Kumi Tourny [Qualifying Round] Luiz vs electro

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There's nothing about the Terrain, Range and Weather Conditions, so I guess first come first served.

Terrain: Plain empty of trees and bushes, with the exeption of 20 cm high grass.
Weather Conditions: Sunny, no clouds whatsoever
Range: Short-Range ( Around 5 meters)

I'm using my Jack Yagi bio. I'm currently sitting on Betsy, legs crossed. My 4 swords are strapped in pairs on my waist. At the sight of you, Betsy fainted momentarily. I didn't notice, though, because he remained in a straight position.

You go first
 

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Ok I shall. I personally dont really care about the kumi. But I am the kind of person that likes short, simple battles, with a little detail, and I also like to add a bit of dialouge when I fight. Also, I HATE arguing. Theres no point. Unless there is one.xd This is only my 3rd battle, but I wont hold back! ... BEGIN! :|

I stand normally staring at betsy who you are sitting on, with my right hand on the hilt of my sword, which is on my right hip, hilt facing up.
(A samurai eh? Should be interesting..)
"A goat. That. IS SO COOL! But I am going to have to murder you and that goat, ok? Or at least knock ya out."


I start to run towards you. While doing this I create an electric shield made up of lightning chakra in front of me, and hit you with the floating shield, causing an explosion and knocking you, (and your goat?) into the air. I then jump and kick you while you are in the air, making you fly away from me, to about mid-range. I then take out my blade as you hit the ground at mid-range, the Black Snake Sword.

Raiton: Sandaa Saaburu (Lightning Style: Thunder Saber)
Type: Attack
Rank: D
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Hits opponent with an electric field shield that explodes and can blow back the enemy.

(Dainamikku Entori) - Dynamic Entry
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 10
Description: A taijutsu attack were the user does a jumping kick into the opponent.

(Karasuhebi-Ittou)-Black Snake-sword
Type: Weapon
Rank: B
Chakra cost: 25 for chakra wave
Damage: slash damage depends on the actual slash, 40 for chakra wave
Description: This swords blade is roughly 4 feet long, very thin, and black, with a lightning bolt design from the tip of the blade to the hilt on its left side. The hilt is circle shaped, and is blue, with a lightning bolt design going around it. The tsuba (Which would be the thing that holds the blade and the hilt together) is square, and thick with some sort of metal. This sword is not indestructible, but it is quite strong, and durable because of its thin blade. It has a black sheath.
The sword can be filled with lightning chakra to make the sword sharper, and gains 2 more blades appear to each side of it, 2 inches away. Meaning when lightning chakra goes into the blade, it gains 2 more, making it easier to slash somebody. The chakra blades do connect to the tsuba though.
The user may slash the blade in any direction to do a mid-range lightning chakra wave that is in the shape of a C. This wave is about 5 ft long, 2 ft wide.

*Can only be used by Electro
*When sword gains the 2 other blades the other blades gap between eachother can have things go through them
*The other 2 blades are as sharp as the original blade, but are thinner due to them being made up of chakra.
*Chakra wave can only be used 3 times.



I just like to post these things.-
Life left: 750
Chakra left: 700 - 30 = 670
Damage to you: 30

Your stats:
Chakra: 300
Life left if hit: 350 - 30 = 320

EDIT: Also, if you ask about the jumping kick, that would hit you because- well, its as if you are the rocket to a rocket launcher but slower, and you are going straight to the enemy, so the kick is possible. You can look at guy doing it, thats a good example of it.
 
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Ok I shall. I personally dont really care about the kumi. But I am the kind of person that likes short, simple battles, with a little detail, and I also like to add a bit of dialouge when I fight. Also, I HATE arguing. Theres no point. Unless there is one.xd This is only my 3rd battle, but I wont hold back! ... BEGIN! :|

I stand normally staring at betsy who you are sitting on, with my right hand on the hilt of my sword, which is on my right hip, hilt facing up.
(A samurai eh? Should be interesting..)
"A goat. That. IS SO COOL! But I am going to have to murder you and that goat, ok? Or at least knock ya out."


I start to run towards you. While doing this I create an electric shield made up of lightning chakra in front of me, and hit you with the floating shield, causing an explosion and knocking you, (and your goat?) into the air. I then jump and kick you while you are in the air, making you fly away from me, to about mid-range. I then take out my blade as you hit the ground at mid-range, the Black Snake Sword.

Raiton: Sandaa Saaburu (Lightning Style: Thunder Saber)
Type: Attack
Rank: D
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Hits opponent with an electric field shield that explodes and can blow back the enemy.

(Dainamikku Entori) - Dynamic Entry
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 10
Description: A taijutsu attack were the user does a jumping kick into the opponent.

