 seconds is hardly appropriate... if it only took 2 seconds to enter sage mode it wouldn't be a problem in the anime/manga for the characters who use/used it.​

Kami no Hidari-te Akuma no Migi-te (God's Left Hand, Devil's Right Hand)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 80
Damage points: N/A
Description: User, while in Kaijin (Hyena Mode), summons (by way of handseals) what appears to be two clones of the user. The only difference between the three is that one has A yellow Manganin helmet, while the other has a red Manganin helmet, and the user's helmet is brown. The God's left hand(Kami) has all Lightning Abilities and is capable of using all the Lightning Techs that the user knows. The Devil's Right Hand(Akuma) has all Fire Abilities, and is capable of using all the Fire Techs that the user knows.
Note: Usable only in Kaijin (Hyena Mode)
Note: Must have signed the Hyena Contract to use.
*Vision impairment still applies for Each "clone".
*Each "Clone" is immune to attacks of their element S Rank and Below.
*User cannot use any Lightning or Fire Techs while each respective "Clone" is on the field and for 1 turn after they are destroyed.


(Kami/Akuma: Kurama Bushuugi)- God's Left Hand/Devil's Right Hand: Wheel of Misfortune
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 60
Damage Points: 80
Desription: A combination of Kami's and Akuma's natural elements. They stand back to back and shoot a fireball and lightning ring, which combine and travel toward the opponent, gaining speed as it goes.
Note: Can only be used 2x per battle
Note: Counts as two of the 3 moves in a turn.
Note: Must have signed the Hyena Contract to use.
Note: Can only be used in Kaijin (Hyena Mode.

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until hyena mode is approved don't submit these corrections please, or at least go over it with someone first.​

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Katon: Enkou Bu-Meran (Fire Style: Flame Boomerang)
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short/ Mid/Long
Chakra: 80
Damage: (-20 of the original jutsu)
Description: With a flick of the User’s hand, the User is capable of manipulating/redirecting a preexisting Fire/Lava jutsu. The User pulls the fire/lava jutsu back towards the enemy (after having missed them) at the expense of making the jutsu weaker.
Note: This can only be used/taught by BloodLust Loki
Note: Fire/Lava jutsu must have either missed the enemy or appeared behind them in order to use successfully.
Note: If Attack is unsuccessful, User must defend against the attacking jutsu as if the opponent were attacking him.
Note: Lowers the level of the jutsu used by one rank.
Note: -20 the attack points of the jutsu
Note: Can only be used twice per battle.

as long as it only misses them it's fine, however you can't use this to avoid defences.​

Kaijin (Hyena Mode)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 80
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User is coated in an armor of thick Hyena hide, belonging to Grand Cotta. The User gains a helmet made of Manganin, the same metal used as Grand Cotta's protective headgear. The Transformation into Kaijin (Hyena Mode) takes a the time it takes to perform handselas for the next jutsu to form, the Manganin helmet is the last to form. While this is active, Hyena mode has these effects.
*Decrease all Lightning Jutsu damage by 20.
*Lightning jutsu that hit the user does not cause Paralyzation due to the hide of the Hyena.
*User's Peripheral vision is impaired due to Helmet.
*User cannot use any clone techniques while in this mode.
*Must have signed the Hyena Contract to use.
*Lasts for 5 turns
*Can only be used 2x per battle

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Declined, you have edited the time section and now its confusing ajust it or next time it will be declined completely

Suiton: Suiton Bu-Meran (Water Style: Water Boomerang)
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short/ Mid/Long
Chakra: 80
Damage: (-20 of the original jutsu)
Description: With a flick of the User’s hand, the User is capable of manipulating/redirecting a preexisting Water jutsu. The User pulls the water jutsu back towards the enemy (after having missed them) at the expense of making the jutsu weaker.
Note: This can only be used/taught by BloodLust Loki
Note: Water jutsu must have either missed the enemy or appeared behind them in order to use successfully.
Note: If Attack is unsuccessful, User must defend against the attacking jutsu as if the opponent were attacking him.
Note: Lowers the level of the jutsu used by one rank.
Note: -20 the attack points of the jutsu
Note: Can only be used twice per battle.

