[CJ] LGeezy and Onii-Chan

[Geezus]

-awaits sensei-sama-chan-

 

[Onii Chan]

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'' My true mentor, my guiding Moonlight ! '' ~ Ludwig​

(Idainaruken Gekkō) Moonlight Greatsword
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long (163 cm, 64 inches in length)
Chakra: 30 - 40 (A-ranked Slicer: 30CP / S-ranked Ultimate: 40CP)
Damage: 60 - 80
Description: '' This sword, one of the rare dragon weapons, came from the tail of Seath the Scaleless, the pale white dragon who betrayed his own."

"Seath is the grandfather of sorcery, and this sword is imbued with his magic, which shall be unleashed as a wave of moonlight."

A sword of magnificent glory, said to have been from the days of old before even the tree of chakra had even emerged from a seed. A era unknown, said to have been inhabited by deities and dragons. Origin unknown to this Greatsword, however was masterly crafted with a careful yet complex design of steel that cannot be stolen. The handle wrapped with a twin dragon design seemingly crafted by black steel alongside the guard that extends both ways towards the sides. Meanwhile the blade design is almost similarly, a twin dragon design that is shaped inwards with a straight sharp fashion to make it viable in battle. In its base form its of black coloration from pommel to tip of the blade; almost of charcoal design if not black steel. When going into its Moonlight mode the pommel up to the guard turns gold then a sudden burst of Celestial like Chakra will develop around the blade to form a more wider and bulky blade made of what would seem to be a solidified Chakra essence. The Moonlight mode's blade is rather questionable in nature, a odd substance that looks similar to that of chakra with a hardened shell; within rests a heavy supply of chakra that makes the blade glow in a teal/celestial coloration.

Abilities​

The Moonlight Greatsword in its base form is a regular greatsword made of black steel with no unique abilities other than being a greatsword in length and fashion. In the Moonlight mode the wielder can eject/project/shoot wave slicers of chakra sharp enough to cut through A-ranked earth techniques or anything of solidarity. These chakra slicers are limited in range, being only able to reach up to medium range and to cast these slicers require a long winded thrust/swing of the sword itself. The chakra slicer will do 60 damage to the adversary and cannot be lethal, however deactivating Moonlight mode the base form of the blade will always be near lethal if not causing massive limb damage. The base form of the blade cannot cut through jutsu nor defend against them, however has a more damaging output than the Moonlight mode does, meanwhile the Moonlight mode has the viability to counter jutsu thus its attacks cannot be lethal. A ''ultimate attack'' can be performed by readying the Moonlight mode blade for a few seconds more before thrusting/swinging the blade outwards that'll create a S-ranked chakra slicer that'll reach long range and do S-ranked DMG with a regular S-ranked chakra cost (S-rank variant can only be used thrice per battle). Furthermore the chakra slicers are of solid nature, although very flexible, being able to transform via shape manipulation once expelled from the blade by performing the Seal of Confrontation.
➟ When in moonlight mode the blade glows brightly which could be used as a light source but not enough to be blinded
➟ Chakra Slicer can be used within succession, interacts neutrally to the basic elements, but costs a move slot upon use

(Idainaruken: Hadō 38) - Moonlight Mode: Path of Destruction 38th Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: A- S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30 - 40 (A-ranked Slicer: 30CP / S-ranked Ultimate: 40CP)
Damage: 60 - 80
Description: Whilst wielding (Idainaruken Gekkō) Moonlight Greatsword CW within moonlight mode the user will expel a chakra slicer from the blade then after perform the Seal of Confrontation; the chakra slicer will transform into a cage around the combatant thus trapping them inside the solidified chakra square. Then by raising the hand seal directly upwards above their head the chakra cage will then explode, causing DMG to the opponent based on the rank of the slicer.
Note: A ranked variant can only be used thrice per battle, while the S-ranked variant can only be used twice.

~ Tell me what you know of this weapon so far.

