The Legendary Sage of Konoha 4
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Retrospective after-thoughts part 4:
- I really had a lot of ideas back then I see, different implementations and roles for characters that seemed fitting at the time, heck some of which would have been neat to see in the Boruto storyline nowadays but alas, not all my 'predictions' came true xD
- Now that I think about it, why did Jiraiya need someone to watch over him, he's a freaking Jonin xD I suppose I went so far into giving all the main characters something to do that I might have gone a bit overboard, lol. Granted he's like 12 but still, lmao.
- Jiraiya said he wanted to talk to Naruto, but Naruto did all the talking, what the fudge?!
What was it that he even wanted to talk about with his father in the first place?! xD Lmao.
- So many small details that now seem amusing to me since the manga/Boruto already has revealed its version of what I thought would happen back then, but if I were to point everything out that I now think is funny with current manga-time into consideration, I'll never finish this after-though xD
But what I will say is, why on earth did I wait so long before I officially revealed that Naruto was the Hokage xD I understand that I wanted it to be a suspense and all, and that it fitted revealing it when I did, but honestly the first 4-5 chapters should have been 1 chapter then so that the reveal came 'sooner' in a sense, this made it drag on too long xD If it wasn't obvious from the first chapter out the gate, it was definitely obvious by the 3rd xD
- Okay one more detail "Narrator: As some minutes went by the time finally come. " That's not how a birth goes, ROFLMAO. Granted that the birth had already started before they arrived, but that it was over just minutes after they arrived?! xD
- Bonus. Kuroi stating Shikamaru and Temari would be a lame paring and that Gai was a meh character xD Damn that Gai vs Madara and Night Guy wreaking Madara really showed him he was no meh-character
This was definitely the least cringe one so far and probably also flowed the best...
I'll give this one a 7/10 too retrospectively
- I really had a lot of ideas back then I see, different implementations and roles for characters that seemed fitting at the time, heck some of which would have been neat to see in the Boruto storyline nowadays but alas, not all my 'predictions' came true xD
- Now that I think about it, why did Jiraiya need someone to watch over him, he's a freaking Jonin xD I suppose I went so far into giving all the main characters something to do that I might have gone a bit overboard, lol. Granted he's like 12 but still, lmao.
- Jiraiya said he wanted to talk to Naruto, but Naruto did all the talking, what the fudge?!
What was it that he even wanted to talk about with his father in the first place?! xD Lmao.- So many small details that now seem amusing to me since the manga/Boruto already has revealed its version of what I thought would happen back then, but if I were to point everything out that I now think is funny with current manga-time into consideration, I'll never finish this after-though xD
But what I will say is, why on earth did I wait so long before I officially revealed that Naruto was the Hokage xD I understand that I wanted it to be a suspense and all, and that it fitted revealing it when I did, but honestly the first 4-5 chapters should have been 1 chapter then so that the reveal came 'sooner' in a sense, this made it drag on too long xD If it wasn't obvious from the first chapter out the gate, it was definitely obvious by the 3rd xD- Okay one more detail
"Narrator: As some minutes went by the time finally come. " That's not how a birth goes, ROFLMAO. Granted that the birth had already started before they arrived, but that it was over just minutes after they arrived?! xD- Bonus. Kuroi stating Shikamaru and Temari would be a lame paring and that Gai was a meh character xD Damn that Gai vs Madara and Night Guy wreaking Madara really showed him he was no meh-character
'18 years old Michael' I don't know if I quite agree with you to be honest, maybe you were too modest back thenYeah
Yeah they fit pretty good as wifes i personally thought
You did?
Thank you
This was definitely the least cringe one so far and probably also flowed the best...
I'll give this one a 7/10 too retrospectively