Raiton: Raiden Bu-Meran (Lightning Style: Lightning Boomerang)
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short/ Mid/Long
Chakra: 80
Damage: (-20 of the original jutsu)
Description: With a flick of the User’s hand, the User is capable of manipulating/redirecting a preexisting lightning jutsu. The User pulls the lightning jutsu back towards the enemy (after having missed them) at the expense of making the jutsu weaker.
Note: This can only be used/taught by BloodLust Loki
Note: Lightning jutsu must have either missed the enemy or appeared behind them in order to use successfully.
Note: If Attack is unsuccessful, User must defend against the attacking jutsu as if the opponent were attacking him.
Note: Lowers the level of the jutsu used by one rank.
Note: -20 the attack points of the jutsu
Note: Can only be used twice per battle.

IF and only IF Hyena Mode is approved

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Kami no Hidari-te Akuma no Migi-te (God's Left Hand, Devil's Right Hand)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 80
Damage points: N/A
Description: User, while in Kaijin (Hyena Mode), summons (by way of handseals) what appears to be two clones of the user. The only difference between the three is that one has A yellow Manganin helmet, while the other has a red Manganin helmet, and the user's helmet is brown. The God's left hand(Kami) has all Lightning Abilities and is capable of using all the Lightning Techs that the user knows. The Devil's Right Hand(Akuma) has all Fire Abilities, and is capable of using all the Fire Techs that the user knows.
Note: Usable only in Kaijin (Hyena Mode)
Note: Must have signed the Hyena Contract to use.
*Vision impairment still applies for Each "clone".
*Each "Clone" is immune to attacks of their element S Rank and Below.
*User cannot use any Lightning or Fire Techs while each respective "Clone" is on the field.


(Kami/Akuma: Kurama Bushuugi)- God's Left Hand/Devil's Right Hand: Wheel of Misfortune
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 60
Damage Points: 80
Desription: A combination of Kami's and Akuma's natural elements. They stand back to back and shoot a fireball and lightning ring, which combine and travel toward the opponent, gaining speed as it goes.
Note: Can only be used 2x per battle
Note: Counts as two of the 3 moves in a turn.
Note: Must have signed the Hyena Contract to use.
Note: Can only be used in Kaijin (Hyena Mode).

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same as usual get hyena mode approved first

 

[Artimis]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

X- mo-do(X-Mode)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: N/A(user 15 damage per turn this is active)
Description: This is one of the Strongest moves the X-Gloves can perform once fusion with the Mare Sky ring, the user will drain all the power from the X-Gloves this will cause the Gloves and the ring to become powerless and fall off, once the gloves fall off the user hands, the user eyes will turn red and his body will heat up in to a incredible rate causing steam to come from his nose every time he breaths while in this Mode the user speed will be enhanced speed and all fire jutsus performed will go up a rank and other fire jutsus used on the user will become useless
Note: While in this Mode can only use Fire Jutsus and ninjutsu
Note: this Mode will burn the user inside per turn If the user stays in this mode longer then 3 turns his inside will be burned to the point where he will be unable to fight
Note: Gloves and ring are gone for the rest of the fight after the user comes out of this mode he will be unable to use any fire for the rest of the fight

(X-shippuu)X- Tornado
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short -mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points:80
Description: This move starts out by the user extending both arms in a outwards position, Then the user lets out very larger flames from each arm, once that is done the user starts to spin at a very fast speed making the fire start to twist around him forming a very powerful Tornado, the fire Tornado is very larger if the opponent is standing mid from the user he will be caught in the attack once caught inside the opponent will be ripped and burned to death since the attack is made up of wind and fire and the Tornado can’t just be stopped by any water attack must be S-rank or a two element combo
Note: can only be used once in a fight
Note: once used user can’t use any S rank fire jutsus next turn
Note: must have X-gloves on to perform this jutsu
Note: The user wont be hurt because he will be in the eye of the tornado and that's the safes place to be.

(heishi mune houmen) - Dying Will Release
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user release 90% of their remaining Chakra into a force known as the user’s Dying Will” turns all of the person’s safety switches off and in exchange for risking their life, they are able to harness great strength. While in dying will any damage done to the user will become least affected on the user moves during the fight meaning if the was to be stab by a kunai in the side or something that won’t kill them instantly he will be able the continue what he was doing without stopping, the back draw is the user still take damage normally, so once the user comes out of “Dying will” he will feel the full affect that might cause him to be unable to continue fighting.
Note: while in Dying will the user 5 senses are pushed to the Max and increase the users reaction time dramatically improved tenfold
Note: While the user senses are push to the Max the user will have full control on how the senses work, so the user wont hear something so loud that it blow there ear drums’
Note: can only be used once per battle
Note: only lasts 3 turns
Note: after using this jutsu is cancelled, the user will be able to perform 4 more jutsu before there chakra comeplete runs out