~ What weaknesses and Strengths it has.

~ And How you'd use it and how often you'd use it.

 

[Geezus]

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'' My true mentor, my guiding Moonlight ! '' ~ Ludwig​

(Idainaruken Gekkō) Moonlight Greatsword
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long (163 cm, 64 inches in length)
Chakra: 30 - 40 (A-ranked Slicer: 30CP / S-ranked Ultimate: 40CP)
Damage: 60 - 80
Description: '' This sword, one of the rare dragon weapons, came from the tail of Seath the Scaleless, the pale white dragon who betrayed his own."

"Seath is the grandfather of sorcery, and this sword is imbued with his magic, which shall be unleashed as a wave of moonlight."

A sword of magnificent glory, said to have been from the days of old before even the tree of chakra had even emerged from a seed. A era unknown, said to have been inhabited by deities and dragons. Origin unknown to this Greatsword, however was masterly crafted with a careful yet complex design of steel that cannot be stolen. The handle wrapped with a twin dragon design seemingly crafted by black steel alongside the guard that extends both ways towards the sides. Meanwhile the blade design is almost similarly, a twin dragon design that is shaped inwards with a straight sharp fashion to make it viable in battle. In its base form its of black coloration from pommel to tip of the blade; almost of charcoal design if not black steel. When going into its Moonlight mode the pommel up to the guard turns gold then a sudden burst of Celestial like Chakra will develop around the blade to form a more wider and bulky blade made of what would seem to be a solidified Chakra essence. The Moonlight mode's blade is rather questionable in nature, a odd substance that looks similar to that of chakra with a hardened shell; within rests a heavy supply of chakra that makes the blade glow in a teal/celestial coloration.

Abilities​

The Moonlight Greatsword in its base form is a regular greatsword made of black steel with no unique abilities other than being a greatsword in length and fashion. In the Moonlight mode the wielder can eject/project/shoot wave slicers of chakra sharp enough to cut through A-ranked earth techniques or anything of solidarity. These chakra slicers are limited in range, being only able to reach up to medium range and to cast these slicers require a long winded thrust/swing of the sword itself. The chakra slicer will do 60 damage to the adversary and cannot be lethal, however deactivating Moonlight mode the base form of the blade will always be near lethal if not causing massive limb damage. The base form of the blade cannot cut through jutsu nor defend against them, however has a more damaging output than the Moonlight mode does, meanwhile the Moonlight mode has the viability to counter jutsu thus its attacks cannot be lethal. A ''ultimate attack'' can be performed by readying the Moonlight mode blade for a few seconds more before thrusting/swinging the blade outwards that'll create a S-ranked chakra slicer that'll reach long range and do S-ranked DMG with a regular S-ranked chakra cost (S-rank variant can only be used thrice per battle). Furthermore the chakra slicers are of solid nature, although very flexible, being able to transform via shape manipulation once expelled from the blade by performing the Seal of Confrontation.
➟ When in moonlight mode the blade glows brightly which could be used as a light source but not enough to be blinded
➟ Chakra Slicer can be used within succession, interacts neutrally to the basic elements, but costs a move slot upon use

(Idainaruken: Hadō 38) - Moonlight Mode: Path of Destruction 38th Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: A- S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30 - 40 (A-ranked Slicer: 30CP / S-ranked Ultimate: 40CP)
Damage: 60 - 80
Description: Whilst wielding (Idainaruken Gekkō) Moonlight Greatsword CW within moonlight mode the user will expel a chakra slicer from the blade then after perform the Seal of Confrontation; the chakra slicer will transform into a cage around the combatant thus trapping them inside the solidified chakra square. Then by raising the hand seal directly upwards above their head the chakra cage will then explode, causing DMG to the opponent based on the rank of the slicer.
Note: A ranked variant can only be used thrice per battle, while the S-ranked variant can only be used twice.

~ Tell me what you know of this weapon so far.

~ What weaknesses and Strengths it has.

