( Fuuinjutsu: Furui no Manmosu ) Sealing Technique: The Tusk of the Lost Mammoth( Fuuinjutsu: Furui no Manmosu ) Sealing Technique: The Tusk of the Lost Mammoth
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40 ( +20 per turn )
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Mammoth is an ancient sealing technique that combines Elemental Ninjutsu with Fuuinjutsu. The user creates a ball of chakra the size of a pea, with the kanji for "Sheer Pressure" inscribed in it's surface. The user is then able of shooting the pea-sized inscription towards any active enemy elemental ninjutsu, which will cause an inscription to encase it wholy and immediately compress it back into a pea-sized black ball of dense elemental chakra. The compressed ball will now show a sealing insignia of with the kanju for "Tusk" which will absorb the user's chakra and allow for the manipulation of the Shape of the elemental ball, which can passively turn into any generic weapon and be safely controlled either remotely or physically by the user, which can then be used to perform Bukijutsu and any fitting Weapon CFS, passively acquiring an elemental edge of the sealed element of +20 damage and rank boost to their technique. The user is capable of performing one freestyle action with the weapon itself, be it a slash, or a parry, or launching an elemental crescent or blast of chakra, with the power and rank of the original technique, per turn, counting towards the jutsu slot per turn. This attack will always follow the main release of the elemental nature, and entails generic and simple attacks like blasts, crescents, slices, parries, cuts, strikes, etc.
Note: This technique can only be used 2 times per battle, while only lasting a maximum of 3 turns, whereupon the Tusk will collapse upon itself harmlessly. It requires the user to wait 2 turns before reusing the technique.
-Declined- You fixed some of the issues, but created more at the same time, I won't allow you to absorb a technique once and then each turn fire off a wave of chakra with the exact same power and rank of the absorbed technique for three turns, it doesn't really make sense that you could somehow multiply the power of what you absorbed thrice over without adding anything of your own. Also the issue is still there in regards to what this can absorb and weaponize, I don't think I could allow it to absorb advanced elements or CE unless you also have said AE or CE both for balancing and the fact that you couldn't really control these elements once you released them if you have no clue how to use them.
(Fuuinjutsu/Inton: Toorima no Jutsu) - Sealing/Yin Release: The Ghost of the Thieving Magpy
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: N/A (+50)
Damage: N/A
Description: Thieving Ghost is a variant of the Hungry Ghost, a spiritual parasite created through the user’s Yin Release chakra and Fuuinjutsu knowledge. When using a sealing jutsu, the user will form the ram hand seal to seal the Thieving Ghost within their technique. Sealing the thieving ghost inside one’s technique happens within the same timeframe as their sealing technique. When the user’s technique interacts with another technique, the parasitic Yin Chakra will eat away at the chakra within the technique, weakening it by one rank. Once the thieving ghost consumes foreign chakra it is released and immediately attaches itself to the source of the initial chakra (the user). From there, the parasite will carry the opponent's chakra signature towards the user, embuing the initial and following techniques with it, increasing the efficiency of sealing techniques used against the opponent (all techniques increase in rank and power by 1 degree (With the exception of the initial technique, which is already applying the Thieving Ghost weakening effects ), while also allowing the user's sealing technique to bypass the enemy's inherent immunities or resistances to foreign chakra, by emulating the opponent's chakra signature. Once the Thieving Ghost is released, its tether is immediate and cannot be blocked or circumvented by ordinary means. The effects of Thieving Ghost last for 4 turns.
Note: Can only be used 5 times per battle and cannot be used on the same target more than twice.
Note: Surges of Yang, Yin-Yang or Natural Energy can break or prevent the tethering of the Thieving Ghost, preventing the user from perfoming them throughout the duration of this technique.
Note: Yin Release masters can apply this technique to elemental ninjutsu for the initial clash.
Note: Thieving Ghost can only be used on S-rank techniques and below.
-Pending- I'll come back to this once I discuss it with the others.