(Karasuhebi-Ittou)-Black Snake-sword
Type: Weapon
Rank: B
Chakra cost: 25 for chakra wave
Damage: slash damage depends on the actual slash, 40 for chakra wave
Description: This swords blade is roughly 4 feet long, very thin, and black, with a lightning bolt design from the tip of the blade to the hilt on its left side. The hilt is circle shaped, and is blue, with a lightning bolt design going around it. The tsuba (Which would be the thing that holds the blade and the hilt together) is square, and thick with some sort of metal. This sword is not indestructible, but it is quite strong, and durable because of its thin blade. It has a black sheath.
The sword can be filled with lightning chakra to make the sword sharper, and gains 2 more blades appear to each side of it, 2 inches away. Meaning when lightning chakra goes into the blade, it gains 2 more, making it easier to slash somebody. The chakra blades do connect to the tsuba though.
The user may slash the blade in any direction to do a mid-range lightning chakra wave that is in the shape of a C. This wave is about 5 ft long, 2 ft wide.

*Can only be used by Electro
*When sword gains the 2 other blades the other blades gap between eachother can have things go through them
*The other 2 blades are as sharp as the original blade, but are thinner due to them being made up of chakra.
*Chakra wave can only be used 3 times.



I just like to post these things.-
Life left: 750
Chakra left: 700 - 30 = 670
Damage to you: 30

Your stats:
Chakra: 300
Life left if hit: 350 - 30 = 320

EDIT: Also, if you ask about the jumping kick, that would hit you because- well, its as if you are the rocket to a rocket launcher but slower, and you are going straight to the enemy, so the kick is possible. You can look at guy doing it, thats a good example of it.

O_O! Betsy, he didn't mean it O_O

As soon as you sprint forward, I quickly unsheathe one of my left swords, using my right hand to do it. Charging chakra through the blade and releasing it, as the motion of unsheathing the sword happens, a crescent shaped wave flies off and hits the ground near you. The collision between both is enough to set you off balance, and make you trip forward.

Since the process of creating the Thunder Saber begins on your hand, and you have then to direct it towards me, as you trip over, you loose control over the shield and have it collide with the ground isntead, maybe even numbing yourself in the process, or hurting yourself with the explosion.

Meanwhile, Betsy leaps leftwards, carrying me with him. She jumps about 2 meters, in 1 meter long leaps, and when she prepares to preform the third leap, I jump off, now weilding 2 swords (One in each hand). She then starts to circle you, keeping a 5 to 6 meters distance from you and him. I do the same thing, but running in the opposite direction.


Since I wasn't hit, I believe:

Chakra: 290
Health: 350

PS: My abilities aren't formalized, but since I'm a Genin, it is safe to assume that each chakra requires 10 chakra points, and inflicts, if hit, 20 Damage Points.
 

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O_O! Betsy, he didn't mean it O_O

As soon as you sprint forward, I quickly unsheathe one of my left swords, using my right hand to do it. Charging chakra through the blade and releasing it, as the motion of unsheathing the sword happens, a crescent shaped wave flies off and hits the ground near you. The collision between both is enough to set you off balance, and make you trip forward.

Since the process of creating the Thunder Saber begins on your hand, and you have then to direct it towards me, as you trip over, you loose control over the shield and have it collide with the ground isntead, maybe even numbing yourself in the process, or hurting yourself with the explosion.

Meanwhile, Betsy leaps leftwards, carrying me with him. She jumps about 2 meters, in 1 meter long leaps, and when she prepares to preform the third leap, I jump off, now weilding 2 swords (One in each hand). She then starts to circle you, keeping a 5 to 6 meters distance from you and him. I do the same thing, but running in the opposite direction.


Since I wasn't hit, I believe:

Chakra: 290
Health: 350

PS: My abilities aren't formalized, but since I'm a Genin, it is safe to assume that each chakra requires 10 chakra points, and inflicts, if hit, 20 Damage Points.

The only doubt I had with you move was the sword doing a chakra wave, which did enough force to make me trip, but I will let it go. I dont really know if its possible though, unless you have a custom weapon. But whatever.

"Whats this?"

As I see you put your hand on your blades hilt, I already know that you would most likely do a horizontal slash, but why so far away? So I simply jump, while doing a front flip, but my stupid self is in mid-air a couple feet away from you, so the jump was irrelevant to dodge a slash from this far. But as I looked down for a second, I saw that you released a wave of chakra from your sword, into the ground which had surprised me.

(Dang.. take some of your own medicine!)

With my thunder shield still active, I make it explode below me so that I can have some more hang-time in mid-air, my actual feet about 10 feet in the air, (Yes its possible, we are playing as ninja here!) and take out my Black Snake Sword with my left hand and do a draw strike, releasing a c shaped wave of chakra that heads towards you extremely fast, aimed straight for you, and it is a horizontal slash.
After it hits I then land on the ground at the feet of your downed and paralyzed body and stab both of your feet, making you unable to walk. (Evil!)

