[Approved] Ken Shinzu

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Basic Information
Name: Shinzu Ken
Nickname: Shin
Gender: Male
Age:15
Clan: N/A

looks: See picture

Personality: Jovial. Seemingly average intellectually around the usual crowd (Meaning friends and those who is familiar to him). Slightly on his guard toward strangers(But not enough so that they would notice) Also very alerted to individuals (or certain situations) that seem suspicious or pose potential danger to his well-being or that of his companions, however does not show it. Has a great sense of humor. Not easily frightened or angered (But has a bizarre fear of bald people) Abnormally/Strategically Intelligent in battle. Despises fat people
Village Info.
Village of Birth: N/A
Village of Alliance: Konoha

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Gennin
Specialty:
Elements: [Fire]
Your ninjutsu:
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)



Background Info.

History: Shinzu Ken. A young man with dreams. Having been raised in an orphanage where fighting was common, Shin always enjoyed Martial Arts and his dream was to become one of the greatest Shinobi to have ever lived. As he grew older, Shin caught the eye of an old man name Retsu for his skills in Taijutsu and weapon combat. Retsu later adopted him and brought Shin to his Dojo to hone and further his skills. The dojo was isolated in the middle of nowhere, far away from any sorts of civilization. There he endured brutal training which futhered his stamina, strength, speed and senses to inordinary levels. Retsu saw great potential within Shin, therefore it was always "Hard work before having fun". Although Shin witnessed major improvements in his skills, he despised always having to train 24/7. In fact, more times than not he would try skipping training to wander into town(he was always told by Retsu that there was a small village not far from the Dojo. Though this a white lie), but...more times that not Retsu would always, somehow, stop him in his tracks. On a calm afternoon under the twilight sky, Shin lay on his back on the soft grass. It was one of those rare times when Retsu decided to spare Shin from the brutal training and obviously Shin was enjoying every minute of it. Out of the blue, Retsu shouted his name. It was so sudden and frightning it chased away the nearby birds. Shin wasted no time and rushed into the Dojo expecting an angry Retsu and another dose of bone-crushing training. "....I'm sending you to Konohagakure" Shin was ready to bust out of the Dojo to put on his training gear, but he heard the unexpected. "I have a friend over there. You will stay with him. Although it'll be low to your standards, you will start as a Genin. I think you've received enough of a physical and mental beatdown from me" Retsu chuckled. Shin stood frozen and out of words. Mixed emotions ran through his very essence: He was thrilled to have a chance of being a Shinobi, but at the same time somewhere deep within his being was a tint of sadness. "Make me proud. Embrace the way of Shinobi" These words echo'd in his head and forever in his heart. "I can't believe I'm saying this, but some sick, twisted part of me is gonna miss you and your blasphemous training old man" As he open the exit door of the Dojo, a brand new one lay ahead. This door were of stone and stood at great heights. That door also represented a new beginning. "Open the gates!" the guard shouted. "I've been giving a chance to achieve my dream...I'm taking that chance and running with it." As the overwhelmingly gigantic gates of Konohagakure opened he spoke these final words "Konoha! Here I come!"

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No you can't add anything to what it asks your are a genin you need history you must have E-Rank ninjutsu and first element you want to learn.
To see mine click on Choji Akimichi under this post
 

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Mkay. I only added the weapons category because I didn't see any rule that said you couldn't @_@ and because that would be straight up cheating (and unfair to any future opponent) If I used something that was not stated in my character. @_@ And he doesn't use Ninjutsu
 

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get rid of this part: Shinzu Ken.
Date of birth: Unknown.
Estimated Age: 15
Village of Origin: Unknown.
Clan: Unknown.
Family: None recorded.
Kekkei Genkai: None Recorded
 

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ok you need to add these jutsus: (you get them by deafault)

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
_____
(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
_____
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
_____
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
_____
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
_____
(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
_____
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

aslo extend your history...Cali likes longer and realistic background info...

also where it says ninja rank it means your post rank...so you have 50 posts so you are Genin...so change Chiinin to Genin...

also put 1 element as a starter...(the 1 you are planning on learning first)

and take away the appearance thing: no need for it
 

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ok you need to add these jutsus: (you get them by deafault)

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
_____
(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
_____
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
_____
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
_____
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
_____
(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
_____
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

aslo extend your history...Cali likes longer and realistic background info...

also where it says ninja rank it means your post rank...so you have 50 posts so you are Genin...so change Chiinin to Genin...

also put 1 element as a starter...(the 1 you are planning on learning first)

and take away the appearance thing: no need for it

The lot of your proposed Jutsu's are Ninjutsu. My character does not utilize Ninjutsu ._.
 

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they are free... doesn't matter if he uses them or not, they will work, as even taijutsu master like Lee used some of those jutsus..... to pass the academy... so put them down!!
 

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So his speed is like no ordinary genin, so meaning he has chunin speed. I trhink that could get approved if you say it like I did.
I know. I've already thought of that. It'd be irrelevant to state that because you'll find Genin faster than Chunin. Chunin faster than Special Jonin ect. Rank doesn't dictate speed, really @_@
 

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Remove the specialty. This is your first bio and I do not allow any kind of specialty in your first custom bio, outside some useless stuff.

Also you need to fill in Village of birth and/or Village of alliance, however both can't be blank at the same time.

PS: I don't like long histories, in fact I hate it. For some reason people assume I like long histories because my own history is hellish long, however I don't like it with other people as it makes bio checking even more exhausting.
 

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lol if you had seen the bio you wouldn have said that...there were exactly 3 lines with useless stuf about where he was born and what was he planning to do....so thats why I said longer history xd
 
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