(X- kouen katana)- Flaming blade
Rank: S
Range: Short-mid
Type: Attack
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will focus Chakra in to the X-Gloves, and then hold his hand in a sword stance once this is done fire will start to rise from the top of his right hand forming a blade made of pure flames from the gloves. This flaming sword is very unique because it is made totally of fire it has special abilities the first one is the sword is able to extend to mid range from where the user is standing and it just doesn’t have to go straight it can zigzag or even attack from above, the other ability is that the sword can be used as a whip to wrap around the opponent and demobilize him from moving at the same time burning him badly. Sword can be deactivated at anytime .
Note: Can be used once in battle.
Note: Last three turns.
Note: user cannot perform any X-moves while Flaming blade is active.

i will not check techniques that are resubmitted for updates without quotes Declined~

 

[Hot.Tendo]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kami Amatsu-Souken no jutsu) - Heavenly Paper Creation Technique
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range:Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:A time delayed jutsu wherein Konan prepares papers that mimic the environment like trees, soil, rocks and even animals with explosive tags hidden inside them. Konan mainly uses this jutsu to trap, surprise or even kill her opponents by the explosion. Since this jutsu is time delayed, Konan can activate this jutsu anytime when needed by making the explosive tags explode or uses the papers to wrap her opponent's feet and stopping their movement.
~can only be used/taught by Konan/sexytendo
~can't be detected by any dojutsu
~can only be used once
~can only be used on the first move

Declined, add a time limit as to how long it takes to set the hole thing up and remove cant be seen by any doujutsu, doujutsu can see hidden explosive tags

(Kami Amatsu-Souken no jutsu) - Heavenly Paper Creation Technique
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range:Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:A time delayed jutsu wherein Konan prepares papers that mimic the environment like trees, soil, rocks and even animals with explosive tags hidden inside them. Konan mainly uses this jutsu to trap, surprise or even kill her opponents by the explosion. Since this jutsu is time delayed, Konan can activate this jutsu anytime when needed by making the explosive tags explode or uses the papers to wrap her opponent's feet and stopping their movement.
~can only be used on the first move
~can be set up in one post
~can only be used once
~can only be used/taught by Konan/sexytendo

Declined, change time limit to 1 trun as it stands ur time limit restriction is hardly a limit

(Kami Kyodai Sensu) - Giant Paper Folding Fan
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Similar to the fan Temari use, however, this fan is made up of Konan's paper and can re-shape itself if it disperse when damaged, it's also as hard as steel since it's infused with chakra. Konan's Folding fan is mainly used when she uses wind style jutsus like the ones Temari performs, but can be folded back to be used like a metal club for close combat.

Spoiler

It's the same size as Temari's fan

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~can only be used by ~SexyTendo~

is this a custom weapon or custom jutsu if jutsu restrict it

(Kami Katana) - Paper Katana
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Even if it's not made of metal, Konan's Paper Katana can still be as sharp and hard as a regular katana since it's chakra infused, she can also change the length of her Katana by adding paper to make it longer or decrease the number of paper to make it shorter depending on the situation, like her fan, it can also reform back when damaged.

Spoiler

I've picked a white katana to make it as paper-like as possible

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~can only be used by ~SexyTendo~

again is this a custom weapon or custom jutsu if so restrict it

(Futton: Keisei Tatsumaki ) - Wind Style: Tornado Formation
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: To use this jutsu the user takes in a deep breath and manipulates the shape of the wind when the users blows it, the shape turns into a tornado that can cause devastating effects on the surrounding and has the power of that an F-3 Tornado.
~last for 3 post
~can only be used by SexyTendo

~Approved

 

[The Seven-Scaled boy]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Suiton/Raiton: Ikuzo Jellyfishuing! - Water/Lightning Style: Let's go Jellyfishing!
Type: Defence/Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will release suiton chakra into his sourroundings really quickly and manipulate it in order to generate enormous syrup quanitites. By appyling shape manipulation, the user can form all around him a perfect defense all around him of sticky syrup in the form of a big jellyfish with 6 tentacles with incredible reach. By later applying raiton chakra, the user can make the structure electrify and thus shock everything in reach. In order to keep the user safe from drownining, in the exact center of this technique there is an air bubble from which the user can control the technique and be safe from the shocks. If desired, in a single handseal, the user will be able to break down the jellyfish into countless (~50) small sized jellyfishes that can be manipulated freely.
Notes: The Main and mini jellyfishies can be manipulated like in this technique: (Suiton: Seibun Houfutsu) - Water Style: Water Cannon Replica.
Notes: Can only be used once per battle.
Notes: The jellyfishies will remain for up to 3 turns after they were created.
Notes: The user must be at least sannin rank in order to use this technique.
Notes: No S-rank or forbbiden water techniques for 2 turns once this technique was used.