Life: 750 - 20 = 730 (I used an attack on myself)
Chakra: 700 - 35 = 665
(25 for wave, 10 for thunder shield)
Damage to you: 40, unless it hits your neck, meaning death. The wave is electric which would paralyze you.

Ps: A draw strike is when I do a horizontal slash while taking out my blade. Sorry for wall of text and late post lots of stuff to do where I live..
 

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The only doubt I had with you move was the sword doing a chakra wave, which did enough force to make me trip, but I will let it go. I dont really know if its possible though, unless you have a custom weapon. But whatever.

"Whats this?"

As I see you put your hand on your blades hilt, I already know that you would most likely do a horizontal slash, but why so far away? So I simply jump, while doing a front flip, but my stupid self is in mid-air a couple feet away from you, so the jump was irrelevant to dodge a slash from this far. But as I looked down for a second, I saw that you released a wave of chakra from your sword, into the ground which had surprised me.

(Dang.. take some of your own medicine!)

With my thunder shield still active, I make it explode below me so that I can have some more hang-time in mid-air, my actual feet about 10 feet in the air, (Yes its possible, we are playing as ninja here!) and take out my Black Snake Sword with my left hand and do a draw strike, releasing a c shaped wave of chakra that heads towards you extremely fast, aimed straight for you, and it is a horizontal slash.
After it hits I then land on the ground at the feet of your downed and paralyzed body and stab both of your feet, making you unable to walk. (Evil!)

Life: 750 - 20 = 730 (I used an attack on myself)
Chakra: 700 - 35 = 665
(25 for wave, 10 for thunder shield)
Damage to you: 40, unless it hits your neck, meaning death. The wave is electric which would paralyze you.

Ps: A draw strike is when I do a horizontal slash while taking out my blade. Sorry for wall of text and late post lots of stuff to do where I live..

The ability to release waves of chakra are basic Samurai techniques. If you read my bio, there's a short summary, taken from Naruto Wikia, that lists the Samurai abilities.

Seeing your unexpected front flip, I immediately rise my sword up and then bring it down diagonally, releasing a second wave of chakra, now hitting you straight on, and possibly pushing you back.

Immediatly then, I jump in the air. Betsy turns around and positions his head beneath my feet. In a synchronized movement, he rams his head on my feet, propelling me against you, with two swords unsheathed, and at great speeds.

As you re-assume your focus from the previous slash, which pushed you and possibly stunned you a bit, you're last sight of me consists on two crossed blades over my face, which are immediately uncrossed, releasing an "X" shaped slash against your chin, so aiming to cut your neck (Not enough power to completely chop your head, but enough to severe your throat and asphyxiate you)

Chakra: 260
Health: 350
Damage to You: 10 + 20 (+Asphyxiation)
 

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The ability to release waves of chakra are basic Samurai techniques. If you read my bio, there's a short summary, taken from Naruto Wikia, that lists the Samurai abilities.

Seeing your unexpected front flip, I immediately rise my sword up and then bring it down diagonally, releasing a second wave of chakra, now hitting you straight on, and possibly pushing you back.

Immediatly then, I jump in the air. Betsy turns around and positions his head beneath my feet. In a synchronized movement, he rams his head on my feet, propelling me against you, with two swords unsheathed, and at great speeds.

As you re-assume your focus from the previous slash, which pushed you and possibly stunned you a bit, you're last sight of me consists on two crossed blades over my face, which are immediately uncrossed, releasing an "X" shaped slash against your chin, so aiming to cut your neck (Not enough power to completely chop your head, but enough to severe your throat and asphyxiate you)

Chakra: 260
Health: 350
Damage to You: 10 + 20 (+Asphyxiation)

Because this is before I use my explosion, I do this-
"Another one!"

As it comes towards me, I use my shield to explode below me and to my right, which moves my entire body to my left and upwards. Your chakra wave would have hit my top right shoulder to my left hip, so I would just dodge it by going upwards to my left.

As I am in the air and you decide to jump off your goats head, directly after you jump I use-

(Kanashibari no Jutsu) - Temporary Body Paralysis Technique
Rank: D
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:15
Damge Points:N/A
Description: Kanashibari no Jutsu is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used to temporarily bind an individual or animal. With the person frozen in place, the ninja can either take the opportunity to attack or to retreat.



So that you are still flying through the air, but you cannot move your body. Your still flying very fast though, so directly after that last jutsu, I get out 2 windmill shuriken and use-
(Kage Shuriken no Jutsu) - Shadow Shuriken Technique

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:20
Description: Kage Shuriken no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing a giant Windmill Shuriken. When throwing the shuriken, the ninja will also throw a second giant shuriken to hide in the shadow of the first. The hidden secondary shuriken can then approach the target without their being aware.