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40 ( +20 per turn )
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Mammoth is an ancient sealing technique that combines Elemental Ninjutsu with Fuuinjutsu. The user creates a ball of chakra the size of a pea, with the kanji for "Sheer Pressure" inscribed in it's surface. The user is then able of shooting the pea-sized inscription towards any active enemy elemental ninjutsu, which will cause an inscription to encase it wholy and immediately compress it back into a pea-sized black ball of dense elemental chakra. The compressed ball will now show a sealing insignia of with the kanju for "Tusk" which will absorb the user's chakra and allow for the manipulation of the Shape of the walls of the Tusk that compressed the element, which can passively turn into any generic weapon and be safely controlled either remotely or physically by the user, which can then be used to perform Bukijutsu and any fitting Weapon CFS, passively acquiring an elemental edge of the sealed element of +20 damage and rank boost to their technique, as the Tusk assumes the shape of the necessary weapon required to perform it. The user is capable of performing one freestyle action with the weapon itself, be it a slash, or a parry, with the power and rank of the original technique, per turn, counting towards the jutsu slot per turn. This attack will always follow the main release of the elemental nature, and entails generic and simple contact-based attacks like slices, parries, cuts, strikes, etc. Otherwise, the user can also passively expend the elemental chakra inside the Tusk and create simple constructs that detach from the Tusk ball, like blasts, jets, crescents etc, which will expend the chakra that was previously sealed. So if an S ranked technique was used, the user can detach up to 1 S rank construct, 2 A ranks, 4 B ranks, 8 C ranks or 16 D ranks. This can only be used up to Mid-range. Only one contact-based attack or dettach-based attack can be used per turn. Using dettach-based attacks lower the potential rank of any other attack used with with the Tusk.
Note: This technique can only be used 2 times per battle, while only lasting a maximum of 3 turns, whereupon the Tusk will collapse upon itself harmlessly. It requires the user to wait 2 turns before reusing the technique.
Note: Since the user is sealing the enemy technique with Fuuinjutsu, and then manipulating the inscription walls that compressed the enemy element, this is not considered full manipulation of the element, but merely hijacking it. The user is incapable of sealing a liquid water jutsu and turn it into oil-based water jutsu, even if Water Ninjutsu can be used like that. Thus, even when sealing elements that the user does not own, like CE or AE, the user is never manipulating the original element or technique, merely the fuuinjutsu itself.
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(Inton: Onryou no Jutsu) - Yin Release: The Ghost of the Piercing Hedgehog
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: N/A (+50)
Damage: N/A
Description: Piercing Ghost is a variant of the Hungry Ghost, a spiritual parasite created through the user’s Yin Release chakra adapt to Damage Shaving properties. When using a jutsu with a damage shaving property, the user will form the ram hand seal to seal the Piercing Ghost within their technique. Sealing the Piercing Ghost inside one’s technique happens within the same timeframe as their damage-shaving technique. When the user’s technique interacts with another technique, the parasitic Yin Chakra will eat away at the chakra within the technique, decreasing it's efficiency by increasing the damage-shaving buff of the host technique by -20 damage against the opposing technique. Once the piercing ghost consumes foreign chakra it is released and immediately attaches itself to the source of the chakra (the opponent), reflecting the same amount of damage onto the opponent as it was shaved off in the interaction. Once the Piercing Ghost is released, its tether is immediate and cannot be blocked or circumvented by ordinary means. Unlike Hungry Ghost, the effects of the Piercing Ghost aren't turn-based, and are felt only with the first technique that it interacted with, working technique by technique.
Note: In case the host technique overpowers the preyed technique, the effects of the boosted damage shaving buff will not be felt, and the host technique will carry on with the normal damage shaving buff it had before the Piercing Technique.
Note: Can only be used 6 times per battle and cannot be used on the same target more than thrice.
Note: Surges of Yang, Yin-Yang or Natural Energy can break or prevent the tethering of the Piercing Ghost, preventing the user from perfoming them throughout the duration of this technique.
Note: Piercing Ghost can only be used on S-rank techniques and below.
-Declined- Having discussed this there are some issues, firstly I don't think this can just buff the damage shaving of things without some kind of stipulation because it's basically double dipping, it'd be the equivalent of using a damage boost on a damage boost and since debuffs already share a limit with damage buffing this would have to follow the same logic, which you may not want. Secondly the instantaneous reflection of damage that can't be "blocked or circumvented" is problematic, that phrasing is only allowed in some canons because generally they either don't do damage, or in the case of eye of the red star the damage caused can be purged, in the case of this technique it reads as though you are doing instant unavoidable damage based on how much damage you have shaved, which can be a considerably high amount given the boost.