~ And How you'd use it and how often you'd use it.

Well this weapon is from Dark Souls / Bloodbourne for one. Which is pretty awesome. Secondly, this weapon can switch between offense and defense easily. Defensively, the weapon can not cause lethal damage but becomes capable of project pure chakra to defend against A-rank and below techniques. The resulting chakra is also able to slice through things of solidarity. Offensively in it's base form this weapon is capable of causing severe limb damage so balancing offense and defense will be an important aspect to using this CW effectively.

Its strengths include its versatility between offense and defense. The strength of the base weapon is also notable as most CW don't specify how much damage the weapon itself is capable of but revolve around glorifying abilities which this does a great job of not doing. The weakness however is that the ability of this weapon is simplistic in nature, and also to release this wave of chakra the user must preform some type of slashing motion. With this weapon being a greatsword, that means this slash can happen pretty slowly and smart opponents can take advantage of that. Also it's defensive mode does not have the capacity to kill the opponent, so counter attacking and defending at the same time would be a no go.

I would basically use this weapon mainly for it's defensive capability, being able to negate A-rank and below attack can be extremely useful in certain scenarios and can leave the opponent open in most cases should you have techniques that can supplement this weapons ability. I would probably use this CW pretty often until I develop my array of custom technology lol and even then, this weapon could come in handy in certain situations simply for its ultimate technique.

 

[Onii Chan]

Well this weapon is from Dark Souls / Bloodbourne for one. Which is pretty awesome. Secondly, this weapon can switch between offense and defense easily. Defensively, the weapon can not cause lethal damage but becomes capable of project pure chakra to defend against A-rank and below techniques. The resulting chakra is also able to slice through things of solidarity. Offensively in it's base form this weapon is capable of causing severe limb damage so balancing offense and defense will be an important aspect to using this CW effectively.

Its strengths include its versatility between offense and defense. The strength of the base weapon is also notable as most CW don't specify how much damage the weapon itself is capable of but revolve around glorifying abilities which this does a great job of not doing. The weakness however is that the ability of this weapon is simplistic in nature, and also to release this wave of chakra the user must preform some type of slashing motion. With this weapon being a greatsword, that means this slash can happen pretty slowly and smart opponents can take advantage of that. Also it's defensive mode does not have the capacity to kill the opponent, so counter attacking and defending at the same time would be a no go.

I would basically use this weapon mainly for it's defensive capability, being able to negate A-rank and below attack can be extremely useful in certain scenarios and can leave the opponent open in most cases should you have techniques that can supplement this weapons ability. I would probably use this CW pretty often until I develop my array of custom technology lol and even then, this weapon could come in handy in certain situations simply for its ultimate technique.

I made it specifically simplistic in nature on purpose, the most simplistic can be the most complex. I suppose its kinda like wood release, wood release within concept is pretty simplistic, you can control wood, however it can be quite complex and unique if you understand how to use it within the realms of advanced tactics. I'm a very old style kinda person, i value more of tactics and slow paced strategy, i suppose thats why i once used a lot of ninjutsu in my fights because i like the old style of naruto where you fought with traps and mind games instead of pure trade or flip chance. I suppose this weapon consists of everything i stand for battle wise.

Because its a simple technique, it doesn't mean it can't be viable.

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I'd recommend not just using this weapon for its powerful attacks, it was specifically made so the user doesn't need to use jutsu. It was actually made for the sole purpose of someone using this weapon for the entire match thus minimalising the usages of elemental chakra usage, kawaki would be proud. Don't let the swing restriction scare you either, it counts as every swing, you don't have to swing like a wild homeless man on crack with a pipe every single time. I would say a simple swing to block would ideally activate the entirety of the first base form thus you could use to strike the opponent point blank with the chakra slicer. Remember that strategy and pre-planned tactics for this weapon is a must to master it and its usages. If you just equip the weapon for the sole purpose of using it for its most powerful attack then you aren't using it to its fullest potential, yes its simplistic but its a weapon with a open book.