Throwing 2 windmill shuriken at you, one at your head, the other at your legs, which would slow you down enough for me to do a draw slash with my sword and create a chakra wave very fast, in-between the 2 shuriken, hitting you after the 2 shuriken do.


You did a chakra wave and I dodged it by going higher into the air with my explosion. I use my body paralysis jutsu on you, after you jump but you are still flying through the air, un-able to move. I throw two visible shuriken at you, and after they may, or may not hit, I use a chakra wave on you, in-between the 2 shuriken.
Most likely, your dead, unable to move, or extremely injured. I would say your legs got cut off, your swords may have stopped the upper shuriken from cutting off your head, but because of spinning it still hits you in your neck or head. The chakra wave would paralyze you and the entire move would stop you from moving in the air, and you would fall before you could touch me.



If you somehow stop all that, then the wall of text up there in what happened, was for nothing. 0_0xd
 

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Because this is before I use my explosion, I do this-
"Another one!"

As it comes towards me, I use my shield to explode below me and to my right, which moves my entire body to my left and upwards. Your chakra wave would have hit my top right shoulder to my left hip, so I would just dodge it by going upwards to my left.

As I am in the air and you decide to jump off your goats head, directly after you jump I use-

(Kanashibari no Jutsu) - Temporary Body Paralysis Technique
Rank: D
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:15
Damge Points:N/A
Description: Kanashibari no Jutsu is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used to temporarily bind an individual or animal. With the person frozen in place, the ninja can either take the opportunity to attack or to retreat.



So that you are still flying through the air, but you cannot move your body. Your still flying very fast though, so directly after that last jutsu, I get out 2 windmill shuriken and use-
(Kage Shuriken no Jutsu) - Shadow Shuriken Technique

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:20
Description: Kage Shuriken no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing a giant Windmill Shuriken. When throwing the shuriken, the ninja will also throw a second giant shuriken to hide in the shadow of the first. The hidden secondary shuriken can then approach the target without their being aware.



Throwing 2 windmill shuriken at you, one at your head, the other at your legs, which would slow you down enough for me to do a draw slash with my sword and create a chakra wave very fast, in-between the 2 shuriken, hitting you after the 2 shuriken do.


You did a chakra wave and I dodged it by going higher into the air with my explosion. I use my body paralysis jutsu on you, after you jump but you are still flying through the air, un-able to move. I throw two visible shuriken at you, and after they may, or may not hit, I use a chakra wave on you, in-between the 2 shuriken.
Most likely, your dead, unable to move, or extremely injured. I would say your legs got cut off, your swords may have stopped the upper shuriken from cutting off your head, but because of spinning it still hits you in your neck or head. The chakra wave would paralyze you and the entire move would stop you from moving in the air, and you would fall before you could touch me.



If you somehow stop all that, then the wall of text up there in what happened, was for nothing. 0_0xd

As you project your chakra through your eyes, paralysing me in place, with my swords crossed over my face, and, like you said, flying at great speeds, I release a O_O expression

Damn it ... O_O

As you remove your shurikens, and throw them at me, the already crossed swords block both (Imagine me like a torpedo, my body's strictly perpendicular to the crossed swords), and he max they can do is slow the flight.

Taking the time when you're focusing on my fast approach, Betsy, which has continued her sprint, starts to close in on your, from your right, following through your blind spot (You're oblivious to that)

At the point where you try to slash me with your sword, you're charging lightning chakra through your sword, and you're about to slash, when a sudden pain hits your ribcage. Betsy, rams against your right ribcage, pushing you out of my way, and severely injure you. (Breaking some ribs) - I'm not sure how to quantify that damage in numbers.

This should make you miss me, and thus I fall bluntly on the ground. Betsy, with a dull expression on her goat face, brings her skull down, head-butting me, snapping me out of the Paralysis.

Damn that jutsu. Thanks Betsy

He's ruminating some grass. Looking dull like a goat

Chakra: 290
Health: - 15 - 10 = 325 (I take some damage from the head-but + falling bluntly on the ground )
Damage: Strong head Ram to the ribcage, I say about twice the damage I took, so +30

(If you don't agree, my pm box welcomes you xdxd)
 

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It has been too long since electro last posted... What should I do?
 

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Luiz wins by default because of electro hasn't replied in 6 days.

"Do not sign up if you don't got the time, if one doesn't reply within 5 days, his opponent wins by default."

Winner: Luiz
 

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You heard that, Betsy ?! O_O

Betsy's ruminating.

Oh well...

Steals all of electro's Kumi, right before jumping to Betsy and travel away
 

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Jounin got owned by a Genin, GENINS FTW UNITE!! XD
 
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