(Fuuinjutsu/Inton: Toorima no Jutsu) - Sealing/Yin Release: The Ghost of the Thieving Magpy(Fuuinjutsu/Inton: Toorima no Jutsu) - Sealing/Yin Release: The Ghost of the Thieving Magpy
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: N/A (+50)
Damage: N/A
Description: Thieving Ghost is a variant of the Hungry Ghost, a spiritual parasite created through the user’s Yin Release chakra and Fuuinjutsu knowledge. When using a sealing jutsu, the user will form the ram hand seal to seal the Thieving Ghost within their technique. Sealing the thieving ghost inside one’s technique happens within the same timeframe as their sealing technique. When the user’s technique interacts with another technique, the parasitic Yin Chakra will eat away at the chakra within the technique, weakening it by one rank. Once the thieving ghost consumes foreign chakra it is released and immediately attaches itself to the source of the initial chakra (the user). From there, the parasite will carry the opponent's chakra signature towards the user, embuing the initial and following techniques with it, increasing the efficiency of sealing techniques used against the opponent (all techniques increase in rank and power by 1 degree (With the exception of the initial technique, which is already applying the Thieving Ghost weakening effects ), while also allowing the user's sealing technique to bypass the enemy's inherent immunities or resistances to foreign chakra, by emulating the opponent's chakra signature. Once the Thieving Ghost is released, its tether is immediate and cannot be blocked or circumvented by ordinary means. The effects of Thieving Ghost last for 4 turns.
Note: Can only be used 5 times per battle and cannot be used on the same target more than twice.
Note: Surges of Yang, Yin-Yang or Natural Energy can break or prevent the tethering of the Thieving Ghost, preventing the user from perfoming them throughout the duration of this technique.
Note: Yin Release masters can apply this technique to elemental ninjutsu for the initial clash.
Note: Thieving Ghost can only be used on S-rank techniques and below.
-Declined- Having discussed this with the others I just don't think this can be allowed, you're lowering the rank of an opposing technique then increasing all of your fuuin by one rank and power. Then afterwards it somehow removes all of their immunities to foreign chakra? It just doesn't make much sense and it's very overpowered.
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: N/A (+50)
Damage: N/A
Description: Thieving Ghost is a variant of the Hungry Ghost, a spiritual parasite created through the user’s Yin Release chakra and Fuuinjutsu knowledge. When using a sealing jutsu, the user will form the ram hand seal to seal the Thieving Ghost within their technique. Sealing the thieving ghost inside one’s technique happens within the same timeframe as their sealing technique. When the user’s technique interacts with another technique, the parasitic Yin Chakra will eat away at the chakra within the technique, weakening it by one rank. Once the thieving ghost consumes foreign chakra it is released and immediately attaches itself to the source of the chakra (the opponent). From there, the parasite will carry the user's chakra signature towards the opponent, decreasing the efficiency of sealing techniques used against the user (all techniques decrease in rank and power by 1 degree, while also allowing the user's sealing technique to bypass the enemy's fuuinjutsu-related inherent immunities or resistances to foreign chakra, by adding the user's chakra signature to their seals, when in regards to Sealing inscriptions, Body Seals and other Fuuin-Related that are created or activated during the duration of the Thieving Ghost infection by either the user or target . Once the Thieving Ghost is released, its tether is immediate and cannot be blocked or circumvented by ordinary means. The effects of Thieving Ghost last for 4 turns.
Note: Can only be used 5 times per battle and cannot be used on the same target more than twice.
Note: Surges of Yang, Yin-Yang or Natural Energy can break or prevent the tethering of the Thieving Ghost, preventing the user from perfoming them throughout the duration of this technique.
Note: Yin Release masters can apply this technique to elemental ninjutsu for the initial clash.
Note: Thieving Ghost can only be used on S-rank techniques and below.
-Declined- This feels like a bit of a rushed rework with the whole flipping around the effects that way, but the problem is still the removing other peoples immunities, I can't quite get my head around why it would work this way, you're applying your chakra, via the tether to an opponent who is resistant to foreign chakra (like your own) so using your chakra against them to lower their resistance just creates a chicken and egg loop. I guess in theory you could approach this from a spiritual degradation standpoint instead, but using your chakra to make someone whos resistant to your chakra become weak to your chakra just doesn't sound right.
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