The Legendary Sage of Konoha 5
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Kremt what?xd You liked it?*Kremt* <----
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Another amazing chapter!!! ^.^ No fighting but you always seem to bring on the attraction! Sasuke/Madara are back (in a way) I love so far what you have done and I think the way you are reintroducing Sasuke’s character is pretty phenomenal. Kirabi is back in the flashback -_- lol It honestly felt like a Naruto manga chapter ^.^ Wow-the children are causing up an uproar by showing up without permission lol Yamato is their sensei-nice and I love the fact that he is accompanying them. I like all the upcoming action with the six Akatsuki members. It was worth the wait-keep it up
I love so far what you have done and I think the way you are reintroducing Sasuke’s character is pretty phenomenal. Kirabi is back in the flashback -_- lol It honestly felt like a Naruto manga chapter ^.^ Wow-the children are causing up an uproar by showing up without permission lol Yamato is their sensei-nice and I love the fact that he is accompanying them. I like all the upcoming action with the six Akatsuki members. It was worth the wait-keep it up 
Well i thought i had to reveal his "fate" at some point, and you will most likely be pretty shocked when you find out what happened to himAnother amazing chapter!!! ^.^ No fighting but you always seem to bring on the attraction! Sasuke/Madara are back (in a way)
Yeah i though i had to put Jiraiya at a team, and i just knew exactly how it would be with Yamato as sensei. However, you will find out more when Kakashi and Gai gets involved
Well i couldn`t forget KB either
But his rhyme was just badxd Well some peoples have been saying that, but it`s far from Kishi level. In fact if anyone is near that, then it`s you Furthermore I kinda felt i missed out a little on the chapter name, but I couldn`t have too much of the flashback yet considering that i need some stuff for the next one as well Thanks for your supportThanks
xd That rhyme was the lamest thing i ever wrotexd It didn`t rhyme at allxd But I just had to make up something fast, but next rhyme will be better
xdThank you for reading
xd WhatDoesn't kremt mean "hawk" in Norwegian. Or is it falcon?
Kremt is like *kremt* or *Humph*It doesn`t mean anything more than it does in English
Not at allxd Ehm.. Hawk = Hauk, Eagle = Ørn, Falcon = Falk.
EDIT: I searched it up and you could in fact say Kremt or kremte in Norwegian to hawk
Had no idea myselfxd Never heard that word in my lifexdAnyway, what had that to do with anything?
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Yeah i hope so myselfxd
*kremt*xd What
It doesn`t mean anything more than it does in English
Not at allxd Ehm.. Hawk = Hauk, Eagle = Ørn, Falcon = Falk.
EDIT: I searched it up and you could in fact say Kremt or kremte in Norwegian to hawk
Anyway, what had that to do with anything?
Thanks for your support
xd I still don`t understandxd You know what *Kremt* means in English right?*kremt*
Are you referring to that also meaning Hawk in Norwegian, or don`t you understand the meaning of it in English
Thanks appriciate your supportNice! You really good making at fan fic!
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Whoa! I am almost scarred to find out ;p You gave it your all and I thought the rap was fine even though I do not like that type of genre >.< lol I suppose it would have been only right to attempt to include every possible character you could even if it the characters you’re not crazy about lol Thanks but I think you are pretty close to Kishi’s work as wellWell i thought i had to reveal his "fate" at some point, and you will most likely be pretty shocked when you find out what happened to him
Yeah i though i had to put Jiraiya at a team, and i just knew exactly how it would be with Yamato as sensei. However, you will find out more when Kakashi and Gai gets involved
Well i couldn`t forget KB either
That is fine-I think that even a little you incorporate of what the title is about is fine and you actually gave a pretty good amount of insight for the flashback even though it was supposed to be just a little taste of what would be in the following chapter ;p1: Hehe1: Whoa! I am almost scarred to find out ;p
2: You gave it your all and I thought the rap was fine even though I do not like that type of genre >.<
3: Lol I suppose it would have been only right to attempt to include every possible character you could even if it the characters you’re not crazy about lol
4: Thanks but I think you are pretty close to Kishi’s work as well
5: That is fine-I think that even a little you incorporate of what the title is about is fine and you actually gave a pretty good amount of insight for the flashback even though it was supposed to be just a little taste of what would be in the following chapter ;p
There aren`t too many options He died? He lived? Naruto brought him back? He sacrifised himself? Or something else? You`ll just have to wait and find out2: xd Honestly it was badxd But I didn`t put too much in it either though
3: Yeah, so that`s one of the reason the manga recently has been very... what should i say.. Decisive on what would happend to certain characters if you read the spoiler for manga fans only in my second post? So i would perhaps have to change some roles on previous chapters depending on the outcome in the recent battle
4: Well, if you mean story then perhaps yes, but if you mean writing style, then i think you are closer than me. And your story is pretty god damn good as well
5: Well i can`t wait to release the next chapter myselfxd Because I think it will be my best chapter so far, but i also think it will be the hardest one to write as i have no idea how to start yet
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Dude, you really do know how to cringe lol1: Hehe
2: xd Honestly it was badxd But I didn`t put too much in it either though
3: Yeah, so that`s one of the reason the manga recently has been very... what should i say.. Decisive on what would happend to certain characters if you read the spoiler for manga fans only in my second post? So i would perhaps have to change some roles on previous chapters depending on the outcome in the recent battle
4: Well, if you mean story then perhaps yes, but if you mean writing style, then i think you are closer than me. And your story is pretty god damn good as well
5: Well i can`t wait to release the next chapter myselfxd Because I think it will be my best chapter so far, but i also think it will be the hardest one to write as i have no idea how to start yet
Well thus far you are lucky as Gai survived -_- and Kisame seemingly will be dying in the next chapter T_T
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Dude, you really do know how to cringe lolWell thanks again I suppose we both are good at what we do ;p Oh, you struggling with just the beginning well let me tell you right now do not even worry about it as I can vogue seeing as I have had many days like that lol You simply take a deep breath and let your mind free to all possibilities and things will eventually pop up for youWell thus far you are lucky as Gai survived -_- and Kisame seemingly will be dying in the next chapter T_T
Well so far i guess i amxd And you forgot spoiler tag
Hehe i guess you`re right
But the story isn`t the problem(because I`ve settled on that), but how i should put the dialouges and the whole flashback togetter to make it seem realistic I guess I`ll figure it out eventually