What're your thoughts on its ability and its first technique?

 

[Geezus]

I made it specifically simplistic in nature on purpose, the most simplistic can be the most complex. I suppose its kinda like wood release, wood release within concept is pretty simplistic, you can control wood, however it can be quite complex and unique if you understand how to use it within the realms of advanced tactics. I'm a very old style kinda person, i value more of tactics and slow paced strategy, i suppose thats why i once used a lot of ninjutsu in my fights because i like the old style of naruto where you fought with traps and mind games instead of pure trade or flip chance. I suppose this weapon consists of everything i stand for battle wise.

Because its a simple technique, it doesn't mean it can't be viable.

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I'd recommend not just using this weapon for its powerful attacks, it was specifically made so the user doesn't need to use jutsu. It was actually made for the sole purpose of someone using this weapon for the entire match thus minimalising the usages of elemental chakra usage, kawaki would be proud. Don't let the swing restriction scare you either, it counts as every swing, you don't have to swing like a wild homeless man on crack with a pipe every single time. I would say a simple swing to block would ideally activate the entirety of the first base form thus you could use to strike the opponent point blank with the chakra slicer. Remember that strategy and pre-planned tactics for this weapon is a must to master it and its usages. If you just equip the weapon for the sole purpose of using it for its most powerful attack then you aren't using it to its fullest potential, yes its simplistic but its a weapon with a open book.

What're your thoughts on its ability and its first technique?

I like the fact that its different then the normal run of the mill offensive style and its primary focus is defensive.

 

[Onii Chan]

I like the fact that its different then the normal run of the mill offensive style and its primary focus is defensive.

Okay that's all good, i'd say you know the weapon enough to own it. I look forward to what you can do with it in the future to come.

Here's the last customs i have, same questions as previously still apply here.

(Kage Bunshin Kōtsū no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone of Transportation Technique
Type: Supplementary/Offense
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 20 (total chakra is divided by the final number of clones plus the user)
Damage: N/A
Description: This technique is a adaptation of the original shadow clone technique but instead of using the chakra the user would've used to summon it at their location they will transfer it inside a solid object like a kunai or shuriken and throw it, once it lands it will immediately transform into a shadow clone ready to be utilized by the user.
➟ Chakra usage is based upon how much solid objects contain the users chakra to transfer, however, is limited to a max of 4 objects similar to that of the original Kage Bunshin.
➟ Unlike similar techniques, this technique can only be detected by sensory ninja, including Dojutsu users, otherwise this technique can only be perceived as a regular ninja tool attack.


(Ame no Kunai) - Rain of Kunai Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: This technique derives from the Land of Fire and was created for a defensive method against multiple opponents. Each individual kunai has a small scarf like cloth around the hollow circular hilt that will be tied to another slightly larger cloth that will act as a floating mechanism that allows every kunai to remain in stasis within the air after thrown. This mechanism also contains a explosive tag already placed inside the larger cloth, when two turns pass it will explode causing the kunai to shoot outward towards the opponent at high speeds due to the momentum of the explosion. The user will infuse each kunai before throwing with their chakra if they so wish to have the kunai duplicate making a total of ten kunai per one kunai thrown once the exposive tag explodes. This technique can also be thrown directly downward, having the floating mechanism zip inward via a rope tied around the outline of the cloth. If the kunai(s) are thrown downward they will shoot forward toward the opponent like the first method but instead will be shot from the ground instead of the sky.

 

[Geezus]

Okay that's all good, i'd say you know the weapon enough to own it. I look forward to what you can do with it in the future to come.

Here's the last customs i have, same questions as previously still apply here.