Declined, do not resubmit

 

[Axle]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Suiton Bunshi: Water Molecules
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 80
Damage : N/A
Description: The user puts their hands together as if they were praying but is actually releasing large amounts of water chakra into the water molecules in the air so that now all fire attacks lose -15, sand is reduced to mud, lightning used becomes instantly conducted and all water or elements containing water gain +15
Note: can only be taught by Axle
Note: lasts 5 turns
Note: can only be used once per battle
Note: after this technique is done the user can't user any water chakra for 3 turns
Note: can be used as a water source

sorry axle but ur well aware of forbidden rank demands a damage cost, Declined ~

 

[Demosthenes]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Suiton: Zekkou Ranmyaku) Water Style: Perfect Chaos
Type:Attack, Defense
Rank: S
Range: All
Chakra Cost:80
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will perform thirteen handseals and hold the last seal. The user will then cause an enormous wave of water to form in front of them and flood the entire field. From this water, the user will then form a large serpentine creature and stay in the base of it's stomach, inside of a small air pocket. The user will be able to create water-tendrils out of the water made in the first part of the technique to attack the opponent. The user, while inside of the serpent, can move very quickly through the water.
Note: The air-pocket only lasts for three turns, after which the user will end the technique.
Note: The user must hold the last handseal throughout the duration of the technique or it will end.
Note: Can only be used once.
Note: No Suiton techniques can be used for two turns.

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(Shoton: Uwabari Anshoubangou) Crystal Style: Coat of Pins
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A (Situational)
Description: The user will crystalize small hairs all over his/her body that will be somewhat difficult to see and are filled with chakra. These crystalized hairs are very sharp. At any time, the user can selectively cause these small spikes to change shape and enlarge. If an enemy comes into physical contact with the user, the spikes can stab into the enemy's bare skin/ get stuck in armor/harder clothing.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: Manipulating the spikes counts as one of the users three moves per turn.
Note: After one turn of being disconnected from either the user's or the enemy's body, the spikes become unmanipulatable.
Note: Can only be taught by DemosthenesQ
Note: Must have a Guren Bio.

restrictions on the lengh of time the hair's are on the body

(Shoton: Uwabari Anshoubangou) Crystal Style: Coat of Pins
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A (Situational)
Description: The user will crystalize small hairs all over his/her body that will be somewhat difficult to see and are filled with chakra. These crystalized hairs are very sharp. At any time, the user can selectively cause these small spikes to change shape and enlarge. If an enemy comes into physical contact with the user, the spikes can stab into the enemy's bare skin/ get stuck in armor/harder clothing.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: Manipulating the spikes counts as one of the users three moves per turn.
Note: After one turn of being disconnected from either the user's or the enemy's body, the spikes become unmanipulatable.
Note: Can only be taught by DemosthenesQ
Note: Must have a Guren Bio.
Note: The hairs will only remain on the user's body for 4 turns. The same goes for the ones on the enemy's body.

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(Shoton: Shichi Hashira Emerarudo Ranmyaku) Crystal Style: Seven Pillars of the Emeralds of Chaos
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user makes 7 hand-seals and makes seven pillars of emerald in a circle around the user which are each a different color of the rainbow. Each of these pillars glows with the power of the chakra inside and emits a thin beam of light in their respective colors towards the center of the circle where they all meet, making a small white ball.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: Must have a Guren Bio.
Note: Can only be taught by Demosthenes.

(Shoton:Kussetsu Nibai Niji) Crystal Style: Refraction of the Double Rainbow
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 80
Description: After creating the Seven Pillars of the Emeralds of Chaos, the user makes a white, crystal half-skull around herself.(The top half of a skull with no jaw, but with the top row of teeth.) The half-skull has a short rod of crystal coming out of the bottom of it with a heptagonal prism on the bottom. The user then floats upwards and on top of center of the Seven Pillars. The user then lowers the heptagonal prism into the white ball in the middle of the pillars. The beams of light of the pillars are now shining into each of the seven sides of the heptagonal prism and are shining through the crystal half-skull. The chakra/light from the pillars is bounced off of the complex system of mirrors inside of the half-skull and is then refracted out of the eyes of the skull, sending two rainbow chakra beams at the opponant that can incinerate them. The skull can be turned in place to change the beams' direction.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: Must have a Guren Bio.
Note: Can only be taught by Demosthenes.
Note: The beauty of the Double Rainbow blast may cause the opponent and/or any bystanders to suddenly burst into tears, wondering what it could possibly mean.