(Kage Bunshin Kōtsū no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone of Transportation Technique
Type: Supplementary/Offense
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 20 (total chakra is divided by the final number of clones plus the user)
Damage: N/A
Description: This technique is a adaptation of the original shadow clone technique but instead of using the chakra the user would've used to summon it at their location they will transfer it inside a solid object like a kunai or shuriken and throw it, once it lands it will immediately transform into a shadow clone ready to be utilized by the user.
➟ Chakra usage is based upon how much solid objects contain the users chakra to transfer, however, is limited to a max of 4 objects similar to that of the original Kage Bunshin.
➟ Unlike similar techniques, this technique can only be detected by sensory ninja, including Dojutsu users, otherwise this technique can only be perceived as a regular ninja tool attack.


(Ame no Kunai) - Rain of Kunai Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: This technique derives from the Land of Fire and was created for a defensive method against multiple opponents. Each individual kunai has a small scarf like cloth around the hollow circular hilt that will be tied to another slightly larger cloth that will act as a floating mechanism that allows every kunai to remain in stasis within the air after thrown. This mechanism also contains a explosive tag already placed inside the larger cloth, when two turns pass it will explode causing the kunai to shoot outward towards the opponent at high speeds due to the momentum of the explosion. The user will infuse each kunai before throwing with their chakra if they so wish to have the kunai duplicate making a total of ten kunai per one kunai thrown once the exposive tag explodes. This technique can also be thrown directly downward, having the floating mechanism zip inward via a rope tied around the outline of the cloth. If the kunai(s) are thrown downward they will shoot forward toward the opponent like the first method but instead will be shot from the ground instead of the sky.

The first technique is very useful, I forsee it setting up multiple unsuspecting scenarios for opponents. The strengths are the fact that throwing a kunai with chakra can be done with simple freeform. When the opponent thinks they've avoided it, it transforms into a shadow clone and can be do some serious damage if you set the scenario up correctly. It reminds me of the Zabuza vs Team 7 scene where Naruto freed the trapped Kakashi. Except this is faster. You don't have to go through the preparation of transforming an already created clone. A weakness I would say is that chakra sensor and doujutsu users will be able to see the massive amount of chakra thats packed with the kunai. There would be no way they would allow something like that to get set up so, thats something to be aware of I believe. Otherwise, awesome jutsu. I plan to incorporate this jutsu alot with my Magnetism bio.


Lol this second technique, is basically the ninja tools from the Ultimate Ninja games. I love this technique as it can produce a great number of kunai within moments. Its something I think would work great with Magnetism. Also its awesome you included elements from the game, I'm thinking of doing that now. XD A weakness I would see is that it does rely on being previously planted on the field and would require a bit of a set up period. But otherwise it canbe used as a clever trap. I have no questions regarding this technique.

 

[Onii Chan]

The first technique is very useful, I forsee it setting up multiple unsuspecting scenarios for opponents. The strengths are the fact that throwing a kunai with chakra can be done with simple freeform. When the opponent thinks they've avoided it, it transforms into a shadow clone and can be do some serious damage if you set the scenario up correctly. It reminds me of the Zabuza vs Team 7 scene where Naruto freed the trapped Kakashi. Except this is faster. You don't have to go through the preparation of transforming an already created clone. A weakness I would say is that chakra sensor and doujutsu users will be able to see the massive amount of chakra thats packed with the kunai. There would be no way they would allow something like that to get set up so, thats something to be aware of I believe. Otherwise, awesome jutsu. I plan to incorporate this jutsu alot with my Magnetism bio.


Lol this second technique, is basically the ninja tools from the Ultimate Ninja games. I love this technique as it can produce a great number of kunai within moments. Its something I think would work great with Magnetism. Also its awesome you included elements from the game, I'm thinking of doing that now. XD A weakness I would see is that it does rely on being previously planted on the field and would require a bit of a set up period. But otherwise it canbe used as a clever trap. I have no questions regarding this technique.

lol yeah i'm a big fan of the naruto games, even the gameboy ones.

but anyways you have those too, if theres no further questions thats all i have to teach. nice job

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[Geezus]

Thanks for everything again man!