Both declined, give restriction of time period for this all to be achieved as it seems to me that this is a large scaled technique sequence so it would need some period of time to prepare

(Shoton: Shichi Hashira Emerarudo Ranmyaku) Crystal Style: Seven Pillars of the Emeralds of Chaos
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user makes 7 hand-seals and makes seven pillars of emerald in a circle around the user which are each a different color of the rainbow. Each of these pillars glows with the power of the chakra inside and emits a thin beam of light in their respective colors towards the center of the circle where they all meet, making a small white ball.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: Must have a Guren Bio.
Note: Can only be taught by Demosthenes.
Note: These pillars take two turns to completely grow.

(Shoton:Kussetsu Nibai Niji) Crystal Style: Refraction of the Double Rainbow
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 80
Description: After creating the Seven Pillars of the Emeralds of Chaos, the user makes a white, crystal half-skull around herself.(The top half of a skull with no jaw, but with the top row of teeth.) The half-skull has a short rod of crystal coming out of the bottom of it with a heptagonal prism on the bottom. The user then floats upwards and on top of center of the Seven Pillars. The user then lowers the heptagonal prism into the white ball in the middle of the pillars. The beams of light of the pillars are now shining into each of the seven sides of the heptagonal prism and are shining through the crystal half-skull. The chakra/light from the pillars is bounced off of the complex system of mirrors inside of the half-skull and is then refracted out of the eyes of the skull, sending two rainbow chakra beams at the opponant that can incinerate them. The skull can be turned in place to change the beams' direction.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: Must have a Guren Bio.
Note: Can only be taught by Demosthenes.
Note: The beauty of the Double Rainbow blast may cause the opponent and/or any bystanders to suddenly burst into tears, wondering what it could possibly mean.
Note: The formation of the skull takes 20 seconds, but only one other technique can be used in the same turn as it and it has to be done before this technique.

Both Approved

 

[antiwarlord]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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Name: Earth release: Hammer Time - Rock Golf Club = Doton: Hanmā jikan – rokkugorufukurabu
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user focuses earth affinity chakra into his hammer, and swings it like a golf club across the the ground, in a rapid phase. Each time the user swings the hammer, he releases some earth chakra, and uses it to fire an earth projectile from the ground, these earth projectiles are sharp and lethal.

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Name: Hammer Time – After Hammer = Hanmā jikan - go hanmā
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user focuses high amounts of compressed chakra into his hammer, and swings it towards his target, as he swings the hammer, he releases all the compressed chakra through the hammer, thereby creating a force/shock wave of chakra in front of the hammer, which will work as an extention of the hammer, and knock the target back, breaking several of his bones.

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Name: Earth release: Hammer Time – Hammer Catapult = Doton: Hanmā jikan – kataparutohanmā
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user focuses earth chakra into his hammer and the earth beneath him, then he slams his hammer against the ground, thereby making the ground he's standing on swing upwards like a catapult. This catapult can transport almost everything anywhere, since it all depends on the amount of chakra focused into the hammer and/or ground.

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Name: Earth release: Hammer Time – Earth Shattering Hammer = Doton: Hanmā jikan – Chikyū hanmā gekishin
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user focuses earth chakra into his hammer, and slams his hammer against the ground, as the hammer makes contact with the ground the user releases all the chakra in the hammer creating an earthquake in a 360 degrees around and below the user. The force of the earthquake makes the earth around the user crackle and forces fragments of rock/earth to rise up and lower because of the force of the earthquake.

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Name: Earth release: Hammer Time – Army of hammers = Doton: Hanmā jikan – Hanmā no rikugun
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The focuses extreme amounts of chakra into the earth, and shapes a high amount of earth in to earthen hammers, then the user slams his hammer against the ground to make all the earthen hammers rise up above the ground like a great forest. Each hammer is about 2 meters tall and extremely sturdy, and by forming a single handseal, the user can make the hammers shoot small hardened spikes, this can be done with the individual hammer.

Have you got this hammer for their use?